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The engines purred as the small ship descended through the clouds. The pilot stood near the cockpit, holding onto a ceiling grip, as she watched the descent. Her green head-tails lay lay over her brown cloak, the dimly lit cockpit glowing blue from the instruments. She pushed a button on the console, then gripped a control with her free hand, guiding the ship slightly off its autopilot course.

The ship grew near a large, dirty building with a retracted roof, in a sprawling city. Children were playing in the street outside, among the many street vendors selling ship parts. As the ship descended into the spaceport building, she turned towards the entrance, walking calmly onto the descending ramp before it had finished deploying.

The spaceport was very loud, outside her ship. She pushed a button on her wrist. "I have arrived. Alert me when the meeting has adjourned." She walked onto the street.

A spacer clad in all grey walked by her, diverting slightly to bump into her shoulder. "Watch where you're goin,"

She continued walking. Eyes turned towards her, clad in Jedi robes, but they quickly turned away. A woman selling maintenance tools down the street stared at her for several seconds, then also looked away.

Three children ran by her. "Give it back! I wanted to use it!" one of the children yelled, a smile on her face.

"No!" He ducked under a stall, giggling.

The jedi watched impassively as the young girl stomped her foot. "I wanted to use that in my droid!"

"Honey, your droid isn't gonna work," said the vendor, an old man.

The girl giggled at the vendor. "Yes it will, Aden here can make any droid work! He's gonna teach me!"

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The engines purred as the small ship descended through the clouds. The pilot stood near the cockpit, holding onto a ceiling grip, as she watched the descent. Her green head-tails lay over her brown cloak, the dimly lit cockpit glowing blue from the instruments. She pushed a button on the console, then gripped a control with her free hand, guiding the ship slightly off its autopilot course.

The ship grew near a large, dirty building with a retracted roof, in a sprawling city. Children were playing in the street outside, among the many street vendors selling ship parts. As the ship descended into the spaceport building, she turned towards the entrance, walking calmly onto the descending ramp before it had finished deploying.

The spaceport was very loud, outside her ship. She pushed a button on her wrist. "I have arrived. Alert me when the meeting has adjourned." She walked onto the street.

A spacer clad in all grey walked by her, diverting slightly to bump into her shoulder. "Watch where you're goin,"

She continued walking. Eyes turned towards her, clad in Jedi robes, but they quickly turned away. A woman selling maintenance tools down the street stared at her for several seconds, then also looked away.

Three children ran by her. "Give it back! I wanted to use it!" one of the children yelled, a smile on her face.

"No!" He ducked under a stall, giggling.

The jedi watched impassively as the young girl stomped her foot. "I wanted to use that in my droid!"

"Honey, your droid isn't gonna work," said the vendor, an old man.

The girl giggled at the vendor. "Yes it will, Aden here can make any droid work! He's gonna teach me!"

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An unusual jedi discovers another path

The engines purred as the small ship descended through the clouds. The pilot stood near the cockpit, holding onto a ceiling grip, as she watched the descent. Her green head-tails lay over her brown cloak, the dimly lit cockpit glowing blue from the instruments. She pushed a button on the console, then gripped a control with her free hand, guiding the ship slightly off its autopilot course.

The ship grew near a large, dirty building with a retracted roof, in a sprawling city. Children were playing in the street outside, among the many street vendors selling ship parts. As the ship descended into the spaceport building, she turned towards the entrance, walking calmly onto the descending ramp before it had finished deploying.

The spaceport was very loud, outside her ship. She pushed a button on her wrist. "I have arrived. Alert me when the meeting has adjourned." She walked onto the street.

A spacer clad in all grey walked by her, diverting slightly to bump into her shoulder. "Watch where you're goin,"

She continued walking. Eyes turned towards her, clad in Jedi robes, but they quickly turned away. A woman selling maintenance tools down the street stared at her for several seconds, then also looked away.

Three children ran by her. "Give it back! I wanted to use it!" one of the children yelled, a smile on her face.

"No!" He ducked under a stall, giggling.

The jedi watched impassively as the young girl stomped her foot. "I wanted to use that in my droid!"

"Honey, your droid isn't gonna work," said the vendor, an old man.

The girl giggled at the vendor. "Yes it will, Aden here can make any droid work! He's gonna teach me!"