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[OPEN] Enthusiastic Speaker!

Among the first to speak is proably the youngest. She's sitting on a little thundercloud, six feet high, but it's clear that she's quite short for her age.

"Esteemed colleagues, Great Queen, and fellow Citizens of our great nation"

She coughs, and blushes. 

"I, Viscondesa Lucía Velacruz y Montemayor, stand before you today not as a Condesa, but as a voice for progress from someone not subject to the corruptions of the past regime!"

Experiences!

"As a first step, towards the formation of the paradise in Cheliax that we all want, Our role, here today, is to forge a great constitution. For this, I propose the formation of a Senate, composed of all counts and those of higher rank, as well as all those able to achieve the fifth circle, to serve as an advisory body to our Queen!"

They are paying attention. To her! Yes!

"This is not a novel concept, but one that has proven successful in many countries across the face of Golarion. A Senate would serve as a crucible where our thoughts and powers can be forged into sound advice and support for the crown. Our combined experience and knowledge from across Cheliax far exceed what any single advisor could offer."

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[OPEN] Enthusiastic Speaker!

Among the first to speak, moving forward to the podium as soon as she can, is probably the youngest in the room. A bald girl sitting on a little thundercloud, six feet high, but it's clear that she's quite short for her age. . 

"Esteemed colleagues, Great Queen, and fellow Citizens of our great nation"

She coughs, and blushes. 

"I, Viscondesa Lucía Velacruz y Montemayor, stand before you today not as a Condesa, but as a voice for progress from someone not subject to the corruptions of the past regime!"

Experiences!

"As a first step, towards the formation of the paradise in Cheliax that we all want, Our role, here today, is to forge a great constitution. For this, I propose the formation of a Senate, composed of all counts and those of higher rank, as well as all those able to achieve the fifth circle, to serve as an advisory body to our Queen!"

They are paying attention. To her! Yes!

"This is not a novel concept, but one that has proven successful in many countries across the face of Golarion. A Senate would serve as a crucible where our thoughts and powers can be forged into sound advice and support for the crown. Our combined experience and knowledge from across Cheliax far exceed what any single advisor could offer."

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[OPEN] Enthusiastic Speaker!

The woman moving forward to the podium as soon as it's open, is probably the youngest in the room. She's a bald girl sitting on a little thundercloud, six feet high, but even with that, it's clear that she's quite short for her age. 

"Esteemed colleagues, Great Queen, and fellow Citizens of our great nation"

She coughs, and blushes. 

"I, Viscondesa Lucía Velacruz y Montemayor, stand before you today not as a Condesa, but as a voice for progress from someone not subject to the corruptions of the past regime!"

Lucía looks out across the gathered Delegates. Experiences! 

"As a first step, towards the formation of the paradise in Cheliax that we all want, Our role, here today, is to forge a great constitution. For this, I propose the formation of a Senate, composed of all counts and those of higher rank, as well as all those able to achieve the fifth circle, to serve as an advisory body to our Queen!"

They are paying attention. To her! Yes!

"This is not a novel concept, but one that has proven successful in many countries across the face of Golarion. A Senate would serve as a crucible where our thoughts and powers can be forged into sound advice and support for the crown. Our combined experience and knowledge from across Cheliax far exceed what any single advisor could offer."

She coughs again.

"Thank you, wise Delegates!"

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[OPEN] Enthusiastic Speaker!

The woman moving forward to the podium as soon as it's open, is probably the youngest in the room. She's a bald girl sitting on a little thundercloud, six feet high, but even with that, it's clear that she's quite short for her age. 

"Esteemed colleagues, Great Queen, and fellow Citizens of our great nation"

She coughs, and blushes. 

"I, Viscondesa Lucía Velacruz y Montemayor, stand before you today not as a Condesa, but as a voice for progress from someone not subject to the corruptions of the past regime!"

Lucía looks out across the gathered Delegates. Experiences! 

"As a first step, towards the formation of the paradise in Cheliax that we all want, Our role, here today, is to forge a great constitution. For this, I propose the formation of a Senate, composed of all counts and those of higher rank, as well as all those able to achieve the fifth circle, to serve as an advisory body to our Queen!"

They are paying attention. To her! Yes!

"This is not a novel concept, but one that has proven successful in many countries across the face of Golarion. A Senate would serve as a crucible where our thoughts and powers can be forged into sound advice and support for the crown. Our combined experience and knowledge from across Cheliax far exceed what any single advisor could offer."

She coughs again.

"Thank you, wise Delegates!"

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[OPEN] Youthful Enthusiasm!

The woman moving forward to the podium as soon as it's open, is probably the youngest in the room. She's a bald girl sitting on a little thundercloud, six feet high, but even with that, it's clear that she's quite short for her age. 

"Esteemed colleagues, Great Queen, and fellow Citizens of our great nation"

She coughs, and blushes. 

"I, Viscondesa Lucía Velacruz y Montemayor, stand before you today not as a Condesa, but as a voice for progress from someone not subject to the corruptions of the past regime!"

Lucía looks out across the gathered Delegates. Experiences! 

"As a first step, towards the formation of the paradise in Cheliax that we all want, Our role, here today, is to forge a great constitution. For this, I propose the formation of a Senate, composed of all counts and those of higher rank, as well as all those able to achieve the fifth circle, to serve as an advisory body to our Queen!"

They are paying attention. To her! Yes!

"This is not a novel concept, but one that has proven successful in many countries across the face of Golarion. A Senate would serve as a crucible where our thoughts and powers can be forged into sound advice and support for the crown. Our combined experience and knowledge from across Cheliax far exceed what any single advisor could offer."

She coughs again.

"Thank you, wise Delegates!"