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"You're welcome."

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Aaaand back to Spring. He knocks on the front door to her house.

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There is a delay, and then she opens the door, just slightly red around the eyes but otherwise composed. There is a half-drawn many-legged starfish on her desk.

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"Hello. I have an apology to make."

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"O-oh?"

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"The - I suppose most succinct way of putting it is in English. I misplaced the comma. I was treating it as, 'Aya, in love because of a necklace,' rather than, 'Aya in love, because of a necklace.'" Pause. "I did turn out to need to go to the other Bells, but not for the reasons I'd thought. I was mistaken. I'm sorry for doubting your judgement."

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"It - is compromised. You aren't wrong."

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"I wasn't right, either."

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"Do you want to come in again, or...?"

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"Sure. If you don't mind, anyway...?"

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She shakes her head and stands aside and sits in front of her starfish.

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He finds a nearby chair and also sits, looking between her face and the starfish. This is - going to be like navigating a maze. Or a minefield.

"Please let me know if I have another comma problem?"
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"I can't necessarily tell the difference between - comma problems, and accurate but unpleasant observations."

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"You have more skill at it than I do. Just look at my track record."

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"I don't think I could have identified this one as the thing you're saying it is."

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Oh. Oh, damn.

"Well, would you like to hear my logic process on it?"
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"Sure."

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"Well, first of all - if I were caught off guard any sort of mind-affecting magic, I would want everyone around me to not believe a word I say until it was out of me no matter how convincing I was. Even if it was relatively minor. Even if it seemed like I was combating it, because I am extremely paranoid."

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"Are we going to have to treat the new Adarin that way?"

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"I think at this point there's little purpose to it. Also, it's likely the other Adarins will act different than I will, because - five hundred years old, and the most paranoid of us all."

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"Would there be a point to doing this paranoia treatment with me? I mean - none of the sorts of things that I might do under the influence are - okay, some of them are, but none of the things that I'd actively try to convince you to let me do are things that would leave me in a harmed state if I were later - undone."

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"That's the thing. I was doing the paranoia treatment with you. Because I thought that was what you'd want. And - I don't know what sorts of things would leave you in a harmed state or not. It varies from person to person."

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"I - am having a hard time wanting to be the un-necklaced version of myself, right now, but that doesn't mean I want to hurt that version if I'm ever going to turn into it. Why would I do that?"

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"See? That. There's - part of the disconnect, the misplaced comma. I thought, 'Of course you wouldn't care about it, you are being affected by a conspiracy necklace.' When, in fact, you're still you, with all of the intelligence and self-awareness and introspection that brings, so of course you would think that. And for missing that, I'm sorry."

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"Now what?"
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