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their smiles and their diamonds
The Sins get dropped on Skygarden

Envy hummed quietly to himself. There wasn't much to do, watch their course, and keep an eye on the systems, just in case.

Not that there was a-

The screen is abruptly filled with a mass of thread-like light, tangled together. Envy swore, hands jerking for the controls (too late).

The engines cut out as they pass through whatever that is, and the ship is in freefall. (And Wrath is swearing on the comms.)

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their smiles and their diamonds
The Sins get dropped on Skygarden

Envy hums quietly to himself. There isn't much to do, watch their course, and keep an eye on the systems, just in case.

Not that there is a-

The screen is abruptly filled with a mass of thread-like light, tangled together. Envy swears , hands jerking for the controls (too late).

The engines cut out as they pass through whatever that is, and the ship is in freefall. (And Wrath is swearing on the comms.)

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