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ohana means family
Meelia goes to Amenta

Meelia loved the start and the ending bit of the space adventure to Amenta, but she got bored in the middle - the ship wasn't really big enough to explore. But now she was going down to a new planet!! Where she would would meets lots of strange new alien friends and see big Amentan cities!! And stay with an Amentan couple who were really happy to have her staying with them and excited to meet her!!

When she landed on the planet she was already a bit tired from how much bouncing she had been doing about how great her new adventure was going to be. This was going to be the best!

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ohana means family
Meelia goes to Amenta

[Concurrent with kids these days and city lights on the water]

Meelia loved the start and the ending bit of the space adventure to Amenta, but she got bored in the middle - the ship wasn't really big enough to explore. But now she was going down to a new planet!! Where she would would meets lots of strange new alien friends and see big Amentan cities!! And stay with an Amentan couple who were really happy to have her staying with them and excited to meet her!!

When she landed on the planet she was already a bit tired from how much bouncing she had been doing about how great her new adventure was going to be. This was going to be the best!

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ohana means family
Meelia goes to Amenta

[Concurrent with kids these days and city lights on the water]

Meelia loved the start and the ending bit of the space adventure to Amenta, but she got bored in the middle - the ship wasn't really big enough to explore. But now she was going down to a new planet!! Where she would would meets lots of strange new alien friends and see big Amentan cities!! And stay with an Amentan couple who were really happy to have her staying with them and excited to meet her!!

When she landed on the planet she was already a bit tired from how much bouncing she had been doing about how great her new adventure was going to be. This was going to be the best!

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