Victòria looks over the proposal. She's a fast reader; it doesn't take long. About halfway down, she stops, does some figuring on her fingers, and frowns, before returning to the draft.
She circles the bond amount. "I'm not sure you realize quite how much money this is for someone who isn't an archduke?" More likely he does know, and is doing it on purpose, but — the azata thought he wasn't going out of his way to be Evil on purpose, it's theoretically possible it was an accident. "Like, my mother earned a couple silver a day. Even if she didn't have to spend it on anything, she could work her whole life and never be able to afford six thousand gold. As written this restricts publishing to important nobles, and maybe a few very rich people — most of whom got rich doing Evil things under Asmodeus, which seems like the opposite of who anyone should want deciding things. Like, I definitely think it makes sense to have some kind of rule about who can set up a print shop, but not, uh, one that says only important nobles and Mammonites can do it — if you want to be sure you can, uh, punish people with fines, you could require the fee but set it to an amount that a normal person might ever be able to afford? ...And then maybe you could... make people say under an Abadar's Truthtelling that they aren't going to break the law and aren't going to try to get innocent people killed and aren't going to try to convince people to be Evil, and, uh, I don't know how you'd say it but, know enough not to accidentally get innocent people killed, and anything else we can think of, for things people shouldn't be allowed to print?"
She moves her pen to the exceptions for personal correspondence. "And this might already be covered by the rules about letters, but I think you should write it out explicitly — I talked to Feliu the paladin yesterday, and he said if there's a really big problem that you need to tell the Queen about, like if your nobles are still making people worship Asmodeus, you're supposed to 'petition' her, which is where you write a letter to the Queen, and her servants will read it and decide if it's important and tell her about it if it is. And I think we should say explicitly that it's definitely legal to petition the Queen, even though it might be read by a bunch of her servants first.
...and I'm also confused about — on the first day you were saying people should be allowed to try to convince other people to worship Asmodeus, and this is a lot more rules then I'd've thought you'd ever be okay with. But that's probably not important, just confusing." (She does, actually, think it's important, but if she says "I'm worried that you're going to vote one way on proposals in committee and another way on the floor" that kind of gives away what she's concerned about.)