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Jinye in Cosel

From the top of the watchtower - it's not very high, but it's up on a little bit of a rise, and none of the other buildings are very high either - it's easy to get a good view of the city.

Over there's a fighting ring, where a man with wings made of glass and a figure that, wings and all, is thoroughly on fire, are throwing themselves at one another in vicious combat, supervised by cheering and betting human spectators, some with their own winged beings seated at their feet or beside them. The winged beings aren't betting or cheering. The glass one slices off the fire one's left wing, and the fire one continues, silently, trying to melt his face off.

Over there there's a tavern, with singing audible from inside. There's also a couple of human women posed and decorated to advertise their services, attached to the same establishment, loitering out front; in the back, though, a winged being, covered in dark metal, already has a client. She's silent; he's not.

Over there a man has become upset with his winged being - the wings aren't visible but they cast shadows, and they make crunching noises when stepped on. The winged being isn't fighting back or crying out or even trying to shield her face, just lying there generating silent tears while she's beaten.

And over there are the stairs that will take Jinye down from this tower and into the town, if she goes in that direction, or into the fields of lentils and chickpeas and lemons, if she goes the other direction.

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Jinye in Cosel

From the top of the watchtower - it's not very high, but it's up on a little bit of a rise, and none of the other buildings are very high either - it's easy to get a good view of the city.