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apocalyptic outtake
the original ending was too depressing to keep
reach-out-for-the-stars
She could invoke the oath. Tell Elathea to stop. The cold pit in Gleam's gut says that's a very good way to end up with Elathea suffering the oath's backlash. Maybe it actually would stop her, it'd be better than having this fight here - Gleam loves her wife, she remembers, in a soft, devastating moment. She takes a deep breath, feeling like she hasn't fully stopped, fully breathed since this began. |
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hand in unlovable hand (apocalyptic outtake)
the original ending was too depressing to keep
reach-out-for-the-stars
She could invoke the oath. Tell Elathea to stop. The cold pit in Gleam's gut says that's a very good way to end up with Elathea suffering the oath's backlash. Maybe it actually would stop her, it'd be better than having this fight here - Gleam loves her wife, she remembers, in a soft, devastating moment. She takes a deep breath, feeling like she hasn't fully stopped, fully breathed since this began. |
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hand in unlovable hand
the original ending was too depressing to keep (bad end AU of "baby love me apocalyptic")
reach-out-for-the-stars
She could invoke the oath. Tell Elathea to stop. The cold pit in Gleam's gut says that's a very good way to end up with Elathea suffering the oath's backlash. Maybe it actually would stop her, it'd be better than having this fight here - Gleam loves her wife, she remembers, in a soft, devastating moment. She takes a deep breath, feeling like she hasn't fully stopped, fully breathed since this began. |
