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He thinks they won - he saw that much.  They wouldn't have, if he hadn't been there to lead them.  If he hadn't torn the warning of the attack from the screaming prisoner, if all of them hadn't hurried across two countries while barely anyone believed them about the war that was about to break out.  At least here, they won, and so he doesn't very much mind that he died in accomplishing it.

 

... He wishes he could have died in his own country, not defending the same castle from his countrymen for the second time in fifteen years.  He wishes he could have died somewhere they'd give his body to the god, not the goddess who isn't his even though he's learned not to hate her.  He wishes he could have seen his king again, and asked him if he had done well.  But none of it matters very much, really.  He did what he could, and now other people will do what they can, and that is all anyone can ever ask for.

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Unfortunately for Marc d'Ambray, he has not died in his own country.

He sees a city of towering buildings, with sinuous curves to their architecture wherever their goal is not to stretch up straight to the sky above. He sees a dearth of foliage, compared to the places he's been. He sees a throng of people and rushing metal carriages, as his ears fill with an ambient soundscape of constant noise. He smells appetizing foods and acrid smoke.

There are several people who have stopped to look at the man on the ground, but as soon as he regains consciousness, two of them have already moved on.

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"Are you well, stranger?"

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The other remaining stragglers don't seem as inclined to speak yet, though one looks concerned about this whole situation.

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The other might best be described as 'fascinated'.

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Marc had never given much thought to what happens to people after death, but if he had ever been made to consider the question, he would not have had much doubt of paradise.  He had done what he should, nearly always, and his god is not cruel.

This is... not what he expected it to look like, but then again he doesn't know what he did expect.  And the buildings are amazing.  He spends a moment staring at them before the strange-looking woman's words drag his attention away.  He doesn't know what she expects, either.  "I... don't know. I suppose that I will be."

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"Well enough, then. Here, in case you're more confused than you realize."

She goes to wave her wrist next to his wrist, and then pauses.

"Where is your phone*?"

*phone = a tool used to communicate with other people over long range, to research communal knowledge, to find entertainment, a form of legal identification, a way to quickly trade information, proof of freedom...and more, typically worn around the wrist like a bracelet

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"You looked really out of it. Code what*?"

*code what = a common way to request a report on whether any particular physical or mental symptoms have appeared since one's last health check

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These people are deeply confusing.  Is it just because he just died, and everything will make more sense in a few minutes or hours?  That might well be it, but he should try to answer their questions anyway.  "I don't think I have one of those?"  ... Or does he?  He doesn't have a sword's familiar weight at his belt, that's the first he notices once he thinks to pay attention to his body at all - he doesn't have a belt, either, and what is that he's wearing-- whatever people wear here, he supposes, but if he doesn't have a sword then where is he--

He sits up, carefully, in case there is something wrong with him like they both seem to think.  "I... feel all right, except for how I... just died and have no idea where I am..."  He searches their faces for some recognition, confirmation that this is a normal thing to happen here, because if it isn't then he doesn't understand anything.

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The other figure, who was starting to look bored, focuses on him now.

"Died?"

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"...I'm calling out for the day, this is more important than my working four hours on my current projects. You, viridian*, would you mind occupying this one?"

Without waiting for a response, she walks away and starts talking at her wrist.

*viridian = a formal term of address for greens**

**greens = the subset of humans with green hair and green eyes

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"If you're missing your phone," and think you died, "you must be really out of sorts. We'll figure this out, don't worry."

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God - or goddess, maybe - where is he?  It's obvious enough now that he shouldn't have said that, but he had to be sure.

...Now he is sure, and - what? 

(Why can't he have a moment's rest?  He would have thought death would give him that, at least.)

 

--That was an unworthy thought.  This is not paradise, and he is here, so presumably there's - something he didn't do well enough, something he needs to learn, god, he doesn't know, but something.  Or it's the goddess's strange joke, and there isn't anything to do here except have another life - but that is something too, and he should try to have it.  Arguing with these chance-met strangers that he really did die and appear in another world is clearly not going to help with anything he might be meant to do here, and neither is letting himself feel all of his miserable exhausted confusion while they're understandably worried about him.  (He wishes they'd leave him be.  But they seem kind enough people, except perhaps the yellow-haired one, and maybe he shouldn't.)

 

"I'm sorry about all this.  I do feel fine, I just... don't remember anything that makes any sense here."  But he can stand up, and look around reasonably calmly (though anyone watching can still see how his eyes follow completely mundane objects as if he'd never seen them before), and do his best not to seem like a person who warrants quite this much concern.

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"You're interesting," says the yellow-haired and golden-eyed stranger, in the tones of an accusation. "What's your name?"

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"Don't overwhelm him, saffron*. 

Mazen Broggs, stranger. Do you have something we should call you?"

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The city continues to bustle around them. It hasn't gotten any quieter, or simpler. But no one else seems inclined to stop their day for Marc.

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"Marc," he answers them both, and bows his head to the second one's introduction, then smiles a little - "and I don't think I'm that easily overwhelmed."  Or at least them talking to him won't make anything worse than just having them watching him like they don't mean to stop any time soon.  Better, he thinks - he already feels easier just feeling like he's having something resembling a real conversation.  "But thank you for worrying about me."

And to the other one: "And you just walk the streets looking for interesting people, is that it?"

 

While he's looking around:  how many hair colors are there on the city streets?  It's obvious from their speech that it means something, even if not what.  Are there people who look like him?

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There are all kinds of people on the city streets. People with piercings, and unusual hairstyles, and a variety of clothing styles, but- everyone he can see walking by has eyes and hair in shades of green, blue, yellow, and red.

No one who looks like him.

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"-viridian, tell me if it does anything else interesting?"

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"-what, do you have somewhere-"

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"Tell me, will you?"

The one with the yellow hair taps wrists with the one with green hair, and starts off at a run.

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(The red one is still talking to her wrist, but she's watching the whole scene carefully.)

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"-do you know how to get home, Marc?"

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No one who looks like him.  That's going to make it difficult for anything to feel normal.

 

He frowns at the... saffron's...? abrupt and confusing departure, and turns to the viridian(?) once that's done with.

"No, and I don't expect I have one."  He can hardly pretend otherwise.  But, more importantly to figuring out where he is and what it's like: "Did he just call me an it?"

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"-yes, he did. I don't think you need to worry about anyone else being that rude to a stranger. No one would talk like that unless it was to their slave, I promise you."

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"It's not rudeness I'm worried about, it's-- what it means about what he thinks of me or what he wants."  And, whatever it is he thinks, whether he's right, by this place's lights, that he can have it.  No civilized country has slavery, back home, but he is not unfamiliar with the concept. 

"I... would appreciate it if you didn't tell him anything more about me.  Unless there's a reason you need to?"

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