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consider phlebas, who was once handsome and short as you

[continued from Escape from Westcrown]

The next thing she knows, she's clawing to the surface of the water, searching for air. Hardiness to injury isn't what wizards are known for, but wizardry comes with it nonetheless; this isn't the first major injury she's ever had to shrug off, but it might be the most unexpected.

Coughing and spitting out water, she flails inexpertly towards the great stone column to cling onto.

It's time for triage:

  • Her notes are likely ruined, and only the committee notes were copied and given to others, not her personal notes. No, this one can be forced lower.
  • She's injured to an unknown degree. Everything hurts, which doesn't suggest any specific priority items.
  • She's in the middle of the river.
  • It's apparently raining now, and under a bridge is shelter from that but not great all-in-all because it's in the middle of the river.
  • There's another delegate in unknown danger up there.
  • It looks like a bad swim to shore.
  • Her notes are likely ruined &c. (moved down to this position on the list).
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consider phlebas, who was once handsome and short as you
marisas don't die, they go pichuun~ and emerge from the bottom of the screen

[continued from Escape from Westcrown]

The next thing she knows, she's clawing to the surface of the water, searching for air. Hardiness to injury isn't what wizards are known for, but wizardry comes with it nonetheless; this isn't the first major injury she's ever had to shrug off, but it might be the most unexpected.

Coughing and spitting out water, she flails inexpertly towards the great stone column to cling onto.

It's time for triage:

  • Her notes are likely ruined, and only the committee notes were copied and given to others, not her personal notes. No, this one can be forced lower.
  • She's injured to an unknown degree. Everything hurts, which doesn't suggest any specific priority items.
  • She's in the middle of the river.
  • It's apparently raining now, and under a bridge is shelter from that but not great all-in-all because it's in the middle of the river.
  • There's another delegate in unknown danger up there.
  • It looks like a bad swim to shore.
  • Her notes are likely ruined &c. (moved down to this position on the list).
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