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A Bar in Folded Space
Rockeye's alien mercenary Kaiva meets dilnu's Sapphire

This place, what appears to be the kind of human entertainment establishment known as a 'bar', is decidedly not where Kaiva expected that door to lead.

The door swings closed behind her. She loses contact with her base station.

She looks around - supernovae? - sees the human and asks in passable if reptilian-sounding English, "You know this place, human?"

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A Bar in Folded Space
Rockeye's alien mercenary Kaiva meets dilnu's Sapphire

This place, what appears to be the kind of human entertainment establishment known as a 'bar', is decidedly not where Kaiva expected that door to lead.

The door swings closed behind her. She loses contact with her base station.

She looks around - Supernovae? Impressive vidscreen. - Sees the human and asks in passable if reptilian-sounding English, "You know this place, human?"

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A Bar in Folded Space
Rockeye's alien mercenary Kaiva meets dilnu's Sapphire

This place, what appears to be the kind of human entertainment establishment known as a 'bar', is decidedly not where Kaiva expected that door to lead.

The door swings closed behind her. She loses contact with her base station.

She holds herself in a ready pose, muscles tense. Ten limbs. Two wings, two primary hands, six feet. And she's big.

She looks around - Supernovae? Impressive vidscreen. - Sees the human and asks in passable if reptilian-sounding English, "You know this place, human?"

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