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I left them in a bar along the way

Mom's going on about clothes again. Alex isn't going to sit here and listen to it. They barely bother to grab their coat before heading out the front door and slamming it behind them--

and that. Is not the porch. That is a pub of some kind.

"What the fuck?" they say to the person sitting at the untended bar.

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I left them in a bar along the way

Mom's going on about clothes again. Alex isn't going to sit here and listen to it. They barely bother to grab their coat before heading out the front door and slamming it behind them--

and that. Is not the porch. That is a pub of some kind.

"What the fuck?" they say to the person sitting at the untended bar.

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I left them in a bar along the way

Mom's going on about clothes again. Alex isn't going to sit here and listen to it. They barely bother to grab their coat before heading out the front door and slamming it behind them--

and that. Is not the porch. That is a pub of some kind.

"What the fuck?" they say to the room at large.

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I left them in a bar along the way
some authors want motivation to do work, so a dark!Shen and Alex meet in Milliways

Mom's going on about clothes again. Alex isn't going to sit here and listen to it. They barely bother to grab their coat before heading out the front door and slamming it behind them--

and that. Is not the porch. That is a pub of some kind.

"What the fuck?" they say to the room at large.

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