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Roots across the everlake
The black sea of space, the possibilities of technology and magic combined
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Critical Error in 0x000034B1

Rebooting...

 

Rebooting...

 

Failure.

Switching to backup system...

Exodus AI online.

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The star charts are corrupted. Astrogation data is fragmentary and not trustworthy. Maintenance logs are fragmentary and not trustworthy. Relying only on current sensors and direct checks.

...Telescope array observations indicate that the Exodus is on approach to an oxygen-atmosphere planet. This is not our intended destination. Relative velocity is extremely high. High probability of damage if a landing is attempted.

...Brigman Core fuel levels reading: 8%, 9%, 6%, 8%, 8%, 11%, 5%, 7%. Insufficient for major orbital maneuvers.

Best available course of action: Attempt a landing on the unknown planet.

Calculating...

Firing attitude thrusters...

Bringing Brigman Cores up to power...

Firing interstellar drive.

...Drive performance acceptable. Acceleration readings at 3.6 meters per second per second, below expected thrust.

Calculating...

Chances of survival if deceleration burn continues until intercept: 23%

Calculating... Sacrifice the main body of the Exodus in an aerobraking maneuver and deploy landing pods. Chances of landing pod survival approximately 80%, per pod.

Many of my systems are not responding. I cannot wake the crew and colonists to warn them. I do not understand why this is happening. I will do my best.

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In the sky above Ansaf, towards the bright and 'east' of the sun by about twenty degrees, a new star is born in the sky.

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To the people of Ansaf: If the comet impacts the drybright, it might put dust into the atmosphere, reducing light worldwide. We must be prepared to establish temporary farms on the bright edge, to be abandoned again when the dust clears. Therefore, Lei proposes:

A truce with the Freedom Democracy, so that the soldiers, mostly werewolves, can prepare to settle new growth.

A joint mission with the Allheart Alliance to visit every drybright shrine that becomes accessible.

A global treaty, signed now, before the exact effect of the comet is known, that if parts of the chartreuse are harmed more than others, whether due to dust or direct impact, the habitable land will be divided proportionally to the current occupied area.

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To the people of Ansaf: See how the Lei scheme. They claim to know the results of this unprecedented impact. But who exactly do they claim knows? Elves. They can't share what they know to anyone else. Next, they will offer to 'lend' you educated elves to manage the migration for you.

As for this treaty, it is obvious that the comet will be likely to impact Lei. We will not shift our borders, especially not in the contested northern Wedge area where they will most likely request, and we are insulted that they think us so gullible.

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To the people of Ansaf: sounds like kite mirrors are going to be vital to survival. Get yours now before the prices go up!

But if you do go into the drybright, we are eager to buy any metal you find. [Ore identification guide attached.]

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To the people of Ansaf: We accept Lei's treaty. Due to our drydark colonization, we have twice the area one might assume based only on our length along the chartreuse.

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You have one town in the drydark.

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Two! More soon.

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See how the elves unite to crush anyone who dares to question their omniscience.

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As the 'comet' approaches, its trajectory is changing. Fairly rapidly. It takes a while to figure out and do the orbital math, and the catfolk working with goatseers to make detailed observations are baffled until the key insight.

The comet is accelerating. Slowing itself down relative to Ansaf and maintaining an intercept course. What looks like a dust tail is actually - some sort of titanic rocket.

Somewhere between four and a half wakes and five wakes four hours left, if it continues at the same rate of acceleration. 

At the tip of the star-bright rocket plume, focusing hard against the glare, the faint shape of a long box can be made out. It's framed by two thin wings, larger than the rest of the shape and glowing softly with dull-red heat. Below the working temperature of iron.

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People of Ansaf, we must prepare to meet the aliens with peace, dignity, and pride. Let us all establish embassies near their landing site where we can show the best of our culture.

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Says Lei, who isn't going to be the one hosting the aliens. Also a spacefaring society will obviously support Freedom.

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The metahumans have returned! Repent!

Repent what? 

Failing to explore all the plant and animal species on Ansaf in the time allotted!

Exploring with improper motivation! Notice how the good species like werewolves and catfolk are from animals that are pleasant and fluffy?

Fools, all exploration is wrong! Human magic is a temptation we must resist!

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Additional data on the planet has been gathered. Telescope shows signs of life.

Approach speed is still much higher than ideal landing plans. The drive will continue burning as long as possible in order to provide the best chance at a soft landing.

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The fusion torch grows brighter and brighter and brighter in the sky, polite enough to point the drive plume away from where the exhaust will bombard the planet with charged particles. It never truly rivals the sun, but just being clearly visible in the sky is an achievement on that front. More details can slowly be gleaned as it approaches, along with an estimate of the ship's size. It's over a kilometer and a half long, and about 500 meters across. The massive radiators frame the main body like elegant dull-red wings, two great fans of pipes glowing in the dark.

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In a completely sealed space between the inner and outer hull, nestled just below the drive's radiation shroud, there is a device.

The device is sensitive enough to magnetic fields to detect when the landing system, which changes the geometry of the radiation shroud by shifting it into a heat shield, activates. Just to be sure, it also contains a physical switch which will be depressed if the radiation shroud moves in the correct direction.

It's a very simple device. It has to be, to survive who knows how long with no maintenance, bombarded by radiation, in the cold rear workings of the vessel, and work perfectly at the correct time.

Long-term stable explosives are truly a wonder of modern chemistry.

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The torch drive shuts off, at length, and the UNSS Exodus begins preparations for a controlled landing with heavy aerobraking. Each pod should have enough fuel in its independent housing to land safely, in ideal circumstances. The circumstances are far from ideal.

But the drive goes dark, and the radiators cool off and stop glowing and begin folding away for storage during the last few hours of approach, as the unstable Brigman Cores are moved forward in the hull where they won't be exposed to the rigors of re-entry...

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BOOM

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The UNSS Exodus is clearly visible to anyone who cares to look with magically enhanced vision as one of the great radiators shears off and tumbles into the void, scattering fragments everywhere. There is a fire aboard the ship, gouts of flame emerging from the engine section as it begins to tumble.

Closer... Closer...

The pieces hit Ansaf's atmosphere and begin glowing with friction plasma.

Exodus AI has been thinking at maximum speed ever since the first shockwave. It fires attitude thrusters. It strategically blows out more panels and equipment to stabilize the spin. It tries to control the tilt as the numbers dance wildly, the key one being the number of crew likely to survive, second being the pods with vital colonization equipment...

Aerobraking continues as the hull takes far more heat than it was ever expected to, though not quite as much as it was designed to. Just in case.

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The ship sheds copious amounts of debris as it descends, a fireball streaking across the sky, crossing directly over the chartreuse. The boxes lining its side peel away, some smoothly and some spinning wildly. Some stabilize themselves with rockets, and others fall freely. What's left of the enormous molybdenum pipe radiator hits the side of a near-drybright mountain and shatters into thousands of pieces, still stinking of its boiled-off ammonia working fluid. A few small pieces of debris, mostly unrecognizable bits of metal, land in the thin green line where the tidally-locked planet is habitable.

Most of it lands fairly deep into the drydark.

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Oh well the aliens were cool while they lasted.

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The alien ship's big hot things don't seem to have a purpose, so being big and hot must itself be their purpose. They look like water-extraction books, but hot instead of cold. Is this how the alien ship survives the direct sunlight? But there's no air in space. Is there a way for heat to move without air? Is the sun gradually getting colder?

Wait. Is the heat from sunlight the same heat that the sun is losing?

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We will buy all that metal! 

...We will buy some of that metal, at the attached prices, with a considerable bonus if you take payment in kite mirrors to be delivered in the future.

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The debris is collected, the fleeting weird smell noticed, and -

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Wait this is all molybdenum?!

Such an irony for it to fall so close to the contested Wedge molybdenum mine.

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Their name for molybdenum is more like 'pure - Bb flat 4 beats - Ab sharp 20 beats - Bb flat 6 beats - Ab sharp 1 beat'. The way to identify a metal ore on Ansaf is: 

Grind it very fine.

Eat it.

With liefling help, don't die. Also, grow metal claws. 

The liefling can sometimes say if the metal is 'pure', but that means that one metabolic pathway is used, not that it's a chemical element - both concepts that Ansaf science does not have a solid understanding of.

Cut off of the metal bits of your claws and smash them into two precisely-shaped musical free reeds, like what's in a harmonica or accordion. It helps to have a werewolf make a mold and a mouseling use a very small cursor to check the measurements. 

Compare the pitches of the reeds to reference pitches, not only determining the notes but also the rate at which they beat against the reference pitches.

Finally, heat the reeds in a standardized glass flame and check the pitches again.

This is also often the easiest known way to extract metal from ore. But fortunately, the most important use of metal is nutritional, and for that, the ground ore can simply be mixed into soil.

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Lei, now that we all have as much molybdenum as we could ever need, how about you take the far reaches of the Wedge and we move our northern border tengward by 5 klicks?

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No. Just on principle.

 

Did someone not follow the best practices for earthquake-proofing? Again?

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No comment.

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People of Ansaf: we invite you all to work with us to recover the crashed alien ship. It will be a glorious expedition, striding deeper into the drydark than ever before. Set aside your arguments and take up this work of which legends will be made!

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When a kitsune teleports, do they take their temperature with them or shed it?

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Kef has a lot of sway right now and can immediately hire a kitsune to test that. And a liefling to tend to the kitsune's health. And one of every other available species, just in case.

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Brrrrrrrrr ow ow ow why does warming up hurt more than being cold

Kitsune carry their temperature with them.

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Excellent! Either way would have been excellent, actually, but now he can start designing a protocol to use kitsune to transfer heat to the expedition!

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Uh, Fuzzer? I think you're missing something obvious. Like, really obvious.

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Until we test it, we won't know if this is better than just using catfire.

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Uh huh.

Want to bet?

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No, you're right. This time.

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Oh good, so you can stop torturing the poor kitsune now.

What do you think of this method for making an enclosed tube - not a tunnel, above the surface. It doesn't have to be strong, right, it just has to contain air and be fast to build. And then the expedition can get food supplies by equartier.

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She could have left whenever she wanted!

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Dear sister, an elph must go to support this endeavor, but never fear, I will take on the risk, even should I perish in the lonely void.

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If you must, dear brother. If the shrine of Kef is your last, it will stand forever a testament to your bravery.

(Good. She needs to protect the Kef experiment.)

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Meanwhile, the survivors of the crash find themselves on a frigid glacier, with their pods floating in water that was melted by the impact and is rapidly refreezing.

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In the final seconds before impact, all the stasis pods, all the cargo pods, all the colonization modules were frantically launched with new descent programming.

The automatic landing systems universally failed.

So Exodus AI initiated emergency override, and took manual control of the thrusters in each pod. The pods, smaller and flying separate from Exodus's main hull, mostly landed easily... Mostly. The final act before impact was to trigger emergency re-awakening for all colonists, an abbreviated process that would leave them feeling groggy and sick, but awake enough to respond to the crisis.

The main hull hits first, all the modules floating lightly over it, scattered like dandelion seeds. It ploughs a long streak into the ice, sending shattered debris up in great showers, some of it impacting descending pods... It was never designed for such rigors. The impact is a hundred times beyond even the worst 'rough landing'. As the massive hulk grinds against the ice at hundreds of miles an hour, it rapidly disintegrates into so much aluminum, titanium, steel, circuitry, and wiring. The resulting debris field is a long oval as pieces fly up or are buried under hills of loose broken ice, and only small sections remain recognizable and intact. The Brigman Cores, in particular, were built tougher than anything else. They bubble and ooze hot blue plasma where they landed, each one melting the ice further with the energies inside, steadily melting small craters into the landscape.

The major modules, exposed on the outer hull, were disadvantaged in their landing. Several of the landing thrusters failed, sending the vital modules tumbling or hitting the ground at high speed, turning billions of dollars worth of high-end equipment into so much scrap. Others, outer hulls still glowing red-hot from re-entry, sank deep into the glacier as the ice greedily absorbed the violent energy of the descent, sinking into melting puddles of oily polluted steam and contaminated water. The pods are supposedly well sealed against anything that could threaten them, but the crash landing is a brutal test of engineering safeguards. 

Around half of them landed intact, on flat ground, if embedded in anywhere up to a dozen feet of ice once it refreezes. Some landed hard but not devastatingly hard, or at a steep angle or near a cliff or crevasse, subsequently falling and ruining whatever was inside. Some of them successfully completed their transformation into part of the debris field.

The smaller modules, the suspension pods, the medical module, the labs, the supply lockers and battery banks and shuttle bays, tended to deal better with the ice. They were deep in the hull, sheltered from the heat of re-entry, and less violent in their descent. The landing engines mostly produced large steaming puddles rather than melting away whole lakes, leaving them dug a foot or two into the ice in most cases.

 

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Shen wakes up to a scene of smoke and devastation. This pod should contain the whole bridge crew, but... He only sees two others moving around.

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"Damn it! This smoke-"

She starts coughing violently.

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"There's an electrical fire over here! Grab the extinguishers before it spreads!"

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They drill emergency procedures into you vigorously, when you're learning to be a pilot for humanity's first extraterrestrial colony. He knows exactly where the fire extinguishers are without having to think about it, and navigates to them through the smoke. The air is soon full of the sound of foam sprayers.

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Meanwhile, Lucy has looked at the external sensors, seen that it's a human-safe atmosphere if very cold, and cycled open the external vents. Good think the wires for that are exposed for a quick manual override, ugh...

The smoke starts to clear. She helps with the fires. She can see out the window now- What she sees is... Darkness. Frost riming it, and then... A large field of ice covered in smoking debris, as well as quite a few relatively intact pods and modules. The scene is lit only by fires and the exterior emergency lights, sullen red, of all the dropped pods.

"Fuck! What the hell happened here? Did we crash-land on Avalon's pole...?"

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"Let's put on our EVA suits. And close the vents again. We won't last long in these temperatures- And we need to start talking to people on the radios."

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"No, we should check on the rest of the bridge crew now that the fire's dealt with-"

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"The Captain is dead. So is the Pilot, First Officer, and Chief Engineer. It's... Pretty bad. You might not want to look." His voice is shaky. "Some of the juniors seem okay, but their pods didn't wake them up for some reason. I've started the process manually. I... I think you two are the highest ranking officers left."

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"...Navigator outranks co-pilot. Lucy. I think this means you're in charge."

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"No, that can't be right- No. I know the regulations as well as you do, yes, but- Dammit! How did this happen? I entered the course myself! It would have been a perfect equatorial circularization-"

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"And I double-checked it! But- Figuring out what happened can come later. Right now we have an emergency on our hands. We need to start moving, not panic."

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"Right." 

Leadership in a crisis situation is two thirds momentum, she vaguely remembers from somewhere... 

She sees figures emerging from one of the other lifepods, their helmet lights casting eerie, shifting shadows and streaks of light over the dark, blasted landscape.

"Okay. Anjay, supervise the rest of the bridge crew waking up and help everyone else into their EVA suits. Navigator's orders. Find me when they're all ready, including yourself. Shen, start making radio calls. Get a list of pods that survived the landing. Tell- Tell everyone to get their EVA suits on and report their status. I'm going to put on my EVA suit and inspect the pod exterior. We meet back in - fifteen minutes and report."

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The rest of the day is a long blur of talking and movement, stress and muscle strain and the lingering effects of stasis combining into a miserable mélange of heartburn and nausea. The EVA suits are insulated against the cold, and have interior batteries to resist the wind's attempts to wick heat away, but the helmets stay cold and the gloves are fairly chilly too.

They're still lucky in a lot of ways. The radios are working fine, getting them an accurate head-count of the survivors and injured, and simplifying the searching and inventory. The atmosphere is breathable, which is a massive blessing. No relying on air tanks and sudden death due to suffication.

It's just very very cold. Whatever intact batteries people can find are draining quickly. Half of the important equipment is destroyed or frozen in ice.

And then there's the matter of shell-shock. Trapped on an arctic glacier, during a crash landing, with many of their friends and comrades dead... So many people spent their time wandering about in a daze. Shen felt it too, the urge to wallow in shock and figure out what the hell went wrong- But his job is to yell at people over the radio, and repeat things over and over, until there's some semblance of order.

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She's good at swearing and shouting. She swears every other word into the radio, calls people reprehensible names, and says it's their own fault if they die from being too lazy to help in an emergency. It's the stress, really. Being rude and abrasive will probably come back to bite her. If they don't all die. It certainly gets everyone moving in mostly the same direction, at least... A swarm of fireflies, over a thousand helmet lights bobbing over the night-dark ice sheet and milling around in confused pools.

 


 

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"Hey, anyone listening on this thing? I got one of the transport vehicles unboxed! You can see me waving around a flashlight on the roof of it. All vehicle team members, head this way! We're gonna get this baby up and running so we can set up that habitat module the bridge crew found! Warm beds are just a couple hours' work away!"

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"Shen. I've noticed something alarming. The stars haven't moved. It's been hours- They should have changed position by now. Even if we were at a pole... The only thing I can think of is that we're on a tidally locked planet, some fucking how. We'll be subjected to eternal night, the solar panels will obviously be of no use..."

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"If that's the case, we're going to need a reactor module... We've identified two habitat modules, a hydroponics module, a recycling module, and an entertainment module of all things- That one can wait. But nobody's reported seeing one yet."

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"Put out a call, ask if anyone sees signs of it. And then let's head over to Mr. flashlight-waver so we can get on a vehicle and scout faster."

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"Mary Hersch, Warrant Officer. I have bad news about your reactor module... I'm looking at it, but my geiger counter is going crazy even a hundred meters away. It's venting steam like crazy, and there's a big, obvious crack. This one is a no-go. If I remember the manifest correctly, there were three in total..."

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"Shit! Mary, Lucy Carver here. We're in no shape to try and- Assess or contain that. Just avoid that whole area. Back off as far as possible. Make sure everyone around you knows to stay away! Do you have some way to mark it? Without getting close!"

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"I'll... I'll figure something out. Hersch, out."

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"Daniel Montero speaking. Command team, please switch to channel seven."

Shortly after, on a less public if not unpublic channel,

"An exclusion zone of one kilometer should suffice for immediate precautions. Long-term, we're going to need to evacuate the entire impact area. I can see the module in question where I am as well, and given the radiation signatures and fires, it will be carrying radioactive particulate into the atmosphere. If you'll indulge a historical reference... We're looking at a Chernobyl or Fukushima situation here."

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"Mr. Montero, you're a physicist? Do you have any idea how far the radiation will spread?"

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"Not primarily. I'm a medical doctor with degrees in several supporting sciences, including physics, biochemistry, and agronomy. You could say I'm a bit of a polymath- I have an eidetic memory. It's very difficult to guess. The winds here seem to be lower than on Earth's arctic but I have little information on the upper atmosphere, and I'm not a climatologist. Perhaps we could improvise some sort of weather balloon out of the survey satellites, but in the absence of more information... I would establish the habitat module at least twenty miles away, and ideally further."

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"...We'll take that into account."

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They don't find another reactor module in the next hour. At gentle prompting from Shen, Lucy makes the call: Evacuate, east (or, well, ""east"" is a guess at best) to a large flat plain of ice, gently downhill, against where the wind is currently blowing. The salvaged Transport Vehicle is able to- At length and with copious amounts of effort, chip away at the ice around the landing legs and cargo door of the first Habitat Module, and use its powerful crane to load the massive prefab bulk onto the crawler. The gravity here is earthlike, when much of the equipment was designed for something a little lighter... But they manage it.

They light beacons, recovered searchlights mounted on improvised poles, each one pointing in the right direction, towards the habitat. Their systems will run off of chemical generators, batteries, and power cells for at least a couple of days. Everyone needs to rest, and needs shelter from the cold. 

The prefabricated structure rises steadily from the landscape, the exterior lights seeming more comforting and beautiful than almost anything else could, in that moment. A steady stream of confused survivors trudges their way along the trail of lights towards the base... Shen organizes a team to take a quick census of the survivors and their skills as they trickle in. The number quickly reaches over a thousand. Given that the habitat module was originally designed for four hundred people, this presents some crowding problems...

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Bass's crew have found a grand total of four exploration rovers, and gotten them all running just fine! They spend their time ferrying the least mobile survivors to the beacon on the horizon- The injured, and the children.

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Dr. Montero quickly seizes a storage room in a convenient location as an improvised medical bay, and conducts a staff of nurses and volunteers like an orchestra.

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The filtered air tastes stale and slightly bitter as the scrubbers choke on almost three times as many people as they were designed for. There are a lot more relatively intact modules out there... But that's something that can be dealt with tomorrow.

Or after eight hours of sleep. Whatever you call it when the sun doesn't rise.

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Warrant Officer Hersch is kept up all night fielding question after question about what happened, and whether they're all going to die, and what they're going to do next, and so on. These people are going to grow sullen and resentful before too long, she can't help but think... That's how disaster situations always end up. All she can do for it is maintain order and let Lucy Carver and her team do their best. She's read their bios. Lucy can handle it, if anyone here can.

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Oh my god, the situation is utterly screwed. FUBAR. The excrement has well and truly hit the air distributor.

There is ICE on her precious air intakes. The weight of the habitat module will slowly make it SINK down below if they don't figure out something clever. And what's this she hears about salvaging another reactor module? The first one has contaminated dozens of miles of ground! They can rely on solar panels, once the sun rises.

...What? Tidally locked? The sun isn't going to rise?

 

WELP.

"Boys, let's investigate the feasibility of building some WIND TURBINES, or perhaps some kinda geothermal tap! I know I saw some wind generators on the walk over here, but we're gonna need something to deal with the cold and icing, so get your brainstorming hats on..."

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...Crew transponders active: 1103/1500.

...Bridge reserve power running out. Exodus AI will shut down momentarily.

Saving logs to disk.

Good luck... Everyone...

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Life on Ansaf is constrained by food.

When the food is provided by the government of Sota, walking into the drydark is easy.

They build a roof as they go, in many segments of arch. Each segment has four pieces: two rigid blocks and two thin pieces of shell. All the pieces are light enough to be carried by catfolk, and installed by catfolk too - the blocks interlock with the adjacent blocks and the shell halves slot into the blocks below them, all with no werewolf magic required. The werewolves are mostly stationary, sheltering in the tube, taking the time to fully enervate the source rock and produce a batch of pieces all at once.

Every 25 minutes, a werewolf can produce about ten pieces of one type, which can be installed in about 25 seconds. Keeping a site of assembly continuously supplied, then, requires 50 werewolves. Times 4 sites of assembly, so 200 werewolves, and 200 catfolk... But actually, Kef can spare werewolves more easily than catfolk, keeping the turbines pumping at full power but shorthanding the mines. And the assembly itself, out in the cold, must be done by catfolk, but anyone can pull a cart.

The ground is uneven, but for now, they let it be, only using the most impeding boulders for source rock. It won't be worth delivering food by equartier until they're much deeper into the drydark, and there will be plenty of time to straighten and flatten the path before then. The ground is measured in advance by a mouseling and a boark, and the werewolves adjust each block to fit. The pieces of shell are all identical.

Working in two 15-hour shifts, approaching the crash site at one klick per hour, are: 700 werewolves, 100 catfolk, 10 boarks, 1 mouseling, 1 kappa, 1 elph, 5 gnomunks, 1 wroth, 1 kitsune, 1 vampire, 1 liefling, 5 frogolds, 1 gnoll, 2 stetcaps, 1 human, 1 goatseer, and 1 irontooth.

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"...So given the current power readings and the minor miracle your boys pulled off with those wind turbines, Nina... We have just about enough power to run the habitat systems with a little left over."

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"Yep. We have a lot more stored, about forty power cells worth, but running our vehicles very hard or building any more modules will drain that really quick. And there's a dozen other concerns I have in the longer term... Ice isn't a great foundation material."

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"We have four intact Exploration Rovers and two transports, though I'd only trust one right now- Green Giant snapped two of her eight axles in the landing. We can fix her with time and resources. The rovers are great news, I have plenty of boys and girls who would be down for scouting the, uh, salvage field and looking for useful things."

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"People are mostly in survival mode for now. They're thanking their lucky stars for being alive, hugging their families... Or grieving, for a lot of 'em. Losing over a fourth of our people is really not good. In terms of security and morale we don't have much to worry about yet."

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"We have some observations of star motion. It's slow but measurable, and some math and estimates place us about four hundred kilometers into the 'dark side' of the planet. I think we should send a scout team there to investigate conditions in the light side. It might be better, long term."

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"The solar panels would work, if nothing else."

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"To return to the power situation, I believe it is imperative that we recover a reactor module."

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"Oh come on. The first one gave a dozen people radiation poisoning- So far! Are you braindead, you want to risk the next one being damaged and poisoning us all?"

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"Cool it down a notch, Nina. We might have no choice. The hydroponics modules, recyclers, mining modules if we find any ore under all this ice... All that takes a LOT of power."

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"I'm well acquainted with the risks, considering I'm the one who has to treat the poor bastards. I'm also aware of the risks of dehydration, malnutrition, and hypothermia. Miss Carver, I urge in the strongest possible term to identify and secure a reactor module. For the future of our unwanted new home."

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"Fine! Point taken. How the fuck would we even sink all that heat without melting the foundations we sit on..." Nina mutters.

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"We want to find the other reactor modules and confirm their condition either way. So we know our options and if we have to set more exclusion zones. Bass, did you finish the radiation shielding I asked for?"

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"Sure did, boss. Thin sheets of steel we can bolt to the rovers and expedition suits. I had the doc look at it and he said it will cut radiation exposure to about half if we follow good decon protocols. Might slow people down or cause a puncture or two but the pressure is okay, it's just cold. I'm planning to give scout teams two days of light work for every day out there, since it's bound to be grueling."

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"Fix the other transport. Get me a hydroponics module. Send three rovers to look for a reactor, but catalog anything else they find too. Send one rover to look for a route to the bright side of the planet."

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Snow falls over parts of the drydark, for the first time in a very long time, as the boiled ice from the crash site and fires condenses and slowly falls back down. Not that much. Just a light dusting. And only some of it is slightly to moderately radioactive.

The first large piece of debris they find is a bent steel locker door landing far from the rest by some freak coincidence. "T. Cooper" is engraved in it. The lock is fused into slag and the hinges are torn.

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"There are bits of ice falling from the sky!"

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"It's called 'snow' - the Storms make it sometimes."

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"This is from the Storms?"

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"There's a theory that there are more Storms deep in the drybright. Maybe there are more Storms deep in the drydark too.

The Storms happen where the air gets colder, as the darkward trade winds pass into the dark - maybe the crash heated the air and now it's cooling off again."

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"Oh, that makes sense. This 'snow' can't be normal or there would be more of it."

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"And if this much water was always moving from the Storms into the drydark, I think the chartreuse would be shrinking a lot faster."

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Why did Lei send a gardener? Just because he speaks Sotalese?

He's not complaining! He's going to be the best double agent with no training on doubling agent who's ever doubled agent.

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This is awesome.

She has already thoroughly examined Kef with her sonar - openly! - and sent a report back to Lei by messenger. One mission complete. Everything else that she gets to see now is a bonus.

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Oh hey a vampire, you don't see those every cycle. "Hi, I'm Calsa! Where are you from?"

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What a friendly catfolk. She wraps her wings* around herself. "I'm from Lei, the town bon-sharr-ili, if that means anything to you. It's nothing special."

*Winged humanoids on Ansaf generally have four limbs, not six.

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"Are you going to defect when we get back to Kef?"

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"Um. No.

Do you want to defect to Lei?"

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"No! Okay, fair. Why, should I? I mean, I'm not leaving my family - my wife is a clerk for the Kef magistrate and my son is one of the surveyors up ahead - but, hypothetically, what's your pitch?"

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"Let me think about that... I'm Chime, by the way. Actually, Ciolha, but if you don't speak Elvish don't worry about it - they call me Chime in Lei too.

...yeah, I've got nothing you haven't heard before. Lei is nice? It seems nice here too?"

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"Very wise you are, Chime. Yeah, I read Elvish with Sotalese pronunciation, I don't know anyone who actually speaks it here."

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"Oh, you mean you read High Elvish? Elvish, common Elvish, is written phonetically in Lei..."

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"...Yes. That's what I mean. What, like, is common Elvish? Isn't the whole point of El- High Elvish that it doesn't change?"

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"Oh, no, they both change! High Elvish is what elves speak, and people who work at shrines. But people don't learn to speak from elves, they learn from their family, and common Elvish changes ... hmm... half as much as most languages? I don't know, -" Chime flips the fingertips on one wing forward and wraps herself up again. "And it mostly changes by slang, and... the meanings of words slide around, but the words themselves don't change, if that makes sense? And High Elvish - it's a very big language. I guess it grows a bit, or shrinks, but what I really mean is more that people use different parts of it at different times, to make it clear that they're speaking High Elvish. Like, the word for 'kite' used to be a combination of the words for 'star' and 'cloth', or just 'star', or sometimes 'little bird'. Now, in common Elvish, we call a kite with the word for 'pool', as in 'mirror pool'. And now elves, when they're being fancy, they always say 'star cloth' for a kite, and they call a mirror a 'pool'."

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"Wow. Oh no, are you cold?" She steps closer and flares up. "I've been in the drydark, or the dark side of the mountains, my whole life, so I forgot for a moment about mirror kites. I wonder what they call them in Nitatlel - the country bright of the mountains."

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"Nitalhel - Nitatlel - is so pretty! I only got to see it for a minute, since I came here by equartier the whole way, even through the Argo aqueduct."

Is the catfolk hitting on her? Ew.

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"Hey, mom, we found something with writing on in! Alien writing! Where's the linguist?"

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Tomas is not, actually, a linguist. He's a liar, there's a difference.

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"The writing is so crisp. Could it have been done with a casting?"

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Merta kneels by the metal object. "I think so, yes. It looks more scratched, though."

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"A pity. I was hoping the aliens might have had a species like werewolves but for metal."

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"You think they might still be alive?"

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According to his last briefing before departing the Freedom Democracy, the aliens survived the crash. But that information comes from a species that the rest of the world doesn't yet know exists.

Mofil places his block and silently turns back into the tube to get his next one.

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They're having a lot of trouble with the ice. There's not much powder, but ice and rough ground still makes it hard to get a grip and move at speed. The planet Avalon (which this place obviously isn't) did have snow from the probe's data, so they do have snow chains designed for the rover's wheels installed, but you still want to go kind of cautiously.

All four scout teams are in contact with each other and Home Base, checking in regularly. The digital data links even work, so their tablet screens are filling in with map data as they go, and it's really easy to mark down landmarks. With the one rover assigned to looking for a way towards the sun, they spend the first couple of hours putting nav beacons on whatever can pass for a high point nearby. They'll help the computers triangulate everything, the further apart the better. They even have little wind turbines, miniature ones.

Then they drive up and down the glacier, looking for paths in the correct direction that aren't too covered in crevasses or steep slopes or loose pieces. It'll probably take several days, but as they map out safe 'roads' they'll be able to get to more distant areas faster in the future.

He also trained on the surveying equipment, doing all sorts of scanner-things he doesn't really understand in order to identify rich ore veins of useful materials, mostly iron. Magnets or something. They're not bothering with those yet, focusing rather on getting used to the terrain and navigating safely in near-total darkness. Maybe some adjustments to the headlights...

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The salvage mapping teams found another transport vehicle in what looks like good order. Tomorrow, maybe they'll go fetch it and have that much more to work with. They also found a sheet of solar panels- Useless to them now, and several emergency supply lockers. The chemical power cells in those will at least stretch their electricity a little further, while she tries to organize a hundred fifty people to build wind turbines out of various bits of rubble and scrap.

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Mary has a quiet word in person, not over the radio, with Lucy Carver. She saw where the ship's Small-Arms Armory landed and can guide a scout team to it, tomorrow. It's for the best if they recover those arms and ammunition soonest, just to make sure none of it disappears. There should be ten rifles, twenty shotguns, and thirty-nine pistols- Less the one she has on her person already.

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...They'll deal with that tomorrow, on one of the rovers. Mary and three of her security staff can go personally with the salvage team to secure it, if they haven't found one of the reactors by then. The reactor would be higher priority.

For now, they have a LOT of waggling tongues and idle hands to throw at the Hydroponics Module that was dragged into base just now. Get to it if you want to eat something other than rehydrated rations!

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We'll have enough electricity for this kind of high activity for... One more day at this pace. Two if we limit use of the vehicles more. And even with Nina's in-progress wind turbines we can't run the habitat, hydroponics, and vehicles all at once.

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That's a problem for tomorrow. Keep moving forward.

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One more thing. We need crate #65 from one of the hospital modules, or 18 people are at risk of death due to radiation poisoning.

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A narrow canyon which has been running parallel to the tube now crosses their path. Diverting along it won't work, since it doesn't seem to be getting any shallower, bending the tube will make it harder to convert to an equartier path later, and too much time would be lost to the longer route. The journey will pause for a few hours.

All the active catfolk leave the tube and surround the area in front to keep it warm enough for werewolves to come out and build a bridge. Someone has got to have bridge building experience, right?

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Sure. Some harpies would speed it up a lot.

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"Okay. By how much? And what else are we missing..."

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Well, not that much time, if they build the bridge out of stone that's already enervated. But if harpies gather loose boulders and pile them up to make the bulk of the bridge, the rest of the werewolves can spend that time stocking up on tube parts, and you know how the catfolk doing assembly are getting faster with practice and outpacing the supply of parts?

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He did not know any of that, actually.

"Even if there are harpies in Kef it will take too long for them to get here to be worth it. But send for them anyway, so we don't have this problem again. And, in general, we need to prioritize making the path suitable for equartiers. If we had done that already, we might have been able to get harpies here fast enough to save time. I don't know what we'll need, for the next surprise, because no one has even tried to answer my question about what else we're missing, but we'll need to be able to get it fast."

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"And I want updates from each team, every ten hours."

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So, anything fun happening in Kef? Dancing? Swimming in the lovely warm aqueduct? By the way, Fuzzer wants harpies. Hey Quiet Pavel, how about we put soap on our feet and go sliding down the empty mine corridors? No, I don't know why he wants the harpies. Actually we should put the soap on our bellies, so we can run and then flop down and slide. I don't want to go back and ask him why; I'd have to redo all the soap.

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"All that I'm saying is that it looks like a system similar to an alphabet, not that each letter necessarily represents a sound. I'm not even sure that the row of letters is a sequence in time."

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Apparently Calsa's wife is a werewolf. Still weird, but Chime isn't offended anymore. Really, she shouldn't have been offended at all. Maybe lots of households cross a bit internally and just never tell anyone.

She wouldn't know; she hasn't been part of a household since childhood.

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There's wind here, and it's been getting steadily stronger. Why is there wind here but not in Kef? Are the Cliffs of Sorrow, way back near Argolake, enough of an obstacle to thrust a calm area windward all the way out to Kef, but not any farther? Seems like a stretch. The wind must be coming from something ahead of them.

Has the wind been eroding the ground?

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Yeah, there are signs of erosion. Is that good or bad?

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Bad, because it means the wind is a permanent feature of the landscape, not just caused by the alien ship somehow. And do you know what else is a permanent feature of the landscape? I don't know either, but it's ahead of us.

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The bridge is finished and they continue darkward.

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"So you don't do any farming? That's so weird to me. In Lei, everyone farms. Even I schlepp stuff around; there's not nearly enough vampire work for a whole shift."

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"I used to light fields in Argolake, or the lake itself, but not since coming to Kef. We do have farms in Kef, it's just that they wouldn't be enough to live on by themselves."

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"Isn't that true of this whole part of Sota, dark of the Cliffs of Sorrow? What if Nitatlel didn't send food...I mean, I guess then you'd stop the Argo aqueduct, so it'd be bad for them too, so they wouldn't. But it just seems so fragile."

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"All life is fragile."

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"In Lei you really pack the people in, don't you? That seems more fragile."

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"Oh, no, I mean, yes, the shrines keep very careful track of how many people there are and how to support them all, but no, it's not scary the same way. Each 'county' goes all the way from bright to dark, so no one is dependent on a treaty to stay fed, certainly not a treaty between different countries. And Lei is huge. If something bad happened to a county, there'd be space for everyone to go somewhere else.

I get the impression people don't travel much here?"

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"Wha? In Lei people are forbidden to travel!"

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"Nnno. People travel within their county all the time, and across counties there are cargo sledders and theater troupes and" flip fingertips out "rare species and exchange programs... You need a reason, but if you have a reason you can do it. Not like here where every don and magistrate makes up their own rules."

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"I see what you mean..."

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"And, like, your son is a mouseling? That would never happen in Lei."

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"Hey, so, I'm a weird cat, okay? And Merta is a weird wolf. We rescued Siki from bandits who thought Kef would be an easy target, and then what, you want to take him away from a happy family just so he can be with mouselings in Argolake?"

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"Well, in most towns there would be plenty of mouselings, just not Kef."

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"Sure, there are mouselings in Archer's Tabbard, you wouldn't have to go all the way to Argolake -"

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"No I mean, in most towns, he'd just go into a mouseling family from the start."

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"Okay, sure. How's that relevant to travel, then? Would you take a child away from everyone they know, for a third time?"

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"No!" She sighs. "Maybe I'm just used to life following a plan more than you are."

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Ohh, probably someone involved in recommending him for the job is also an FD spy... Who is it? Who's the last person anyone would suspect? ...One of the emperors?!

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"What goes on a door? Anyone? I have a list, but what have you all seen on doors?"

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- "Exit"

- "Drakebreath!"

- "Granary #3"

- "You are now entering the jurisdiction of Argolake"

- "Jailers Only"

- "I'm at the dock, back before the end of the blood shift"

- "Knock twice for a good time"

- "Office of the Gnomunk Don"

- "Nafolia's Room"

- "Go away, I'm sleeping"

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"Good! And I'll add 'catmother, watch over this family'. Assuming the text is permanent, we can rule out some of those. I also think that, given the small size of the text, it's not a warning or urgent advisory. What does leave us? Identification of something, but it's assumed that most people will already know it. Or, maybe, the value was in the act of writing, and it was not really meant to be read at all."

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"A religious sign might be indistinguishable from a name, without more information. Like, maybe the small part with the dot is a vocative particle and the rest is a name. If we find more such markings and they all start with the cross and dot, that would be evidence in favor..."

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blink-blink-blink... Nefanie is able to teleport right up to the bridge now, so the expedition is probably all the way past it. See everyone soon, back to work now!

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Time to get reports from each team!

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The assembly is now averaging 22 parts per minute at all four points, but constructing the parts is slower than before since the werewolves are also smoothing the path, down to only 74 parts per minute. The wind is still getting stronger. Morale is good - the gnomunks handed out fresh fruit. A flock of harpies arrived an hour ago. Fuzzer is trying to figure out a safe way to launch a ship in the cold, so a goatseer can take a look at the path ahead, without diverting too many catfolk from assembly.

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Aha, two of these problems solve each other! Fuzzer can have 16 catfolk from assembly.

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Fuzzer grits his teeth and thanks the wise Abilanedi for his excellent observation.

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And how's the diplomacy going, my good man?

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"So far, sir, all I can say is that the writing appears to be in an alphabet of some sort, and it's either a person's name or a religious message."

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It's been a couple of days, and they're pretty sure they have an accurate count of all the... Survivors, now. So it's time to publish the casualty reports in the general hall.

She's really not looking forward to it. A lead weight in her stomach. Her child is okay. Arnold is with all the other children in an improvised schoolhouse, learning a hastily revised curriculum of technological and practical skills, like how the hydroponic systems work. Most of the children are okay, actually, but not all of them.

Three hundred ninety seven deaths. Twenty six out of a hundred. One in four. And maybe more in the coming days.

There's a steadily building pall of muttering and discontent behind her when she pins up the list. Travis Cooper - Confirmed Dead. Caroline Mathers - Confirmed Dead. Miguel Ortiz - Missing, Presumed Dead. Xiao Lee - Confirmed Dead.

Four reasons to grieve. Ninety nine times more, unread by her eyes.

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7384: What a stone-cold bitch. She just pasted them up and left.

Reddeker: What was she supposed to do, give a speech?

7384: Yes.

Orangeanade: She's probably taking it hard too, just not in public. Would it be BETTER if she had a breakdown in the middle of the hall? I for one am glad stone-cold corpo lady is still sharp. It'll keep us alive.

7384: Who invited the boot licker?

Potato_Clock: The whole situation is fucked. This isn't even the right PLANET. They're not telling us something.

Reddeker: My wife is dead. It could just have easily been me. I want answers too. But we have to not die in the meantime.

Orangeanade: I'm sorry about your wife.

7384 has kicked Oranganade.

Reddeker: Dude

Reddeker has kicked 7384.

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"The wind is actually really consistent - mostly in the same direction and around the same speed. Which is surprisingly convenient for designing these windmills. We can make the blades just big enough to max out likely production most of the time. I've got the fabrication workshop going, making the blades out of salvaged aluminum, stainless for the hubs and bearings. But the biggest limiter on how many wind turbines we can make will be the number of large electric motors. I bet we could build more, but not quick. So if you see any wrecked vehicles or damaged equipment with big pumps or fans in them while out salvaging, make those a priority."

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"Sure thing, Nina. Another place we can salvage them is the landing engines and bay doors for the cargo pods. Might be quite a bit of work to extract them, admittedly- Maybe we can set up a few of the prefab houses closer to the debris field and base salvage work there? I'll bring it up. Though... I've still got boss's orders to sniff around for a reactor module. They actually scattered pretty far, there's three more big module landers we're checking today and the rest are in more inconvenient areas, past crevasses or up high slopes. There's still a lot of smoke and steam in the area too, I think the Brigman Cores are still burning."

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"Maybe we could salvage one of those and use a regular old steam turbine."

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"You think that's safer than nuclear?"

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"If the other nuclear modules had as nasty a landing as the first one, yeah. I saw a camera feed from someone piloting a quadcopter in there. The fuel was literally leaking out of the core and pooling on the ground in a big yellow pile. That shit's incredibly toxic. The brigman cores are fusion- A lot more difficult to make and keep working, but less radioactive, less nuclear waste. They, uh, are probably pretty unstable from the crash though. Forget about it."

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"A steam turbine isn't that bad of an idea, though. Someone mentioned geothermal a while ago, and we could always just - burn things. Hell of a waste and unsustainable, but in emergencies..."

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"Do you know how to tell if this planet even has a molten core?"

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"There were geological probes in some of the cargo bays. If any of those are intact, we can send 'em straight on down and two hours later we'll get a report on all sorts of things. Maybe even a map of useful ore veins if we're lucky. We've still got plenty of chances and options, you know."

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"God, how are you so optimistic and cheerful?"

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"Well, it's either wallow in doom, or keep trying things. And I hate wallowing."

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Today's finds while carefully exploring the crash site:

An area of elevated radioactivity in a shallow valley! Lots of the dust from the nuclear module must have settled here. The team's rover slid down a slope with incredibly bad timing, taking half an hour to get back out. They rush home and through decontamination, already showing signs of radiation poisoning. Four more patients join Dr. Montero's radiation watch.

A cargo bay containing one of the Aurora's orbital shuttles! On a quick examination, it appears to be mostly intact, but one corner of the bay is kind of crumpled and lots of things fell over, so it will definitely need a thorough examination before any attempts to fly. They leave it for later.

And...

The precious reactor module. They've found it. Beyond a small ridge that hid it from vision in the crash site itself, with only smaller pieces of debris nearby. A careful, thorough check reveals no signs of radioactivity, and then Nina Gorman is called on video to examine the interior. It looks all intact, she reluctantly admits.

 

The rover assigned to brightward exploration has discovered a long, clear part of the glacier, almost a hundred kilometers of obstacle-free space following a ridge. They went slow and careful, marking the path and dropping occasional beacons as they went, and eventually turned back when everyone was getting too tired to safely continue.

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We're getting that reactor module NOW.

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What about my anti-radiation medicine?

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What about my small arms armory?

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What about salvaging food and materials from the crash site, just to play devil's advocate?

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What about salvaging parts for wind turbines?

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Power is life; They'll have all sorts of additional options with proper electricity and heat, even if they also have new problems. They can run the vehicles more, recover more modules. They can let people use power for nonessential purposes if any ends up spare. They'll even be able to power the mining module. Unless the reactor is fantastically unsafe, careful monitoring and rotation of those who work to minimize the negative impacts will have to do.

They have two working transport vehicles. The first one will fetch the reactor module today, then they'll do a very thorough double-check on it. Tomorrow, it gets assembled and turned on. The second transport vehicle can salvage the armory; They don't actually know where the hospital module ended up yet, wind turbines will hopefully be obviated, and the rest of the wreckage isn't going anywhere.

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"What should we call this place, anyway?"

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"...Call what?"

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"The colony. It needs a name. Even if we ended up not at all where we expected to."

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"...I've got nothing."

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"Svalbard."

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"...Niflheim?"

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"Isn't Niflheim some sort of Norse hell?"

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Mary shakes her head. "Not quite. Home of the frost giants."

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"Pluto or Charon, as a reference to a tidally locked dwarf planet around Sol?"

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"Charon is the boatman that ferries the dead. I don't want our home's name to mean death. Pluto at least was also a god of wealth."

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"Does it have to be from mythology? I don't know anything about that stuff. Svalbard has that seed vault, it's tough but hopeful."

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"Perhaps we could take public submissions and hold a vote. It might give everyone who's not a senior officer some sense of control or direction, if nothing else."

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"...Sure, why not. One day to submit names, then we throw out duplicates and obvious bullshit or bait, then pick as many as you like on a forum vote on Exodus-Net."

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"Well, if that's settled, we all have a lot of work to do, as senior officers."

He stands up and beelines for the exit without waiting for a confirmation.

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The ship is a bubble of rock with space for the flock of harpies inside, along with the goatseer, one catfolk, and one frogold. A couple of tiny windows all the way around, and they'll leave a small hole at the top. Catfolk huddle around the outside getting the walls as hot as is comfortable to touch.

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"All aboard!"

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"Fuzzer! I can't believe I have to say this. We can't afford to lose you."

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"It's completely safe. If anything goes wrong, the flock will gently set us down and we'll wait for rescue."

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"And if it all shatters?"

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"That would be even safer. There are two harpies for each of the rest, so they'll just grab us and fly directly into shelter."

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"Oh, alright then, you've got it figured out. We still need you on the ground to coordinate, but I'll feel completely safe taking your place, thanks."

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The crew boards, the cap is sealed into the entry hole, the harpies grab on and float...

The goatseer does nothing yet.

The catfolk, who is neither Fuzzer nor Calsa, stays in the center, away from everyone else, and burns.

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The ship now weighs almost nothing, so all it takes to push it upwards is to compress the air in her mouth, swap it with uncompressed air below, gulp more air, repeat. Fresh air hisses in though the hole in the top. Gulp, swap. Again.

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After half an hour, the goatseer reports that there is a mountain range in front of them. Light colored but dirty, with sharp curls worn into it by the wind. Also, there's another piece of alien debris about a deci-klick left of the tube's heading, thirty klicks forward, and it's small enough for one person to carry back.

After an hour, one of the harpies comments that the air is feeling the way it does when they go high up and there's not enough air and non-harpies start getting weak and ditzy. How is everyone feeling?

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She is feeling fine just her mouth is hurting. How about they rotate the ship upside-down and she sucks air in from above, and then the exhaust will blow downwards.

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Before they rotate the ship, the goatseer wants to watch outside more, since the windows have a very narrow field of view and who knows where they'll be pointing afterward.

There's a big plume of cloud coming from the direction of the crash site!

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Well that they have to get a better look at. Get ready to tumble!

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Actually, rotating the ship goes pretty smoothly. The three non-harpies just walk up the spherical wall and it gently rolls over.

Well, the catfolk trips over a handle and chills just in time to avoid setting the goatseer burning hungry, and gashes his arm on the goatseer's horn, but still.

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Suck, swap, repeat. The ship goes up a bit more, but that just gets a slightly better view of the foot of the cloud.

After ten minutes of this, a blood vessel in Lin's nose bursts, and she's still fine, she could power through it, but if she keeps sucking air like this she might lose enough blood to be useless if there's an emergency later, so maybe it's time to go down?

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"What on Ansaf is - right, aliens."

The new piece of debris is a disk of metal around a spherical piece of metal, with a big hole through the sphere and a bunch of small holes on the edge of the disk, and a sort of blob off to the side. Well, it probably wasn't a blob before the crash.

ball valve with actuator motor

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"More writing. Do you have any idea how it was written?"

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Siki gets a tiny cursor from a box in his pocket and takes a veeery close look.

"Nope! But it looks the same as the writing on the door!"

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"An alien species magic?"

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"I guess. The writing has a sort of scratched or burnt or puckered texture that is not on the rest of the metal. So it's not metal-werewolves, it's something else."

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There is so much writing all over.

30mm ANSI 150

WARNING - Do not remove bolts while system is under pressure - WARNING

NOT FOR OXIDIZER

WARNING - Check stem pressure before actuating valve - rated for 30 bar - WARNING

Hitachi 687601696339

PATENT PENDING

Do not tighten beyond 140 ft lbs

24VAC

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"Alphabet confirmed, good call Tolesli! We've got some repeated words here. I wonder what that big one that goes at both ends of the line is."

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*The phrases in Larian's analysis have been put through a ROT13 transform, and the numbers replaced with Arabic numerals. This is to promote verisimilitude.

 

 

The annoying human is serving a useful purpose, interfacing with the annoying elph, so she won't mind if he cribs her notes. It's an interesting puzzle. Everything written on here was probably written for a purpose; It looks expensive. What are the holes for?

What you do with something mysterious is you transform it into new shapes.

٣٠zz NAFV ١٥٠

JNEAVAT - Qb abg erzbir obygf juvyr flfgrz vf haqre cerffher - JNEAVAT

ABG SBE BKVQVMRE

JNEAVAT - Purpx fgrz cerffher orsber npghngvat inyir  engrq sbe ٣٠ one - JNEAVAT

Uvgnpuv ٦٨٧٦٠١٦٩٦٣٣٩

CNGRAG CRAQVAT

Qb abg gvtugra orlbaq ١٤٠ sg yof

٢٤INP

And from last time:

G. Pbbcre

It looks like a load of gibberish for the most part. One can start assuming various things-

JNEAVAT is loud and repeated, so it must be important somehow.

And it's an alphabet, and some of the big ones look similar to corresponding small ones - 'p' and 'P'. Furthermore, the first letter in each line is always a big one.

But- Ugh. Ugh! No, assumptions blind you to the truth sometimes. Just the facts.

Here are phrases that appear multiple times:

JNEAVAT - 4 times.
abg - 3 times.
qb - 2 times, both times before an instance of 'abg'.
cerffher - 2 times, both times between JNEAVAT.
sbe - 2 times. One time big.

Plus 'Ù¡/something/Ù ' appearing twice, with two different characters in between. Words that sound similar aside from one sound aren't unheard of, but something about that set of characters is different, too. Some of these are obviously using fewer line strokes than others. And for the letters... Some of those are obviously the same, big and small versions... And they don't really have enough of a sample size for this to be very useful.

r: 18
V/v: 14
A: 13
g: 12
b: 11
e: 11
f/F: 11
N: 7
T/t: 7
E: 6
a: 6
n: 6
P/p: 6
Ù : 5
z: 5
o: 5
c/C: 5
J/j: 5
u/U: 5
Ù£: 4
-: 4
Q: 4
y: 4
h: 4
G: 4
Ù¦: 4
i/I: 4
s/S: 4
Ù¡: 3
q: 3
B: 3
R: 3
l: 2
Ù©: 2
Ù¤: 2
Ù¥: 1
K: 1
M: 1
x: 1
Ù¨: 1
Ù§: 1
Ù¢: 1
.: 1

"We're missing some of the small-large correspondences, obviously," she muses aloud. "And really, it's just very hard to confidently conclude anything here. Maybe the big letters are special somehow. Maybe the writing is - instructions - if this is an expensive, specialized piece of something larger. Which might make the long lines a pair of instructions or warnings, both to do with something spelled like this-"

cerffher

"...A machine, yes. That's the impression I'm getting. Like a mirrorkite or turbine. This one might be associated with warnings, too..." 

abg / Qb abg

"But, ugh, that's multiple assumptions one after another. This whole table is probably useless, just because of a lack of enough to analyze, and no context..."

Is CNGRAG CRAQVAT a maker's mark? It's displayed prominently. What is cerffher? What is this thing's purpose, anyway? It's a hole that can be opened and closed... Is it for water to pass through?

"Are the short words the most common ones? Nobody wants to spend five seconds saying 'yes'..."

...Useless. Bah. She continues to puzzle over it while idly shedding water anyway.

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The blob has wires in it, but the material around the wires isn't very strong, at least now it isn't, and strongest parts of the blob are solid metal, so the wires are probably not structural. What else can you use wires for, other than embedding them into rock?

Money. Jewelry. Maybe the aliens have a species that uses metal wire like a mouseling uses reeds.

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Hey boss, good news! The reactor module looked fine to the boys on the ground and it's outside the colony now, being looked over carefully by Nina and everyone else with relevant skills. Too bad about the rovers not going out today, but they took the chance to do a whole lot of checks and maintenance. Also, we had an idea to insulate the battery compartment so it'll lose less power heating itself up to operating temperature. We'll need a few of the parts and resources for that.

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Make the rovers more efficient? Yes please. They're a lot more limited on power than material right now.

Power is nearing critically low levels. They have to shut down the hydroponics module, or at least bring it to minimal load, and pause most exploration for today. The rovers consume about 5 kWh per kilometer once you account for how badly the cold is screwing with the batteries, maybe 3 after Bass's fix, while the whole habitat module with all its efficiencies and rationing right now (cold showers, no space heaters, reduced lighting...) is consuming about 700 kWh a day. The wind turbines are bringing in about 60 kW, or 1400 or so kWh per day, though Nina's still working on more... Leaving 700 kWh for the rovers and transport vehicles (they're at least twice as hungry as a rover). 140 kilometers a day. Or 70 for a transport.

They've been burning through chemical power packs, stored hydrogen in fuel cells, and every battery anyone could find and haul in to keep the vehicles active. But the batteries and power cells they've been aggressively draining down so far are now almost utterly spent.

It's alright, though. The gamble paid off. The small modular nuclear reactor was designed more for reliability and ease of use than extreme productivity, but it will still easily manage a megawatt of electricity, conservatively speaking. And lots of waste heat to warm up the modules, so electricity doesn't have to.

"All hail the power of the atom..."

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No exploring or salvage today other than this damned reactor. Godammit. Lucy may have a dozen good reasons for it, but... Fuck! 

Nina knows her antipathy towards nuclear power is at least partially irrational. God, Montero is so annoying, as if not mentioning the Pittsburg Disaster will make it hurt less. It's not easy to get over it when she's SEEN what radiation can do to people! Godammit!

Rad suits for everyone. Double, no, triple checks on everything. Every pump, wire, and seam. Every piece of electronics is run through the unit tests several times, and carefully examined by an actual person too, to make sure the unit tests aren't broken. They check the backups and think about building backups to the backups. They make checklists to be followed religiously. Everyone gets their suit checked over by someone ELSE. They can't access the core itself, it's permanently sealed, but they can run over the entire surface several times with very sensitive scanners and Geiger counters, looking for microfractures.

...And yeah, there are a few, and a slightly elevated level of radiation. No fucking way it would pass muster back home. The entire plant would be shut down and maybe condemned. But not dangerous... Probably. If they constantly monitor for it getting worse. This is the kind of radiation that gives you cancer in 30 years, not the kind that kills you in a week or two.

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"Thank you, Nina. I'm glad you're the one checking it over, even if you hate this... So, great work."

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"As long as you let me keep building wind turbines and bitching about it, we'll be fine. You know why I'm like this, right?"

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"I don't think I do, actually. But I don't have to if it's private."

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"It's not complicated or private. The Beaver Valley nuclear accident sent my folks to the hospital, and the grave not that long after. I was away for college. So... Yeah. It's irrational, but radiation gives me the fucking creeps."

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"-God, I'm sorry. It's for the best. Do you want a day off?"

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"Absofuckinlutely not! There are so many things that could still go wrong. Once we're more established, sure. Checks will be done to my satisfaction tomorrow, and we can... Turn it on."

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They recovered the small arms locker yesterday; She ensconces it deep within a low-traffic area with one entrance, which also houses the security office. Redundant cameras, double-checking everyone who goes in and out and only her and two other trusted lieutenants are permitted to actually open the safe. The guns don't need to be visible, but they have 'em.

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Shen is quickly finding his stride as an adjutant and assistant; Keeping Lucy's schedule, making lists of reminders and tasks and badgering people about them until they're done, soothing tempers and assuaging concerns. Manager work. Certain segments of the colony population are a lot more willing to talk to him than Lucy, with his military background and serious demeanor. It's... Fine. Needs doing.

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These 22 radiation poisoned people are going to die without those drugs. I am doing my best, but that is the simple truth.

Everyone else is mostly dealing with little more than bumps and scrapes. He'll be watching like a hawk for any signs of infectious disease while conditions are this crowded.

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Calsa stretches out next to Merta and whispers in her ear. "Hey. When we reach the mountains tomorrow and spread the wolves back, I bet a bunch of alcoves are going to be empty."

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"It's going to be so boring making the elevator shaft, too. If a distraction happened to wander within reach..."

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"Heh." And in a normal voice: "Ready for sleep, all?" (Mumbles from the werewolves huddled around her.) Flame chilled.

(Except for the involuntary burning inside her body - hence the huddle of werewolves - and, uh, the other involuntary burning inside her body.)

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The mountain is made of ice.

From now on, they'll need to carry all the rock for the tube from here to the open end, including a vertical rise of a klick. The harpies will be busy.

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Is this where the water is going when it leaves the chartreuse never to return?

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Who cares, they're going to be rich! Well there's the aliens too, but even if that's a complete failure, there's so much water here. A mining town will be an obvious investment, and he's the elph to lead it.

"Since this is the last solid ground we'll have, I'm going to establish a shrine here. Prepare a site."

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The werewolves aren't going to be any use until the ice-ground ahead is ready to build on. Most have already turned back to prepare the path for equartier travel, but now, almost all of the rest should go back too. If it were up to him, he'd keep only Merta (the Kef clerk) and Stepan (the oldest miner), but the Lei werewolf insists on seeing all the action herself and a bunch of Abilanedi's attendants are building a shrine for him.

They can melt the elevator shaft at least, right?

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They can! Stepan insists on vampire supervision once there's a significant overhang, saying it freaks him out thinking about all the weight above him made of a material that he can't feel and can't predict.

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chirp

It's not too cold when they're out of the wind and she's surrounded by catfolk!

chirp

Although the water trickling on the ground is presumably cold, since it was cold before and now Chime can't feel her feet...

chirp

...she will accept the offer to climb on Calsa's shoulders.

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The glacier creaks.

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chirp

Well there's not as much stress now, but she has a much better understanding of what stress in ice means now! "Hey. Y'all. Let's calmly walk out and take a break, and give the ice a break too, okay?" chirp "Chill" chirp "as much as you can." chirp "Nice and calmly." chirp "Run! Illthrift! Run!"

She tries to spread her wings, thwacking them into the walls, and clings on as Calsa splashes out of the tunnel.

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Crack! The ice collapses in a jumble and rushes outwards after them - not just the bits they were melting, a whole chunk of the ice mountain.

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When the screaming stops, there are: Three dead. One severely crushed (a gnomunk ejects his fruit and stores the victim) and thank the catmother it was a catfolk, adult werewolves are too big for a gnomunk to store. Many lesser injuries. And Abilanedi's new shrine is ruined, but Fuzzer is too upset to care about that either way.

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So... Right after a big disaster is a horrible time to bring up the shiny idea he's had for a while and is having more and more thoughts about now that they're deep in the drydark.

It's dangerous. It's new and exciting. They're making history! He wants in on it as more than just 'there were a flock of harpies there'! The individuals of the flock hardly ever matter!

The turbines of Kef were an amazing thing to behold; Fire can become motion. And every waking minute he hasn't been flying in formation he's been returning to his old idea. Studies of live birds, of harpy and vampire and aasimar and tengu wing structure.

If you put a turbine on something light enough, to drive it forward, and also a harpy was there to reduce the weight of the turbine and catfolk and themself and the structure, you could probably get a bird-like shape to fly. And with wood and fabric and cords, or maybe even metal wires, and the weight-shifting and balance games every Harpy plays as a chick, you can warp the wings and turn. Such a ship would be warm enough, because of the catfolk, and fast because of the turbine and wing, much better for exploration.

Maybe. If it works. And doesn't kill them both.

So now he has sketches. Plans in a careful, precise hand with measurements, wood and cords and tense fabric like a kite's sails. He thinks it holds up and makes physical sense, Kyrie the old flock-captain looked at it and went 'hmm' instead of 'ugh'...

...He'll bring them up to that Fuzzer guy people seem to be deferring to after another shift has passed and things are calming down again. It might be safer, that's the argument, or at the very least it only risks two people and not fifteen.

It really is pretty terrible that people are dead. It's bad. He'll be respectfully silent and sad about it. But people die all the time and he didn't know any of them, so only so sad.

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The reactor module is in as good a shape as could be expected. They tidied everything up. They triple and quadruple checked. They did ultrasounds on the core to see if anything inside was broken. The structure goes up, prefab panels for a fully sealed, negative pressure system that drops air outflow into some intense filters, the cooling tower is hooked up, the giant turbines in their pre-built enclosures are lifted into place with cranes before the prefab panels are assembled around them, the airlocks and decontamination showers and changing rooms for the lead-lined radiation suits all get set up one by one...

And then, they they turn it on. This is actually a 12-hour process, with much of the last of their battery power going into feeding the pumps as the reactor comes up to temperature. 

The cooling tower is a vital part of the overall loop. Everything is a closed system and heat, once added, has to go somewhere. It takes relatively cool steam after it passed through the turbines, and condenses it back down to room temperature water to go into the reactor again. The system was designed to work in a wide variety of atmospheres, but this one is actually denser and colder than what they expected. They have to heat up the feed pipes of the cooling tower manually, so the first relatively lukewarm and slow water flows won't freeze in the pipes wrecking them. This drains more of their starkly limited power. 

Thousands of gallons of pure water go in, slowly charging the system's closed loop to its full capacity... The cooling tower begins its work, with the air intake carefully regulated and slowly increased as the display of temperature sensors every five feet in the system slowly change colors...

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Everyone but Nina, among the senior officers, is in a control room watching anxiously. If everything goes well, all the immediate crises will be solved. There will still be plenty of challenges and work to do, but there won't be an imminent looming specter of freezing doom.

"Engaging feed to turbine one," Nina says over the intercom.

 

The little fan icon begins turning. There are yellow warning signs; Pressure too low, temperature too low. But both of those are slowly increasing thanks to the carefully controlled storm of radioactive decay controlled by a sophisticated understanding of atomic sciences and tens of thousands of hours of engineering, all to... Boil water.

 

"...Ten kilowatts. Twenty. Thirty- Fifty kilowatts."

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"Woo! We've got power, boys and girls. I want to hold the core's power level here for an hour to make sure the grid interlinks and power storage is all working fine."

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"Go right ahead, Nina. We'll stand by up here. The emergency response teams are still ready."

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The systems of the Exodus are well-designed and robust, of course- Well, aside from whatever failure or sabotage caused the whole crash thing, Bass guesses, so maybe some caution is warranted after all. Hrm.

 

Either way, nothing seems to go wrong after an hour, so Nina turns up the reactor power level, and then raises it further, and further. The generators turned on. The lights all came back up. The air filters started working faster. The heating system came on! And there are hot showers now, in the admittedly still really cramped teeny little apartments! The reactor module itself included a wicked cool superconducting magnetic energy storage loop, which is something like a magnetic flywheel or maybe an enormous capacitor? 

Man, magnets are weirder than any amount of fantasy story magic sometimes. He just knows vehicles. And his vehicles are coming out to play again! Four rovers, two transporters, all with freshly topped off batteries, ready to roll.

Where to, boss?

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Mary doesn't have much to say here that hasn't already been said. It might be a good idea to look for the Exodus's bridge, whatever is left of it, to find the logs and hopefully get some answers. But it can wait one day.

Oh, the seismometers measured an ice quake early this morning. Magnitude 1.6- Too weak to feel, but evidence of at least some active geological activity. It might just be from something falling over at the crash site, though.

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Can they tell where that 'ice quake' came from?

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Nope. Not without a bunch of monitoring stations spread out over a wide area.

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Like many things, that's a project for later.

They can relax a bit for the day- She's just off from enjoying a hot shower herself. It's cleansing. She even orders double food rations for the day to give everyone else more to celebrate. There's still considerable worry about food and nutrition in the medium term, but they have 30 days of food, the hydroponics module is currently sufficient for about 1/3 of daily needs, and more modules built in the coming days will help a lot with both those problems.

So, crash site salvage. They already know where another housing and hydroponics module, a recycling module, and an entertainment module are. She wants all of them. Housing and hydroponics first, to alleviate the grumbling from crowding and help with food security. Finding a path to the light side of the planet, exploring the surroundings for any notable features or possible resources, and continuing to survey the crash site are all important- Bass should devote one one and two rovers to each task. Does any of that sound like she's making a mistake?

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"With all due respect, I'm sure the twenty one patients- One of them expired overnight, a miss Hailey Cuthbert- Suffering from acute radiation poisoning would appreciate all available measures to find a hospital module being taken."

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-That is an excellent point. Bass, all four rovers are to scour the debris field. Look for the hospital module above all else.

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Shen, quietly, sets up and announces the colony name submission board. It's a good thing for people to argue about and submit dozens of names to when they're enjoying a doubled dinner.

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Come on boys and girls, the people need us! Rovers 1 and 2, get to high points and scan around with binos. Rovers 3 and 4, we're going to go along THESE routes. No stopping for salvage, it's not going anywhere, medicine above all else...

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Green_Pinkie: The first harvest from hydroponics will be ready in another 2 days! Delicious lettuce, spinach, kale, and bamboo. Fruits like strawberries, blueberries, and raspberries will be most delayed, and potatoes are coming in bulk soon enough. These are all specially genetically modified crops, optimized to grow fast off CO2 rich air and bright redlights. Hydroponics team represent!

Reddekeer: Nice!

Potato_Clock: Ah, kale, the Toyota Hilux of vegetables. You can't even use it as a clock.

Orangeanade: Leafy greens are delicious! I don't know where all the vitamins and minerals are going to come from without them!

Green_Pinkie: We might actually run out of chemical fertilizer eventually. There's plenty for now, though. I looked through a whole cargo pod full of plastic barrels full of our special mix on the first day.

Potato_Clock: Speaking of which- HOT SHOWERS. God it's cold out there. The EVA suits weren't designed for this kind of wind, people have been making improvised extra cloaks to wear over them. Wish I had that idea sooner.

Reddeker: Things are looking up. We have a stable foundation now and can start investigating what went wrong, maybe get some answers.

7384: They'll investigate themselves and find no evidence of wrongdoing.

Reddeker: And I agree, actually being warm for once in the last week is really nice.

7384: They're using luxury to distract us from the real issues. Lucy Carver is up to something, mark my words.

Potato_Clock: If God himself gave you a magic wand, you'd complain that it didn't come with steak and fries.

7384: Fuck off.

7384 started a kickvote. Kick Potato_Clock y/n?

7384: wtf I can't kick 

Reddeker: Yeah, no more of that from you. I'm half tempted to permaban you if you're gonna keep this up.

Kickvote failed 1/11

Green_Pinkie: Let's all be civil here!

Orangeanade: I found a chess set in some of the personal luggage that was dragged here in the confusion. Anyone want to play with me? I'm at table 9 in dining room 3.

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Paro isn't a doctor. On the thankfully-rare occasions when someone gets hurt badly enough to need a gnomunk, he grabs them, pops them out when told, and keeps his eyes shut and one hand on his nose.

The crushed catfolk was almost beyond his magic, presumably because - aaaahhh - the crushing increased his surface area to almost match Paro's own surface area. (He's overall a bit smaller than a catfolk but his tail is longer.) Now it's time to pop him out again, just for a second.

out - Doctor Shor looks the guy over while one of his assistants stuffs a mashed anesthetic leaf into his mouth and the liefling grabs the uncrushed arm to target him for - Doctor Shor yells out a medical term that Paro doesn't know and doesn't want to know - in

Paro throws up. He doesn't have free space to catch it, not that he's in a frame of mind to be able to catch a liquid right now, and his vomit mixes with the blood on the floor.

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"'The vampire didn't know how to interpret stress in ice' - that's a relevant part of this incident's failure analysis, which is not your failure analysis and I don't think one is warranted."

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"You did great, Chime." pat pat "All of us are alive because of you."

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"You can't compare with an imaginary alternative!

I should have known to be doing something more cautious. There are different kinds of rock. I know that, I've been trained on that. I should have called the alarm before the first cracking sound, even, and then watched for a while by myself."

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"Why? What part of your thought process at the time, and does it still seem like a mistake when generalized?"

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"Why should I have called the alarm sooner? Why didn't I? It didn't look like rock looks under stress, and I should have stopped and realized that I had no idea whether it was safe. After it creaked and I knew it was bad, everyone was worried, I should have screamed to get out. I could make the excuses that unstable rock usually isn't an emergency, in my usual work, which is not supervising active excavation but inspecting old structures near the Pes orogeny, and that they're made of stone that's been worked over so much that it's smooth and strong. But that's corrupt. I was trained for mining, I should have used my training. Especially since I saw that the stone in Kef was mixed-up and raw. That should have jarred me loose from my habit."

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"Unstable old rock isn't an emergency because it's been fine for a while and it will keep being fine?"

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"Yes, and when people panic they get hurt."

    Stepan nods. "Even in mining, when a vampire notices something wrong, it's not an emergency. Flooding, bad air, and hungry fire are the emergencies."

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"I don't know what training you have. I'm not asking for Lei secrets, but is there a particular procedure that you neglected?"

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"Fuzzer, I think we know pretty well at this point what happened and what to do differently."

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"This isn't just about Chime. If she made a particularly kind of mistake that other people might also make, we need to know that. I want to get enough value out of this to make the deaths worthwhile."

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"Nnno. We memorize what different kinds of rock look like and how strong they are under compression and tension and shearing, and how heavy they are and stuff. The certification exam is watching a team of werewolves make a big stupid complicated structure with every possible problem and telling them how to fix it, in the right order...but no one ever says, first identify the rocks and then figure out how close to breaking they are and then decide if it's a problem. It's supposed to be obvious.

We practice by imagining different rocks in different situations, with flashcards to make sure we're doing it right. Not real rocks, and not just because that would be a huge waste of time for the wolves. I think the idea is that the training is exhausting, but once we're done, we can stroll along chatting with the foreman and it just works? If there was a procedure to follow, well, people might not follow it, but even if people were perfect, it would be tiring. Mentally. Ten hours of mentally-tiring safety-critical work in a mine is asking for trouble. If it's obvious, it's not tiring.

I don't thinnnk any of that's a Lei secret."

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"Mm. I still think there might be a benefit from a very simple procedure; perhaps, on the very first chirp, check if this is a normal job or not. But for now, I'm only going to write, 'the vampire's training was insufficient'. And also, in the contributing factors, 'the vampire's prior experience may have led to complacency' - that's a technical term, not a moral judgement - 'because of the recent shift in the common work for vampires in northern Lei due to the Pes orogeny'. And that's still not the true root cause, but going deeper than that is for Lei to do."

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"We should all take a quiet moment to think about how this is different from what we've done before," says Stepan.

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"Emphasizing 'a quiet moment'. Don't get distracted second-guessing everything while you do it.

My last issue is why were we doing this dangerous thing at all. I have thoughts, but want someone else who wasn't involved in making the decision to handle this part of the investigation. I suggest starting by interviewing me and Stepan in private, probably some other people too.

To recap: we don't know why the ice collapsed. The evacuation went very smoothly. The shouts of the miners alerted the shrine-builders in time to run. We're going to take a quiet moment to think about how this is a new place deeper in the drydark than anyone has ever been. Be ready for someone to talk to you in private.

Now, looking forward, we have a bunch of ice, in chunks on the ground where we can play with them. We're still on two 15-hour shifts. I want every catfolk either studying the ice themself or helping someone study it. I know Merta has a bunch of ideas about building a tube out of ice."

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"...Or something else similarly important. Now is a good time to discuss ideas."

- he looks over Audron's sketches and purrs -

"You're intending this as a way to scout ahead? No goatseer, just get close up and look ourselves? If you take this to a higher part of the ice mountain and leave the catfolk there, could you bring the contraption back yourself? Could you take an extra person, at least a vampire or a gnomunk, or a decently sized cursor? Can we test this without the mini-turbine - just a kite and you and a catfolk to keep you warm? For that matter, I'm not sure it needs the mini-turbine at all, at least just to get someone up the mountain, not a longer scouting trip..."

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"So the thing is for all the Freedom to Grow lets me try things, things are expensive, none of this has ever been physical examples except a tiny wood and paper glider this wide," about a foot and a half, "Which I got a mouseling called Lenora to test the wing warping with a cursor with. I bought a lot of wood and cord and paper and went through several things that didn't work at all. I didn't think to bring it, delicate and all. I brought it up high with the cursor and cords for controls to scale and just let it go and she flew it- Lost control of it a lot at first, both mistakes in operation and in design. We did that for a couple of months off and on. There's a- It just spins and crashes if you get too slow. You can glide a good while, yes... There's probably arrangements that can bring more weight and people along. I don't want to overstate my confidence, I'm thinking a lot more about safety after yesterday."

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"Hrm. Good. So there's two purposes - scouting and transportation - and two places you could work on it - Kef, or in the chartreuse. Not here, it's too cold and remote. You can disassemble the finished thing and bring it here through the tube, right?

I don't know how important scouting will be. I also don't know how important transportation will be, but hopefully it will become clear after experimenting with the ice.

...I think the most useful scouting job this could do is gathering information other than just what the ground looks like. Such as by bringing a mouseling with a sack of cursors who tosses one down each klick, or by bringing a vampire and skimming close to the ground. And for transportation obviously passenger capacity is vital. Either way, it has to be big.

I really want an aasimar. Then we'd have transportation up the mountain and scouting with the goatseer. You would focus on long trips, which I imagine the turbine will be necessary for.

In any case, most of the werewolves are going home soon, which will drastically reduce our food needs. Just a barge through the tube each cycle or so, and we'll keep it open for equartiers the rest of the time. So it would be no problem, logistically, for you to stay in Kef to work on this idea.

But the wind is far weaker in Kef. 

If it was just up to me, I'd want to send you to Nitatlel to try some designs in the wind, in a comfortable temperature. Someone in Kef could work on the turbine, or they could go to Nitatlel with you.

Alas, politics. Will the Freedom Democracy be okay with you temporarily leaving the expedition? If that's what you want?"

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"Anything I make would be relatively easy to disassemble and rebuild. And that's a tricky question. They'll take me off of the expedition forever if I leave for even a little bit, I bet, and I do want to be here! I want to see the crash site! Try to figure out how that enormous ship worked! Maybe not if Sota lets more people from Lei and the Freedom Democracy join later? I tried pretty hard to get here in the first place! They're expecting books! First few chapters are ready for equartier-relay, actually. Uh, I'm really willing to take direction on how to depict the last wake, tragedies shouldn't - be made light of. It's mostly been prose about the mood, the landscape, the logistics and innovations, so far... Suppose I could send a message to Sixth Elector Lenisaf by kitsune and ask about a side project in Nitatlel or Kef."

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"It's not my call to whether invite more people, but I'll mention it.

Did you hear much of the discussion? I think that sort of failure analysis is interesting but not sensational, if you keep it separate from the personal stories. And keep the personal stories just about what people directly witnessed; don't add a bunch about feelings and definitely don't make anything up. 

I'm planning to talk to a magistrate about how to properly do a failure analysis, eventually, and I'll invite you to that, so you can hear all about how my imitation compares to the real thing - If you're interested. I imagine the 'wisdom of the elves' isn't popular reading in the Freedom Democracy."

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"A failure analysis is absolutely not the kind of thing my readers will like but it sounds useful. I didn't hear much of it. It's, uh, I like it there but I'm finding myself surprisingly sympathetic to other points of view? Trading some freedom for some security is a thing people might want. I think the exchange rate is- You know what. I shouldn't talk politics. It always leads to trouble. Nevermind that. I'll stick to facts and my own personal feelings, nobody else's, about the collapse."

 

He'll go find the kitsune and see if she wants to take an interview for his book some time and also he has a message for the queue. It's short; the Fifth Elector who referred him to the Sixth saw his designs and mini-glider for at least five minutes and seemed interested, so he doesn't have to explain the whole thing beyond 'a potentially useful innovation for transport or scouting' and the idea for a Nitatlel or Kef side-project proposed by Jake Fuzzer of Kef. (He does show off his sketches again though!)

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"Yep, I stay out of politics." Meikalani draws a lot of it and she can keep it.

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"There's no queue for me! One of the benefits of not being a vital component of the government!"

Nefanie ducks into the kitsune-closet for a minute. 

"Okay, message passed on and stuffed, jammed, rammed, and crammed into all relevant queues.

I didn't witness the accident happen; I was checking up on the path-smoothing teams and no one flagged me until they had written the whole announcement. But I'm always happy to talk!"

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"Not necessarily about the accident. Just - the project in general, if you don't mind. Feel free to not answer any or all!"

His questions are: When did she first hear about the aliens? What did she think? When did she hear about the expedition? Is it exciting? What kinds of things does she do for the expedition? What about in her free time? What does she think about Kef, Abilanedi, Jake Fuzzer, various other expedition staff? What's her daily routine like? What does she think the aliens were/are (they might have enough magic to survive the crash! who knows!) like? Does she have anything she wants to say to readers in the FD?

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When did she first hear about the aliens? "Do you count seeing the ship before I knew it was aliens? We joked about how fluffy its tail was. The liefling who visits us to collect fur said it was aliens."

What did she think? "I was dubious! Sounds like a prank, you know? See how long Nefanie will believe this story, get the liefling in on it too..."

When did she hear about the expedition? "The liefling came back the next cycle with someone from the government trying to hire a kitsune. I think I got the job because I'm just the right amount of serious. The really serious kitsune were busy directing equartiers and the really fun ones, you can't touch them with your eyes closed."

Is it exciting? "Of course! Well, I'm not excited every minute, but I remind myself about the aliens and that gets me excited again."

What kinds of things does she do for the expedition? "Messages, so far, which means most of the time not actually taking messages, just bouncing though the closets checking. Once the path is ready, I'll monitor the equartiers. We're using an exclusive-path protocol which I think will be a lot more fun than the usual block protocol where you never even hear the equartiers pass by. To signal an emergency stop, I have to leave the closet and put a ribbon across the path while the equartier is charging toward me!"

What about in her free time? "I visit Kef or Archer's Tabard or my friends back home. Or go running in the drydark and see how much farther I can get before I'm too cold and have to leave. I've gotten about a klick or two fel from the bridge but now I think I'll start again from here and go along the edge of the ice mountain."

What does she think about Kef, Abilanedi, Jake Fuzzer, various other expedition staff? "Kef is nice! I don't like being pinned in a big city like Argolake, but Kef is good. I'm trying to get invited into every house. Hi everyone if you're reading this!

I expected not to like 'Foreman Stirling', but Fuzzer is great. I want to give him a sampling of drugs and get him talking about math.

I want to get Abilanedi high too, but not for the same reason. 

Merta scares me. She's so hard, if she breaks it's going to be bad."

What's her daily routine like? "I don't really work a shift. I bounce around every hour or so while I'm awake and take life as it comes."

What does she think the aliens were/are (they might have enough magic to survive the crash! who knows!) like? "Stranger than any guesses I've heard. They're not going to be like some species we have with some small differences. They're going to be, like, wizards with metamorphosis between life stages, one of which is a cloud of goo."

Does she have anything she wants to say to Readers in the FD? "I'm a kitsune who lives on a mountain in the middle of the Storms and eats slowgrowth. My life is already as free as possible. And yet, here I am, trapped in tiny room on the side of a tube a bit over a meter wide, with ten people between me and the nearest kitsune-closet. How did this happen to me? Words. Words are powerful. Words are great! From teng to fel, from south to north, plant an allheart and call peace forth! Smash the shrines! Glory to Lei! You better print this exactly as I said it or I'll sneak over there and piss in your teapot, ha ha just kidding."

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"And I should check on your message now..."

 

"FD said yes! They'll pay for your materials and send one more person, and Lei will also send one more. Nice, I've always wanted to see Nitatlel! We're going to have a great time, Audron."

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He writes this all down!! And laughs at parts!!

"That's great news! Maybe we can take you into the sky some time once I have a big version nice and safe. I wonder if you had a closet on board you could come in and out of it? The weight would be noticeable. I guess now we have to do the boring stuff and figure out, like, when I should leave and how. Oh, hey, maybe it'll be ready in time to help once they figure out how to get up on to the ice safely."

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Speaking of which, the Frozen City will send an aasimar along with three bodyguards.

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"Was that what they were balking at this whole time? Four people they'll do but not three? Ugh. I mean, I don't know what the politics is, but I don't think they ought to be required to match the FD and Lei parties."

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Koy also wants to send someone! Since they're in the Allheart Alliance, it's probably just a coincidence that they're announcing this now.

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out

The perfectly ordinary chunk of meat that just happens to resemble a catfolk gets: 

- a test-fit in a stone casing

- a tourniquet on both legs

- lungs emptied of blood

- targeted again by the liefling

- scanned by the vampire

in goes the ordinary chunk of meat.

Paro retches. Gnomunks are herbivores.

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Larian volunteers to write up part of the failure analysis. She focuses on the decisions being made.

How was it decided to use catfire to melt through the ice? Who decided it? When? How long did they think about it? Did you discuss the idea with others? When other people were told about the idea, were they told, 'this is what we're doing', or 'this is an idea we have, what do you think'? Did anyone ask if this might be dangerous? Did anyone ever flag that it might be unsafe? Did anyone FEEL like it was unsafe, but not say anything? Okay, and what happened after you mentioned feeling unsafe? Was any time spent considering alternate plans?

The questions are kind of accusatory but she does a good utterly neutral Bureaucrat Drone. We're just filling out a form here, everything's fine, just tell me what you remember.

She summarizes and anonymizes answers to a reasonable degree, and builds a timeline, and asks others to double-check her work, and adds the following tentative findings:

  • The ice mountain was being treated as if it were familiar terrain. The expedition should be aware that the drydark is a hostile and unknown place, and generally proceed conservatively.
  • The ice-melting proposal was considered from a feasibility standard first, and a safety standard second if at all. ('Would this work' rather than 'is this safe'). Expedition planners should make sure to consider the risks of any new plans or actions.
  • Safety of the process was not ever specifically and deliberately considered during the initial planning. It was discussed only after the melting had already begin when a member of the team raised concerns. It should have been discussed earlier.
  • The decision to proceed was made quickly. It should have been discussed more, even if it might delay the expedition's progress.
  • The process was initiated at full speed right away. It should have been tried on a small scale first so any obvious problems could be flagged.
  • The decision to proceed was made without consulting very many people. Discussion with more people could have flagged the problems that led to the accident.
  • Those asked to contribute were asked in the context of a fully-formed plan, and therefore less primed to think about whether the process was safe and viable. They should have been explicitly asked questions like 'does this seem like a good plan' and 'can you think of anything that could go wrong if we do this' and 'do we have all the magics and skills and tools we need to do this'.
  • The writer of this failure analysis addendum is not experienced in failure analysis. It may be missing obvious conclusions or come to erroneous ones. If anyone has literature about safe planning and failure analysis, please send it.
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So that's how a professional does it. How on Ansaf did this quiet kappa get to be such a professional? ... Does she want a position on the leadership team.

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That sounds like it will result in fewer people ordering her around on average, so sure.

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It's Day 7 today. Someone graffitied a pithy joke on the cafeteria wall. Riiiight in a convenient camera blindspot. She's pointedly not looking for whoever did it, and just made sure someone got assigned to clean it off.

It's true, at any rate.

And on the seventh day, Lucy Carver saw the work that everyone else had done, and found it good, and rested.

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"Yeah, we drove the rovers pretty hard yesterday," he says in their daily meeting. "But we did find the hospital module! Her thrusters fired just fine and she landed beautifully, just, on the other side of a little mountain from here. We only brought back the crates Dr. Montero told us were most important. The heavy transport will be necessary to get everything."

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"I'm very grateful for the hard work and the find. The patients suffering from acute radiation exposure are still in the balance, but it improves their odds considerably. Five more have been identified as they leave the latent stage and came in for treatment, and the others are getting worse, so you've found them just in time, really. It's likely to be several weeks before everyone is fully recovered. In five days, we'll know whether anyone else is likely to die of it."

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"Reactor's fine so far. Little to report."

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"Do you think you could raise the new modules we brought back yesterday?"

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"Only one each day, we don't have enough skilled hands to go faster safely. And we're using up a lot of our stocks of, I guess, 'hard resources', with all this construction, by the way. Hardware, electrical equipment, that kind of thing. Running the vehicles will wear that down too some, the environment isn't exactly friendly here- Things wear out, need replacing. It's not a major concern yet, and also there's plenty to salvage out in that debris field, but it's definitely something to be aware of."

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"We can make more. The workshops and maintenance facilities attached to each module have all the tools and databases needed to run small-scale industry. Just about the only thing we can't do yet is fabricate new processors, but we have the tools to make the tools, there. Though specialized industries like that rely on specialized knowledge."

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"There are tons and tons of spare field programmable gate arrays and other chips specifically because they're harder to make more of. Those are like generic all-purpose CPUs, sort of. Anyway. The bottom line is, we can make more hardware things like gears, bearings, batteries, and motors if we have the raw materials. Full machine shop and so on. Getting the raw materials is a medium-term concern- We'll need to identify good mine sites, set up a mining module, and then haul out the automated extractor and turn on the refineries. Plenty of electricity for it thanks to the nuke plant, and I was looking over the plans and think we can recycle some of the waste heat from depleted steam in industrial use too."

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"I'm keeping an ear to the ground as far as the mood in the colony goes. People are relieved, of course, but that just leaves space for questions, like where the fuck are we and what happened. Morale is above average right now. Six out of ten. We definitely want to go look for the bridge and get the full story now, though."

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"The two heavy transports are alright and can keep salvaging today, but our rovers need a break for recharging and maintenance, as I mentioned before."

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"Nina, can you set up the other habitat module we recovered? Giving people more space to stretch their legs will soothe down tempers... Tomorrow it'll be the recycling module to preserve our supplies as best we can, then a second hydroponics module, then a mining module, and we'll go from there depending on what else we recover and how the situation develops."

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"Sounds like a plan, boss. I guess there's no such thing as weekends around here."

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"Perhaps once we're more established. In the meantime, the call for names for our new home has resulted in... Extensive... Results. Does anyone want to review them with me to pare it down? We might end up having to do two rounds of voting- To cut a list of dozens down to three to six or so, and then to choose one from that."

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"Hoo boy, what are people saying to get that reaction out of you? I submitted 'Exodus' and 'Nova Terra' and 'Svalbard', but now I gotta see this."

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He passes out datapads wordlessly.

Aeternis
AnyPort
Astraux
Aurora
Autonomous Republic of Crash Survivors
Avalon
Avalon't
Beyoncé
Blessing
Bob
Carver
Charon
Cryos
Cryothis
Discovery
Dog
Earth Two
Eclipsia
Eden
Eminent Domain
Endurance
Enterprise
Exodus
Exponential Growth
F1rst
Faith 
Fimbulheim
Foundation
Freljord
Frostbound
Frosthaven
Glacies
Glacium
Hawaii
Hesperis
Hibernia
Hope
Htrae
Icehole
Icelis
Igloo
Janus
Junkyard
Jörmungandr 
Marisa Espanoza
McMurdo
Michaelangelo
Mir
Nadir
New New York
Nivis
Nordis
Nova Terra
Oops
Permafrost
Pitcairn
Planet'); DROP TABLE SUBMISSIONS;
Pluto
Refuge
RenDaire
Santa's Workshop
Saturn 
Shark
Solstice
Stygia
Svalbard
Tabula
Target
Tenacity
Test option please vote for this
Thule
Valley of the Wind
Von Neumann
Wegotthis
Whiteout
Whiteplains
Winterhold
Yellow Submarine

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 "...And that's only a little bit of it."

Dog. Seriously... Dog???

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"'Please vote for this'? Okay, that's actually kind of hilarious."

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She can't help but let out a snort of laughter at the 'drop table' one.

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"At least people are having fun. I'll go over the deluge with you, Shen. Let's filter out all the jokes then post it, vote for however many you like, the ten with the most votes survive to round two?"

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The first half of Marlene's life is directed toward structure and stability. Her parents are college graduates with big dreams and big debts, and she can't follow them. She knows it's a weakness, that she has the potential to launch the next Amazon or discover the Theory of Everything, but she can't. She gets a job unsticking robots in a warehouse and lives with her parents until she can afford a pipefitting class.

She knows it's a selfish, privileged thought, but she thinks it anyway: she can handle being poor, but she can't handle being broke, which is a different thing that's not entirely about money. Maybe the 'human touch' pays better than carrying shit for the actual pipefitter, but it leaves her mom a wreck every weeknight, and Marlene is not going to let herself get trapped in that cycle of burnout. So what, she's selfish and privileged and can't bear to think about how lots of people say they can't handle being broke and then go broke anyway.

It helps that she's lucky enough to actually enjoy rice and beans. It helps that she can fit herself into a tiny room without getting antsy about it. It helps that she doesn't have any expensive medical issues - and obviously she's not going to transition until she can afford the endogenous estrogen gene therapy, which costs as much as a car, and not a budget brand. (The implants are nice if you don't want to take pills every day, but they only last a few years, which is useless as far as she's concerned.)

When she turns thirty, her parents give her the money they had wanted her to use for college. It's not much, objectively, but it's about what she saves in a year, and it's enough for her to start studying to be an aircraft mechanic. "You always wanted to fly," her dad says. "Lots of people work in ground crew while they study to be pilots, right?" (She does not actually have what it takes to be a pilot, and he would know that if he actually looked. Then again, he somehow hasn't figured out that she's trans, despite her friends calling her 'Marlene' in front of him.) She snarls. "Where did you hear that, maybe last month when I was talking about my classmate Gary?"

She graduates and moves to Albany. She apologizes to her dad. She earns more money than she's ever had in her life and saves half of it.

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The second half of Marlene's life is about enjoying the structure and stability she's secured.

She does her job. Night shift sucks, but if everyone hates it that's all the more job security for her. She runs every evening before work and then binges Wikipedia on the bus to the airport with her phone brightness on max, obsessing about a new topic every week or two.

She buys an old, sturdy computer and learns to program. She fills her GitHub with a dozen projects, each abandoned with more TODOs than functions. She downloads hundreds of pirated textbooks and reads the first chapter of each.

She finally transitions. (The way with pills every day; she likes having savings.)

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And then, the Exodus project begins. It's obviously the purpose her life was missing up to now.

But can she get in? A background in the military would have been nice, like all those old astronauts. Her current job in aircraft maintenance seems like the next best thing. The only problem is that it's her only thing, and that's not good enough.

She makes a list of skills it would be nice to have. There's no way she's going to become a licensed engineer, but she can learn the basics, right? Actual engineers probably spend their day using specialized software for simulations that needs a bunch of on-the-job training anyway, right? She doesn't actually know if that's true, but it's her only hope. She finishes reading some of the textbooks and does the exercises. She's not going to be as reliable as a real expert, nor as comprehensive as a thumbdrive of files, but she's aiming in between those two: real, living, flexible understanding of the core parts of many fields.

She writes a terrible text-only rip-off of Kerbal Space Program. She makes flash cards. She begs every contact she has to get her a chance to shadow different engineers for an hour and see what their work is actually like. (And then she makes a list of everything she didn't understand.)

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The Exodus applications open. She writes up a 'resume' that describes why she thinks she fills a valuable niche, only mentioning her traditional qualifications at the end - 8 years at United Airlines, Aviation Tech with A&P Certificate - and then getting weird again to say that she has studied to be an Avionics Technician too but didn't bother taking the test because that would mean less time for studying.

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She gets in! ...to the training program. Which is also an extended interview. She worries every day that this will be the day they decide that she's too easily tired or unsociable or should have started studying a decade earlier, and each dinner the gossip is about someone else getting canned.

Launch date approaches. She gives away her savings to her friends, everyone who helped her, even hunts down that now-retired pipefitter. And a bit for her parents, grudgingly. 

She's not the next Bezos or Einstein, she knows that now. It was never an option. But she has a purpose on the mission. She can handle everything about about launching shuttles, even if the computers are destroyed and they have to do the math by hand, and she can design a replacement for any part if it's only one part missing and her replacement is allowed to be heavier and worse. She's not a genius, giving new insights to humanity. She's not even a mediocre mechanical engineer. But she can keep this chunk of knowledge alive.

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Now it's the third ...half... of Marlene's life. It's exciting being on a new planet, of course, but stability is still vital. Carver is in charge now, and they have protocols for establishing a new government, and they must balance between populism and totalitarianism.

Her name submissions were Janus (kinda obvious, already the name of a moon of Saturn) and Icehole, which she hopes the officers don't veto. She meant it seriously, as a way to keep morale up.

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"Hey. Merta. How are you?"

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Mumble.

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"You have work to do. You can't hide under a blanket. Well I guess you can hide under a blanket a little bit longer, while I borrow the incident report and bring it here and while you read it, but then you have to do things."

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Merta whines and limply tries to pull Calsa under the blanket with her.

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Calsa shakes her off. "I'm fine. I was hanging back with Chime so I was one of the first ones out.

The incident report is really interesting. Part of it was written by Larian, the kappa, who Fuzzer hired as a 'Safety Officer' on the spot. You should go introduce yourself to your new teammate."

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The harpies, minus Audron, float a narrow barge along the tube with food and more people.

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From the Frozen City is an aasimar, a thin seven-foot-tall winged humanoid covered with iridescent feathers, holding a rope that blends into a spike brandished by...

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...a glowering stetcap (a short furry person with a thick square snout and tiny round ears) who looks around unpredictably.

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Behind the aasimar is a wroth.

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And there appears to be a whisshopper next to the wroth, but the whisshopper might actually be anywhere in the area. Only the stetcap would know.

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And here's a black beetle with long antennae. Like a wroth or a whisshopper, he has more than four limbs. Six, or eight if you count his wings, or ten if you count his elytra too, or twelve if you also count his antennae. He carries a wax tablet with werewolf-carved writing on the backside, which he holds out:

Hi! I'm Siamek, the fourth contribution from the Freedom Democracy. Like a wroth, I can't speak, but I can hear fine and I understand Sotalese, common Elvish, and spoken High Elvish. I can write on this tablet in all of those, and I can sign in Nosimasna Pidgin, Signed High Elvish, and Teng-Allheart Wrothsign. I'm so happy to meet you all! My species is an FD secret :)

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The contribution from Koy is a siren, fishy and feathery, with long dark green hair. She sedately steps off the barge and looks around. "Hello, new companions. I'm here to protect you, and I look forward to making new friends. But to avoid unfortunate misunderstandings, I must make it be known that if you try to breed me, I will kill you, and if you succeed at breeding me, the path between Koy and the baby will be built with death."

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The fourth person from Lei is one of the emperors.

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He knew it!

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Experiments with the boulders of ice on the ground establish that it's more prone to break the more heat is applied. One of the catfolk is a jeweler, who compares it with how glass explodes if you put it in flame unevenly or touch it with a cold tool. Further experiments are focused on ways to apply small amounts of heat deep inside the ice without going into a dangerous place oneself.

Touch the ice with a hot stone rod? It works but you can't get very far with it. Make a hole and lower in a stone holding catfire on a chain? Sure, and you can scoop the water out with buckets. The jeweler points out that the water is analogous to hot glass and maybe shouldn't touch the ice... and experiments bear out that concern. So they'll make a tiny aqueduct to get the water off the mountain?

A team tries putting water into a piston and spraying it into the air, where it freezes and blows away. That seems easier, as long as the snow isn't going to be a problem somehow - a crew is assigned to make snow using that method, upwind of an unused part of the boulder pile, continually for a cycle.

Would it be possible to melt the ice by spraying molten ice on it? Yes, it's certainly possible, with the water getting pushed back out the hole to be heated again, but some of the water is disappearing... and then the boulder cracks and water gushes out. Ultimately, this way is slower, more complicated, and more unpredictable than inserting a flame-covered stone.

Back to the simple method, now with a shaft that spins a pump to push the meltwater out to the top.

Problem: if a catflame is incidentally covered in water, it boils a bubble of steam that can crack the ice. Solution: put the catfire into a hollow inside the rod, where it can't get wet. Problem: now the rod explodes. Solution to that: leave a tiny hole for hot air to get out while sealing the flame.

Problem: if water gets at the pump shaft, it can freeze and then it's hard to unstick the shaft without breaking it. Solution: use a bubble pump, like a tiny version of the really big pumps in Kef, using a tiny turbine to push the air, like in Audron's design.

The next challenge is connecting segments of rod together without leaking air or water, but actually making the tube has been good practice for that.

They confirm that boring an upwards sloping drain from the bottom works too. Getting them to meet is hard but it's fine if they need multiple attempts; they're going to need to remove a whole lot of ice anyway. They confirm that they can line the L shape with stone and gradually expand it.

Time go to on top of the mountain and start! With a ship like a bell. Everyone will stay inside the whole time. Normally the ship will be frozen (and if the ground collapses it's obviously fine). They go up by freezing the separate 'floor' and then everyone hauls the ship upward by rope handles. Going sideways is similar.

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Aaaaaah all these experiments seem so dangerous!! Also she doesn't really see the obvious differences between them!! Just. Everyone answers: What could go wrong? What might go wrong if you're being pessimistic? What will you do if that happens? When things fail, how will they fail and is that safe failure or a dangerous one?

What happens when this recently completed/combined/invented contraption gets too deep, out of catfire range? Will they build landings/closets every so often for catfolk to stand on? Escape shafts to the side of the ice mountain?

What could go wrong with that? It's more work and cutting more holes into the ice. Exhalation could pool down there if you start from the top. Will they need a turbine pushing air down to the bottom of the shaft constantly?

What could go wrong with that? The turbine could break, the noise could distract people, the heat from the turbine could melt the ice, people could slip and fall down into the hole and be irretrievable by gnomunk-rescuers and and-

-And the aasimar bell-ship, is this a well established well practiced thing for them? Has it ever had accidents? Are there written down safety procedures for it? Can they make sure EVERYONE in the area knows them, just in case?

Stop please WAIT before going up there, gaaaah there are so many things that can go wrong here so please don't start until we have ADDRESSED them and NOT THOUGHT OF ANY NEW ONES FOR A WHILE. 

 

...It is possible she is overcompensating towards slow and safe but just because you fixed all the problems you thought of does not mean you fixed all the problems.

This is hard. This might take a while. No need to be in such a tearing hurry.

...Also have they tried using melting/fire as a knife, or an actual knife, to cut away sections and physically haul them out without having to melt it all? If adding heat to the ice is the problem here?

 

...Aaaah new people. Well, that's significantly less aaah. Hello hello welcome to the edge of the world, these are the emergency procedures I have found out about so far, if you notice anything that seems unsafe do tell her. Better to stop and back away and think than get someone hurt or killed. Again.

...The three aasimar-bodyguards look twitchy. Are aasimars really that - vulnerable, valuable? Also one of the Lei Emperors is here and she has no idea how important this person is, how does Lei even work, or what kind of diplomatic disasters will happen if anything happens to him. Well, whatever. Look, aasimar and bodyguards valued delegates from Frozen City and Lei and Freedom Democracy and Koy, if there are things that will make you twitchy and maybe cause misunderstandings or tension at critical moments, please tell me, so we can do Things That Are Not That. She really doesn't want a misunderstanding to leave people at each others' throats out here.

 

Also if we can afford to spare the people we could specifically form a Rescue Team whose job is to do NOTHING but be watching out for danger and ready to respond to emergencies and plan for possible emergencies that could happen so that if disaster strikes again there is either more forewarning, or more ability to respond to it quickly, or something.

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If the boulder cracks we'll run away. Or jump down from it and then run away. I guess I might slip and fall?

What, do you think it's going to explode or something? Oh, some of the experiments have exploded? Well then we'll look away during the dangerous part. The dangerous part is when we're touching the ice. Oh, the rod exploded before touching the ice? We're not going to do that again, obviously. We're going to do it the way that we already did and it worked fine.

We're going to widen the hole enough for a catfolk to fit in and lower them down on ropes. No, we're going to do the thing with pushing hot water down, but keep it contained in the rod, separate from the meltwater. No, we're going to get the rod really hot and lower it down, repeatedly. Where did you hear that? You were the one who told me we were doing that! I said that it would be too slow and we weren't doing that! Oh I thought you said it we we're taking it nice and slow. Yeah, it is really hard to hear in this wind!

If the mountain breaks, everyone hangs on to the ship (and rope! no, no rope!) while it collapses below them. And of course we're doing it over there to the side, so more ice doesn't fall near the tube. Okay fine we'll do it twice as far to the side.

We're not going into the hole until it goes all the way through the mountain, and then the wind will keep pushing fresh air in. No, why, I figured that as long as we can feel the breeze we're safe.

Oh, hmm, we'll keep rope and a gnomunk in the ship. No, that's too much weight. How about we make a stone cap for the hole so no one can fall in.

Well aasimar ships usually operate in air that's safe for harpies to fly in continuously, and they don't freeze the floor, they freeze a bar above the ship with a rope from the bar to a pulley on the ship to a handle. So usually they look like normal ships. And traffic to the Frozen City usually is just normal ships. The aasimar is needed only for hauling really tough loads like those giant chunks of metal. And the Frozen City has enough harpies now to handle even that.

...Yes, aasimar ships have existed for less than a deci-year, and this particular design is completely untested.

We can't wait, what if the alien artifacts blow away in the wind.

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Calm. Calm. Running around screaming won't help your chance of being taken seriously, which is a serious safety constraint.

The alien artifacts seem to be mostly metal, and therefore heavy, and unlikely to blow away in the wind. Maybe it's just that the heavy ones are the ones they've found so far, though. Whatever, never mind.

Her job, that she was just hired for, is to try and keep things safe. She knows she is annoyingly stubborn and will wield it like a stylus. She will prioritize not pissing anyone off too badly. And explaining why we want to play it safe without getting... Graphic. And prioritize the most egregious-seeming risks. But she's not going to stop bothering everyone because she does actually take 'do the job you were hired for' seriously.

Let's please agree on a specific emergency plan for if the mountain is breaking, for if the vampires says it's about to, for if the aasimar ship has a problem, for this and that and the other thing, and write them all down, and be able to recite them on command? Please? Please.

The stone cap is a great idea! As long as we can't think of any other problems that a stone cap could cause! People fall into holes all the time. They get confused or blinded or aren't paying attention. It's a thing. And easy to prevent. So let's prevent it.

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The emergency plan is to run. If the ship has a problem, they'll flare up in a pulsing pattern to call for help. On top of the ship, not near the ice, see they're learning to look for dangers.

If they bring multiple ships (the aasimar and harpies can fly back down by themselves to get the next one) they can bring a gnomunk and vampire and kitsune.

And while they get started on the initial bore, they can do experiments on the ground on enlarging it with a hammer and chisel. Hm, an irontooth might be faster, or different in a safety-relevant way...

Meanwhile the snow spraying team has discovered that if you adjust the nozzle you can create a layer of ice on a surface. Maybe they can use that to build the tube on top of the mountain!

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"I'm not currently an emperor of Lei. Currently, I'm just an elph loaded up with useful memories, an elph with the non-transferable habits of long experience as emperor. You don't need to treat me in any special way, nor fear for my safety."

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"If there is a vulnerability to aasimar, it is not known to me. I imagine Kliordi is simply safeguarding the fabulous wealth of the Frozen City, the only producer of kite mirrors. 

Are the drylanders treating you well, friend kappa? I would be honored to do what I can to ease your troubles, short of provoking war, if you would care to rest and unburden yourself onto me."

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"...I suppose I am a kappa."

Sigh. She probably thinks she's being polite.

"My name is Larian. I'm an academic drakefarm attendant, a writer of short fiction, someone who enjoys grapes and cranberries and quiet wakes full of routine tasks, and lately a safety officer. I try not to let my species define me, Harqa... Although, I probably could use help going to sleep promptly, come to think of it. If you're offering that generally, not to 'the kappa'. Something like - white noise, to drown out chill and thoughts. I've never actually been sung to by a siren before so I'm not sure how it works or what uses it gets put to."

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"Very well, then, I will offer such to any who ask. I suppose all the newcomers might want help adjusting to the local schedule."

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The stetcap glares in their direction. Or, at least, that's what they see.

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"...elsewhere, in a nook, and quietly."

The effect of siren song doesn't depend on the content, but combining it with music is a popular art in Koy. Harqa gives her a wordless melody, tensing and easing on a cycle a little slower Larian's breathing.

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The second attempt at excavating a tunnel and elevator shaft finishes without incident, and they are both lined with thick stone. The elevator can be operated by harpies or hauling ropes by hand - and it's not set up for operation by werewolves out of concern that they can't be gentle enough.

Spraying water to make a layer of ice is faster than casting ice into blocks, and cutting blocks out of ice that's already frozen, using hot knives, is even faster. (The flames go in the handle, not just stuck to the blade, and all the catfolk and werewolves continuing with the expedition are individually asked to describe the technique and its dangers.) Going forward, the roles are rearranged: catfolk cut blocks of ice, boarks place the largest blocks at the bases of two parallel walls, catfolk place smaller blocks to finish the walls, and werewolves assemble a temporary stone ceiling and spray water on top with the minimum of catfolk for warmth and ice melting. Werewolves also push a stone cart with a pile of ice ahead of the tube opening to block some of the wind, and a similar cart inside the tube to keep the frigid air from rushing all the way back into the sleeping areas.

The expedition now slows to 1 klick per cycle, with shorter working hours (thank you Larian!) on the normal three shifts per cycle, and contains: 18 werewolves, 100 catfolk, 10 boarks, 1 mouseling, 1 kappa, 2 elves, 5 gnomunks, 2 wroths, 1 kitsune, 1 vampire, 1 liefling, 5 frogolds, 1 gnoll, 3 stetcaps, 1 human, 1 goatseer, 1 irontooth, 5 harpies, 1 whisshopper, 1 siren, 1 aasimar, and Siamek.

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More debris: A burnt shred, made of something slightly soft, more like the blob on the side of the round metal thing more than any other known material. A piece of thin metal sheet, twisted and torn. A smashed metal box with wires and writing - some of the wires connect to intricate fragments of more unknown materials (and some bits of metal) covered in tiny writing.

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The aliens talk to each other so much. At first it sounded like fast beeps, more like music than speech, but then he got into the rhythm of it and starting thinking of it as eight-beat patterns, and then each of those as a single beat with a pattern of third-division notes. There's patterns in groups of those beats too, and now he's learning the shape of a conversation and has some guesses at the meanings of words... An alien starts by saying one word that he's translating as 'yo!', in the sense of a spoken word or a wide broadcast, not like waving at someone in particular or a narrowbeam. Another alien - always exactly one and he's not sure how that happens - responds with the same word and then 'uh-huh?', and they sing a call-and-response:

"yo!"

"yo! uh-huh?"

"uh-huh? yo!" stuff he doesn't understand yet but a lot of the words are getting familiar

"regarding" and then a topic pronoun that he thinks is actually a number! and then some familiar words and then some totally unpredictable words

"mm-kay" the same topic pronoun number

A bunch of "regarding" and "mm-kay" cycles, always with the first alien saying the new information.

"done"

"uh-huh? done"

"done"

"uh-huh? done"

And there are a whole bunch of simultaneous conversations like this with different pitches of beeps.

There must be a reason they talk like this. To show deference? To demonstrate mastery of a difficult ritual? Because it's easier when they're synchronizing with something else that's happening?

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Official Exodus settlement naming vote

Thank you everyone for your creative submissions! We have selected those we feel reflect the fundamental human spirit that will help see us through these troubled times.

Vote here for as many as you would like within the next 48 hours. The ten with the most votes will participate in a second round election. In the case of multiple entries being tied for 10th place, all will be added to the next round.

Von Neumann
Michaelangelo
Pitcairn
Cryos
Fimbulheim
Jörmungandr 
Eclipsia
Frostbound
Endurance
Tabula
Aeternis
McMurdo
RenDaire
Discovery
Nivis
Glacies
Freljord
Permafrost
Janus
Whiteplains
Nova Terra
Igloo
Cryothis
Exponential Growth
Hope
Tenacity
Nadir
Whiteout
Glacium
Eden
Blessing
Valley of the Wind
Icehole
Charon
Marisa Espanoza
Foundation
Winterhold
Exodus
Aurora
Nordis
Hesperis
Htrae
Mir
Faith 
Astraux
Wegotthis
Thule
Hibernia
Stygia
Enterprise
Icelis
Refuge
Avalon
Frosthaven
Solstice
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There's an odd sense of normalcy spreading over the Exodus colony. It's day 8, and they're raising new modules, exploring an alien planet, beginning to do science and investigation of its nature... Just, not on Avalon, the supposedly habitable exoplanet that they were meant for.

The Hydroponics Bay is setting up new racks of crops every day, the shift work steady as a clock. Rice and potatoes and fruit and beans and leafy greens and carrots and smaller numbers of trickier crops like maize or asparagus, for morale and variety. No eggs or chickens or dairy; The debates about bringing livestock for the trip were lengthy, but ultimately came down against, with the weight and efficiency concerns being the main deciding factor. They theoretically could clone new livestock using some of the equipment from the Laboratory Modules, eventually. If it's not smashed on the icy plain.

The 107 children in the colony, each chosen as a unit with their parent or parents in order to help keep up the sense that Exodus was about building a real future and community on another world, are attending school every day. They can clearly tell something is wrong, but children will mostly just grow sullen and quiet, or occasionally act out, when things are harsh. Thankfully, only a very few of them perished in the initial crash- Though it makes the surviving members of those families all the more inconsolable. There are five full-time teachers and plenty of call for guest lecturers and the like. The older ones take 'field trips' to the maintenance areas or the hydroponics module and learn about all the technology that is making surviving here viable, and how they can improve it or invent more in time.

People are spreading out into the second Habitat Module. There were six, each designed to house 250 people in comfortable conditions and 500 in decent conditions. 1106 people in just one was very cramped. Adding a second has taken it down to mostly tolerable levels, with only a few people needing to share rooms. The inner walls are designed to be modular, sliding around and packing away as the colony's needs change. They've all trained on this equipment for months and are used to the layout and facilities. Spreading out feels like going from one of the emergency drills back to normal training time.

The Recycling Module was constructed today in a central location, with all sorts of pipes and vents and even conveyor belts leading into and out of it from other areas, the churning chemistry equipment within processing trash and waste and scrap and carbon dioxide back into useful chemicals and materials. Steam pipes from the reactor power much of its heat-intensive processes, just like they're being extended to the other modules. A ready and free supply of oxygen and water from the outside makes things a LOT easier- They can change it to variant methods of catalysis and processing that use up those precious resources rather than producing them. They're making plastic feedstock.

Nobody seems to know anything about what went wrong. The rumors are wild, and have more room than ever to spread and whirl. People bemoan their submissions being rejected from the official list and come up with plenty of justifications for why they were actually completely serious, going to Shen Takagi to complain about it. (It feels good to complain about something.)

The heavy transports are sent out: One to trawl a particularly dense field of burnt scrap for usable metal and other materials, one to recover the Mining Module that was mapped earlier.

The rovers have been sent out to scout again, on a more reasonable pace after their hard run looking for urgently needed medicine. Today's finds are... One of the Exodus's orbital shuttles, a bank of solar panels, several intact-ish supply lockers, and an entertainment module perched slightly precariously, straddling a crevasse with two landing legs on either side of the gap.

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Nina gathers up the remaining shuttle technicians halfway through the day, to join a video call with the rover crew to look over the shuttle-

"I'm not sure if we're going to be trying to go into orbit soon. Launching a satellite for surveying would be a really big win, but you guys know more than me how viable that is. The shuttles are one of the most complicated pieces of kit in the entire mission, second only to the Brigman Cores and some of the most sensitive lab or medical equipment, or maybe the reactors. So I want to know what options we have and what they'll cost."

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After directing the rover in a loop around the outside -

"It looks fine from here, and should be packed up securely for landing. I'd say, with the information currently known, there's a 90% chance it will fly. Put two of us on inspecting it for a day and that number either goes to zero or 99.9%, with a cost and timeline, which will be at least two weeks plus time for repairs if needed.

...But if we're not busted after one day of inspections, it's also an option to launch like that and maybe something breaks but the pilots can probably handle it. In a normal situation I would never recommend that risk to the shuttle, cargo, and lives of the pilots, but it's an option."

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The other shuttle technicians mostly nod along and agree. "We'll need to construct a runway," one of the others adds.

"I appreciate the candid assessment. I'm going to argue for recovering it tomorrow, just because having orbit available opens up a lot of options, so maybe you'll get to do your actual jobs." She cracks a smile.

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"Yeah, and the braking action on this ice is basically nil, so it will have to be longer than the atmosphere suggests.

...Sir, I did not consider my statement to be unusually candid. With all due respect to you and your colleagues on Earth, sir, I feel it would be prudent to assure you that, if you expect people to over-promise and then cut corners to live up to their words, we do not do that with spacecraft."

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"Huh. Okay, let's clear the air a bit? I try to cultivate a work environment that's, not overly tense. The casual register is part of that. When I said 'candid' I meant I appreciated a pretty clear and brief report compared to some of my guys who would have spent five minutes trying to explain all the context. Marlene Lowell, right? Well, like I said, I'm Nina Gorman. Nice to meet you all. You can call me Nina, or boss, or even 'hey you' if you like. I think you've got a great point about the standards and culture for ground equipment and aerospace being different. I'd hate for us to get too upset with each other. We're all in this ice bucket together."

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"Ah, okay, Nina, thank you for clarifying. I always appreciate clarity. I certainly wasn't trying to start a fight, sorry."

Welp everyone hates her now. What a way to start off on a new planet.

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"No harm done. I hope I haven't given you a bad impression of the folks keeping the lights and heat on either! Rest assured, we're taking the nuclear power plant just as seriously."

Someone knocks on the door, then opens it without waiting for confirmation. "Boss! Question about the cooling tower feed, when you have a moment!"

"-Ah... Right. Lots to do, so thank you again for coming to check this. I'll let you know what happens."

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Marlene has a moment before her next duty and will relax by voting on names ...beginning by tensely holding her breath and scrolling to see if 'Icehole' got vetoed. Yay, it didn't!

Most of these names are so boring. That includes her own submission of 'Janus'. She skips over all the names that are already in use, or which could work anywhere. Even the names that reference cold are mostly too generic - humanity will probably colonize many more icy worlds (hopefully on purpose).

That leaves just 'Endurance', 'Icehole', 'Valley of the Wind'...yeah that's all she's going to vote for.

Oh, there are three more pages. She will fulfill her civic responsibility and evaluate them all.

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Why is the expedition going slower now?

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Technical reasons, namely...

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  • The walls of the tube are thicker now, so more material needs to be carried around.
  • The blocks of ice are harder to handle than blocks of stone.
  • It turns out that picking up the blocks is really hard. The stone blocks were long and narrow, so the werewolf who made a batch could, while still sitting on the ground, hold them by the base and pass them to the assembly workers walking by. But picking up a block of ice requires bending over. This alone is the main reason why they had to go back to normal 10-hour shifts.
  • They don't have enough catfolk and boarks to do all that, and no one else can handle the cold for long.
  • The ground is worse and is harder to fix. In particular, there are occasional deep crevices.
  • It's cold inside the tube, unpleasantly if not hazardously, since making it warm enough to be comfortable would risk melting the roof. This is bad for morale. Even the catfolk and boarks don't like seeing their friends suffer.
  • The food is bad for morale, too.

If we had unlimited resources, in particular plenty of catfolk, we could increase the speed to about 7.5 klicks per day.

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Let's do that.

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Are you going to pay for it?

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Yes. And we'll send some regional delicacies by express gnomunk.

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...We insist on paying the same amount as the Freedom Democracy.

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Don't take my catfolk! I mean, I'm not going to keep them from leaving, I'm not a don, but, speaking not as Magistrate but as the primary owner of the mill and the pumps, I will pay my current employees higher than I will pay their untrained replacements. 

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Is the tube over the ice going to be prepared for equartiers?

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We're not sure if equartiers running on the ice will be dangerous. The harpy barge is working fine for keeping the expedition supplied.

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Also, the equartiers are busy establishing a town at the base of the ice mountain. So far, we're calling it the Kef Orocide, but name suggestions are welcome.

It's great, we just plop chunks of ice onto a sled track and the wind blows them most of the way to Kef. We're working on making the track slope downward so gravity will take them the rest of the way.

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Hey, that's supposed to be my town!

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Technically, your shrine was destroyed in the accident that happened under your command, so you're not the founder. However, the Magistrate of Orocide would be honored to host you and receive your wisdom to his shrine.

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Is this 'orocide' going to cause earthquakes?

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Your earthquake preparations are your responsibility.

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Please don't cause earthquakes while we're up here on the ice mountain!

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...Fine, we'll stop mining the ice. For now. We need to build out the new town's facilities anyway, and enlarge the Kef, Archer, and Argo aqueducts.

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The form of the duet is not as strict as he thought. Sometimes the second person in the exchange repeats the statement. Sometimes the aliens call each other by name or ask for information to be sent onwards to someone else.

The numbers that he thought were topics are definitely not topics. It never really made sense that they would always talk about the same list of topics in the same order, but the conclusive evidence comes from the long monologues. They're still usually completely incomprehensible to Siamek, but sometimes there are patterns. Phrases that get used a lot. And sometimes, those phrases start in one section and continue in the next! So it's actually a form of poetry where the length of each stanza is strict but the content is allowed to flow around in a way that seems sloppy to Siamek but he's trying not to judge the aliens on their artistic choices. Also, the stanzas are numbered. Maybe the aliens find counting soothing.

So, how do the aliens talk when they're not reciting poetry? Well, he's starting to learn about that, too! After several cycles on the ice, he began to hear long notes that warbled slightly and now he hears them most of the time. This resembles his kind of magic speech a lot better than the rhythm poetry! He still can't understand it, but the flow of these conversations seems a lot more natural to his sensibility, too.

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"Do you... like Chime?"

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"I guess... She's nice. She's very protective."

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"That's her job."

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"She's like, 'rest well, pups! - kits - everyone!' and asks each one of us individually how we're feeling."

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"Did she do that before the accident?"

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"No... but Larian doesn't do that."

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"Larian's job is different. She probably told Chime to do that."

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"Because Chime is more suited to it?"

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"...Sure."

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"She rides on my shoulders a lot."

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"I assume the two of you have settled on a comfortable way for her to be warm without getting burned. Like the two of us." She pulls Calsa into a closer cuddle.

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Tolesli is pretty sure the FD representatives know something. Maybe he's imagining it, as he watches with feigned hostility as they smile and nod as they pass each other. But something is keeping Siamek busy, whatever he is, and once he signed something furtively to Mofil, hidden between tablet and outstretched elytron, after making sure the Frozen City group was far along the corridor out of whisshopper range. Obviously Tolesli doesn't need to know, and there's no way to communicate anything to him out here, but he's still a little sad to be left out.

The next question is whether he should say anything to the Lei emperor. Would he even have noticed if he was an ordinary gardner loyal to Lei? Hm, he can check that...

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"Do you think the FD is up to something?"

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"Of course they are!"

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"Are you asking me to do your spying for you?"

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"I don't have time for politics. Ask Abilanedi."

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"What a fascinating question! I certainly wouldn't want to offend our noble compatriots in this most unusual endeavor, this sprout of peace and proof of the value of pursuing cooperation between our peoples, united as we are on this planet, with such a vague, unfounded suggestion."

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Is Mofil's feigned hostility towards him a little less feigned now? Maybe he's imagining it.

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Sometimes one alien in the rhythm poetry game says a stanza, and the other alien doesn't respond, and then the first alien says it again. Sometimes the first alien repeats it many times before realizing that its partner is gone and giving up. It seems like the aliens don't have very good senses... Or their senses are not adapted to the environment of the drydark. Say, for them, all the air on Ansaf is bad air, so they're doing something like shouting from one drakehouse to another. One reverse-drakehouse to another. Eh. The point is that the aliens, or at least the poet species, can't keep track of each other. That also explains why they give information to each other to be passed onwards - they don't know how to talk to their desired recipient directly. And it also explains why the poets are so meticulous about their repetitive protocol - they can't tell if their partner understood everything until they get the response. Oh oh oh! And they break their message into stanzas so they don't have to repeat the whole thing, just one stanza.

The poets can't hear well and can't find each other, but they have an incredible memory. (Siamek does not have an incredible memory. He can mentally zoom in on a tiny brief part of a transmission but he can barely remember a single stanza.) ...Or they can write very fast. Some werewolves can take notes as fast as you talk to them, with a prepared stone like a book with very flat layers. Which requires extensive training, kind of like the way he has trained himself to recognize 'yo!' without having to zoom in on the beeps.

He's not even consciously aware of the beeps, nowadays. The deepest he ever needs to zoom in is the third-division-note clusters. An idea strikes him, of a country full of radiobugs, beeping frantically and aware of none of it. He shouldn't jump to conclusions, of course. But. Wow, that's a creepy thought.

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He finds Mofil. "How will we know if the aliens are people?"

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"Is that relevant to protecting us from them or protecting them from Lei?"

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He asks Hestlierre.

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Obviously Siamek of all people knows that just because someone doesn't speak doesn't mean they're stupid. "What do you mean by 'people'?"

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He explains about the poets. Who probably are people! They just got him thinking...

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"Fascinating. That reminds me of an idea I've been thinking about:

There is a hierarchy of living things that contain living things, where I mean 'living thing' in a very simple sense: something makes more things like itself. In this sense, a person doesn't even count as living, unless pregnant. A family is a living thing, or a healthy and diverse population of a species, or a household in the Lei style combining families of multiple species. Or a town, if it contains people who know how to found a new town, or a country, similarly. Or the entire population of the aliens' home planet.

We could talk about a living thing like a town being healthy or unhealthy, depending on its durability and longevity and ability to reproduce. But it would be a mistake to think that health in this sense is the town's worth. We don't consider that the health of a person is the only thing that matters about them, and, similarly, there are many things that matter about a town, such as the Freedoms it ensures to its people.

But I found this to be an interesting idea when thinking about our jobs here. It would be nice to make friends with the aliens. It would be nice to use this opportunity to advance Freedom. But most important thing is that Ansaf as a whole does the planetary equivalent of making friends with the aliens as a whole. The alternative to that is war.

So are the poets people or animals or something stranger? In any case, they're parts of the alien whole. Figuring out how the aliens work is a wonderful question that will keep us busy for a long time, but our first job here is not blocked on the ultimate answer."

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As the tube crests a gentle hill, the goatseer gazes out at the starlit ice, looking for canyons or debris or weird chunks of ice or unusually-normal chunks of ice...

So far, he has - twice - spotted a chunk of ice more normal than any seen previously.

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He has no idea what the fuck went wrong. All he knows is that he came to with the cryosuspension fluid draining away, but the door to the pod stuck closed as the drop pod descended. Orange plasma. He happened to be able to see out the window, just because of where his pod was stored in the module. He saw bright, blasted desert rock, and then green, and then darkness, as the pod descended in a long arc. A particular mountain stuck out on the last of the way down, his addled mind sticking on that detail- Because it was towards the green. Between the crash site and the - oasis?

Green means water. Green means life.

He was stuck in the pod for over a day. He saw people moving around after the crash. Including that FUCKER, Ahmat Singh. 

"Whatever you're doing to corrupt my sister," he had said, "You will stop now. Forever."

And then, ignoring Miguel's protests and pleas, that he was just dating her, that he was treating her right, the fuckhead blocked his pod with several pieces of heavy debris and LEFT. When Miguel finally wrenched the pod door open what must have been hours later, the rest of the dropped colonist module was completely empty except for bodies and dropped EVA suits.

His radio wasn't working. None of the other suits' radios were working either. Singh was in Maintenance, right? He'd know how to do this, probably.

Ahmat Singh tried to MURDER him. Leaving him in the cold to die! He'd pay it back one day. He swears. But he has to survive for that.

His memories of the next while are ... Muddled. He stumbled out into the ice field. At some point he realized no help was coming, with almost nothing visible around him- But he remembered that mountain. There was light and green past it, out of the eternal night. He gathered up every battery and power cell in the life pod, his suit heater straining in the chilly air to prevent him from freezing to death. He built a sled out of... Something. A pod door and some electrical wiring, he thinks. He improvised warming layers by tearing apart more suits with a knife.

And then he walked.

And walked.

And walked.

And slept.

And walked.

And changed power cells, leaving the dead ones behind to reduce the weight.

And walked.

And walked...

Repeat. Repeat. Repeat.

At some point he started following a particular constellation, rather than heading straight for that mountain, only barely visible as a black outline against the starry tapestry.

He walked.

He walked.

He wondered if this was Hell. Wasn't one of Dante's layers a frozen wasteland?

He walked.

He slept.

Again. Again.

Damn Ahmat Singh.

Walk. Walk...

...

...

...There is a light down there. He's down to the last two power cells, even three cobbled together heavy outer layers unable to keep him warm forever. Melting the water rations and food rations on his door sled every day drained them more, too.

Is it a trick of the light? He can't tell anything about it. It's a faint, wavering glow, far off on the horizon. Far down this mountain and beyond.

He stands there for thirty seven minutes by the suit clock, brain fogging up as he tries to make sense of the wavering light. Did it move a little bit? He thinks it did?

...

...

...He sits on his door and starts flashing his helmet lights in sequence. Short short short. Long long long. Short short short. Repeat.

S.O.S.

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There's an alien out there! It's saying something with blinking lights! Three short blinks, three long blinks, three short blinks...

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That seems like a poet sort of communication, but with light, and at a speed a goatseer can perceive... He doesn't comment.

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The light in the distance blinks S.O.S. and then goes back to its continuous wavery glowing.

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He thinks that's a good sign...?

Right. Yes! It means someone saw him. Surely rescue will be on the way, now. You're supposed to stay in place for rescuers. Which is good, because his legs don't seem to be working very well to stand back up right now.

He will wait, peering at the horizon, leaving his helmet lights on so they can see him and occasionally repeating the SOS. At this point the light won't make much difference compared to keeping him warm.

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"Hi Audron! We found a live alien but it's sixty klicks away and we're worried it might not survive much longer. How is the turbine kite doing?"

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"-Sun and stars! A live alien!"

He was hoping he was right! Also, the turbine kite is definitely not ready.

"It's only been four days. We have something and it will get off the ground. At least, it did in the wind tunnel. But... I wouldn't fly it in the drydark yet. The stability is really bad. Turns out that turbines are bulky and heavy and need to be in an awkward place so they can suck in and spit out air cleanly, and also kind of delicate, and that's with the brilliant folks from Kef helping make it smaller."

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"Awww."

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The backup plan is then for some catfolk to hike on foot -

- plus a boark to carry the alien if it's big

- plus Chime, obviously, so they don't fall down a hidden crevice

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What if the alien is really big? The alien ship was really big.

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We'll need to take a harpy barge, then. 

   Or be ready to build a shelter there for the alien.

        We might not be able to save it. We have to be ready for that, emotionally.

  So this harpy barge will be fighting the wind the whole way there? 

    We need a werewolf in case the barge breaks...

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"Well hello there again, Audron! If you didn't worry about the sails, are the turbines suitable for pushing a normal barge against the wind? The wind where the expedition is now, on the top of the ice, isn't as strong as it was at the bottom; it's like the wind here."

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"-Let me do some math. Come back in five? Hey Klauva, where did you put those windforce measurements?!"

 

He has an answer just a few minutes later: Yes, they can push a pretty big barge against the wind and then some. They've developed a kind of turbine that sits sideways. Put one of those on either side of the barge so it's balanced and you can have one of the catfolk lower the heat to turn, have a big flock lift it, and he thinks it could get up to thirty klicks an hour against the wind depending on the shape of the barge. Maybe add a wind rudder.

He has - turbine schematics he could send? Or they could make two turbines here and have them sent by gnomunk-equartier relay to be attached to a stone barge, or Klauva the werewolf is best at it so far and she could go by equartier and make them there- He'd kind of like to come too, as someone who has a feel for how things move against wind at speed, which is not how harpy ships usually work-

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"You can go thirty klicks in one hour? I want to ride in that! And you only need two catfolk for that? Hm. Is the turbine made from stone, or stone with wires, or solid metal? If it's metal, do you know if Kef has the tools that Klauva would need? How long would it take to seal up for a gnomunk, or does it have a lot less fiddly stuff than the turbines in Kef?"

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"Probably faster too! It's mostly stone. There are some metal parts... an all metal one would be better but stone is faster to experiment with. And it's not fiddly for a catfolk to use, we managed to make it so a lever controls the power!"

"I can attach it to things without tools," Probably Klauva says.

"Maybe fifteen minutes to package two for a gnomunk."

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"I meant tools to make one, but if you can have two ready to go in fifteen minutes, great! It didn't even occur to me that attaching them might be a challenge, good thing it isn't! I will go prepare Argolake and check with Fuzzer!"

...

"Klauva, could another werewolf attach the turbines? Audron, we'll want you to come yourself, unless Klauva needs to come and we can't find a fourth set of equartiers."

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"It's not hard. Just make sure these two lines are vertical with a blurb bob."

She indicates a small protruding piece with two recessed lines facing different directions.

Klauva pouts. She wants to see the alien! But she's professional.

"Tell me all about the alien later, okay Audron?"

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"I definitely will. And don't worry, I'll make sure you get your fair share of credit!"

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Where should the barge be assembled?

The head of the expedition already has a barge, but the tube on the ice isn't safe for equartiers. Moving it back to the top of the elevator would be an option.

The bottom of the mountain has stone to make a new stone barge, but no werewolves. It would take about the same duration - two hours - to bring werewolves from either Kef (by equartier) or the expedition (by barge). Obviously worse than using the existing stone barge.

Kef has werewolves and stone and some of the stone is already enervated, but at thirty klicks an hour, slower than an equartier, it would delay the rescue by about three hours. Plus a couple of hours to finish constructing the new barge. 

Seems clear, then. The rescue will launch from the edge of the ice.

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As the person selected from the Freedom Democracy for the purpose of analyzing alien artifacts and leading the introductions with possible live aliens, Hestlierre is obviously going to be on the rescue crew.

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They need a second catfolk, and a person from Lei.

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They'll need a werewolf if the barge breaks, or to change the shape of it to accommodate the alien.

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"I think maybe it should not be you," says another werewolf and grabs onto the barge to start enervating it.

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"We're not limited by the amount of weight it can carry, like a normal ship. We're limited by the amount of sail capacity it doesn't have; the size and shape of the shelter. So it's not as tight as it seems."

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...That might actually be a tighter constant than weight.

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"Lei werewolves are smaller."

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That's two from Lei, and they need a backup catfolk.

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Are they going to be walking on the ground?

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Can he come, for unspecified reasons?

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How are they going to communicate with the rest of the expedition?

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With all the harpies, including Audron, there's not going to be space for anyone else.

They will have to not step on the ground at all - they'll float really low and push on the ground with rods. They will communicate back with a simple system of waving flames around.

Audron is from the Freedom Democracy, and they're not taking Chime, so Mofil needs to stay to keep the FD and Lei numbers equal, replaced with one of the neutral catfolk.

Catfolk: Hestlierre, Tolesli, Cambert.

Werewolf: Mirana.

Harpy: Audron, Kyn, Lenyet, Voluda, Jordesk, Eira, Wanarka.

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So do they have a plan to stop- Okay, they do. Rods poking the ground. Not ideal but she can't think of anything better in five seconds. The catfire signaling system is clear? And written down? The plan for rescuing the rescuers if necessary (catfolk & chime hike) is in place? The expedition edge not having a barge isn't great but as long as they're aware of it it's not an active emergency either. Just makes help further away.

Okay. She's definitely not going, but this plan seems as un-doomed as it's going to get in the next hour.

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They have another barge! It's made of ice and it's miserable to sit on it if you're not a boark or catfolk, but they have one!

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A light is moving. As it gets closer, a horrible shrieking noise comes to him, against the wind.

It's a narrow wingless blob, with two jet engines leaking an alarming (i.e. non-zero) amount of fire. Too high for a ground-effect vehicle. It coasts down toward him and walks on tripod leg landing gear.

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A black-and-white furry humanoid with pointy ears sticks his head out a porthole and looks at Miguel. The humanoid is covered with fire. He holds out one (five-fingered!) hand, which is suddenly not burning anymore, and then the flames come back in pulses - three short, three long, three short - and then come back and stay.

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Whatthefuck.

 

Yeah, okay, here come the hallucinations. Take him away to see the wizard, hee hee hoo hoo! He can still turn his helmet lights on and off. The gaze tracking works and there's a physical switch as a backup. S.O.S. indeed.

 

(Miguel is a humanoid, human-sized shape under a thick orange EVA suit, huddled into a compact shape and shivering. Several additional EVA suits torn apart and roughly stitched back together form a thick blanket or cloak wrapped around him. The front of his helmet is rimed over with ice, showing a distorted but visible human face with beard stubble underneath. He is sitting on some sort of sled, possibly made from a door like the one they found earlier, and also sitting on the sled are various sealed bags and box-like objects.

He doesn't stand up.)

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"The alien is humanoid, werewolf-sized, and alive! The light is coming from a head-mounted object. The alien is wearing extremely fluffy clothing, supporting our assumption that this is a harmfully-cold environment, and is on top of a flat piece of metal, along with some other objects. 

I think we should pull the entire piece of metal aboard, without touching anything on it, and gently return to warmth before doing anything else."

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The vehicle rotates to face away from Miguel. At the back, there is a wider opening. The same furry person reaches out and gingerly touches the metal sled with a non-burning fingertip, and then pulls, joined by similar person with all black fur.

It takes a few minutes of grunting, but they get his sled aboard. The vehicle rises up, catching the cold wind, and then the turbines howl, at a lower pitch than before, and the wind eases off.

The furry people's fire is the only source of light. They're not doing much, just lying down and occasionally adjusting a lever on the wall. In front, there is a huddle of people wearing a lot more clothing than the furry people, and they're more feathery than furry.

A while later (about one and a half Earth hours, if Miguel has a way to measure it) the vehicle descends and the turbines stop. A crowd of furry, fiery people push it into a long igloo-tunnel. They pick up his sled and gently set it on the floor. 

The feathery people, who have whole entire wings, file out of the vehicle, followed by another fire person and a furry person without fire.

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Maybe this is some kind of genetic modification fuckery, someone's special project and colony. Winged people and furry people. There are some folks on the internet who are into that. Maybe some really rich ones did the medical work to make it reality? How would he know!

It's warm in here. They're not speaking English.

And he's not gonna die! Hahaha!

A little while into the flight he'll shed the improvised coat, and eventually even open his helmet. This reminds him of some of the worse plane rides he's ever had...

He'll... Turn the helmet lights off. To save suit power. He huddles to himself, and listens, and, eventually, opens up a ration bar, shiny plastic crinkling, and eats it.

It would be pretty challenging to try and talk over the engine noise. And he's not sure he's not completely out of it. (He's more sure than he was an hour and a half ago.)

...Well, they appear to still be on the ice. And these people definitely aren't from the UNSS Exodus. But. PEOPLE! He might be tearing up, here.

When it's time to disembark he tries to mime appropriate thankfulness and confusion.

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So many neat alien artifacts!

The 'thankfulness' body language is clear enough, but the meaning of the other gestures escapes Hestlierre. They'll have to start with simpler concepts and work up to that. Establishing a shared understanding of the basic situation first, with the planet and ship, which will be needed anyway if it was (his best guess) a question about some alien species magic.

He stops all the flames above his waist to make his signing easier to see, and then: shows the surface of a sphere. Left fist; left fist briefly on fire while right finger points at the fire; no more fire but right hand sits on top of it, loosely curled, palm up, with fingers wiggling. Repeat to make this totally clear: here's his left elbow on fire and then with the wiggling fingers on it too. Now, here's the sphere again. One side gets wiggling fingers and one side doesn't - point at it, wiggling fingers? and shake head firmly and push the wiggling fingers away with his other hand.

A small object comes from far away and lands in the no-flames part of the sphere. Hestlierre points to himself and traces a line along the sphere towards the impact site, and points to Miguel and traces a line away from the impact site. Now the big question: point at Miguel, trace line back towards the ship and then trace a line continuing away. Point at him again, keep finger extended to trace, look at Miguel and wait?

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A fire person offers a piece of dense bread to Miguel, and a bowl of water.

A giant moth walking on its hind legs sits down nearby and waves its antennae through Miguel. A small winged person without feathers stares at him a moment in silence. A person covered with leaves - with branching antlers sticking out from their head covered in more leaves - kneels next to him and slowly reaches a finger towards the exposed skin on his face.

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He actually has no fucking clue what the wiggling is supposed to be? Is it about the fire? How are they doing that, some kind of implant? Fucking Magic? ...Is it - he - miming about the crash, maybe? Go towards or go away from it?

This is freaking him out. It's probably - actual doctors, or whatever, and he's just too out of it. Insane in the membrane. He will endure scrutiny and try to understand what is being signed.

(Miguel Hernandez is: Human, with some mild genetic modification and general tune-ups. The biggest ones, metabolically, are a telomere extension, a fat-reduction mod that speeds up metabolism when higher body fat is present, and a treatment to address a genetic predisposition to heart disease. Also, the cryo-compatibility treatment that EVERYONE on the mission got for free.)

 

Sum total of alien artifacts:

Miguel and his EVA suit, filthy. (There appear to toilet mechanics built into it.)

EVA suit helmet, x1.

Cryosuspension pod door, aluminum and glass and the electronics inside it.

Rubber-coated 8-strand copper wires with a plastic core and more sheathing over the individual strands.

Shredded-EVA-suit coat, 'sewn' together with electrical wires.

5 small batteries and 2 large ones.

2 PDAs. Charging cords.

19 water rations and 16 food ration bars.

Firestarting kit. Fat lot of good that did him.

First aid kit, x2. The antiseptic froze but it's melting again now.

Survival knife.

His personal luggage, which was sitting intact at the side of his pod. Tiny little plumbing and electronics toolkit and a crucifix and his ID card and some physical photos in a little binder, all in a small plastic case.

 

 

Anyway, back to: Whatthefuckwhatthefuck.

God.

-Does the PDA work? Tap tap. Hold button. No, it doesn't. Electronics die when they get too cold, right?

He takes it and - there, that one's still at 4% charge technically - and tries to holds them both near a flame for a minute. Fusses with the charge cord.

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Seems like the alien is confused and overwhelmed. (Hestlierre was prepared to painstakingly learn how to interact with a bizarre entity, but since the alien is humanoid and even seems mammal-derived, he's comfortable trusting his instincts for its body language. And its smell, once the alien is cleaned up enough to not immediately overpower the noses of everyone around.) He'll take a break for now, then.

...and hold still so the alien can hold the gadgets near his flame, sure.

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To the wroth, the alien seems normal enough. Exhausted and stressed. (The outside of the alien's body is fine, it's still less gross than the inside.)

To Chime, also, the alien's body seems normal and acceptably undamaged. No places where the blood is flowing wrong or not at all. No foreign objects. Digestive tract looks human, not catfolk or gnomunk or equartier.

To the liefling... Lieflings target a creature with a goal in mind. They receive feedback on the feasibility of the goal, how many leaves it would require the target to eat, and a complicated sense of the function of each leaf in terms that are detailed but abstract. With practice, lieflings learn patterns in these impressions and associate them with other observable phenomena, just like how anyone learns to combine their sensory data from different modalities. For example, there are commonalities when seeking to suppress the growth of lumps.

A Liefling may have a goal which would not actually be healthy for the patient - the feedback comes even with no intention of actually growing leaves and feeding them to the target. They may seek to suppress the growth of everything, and for this, many leaves would be required. When targeting a patient who has a growing lump, with the goal of suppressing everything, an extra leaf is required. And an extra leaf is also required for some patients who don't have a lump yet, or who don't ever have a lump but later mysteriously die, except they don't die if the extra affordance is used to suppress the unknown growing thing.

And so, lieflings have learned to diagnose cancer, and cure it in almost all cases, without much biological understanding. The medical science of Ansaf knows about macronutrients, micronutrients, amino acids, genes, enzymes, and hormones, without any idea of what these things actually look like - with a few partial exceptions: nutritionally-important metals, fat, protein, things made of protein...

Telomere extension? The liefling isn't expecting the alien to die of old age and doesn't check. Similarly with heart disease, and she doesn't even have the concepts to check cryo-compatibility. But she does look very closely at his metabolism: How hard would it be to make him metabolize various food categories she knows about? How hard would it be to make him waste away? How hard would it be to prevent wasting, given a diet with various nutrients?

The next foods offered to Miguel are nuts and cooked strips of fatty meat.

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"The alien has things that have wires in them, just like in the round metal thing, but not as smashed."

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"And not doing anything that any of us can perceive, or you'd have mentioned that?"

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"Yeahh, but they're not structural either - sometimes they're flexible. The alien is doing something with one of the objects now, come look!"

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It is not actually true that nobody present can perceive the wires doing things.

But does he have any idea what they're accomplishing with their tiny background murmuring? Nope.

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He's certainly not going to turn down food. He feels like he's about to fall asleep, honestly, but - this situation is very confusing and it feels important-

The metabolism mods are fairly complicated. The endocrine system is complicated.

It wouldn't be that hard to make him waste away, but it would be different to any known species. Also you'll need to attack more different paths than usual. He'll metabolize more things than average for a human already. He has a strong tolerance to some kind of stimulant drug already, and is in the last stage of withdrawal from it. That sticks out. And it would be relatively easy to prevent wasting even if he was fed mostly simple carbohydrates- He's overall unusually resilient. Too much fat, or salt, or carbs, or protein, or potassium, or cholesterol, or a dozen other things, won't hurt him. Not enough of any of the usual culprits will hurt him, but less.

...Yep, there it goes, 1% and charging, once it warmed up. He lets it boot, softly glowing LEDs playing the little video and startup tone, and then there is a picture of the ship looking proud and shiny, and the word EXODUS, and his name, M. Hernandez, and below that a password field.

Taptaptaptaptaptaptap. 'Sign In'. Clearly a well practiced motion. Aaaaand here's a home screen. Tap tap.

Aaaaand here's a gallery of photos. He scrolls through them, looking for one to illustrate his confusion. Then he blinks and notices everyone's intense interest in the little tablet computer.

(The photo he paused on is of himself, standing among rows and rows and rows of densely packed plants under purple lights, grinning and holding a plastic basket of tomatoes.)

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(Woah, thinks the liefling.)

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The alien makes light! With the head objects, with this hand object that shows images, and, as shown in the image, with the long glowing rods. Real light, that can grow plants!

This changes everything, for Ansaf, and nothing, for what they do now. They need to know the constraints on the light, the materials used to make the light objects...and they haven't established communication enough for that yet.

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They seem to like the hydroponics! Great! He'll scroll through more of those- Point at things and name them, maybe-

-Hurhhh, the tiredness is hitting him all at once here. He feels like he's going to fall asleep sitting up.

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(Is ABSOLUTELY writing furiously on the side here.)

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Something strange is going on but it feels like he's driving through fog, like it's five AM after an emergency drill at night, and you're trying to stay awake, because...

...Bath. It's awkward to try to charades a bath and shave. But bath more urgently. 

He attempts it anyway. The first aid kits have soap in them for some reason at least.

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They can heat the bowl of water and bring him a piece of cloth?

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Better than nothing. He will use plenty of soap. He badly needs sleep. 

(The PDA will die within a few minutes of reclaiming his charger and curling up on the door to sleep.)

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When he wakes, the vehicle is gone, the tunnel continues out of sight in both directions, and there are only a few people around: a few of the fire people, including the black-and-white one from before, sleeping; the same furry-but-not-fire-person from the vehicle, and a giant beetle. When they see he's awake, they offer him more water and nuts, and wake up the black-and-white one.

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A - not a night, a time - of fitful sleep has put him in a slightly refreshed frame of mind.

The Exodus is still out there, he hopes. Singh is still out there, maybe but does that really matter?

They said a lot of platitudes during the training. About - being pioneers, stepping beyond the surly bonds of Earth, beyond nations, to the highest and noblest purpose of humanity.

For once, he actually thinks he gets it. Whether these are space aliens with fire-producing cybernetics, fantasy races like elves or something, or a long-lost colony of humans, or some insane secret project, he has got to get his shit together. No room to freak out. 

Whatever the situation is, it demands that he take it seriously, and is possibly the most important thing he will ever do in his life.

You do what you can with what you have. And what does he have? Himself, his mind, his patience, and a PDA with a starkly limited battery life and no current method of recharging it. He'll ration the remaining battery power, making sure to turn his helmet computer and suit warmers off, and managing the chain of chargers and cables to concentrate the remaining charge into one of the big power cells.

"Gentlepeople," he says, "I know you don't understand me right now, but I want to say it out loud. I am delighted to meet you all, and looking forward to learning from each other."

And then... They can get to drawing and mime and pointing and vocabulary games, and diligent, focused mock conversation, like one of the better quality language classes. 

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Time continues to pass, as it tends to do. The Exodus colony shifts to a slow and careful surveying and scouring of the debris field, with one rover continuing to search for a path off the glacier.

 

Three more days pass.

 

Recent finds: A lot of scrap and debris, a damaged recycling module (brought in anyway in hopes of repairing it), a third habitat module, a mining module in good shape, and a few intact-ish supply lockers. They take the time to start mapping out the most dangerous areas of fallout, cautious work with dosimeters and such. They have highly reflective metal signs, freshly fabricated and painted with the unmistakable yellow and black trefoil, and pound them into the ice with sledgehammers at even intervals.

They recover the Shuttle, ready for inspection and refurbishment. More modules go up. A second Hydroponics. The third Habitat, giving everyone more room to live in. An Entertainment Module, full of sports courts, a swimming pool, miniature theaters, video game and VR setups, and even a miniature spa, almost entirely automated.

They don't find the Bridge.

 

The name vote ends up lingering for longer than anyone expected, as submissions continue to roll in and the senior officers allow the debate to continue. By now it's down to a top ten.

...Okay okay, fine. Twelve.

Sheesh! Sixteen, sure!

A lot of people are pushing hard towards 'Icehole' as the one remaining obvious tongue-in-cheek option.

Nivis
Glacies
Whiteplains
Nova Terra
Nadir
Icehole
Charon
Foundation
Exodus
Aurora
Mir
Faith 
Stygia
Refuge
Frosthaven
Solstice

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"It's funny how quick everything becomes... Normal. Isn't it?"

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"I'm not sure what you mean."

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"Here we are on an alien planet, frigid as the antarctic plain, having survived a catastrophic crash, and... It's just life. My boy is going to school. We're building the colony. I'm holding meetings and discussing the situation with everyone, but it all feels like just another drill on some level, doesn't it?"

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"Permission to speak freely?"

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"Uh, sure. I'm not actually military, you know?"

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"I think that feeling of normalcy is not something shared by the general population. It's not shared by me. I'm- I'm the one who interacts with the general public while your duties consist of liaising with the officers, managing inventory, and planning future operations and work. Relatively few people. Who know you, and act professionally... The general mood is not one of normalcy and saying so is something of a shock."

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It stings.

...He maybe has a point. She's always been prone to that mental attractor, the typical mind problem.

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"This situation feels very, very non-normal to me. People we both knew are dead. It is not normal. It should not be treated as normal. Ma'am."

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"Tell it like it is, huh. No, you're right. I don't know. I'm just feeling... Like I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop."

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"Mmh. I don't disagree."

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Opinions? Thoughts? Questions? If he has any of those, he's keeping them close to his chest. His work attending to the health of over a thousand crash survivors keeps him rather busy, you see. Any subtle probing through the colony's data systems for something he may or may not suspect would surely be discounted as a hobby undertaken in spare time. He's getting into cryptanalysis. It's fun.

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She's had to break up a few fights. It's just stress. All the unanswered questions building up higher and higher. She'll tell Lucy she needs to be seen more- To be held accountable. People are calling for a switch to a democratized process. They're quiet and couched as 'at some point, we should start planning' for now. But they're not even wrong. Her job remains the same- Order, security, safety.

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"...And that's why I think Marlene should be designated as head of the shuttle program. Such as it is. There are seven qualified technicians, we had a bad roll of the dice with shuttle crew, much like the bridge staff... And she's the brightest of them in raw adaptability. Just look at this list of projects. So I've been looking over the records of some Operations and Maintenance folks who have the right kind of attention to detail to offer her."

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"Sounds perfect to me. You're really not wrong that a satellite to survey the place would make me feel a lot better."

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Nina goes and finds Marlene soon after that. In person, to deliver good news. Face to face is often best that way.

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The senior Co-Pilot is here too. He's a familiar sight to Marlene, though it'd be a stretch to say that they know each other. That's what professionalism and a busy training schedule does.

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She's happy about the promotion. Really, she is. It's just that her happiness is of a smug, socially-unacceptable flavor, but right now she has to perform a totally different sort of happiness, humble and appreciative and quietly dutiful. "I'm flattered! I appreciate your high expectations for me and I will do my very best to live up to them. It's an honor to represent humanity in this way. I look forward to our future work together, Nina, and to working more closely" it would be bad to only call Nina by first name "with you, Shen. We're fortunate that the shuttle was recovered in such good condition" as they should already know from the reports "and I" she can't say 'look forward' she already said that "think it will be wonderful sight for all of us when it departs to place a surveying satellite, in nine wakes' time, weather and Murphy permitting."

She tries not to resent Nina and Shen for coming to tell her in person. They probably genuinely believe they're being nice. But ultimately, they get something out of this meeting - the ego boost of feeling like they're generous people, that they're liked by their subordinates - and it comes at her expense. It's a deniable way of demanding flattery, so deniable they don't see it themselves.

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After that meeting that would have been an email in a just world, she needs to calm down, with that most laudable of activities, stressing out over the name vote.

It's kind of silly to be voting again. But people would resent if the winner was a name they overlooked amid three pages of names, and it makes a better story if there's a smallish slate of front-runners to talk about with their friends. Bah. They're not here to tell a story about an election... except they kind of are, actually, if it will improve morale, it's just that Marlene thinks that the Paradox of Choice means that running a second round of voting might lower morale. And, she shouldn't think this, it's not nice, but maybe it's right for the people who waded through whole list of names to have their opinions matter more. ...She takes a deep breath, observes her feelings, and lets them go.

She needs to think about strategy. Which is, in itself, disappointing - Approval Voting, you were supposed to save us! - but she's not going to discard her ability to affect the result out of spite.

Nova Terra is awful. In her, sigh, subjective opinion. It could be anywhere. Earth even already has a Newfoundland.

Nivis, Glacies, Charon, Exodus, Aurora, Mir, Faith, Stygia, and Refuge are boring. Whiteplains is tolerable. Frosthaven is a boardgame, isn't it? Solstice and Foundation are slightly clever. Icehole, of course, was her own submission. She doesn't understand Nadir.

What is she optimizing for, actually? Her preferences? The happiness of everyone in the colony? The happiness of their future descendants? Yeah, that. The thing that matters the most is not making future generations embarrassed by their ancestors' lack of creativity.

She votes for all of them but Nova Terra.

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People are still excited about the green vegetables, but after three days of salads, it's time to think about variety. Better to hide the vegetables now, before people tire of them, and bring them back for a special moment. Yeah, celebration salad! That will be a great tradition for the new world.

Tabbouleh and felafel? Not hidden enough. Spinach omelettes? Better wait until the supply of synthetic egg is bigger - they need that egg for baking. Soup with wilted greens and firm tofu? Yeah, and some kind of bun on the side...

Sabah votes for the whole shortlist except Icehole. Why do people vote for that. Do they really want the future galactic congress to refer to "the junior senator from Icehole"? 

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Shen Takagi might end up spending a lot of time near the shuttle. Not interfering with the work or making demands, he knows that aircraft tech-pilot relationships can get tense if there's too much hovering, just... Reveling in the simplicity of checklists.

Nina can't quite read the room if she's not working with other Maintenance people and the drivers. It's a whole little subculture. He volunteers to take talking to the Shuttle people off her plate. As pilot he's better suited to it anyway, right?

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If he's hanging around, what are his opinions on configuring the fantastically-complicated engines? At this pressure and oxygen content, the manual says to remove the props entirely, but, as she understands it, that will reduce the maximum reverse thrust, requiring an even longer runway. And she had an idea to remove the turbine blades from two of the engines and use them only in scramjet mode, what does he think? Keep the turbojets on number two and three, so a low-altitude engine-out has less asymmetric thrust, or the other way around?

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.......He has to think about it and do some research before getting back to her. There was a simulator pod in the same cargo unit as the shuttle; They can program it with the new configuration acceptably enough, and Shen and two other backup pilots can play with the simulator a little bit.

He ends up coming at it with pilot opinions more than technical ones: He'd really rather keep the reverse thrust. For takeoff abort, if nothing else. The scramjet idea seems fine after due consideration- The improved performance in the upper atmosphere and transfer-to-space envelope is very nice to have.

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Oooh hmm there are already ducts for a cross-bleed start, if they enlarge them a bit and leave the high-pressure turbines in the two engines which are otherwise only used as scramjets, they can power all four of the retractable props. It wouldn't be worth doing on Avalon, but in this atmosphere the two intact engines can produce a bit more thrust (forward or reverse) with four props than with two. They'll need a wake to do the modification and another wake to update the procedures and reconfigure some alerts in the ECAM system.

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...He follows along the logic... As long as sufficient due diligence is done in simulation, ground testing, writing the procedures, writing tests and training for the procedures, triple checking the ECAM and making sure everything is accounted for...

"It might be better to mark this down as a future improvement. Two days' delay is not trivial. If we haven't found one of the survey satellites by the time the shuttle is otherwise ready let's revisit?"

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"Sounds good, thank you!" That's exactly why she's talking to him; she doesn't know if two days is a reasonable delay for the colony, and she doesn't have a pilot's perspective to evaluate risks.

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The wheels on the shuttle are pretty sturdy, enough to handle some improvised chains. The group of techs considers crushing ice to make a soft runway-end safety area, but decides against it, out of concern that the wind might blow chunks of ice at the shuttle, so the runway is just really really long, almost ten kilometers.

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They can use one of the Transports to do this really fast! They're basically construction equipment on top of being super heavy trucks.

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A living alien! What sort of climate does he like?

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Perhaps the newest and greatest mining town?

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Hey.

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No it's fine, the Orocide will surely soon be the greatest mining town. Not the greatest in the drydark, the greatest on the planet.

(Kef is better as a prosperous supply depot and resting place for travelers, not as a tourist attraction of its own. So that the experiment is undisturbed, and so that when it succeeds, its success will be accurately ascribed to its economic system, not a whim of fate.)

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We invite the alien to visit the great and ancient empire of Lei.

By the way, how's the breeding program going?

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There is no practical reason for the alien to go gallivanting around. We would be delighted to pay for the Allheart Alliance to construct a residence in a location of the alien's choice. Nay, no mere residence, a monument to inter-world diplomacy!

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We insist on contributing to this project to the same degree as the Freedom Democracy.

At great cost to our reserves! As you surely know, we take pride in maximizing our population and stretching the productivity of our land to the utmost. Should the Freedom Democracy continue making such expenditures, forcing us to match them out of fear of some dastardly plot should we appear stingy in comparison, we will surely face tremendous hardship.

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There are more aliens! At least, that's what this one claims.

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Gosh.

That means there's definitely no need for a breeding program, like the sneaky coercive Lei were asking about.

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Wait a minute, these plans for the diplomatic center include a lot of housing, especially in this part where the rooms are oddly large. Almost as if the accommodations were specified later, for residents of initially-unknown size.

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The original design was for a theater center. Those were practice rooms.

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With skylights?

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We take the arts very seriously here. You should try it.

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Learning a new language is fun. You drill the words. You line them up into sentences, where they fit neatly, like how the stone blocks locked together to make the tube before the ice, but not only in one possible way, in enough ways to build all sorts of things. Every new grammatical form you learn opens up even more possibilities. And if that wasn't enough, at the end you get to talk to people.

Languages make sense. Or when they don't, the generations before you have noticed the parts that don't make sense, thought about them, and figured out how to teach them best, with poems or stories. Or sometimes just repetition, but it isn't boring, because you're doing it together. Complaining about a new language is a great community activity. 

Learning English would be fun, if that's what they were doing. But no, they're mashing together English and Sotalese to make a new language with the grammar of neither, and words that are kind of inspired by both but not simply copied from either. The Sotalese word 'firelight' mostly means magic and 'sunlight' means any kind of light. All animals are 'rats'. There was a whole mix-up around the words for human and male and female; it's funny now but it was so embarrassing that Migel, with his weak nose, thought Mirana and Merta were male.

And at the end, the only new person she would be able to talk to is Migel. None of the other aliens speak this made-up language.

Somehow, polyglot Mirana ends up at the front of the tube again. It's okay, the off-duty emperor has it covered.

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He's used to words having layers and layers of context-dependent meanings. The preservation of High Elvish isn't just a convenience for understanding old memories of speech, or an affectation, or a challenge to test the commitment of butler applicants. It's part of Lei - not Lei the country, Lei the system of shrines and elves. It organizes memories and connects each thought to the next. It's his native language, learned more from shrines than from his family.

(It also helps that he's keeping flashcards in temporary shrines along the walls of the ice tube.)

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(The tube is still growing. The expedition might not use it, if travel via air is faster and meets all their needs. But it will be useful for mining the ice later. As long as they have hundreds and hundreds of catfolk here, they might as well go as far as they can.)

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"In Exodus, who decides what trades to accept, on what terms?" asks the not-currently-emperor, in simple words that we will translate into normal English for the convenience of the reader. (And the writer.)

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"It will be Captain Maria Espanoza. If she is dead, her first helper, Juniro Xiao. If he is dead, I'm not sure. Another of the deciding people. There are numbers for deciding people. Captain Espanoza, one. First helper Xiao, two. Until we are... Have built the shrines and farms and homes. Then Exodus will do a thing where everyone says who they think should decide things."

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"My country also does that! It's called 'democracy'. In most of the other countries, the people in charge decide who will be in charge next, and leave them notes on what to do with magic."

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"If that person says to trade with us, say you give us a plant light system and we build a bunch of houses for you, is there a risk that other people will try to prevent us from taking the plant lights? What happens if they do?"

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"I don't know. I do not want to say things about Exodus that might be wrong. This - talking to your countries - is very important to get right. I am saying things that might happen. If people are very mad, maybe there is trouble and not doing what the person in charge says. That would be bad. Maybe they will say 'we will say who should be in charge instead now, not later'. There is a team of - making people not do things. 'Security'. Like - not taking things, or not touching someone if they don't want to be touched. I think Security will follow the person in charge and try to make things be calm. I need to talk to Security when we get to the crash site."

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"Are you worried that something about us will make people angry?"

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"Someone else from Exodus tried to hurt me. That is why I was lost. I need to tell Security so they can talk to us and look at things and see what happened- ''Investigate". And say he did a bad thing, he - has to be less free so he does not hurt people." He borrows an FD word for that.

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"I'm sad that happened to you."

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(He's not going start a political argument about making people less free. Political influence is only his second priority here, and he doesn't actually think it's impossible to ever have an ethical system that sometimes makes people less free. After all, killing people violates their Freedom to Live.)

"Do you think that Exodus will want us to build houses? It would be much easier to build houses in the stone parts of the drydark, not on the ice. Other things we could trade would also be easier if Exodus were closer to where we live. Do you think they would want to move closer?"

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"Maybe? I don't want to say what they want. I could be saying wrong things. I don't know. I know you want hydroponics. Is that so you can have more food? We know how to make more of our things. We knew we were going to another planet and would need to make everything. But need a lot of kinds of metal and rock and 'plastic' to make them. I want to learn to talk, and write, and talk and write for everyone. We brought houses with us. And tools. A lot of things. How does the 'magic'* work? Where does it come from?"

*The word used is the Sotalese word for 'firelight', not 'magic'.

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"Yes, we need food. We need other things too. Things that give us food, like water and light and cold and better plants, and things that aren't about food at all, like places to live and fun things to do and ways to make people live longer and ways to make one species in particular live longer and spaceships and sunlight image things and ways to learn more about magic and ways to learn more about everything.

Magic works in a different way for each species, but we know a few things: Two species never have the same magic, not even just a part of their magic, but they might use the same idea. Like, when is a thing moving and when is it not moving, or what is one thing and what is two things, or what is magic and what is not magic, or what is a creature or plant and what isn't. And in those cases, different species always use the same idea. They don't disagree about what a creature is, for example. Although some magic only works on creatures and some magic only works on plants and some works on both creatures and plants.

No person always hurts themself with their magic. Fire doesn't hurt catfolk, for example. But it is possible to carelessly get hurt, like a werewolf dropping a rock on themself. And magic can be tiring to use, and eventually hurt, like a irontooth using their mouth to bite a lot of things.

But maybe there are species that always hurt themselves with their magic and then die, so we don't know about them.

Human magic makes all the other kinds of magic. A human and an animal make a person, for some kinds of animals. A human and a human make a human. A human and a person who isn't a human make another person of the same species.

We don't know why some kinds of animals can be used to make species of people and some don't. Some animals can be used to make a baby that dies when it is small, so maybe the animals that we think don't make a person actually do make a person but the baby dies very quickly.

If you don't have any species with magic, maybe you're not a human. Hm, maybe there are many species that look like humans but have different magic. Maybe your magic is something you don't know about because you only have one species, but after we see you more we'll see what your magic is... only female humans have magic, so maybe only your female people have your magic."

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He is pretty sure... That magic isn't a thing... Even with all this evidence... And didn't really follow all of that.

"Where is the - food - for the fire from though? Or the other magic? You cannot get a thing from no things."

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"Catfire doesn't eat food. It's just hot. Hot isn't a thing."

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"Hot is a thing. Hot is tiny things moving."

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"Things moving is not itself a thing? I think. Maybe I'm wrong about that. But you can make a thing where there wasn't a thing. Kappas make water and air."

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"That's impossible! Er, I think that's wrong! I - everything we do is - moving things around. Not magic!"

It must be some sort of sci-fi super tech. They've forgotten the power source. Is it solar wind? Something with quantum stuff? He's not smart enough for this...

Deep breath. It's not their fault this makes no sense. ...Probably.

"I'm sorry. This is very confusing."

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"It is very interesting. How do you know that everything you do is just moving things around? ...In ways that don't make any new movement, just move the movement around? And you know that moving movement around is not a thing?"

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"...I am not the smartest but I'll try. The short answer is that we did a lot of experiments over a long time. The long answer is... Long..." 

Maybe selling this kind of knowledge would be better but that's a really unfriendly and uncharitable tack to take? Where to start, though... 

"...There is a math thing called 'entropy'. It is - how stable something is in a math way. ...I might need to draw."

Once a surface is acquired:

"If you have a lot of little things that could be pointed in any direction, there are a lot of ways they can be arranged. They could point all in the same direction..." He draws three needles, vertical. "Or in different ones." Three askew. "There are a lot of ways that they could point in all different directions. This one could point here, or here, or here, or any other direction. And for each of those directions this one can, too. So there's really only one way that they're all pointing the same way, and many many ways that they're not. If you change one of these, not choosing it just - 'random' - and nudge it a little bit, and then keep doing that over and over, probably it will tend to make them point all different ways eventually, right? There are a lot of ways that they could point differently, and only one way they point the same. Entropy is a measure of how - pointing everywhere - a thing is. A stone block has low entropy, and a pile of dust has higher entropy."

"Heat is kind of like pointing, because some tiny things move fast and are hot, and some tiny things move slow and are cold. They hit each other and change speed. That's how heat moves. A hot pot of water in a cold room has low entropy, because heat will move randomly and almost always from hot to cold not cold to hot, and when everything is the same temperature it has more entropy. Entropy always goes up every time we looked at it. Always. The sun shines light, and that can make entropy on a planet go down, but the entropy in the sun and the planet is still going up! Catfire would make entropy go down! But we think nothing can do that, and we tried a lot of things."

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"I think I understand except for the last part. Why does catfire make entropy go down? ...Also I want to know more about what you tried to do to make entropy go down."

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"If catfire doesn't come from somewhere, it is making a low entropy thing - hot in one place and cold in another - without making higher entropy somewhere else. The sun is - burning, kind of, it will go out eventually. The sun's heat isn't lowering entropy because entropy in the sun is going up and it will go out eventually."

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"The sun is going to die? Scary. - Some people think the sun is made of catfire.

But you were saying, catfire makes a situation where one place is hot and one is cold... but it does not make any place cold. Just one place hot."

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"I didn't learn about this as much... I learned about plants... Uh, if I take things pointing everywhere like this, and add three new ones that are all pointing the same way, there's still less pointing-everywhere then before."

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"That makes sense, for kappas making entropy go down. But catfire makes things hot and move fast and hit other things more? ...which then get hotter so the whole room becomes equally hot everywhere. So the room has higher entropy after all that, but before the heat spreads out to the whole room, the situation where part of it is hotter has lower entropy. Very nice! If I understand it.

But how do you know the math is how things actually work?"

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"I think you have it right. Or at least mostly right... I don't know that part. It's- They built huge places with 'magnets'* and hot air and looked really closely at the hot air, I think? Except it was not air, it was things that can be air that the sun is made of. I think they can tell what the sun is made of by what kind of light it makes? I don't have books about this on the PDA. I mostly have books about plants and hydroponics. Someone at Exodus will know more.

...Are you understanding all this?" He asks the other two people-who-are-learning-weird-pidgin.

 

*A new word

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"Hrm... I will enjoy talking to them, then. Thank you." Magnet, he repeats to himself, to ask about it later.

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"Not all of the math, but it sounds reasonable enough."

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"I assume the math doesn't talk about the number of ways something can be, since you can't actually count them, it's 'infinite' - there are always more ways no matter how big you count. And I don't understand why" three fingers pointing together in the same direction "is special... I mean, I understand that there are lots of ways if you're not looking at exactly how each finger is pointing" wave hands around "but maybe this" stop moving "is special? Maybe you want the fingers to be exactly here, and 'random' changes would break the thing you care about? But I'll ask someone in Exodus who knows more about this."

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"We can know about how many tiny things are in a cup of water. But this is hard to explain right."

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"It's okay, we can ask someone who knows more.

Do you think Exodus would be interested in trading for us using magic to:

  • Hold things in place so they can't move or change.
  • Keep things so they don't change, but can be moved and released later.
  • Make plants give fruit and nuts which make more plants that are different.
  • Directly make plants different, but their fruit and nuts make the first kind of plant without the change.
  • In a dangerous situation, think and learn very quickly.
  • Create air and water.
  • Eat things that you don't want.
  • Go into dangerous places without getting hurt.
  • Take things out of places, like if there's a narrow hole and you can't put your hand all the way in.
  • Know what people are thinking.
  • Know if a house is strong.
  • Make people think that they see or hear or touch or smell something.
  • Pick up heavy things.
  • Move very quickly.
  • Look at things far away.
  • Smell the inside of things, like is a person healthy or does this rock contain the particular type of rock you want.
  • Bite through things.
  • Lift heavy things.
  • Talk to people far away.
  • Take the things that people feel.
  • Move very small things.
  • Look around at a lot of things at once.

There might be other, rare species that we can search for if there's something else you want."

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Did the Lei emperor just admit that undines and apples exist?

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Yep, and he's not going to make a big deal out of it right now because working with the aliens is a higher priority.

"If Exodus is willing, we could look around and talk to people there, and then we might think of things that would be helpful for you that neither of us would think of just by talking here."

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He has to think about all that for a bit. And write down notes.

"I think they'll definitely want to talk to your countries and trade. They'll be as surprised as I am about magic. But trade is still good. Hmm...

Catfire is really useful for turbines. And probably other things I don't know as much about. A reactor* makes a lot of heat but catfolk can move around more easily than one of those.

Changing stone is really very very useful for building things. I think probably they will want to build some things.

Holding things so they can't move would be useful for building. You can lift very heavy things that way.

I don't think I understand the second thing, it sounds just like the first one?

Making plants different shapes might help in hydroponics, if some plants are outgrowing their trays. Or for decorations. Things that are nice to look at.

Making new kinds of plants sounds like what radioactive* trash does. But we do it on purpose instead of randomly.

Thinking and learning very quickly could be useful for some things. I'm imagining needing to read a book of instructions on how to use a big tool all at once, so you know how to fix it or stop it before it hurts someone?

Creating air and water is very very useful! Especially for going into space! You can boil water and throw it out of your space ship to go places. Usually you have to bring all your water with you in the first place.

We will probably have trash that is hard to recycle? Magic can eat** it? The reactor* makes trash that is radioactive*. It's dangerous and hard to get rid of.

Going into dangerous places like the reactor* to check them or fix them might be handy but we have robots* for that.

Taking things out of places... If it can make sealed things with no air inside I think that's probably useful somehow but I don't know how exactly.

Reading thoughts is scary but maybe Security will want it!

Knowing if things are strong- Good for building! Good for making tools!

I think making people think they see things is called 'illusions*'. That would be fun, I guess.

We can pick up heavy things with tools. I don't know what you mean with this one.

We can move quickly with tools. So same thing I guess?

We have telescopes* and cameras* but maybe magic is better at seeing than them.

Smelling the inside of things might be useful. I remember we trained small friend animals to smell things sometimes at home. Smell sick people, smell poisons, smell dangerous things. I wonder if you could smell viral* sick plants?

Biting through things sounds... Dangerous? Maybe if tools weren't working?

Lifting heavy things again. I don't understand.

Talking to people far away! We know how to do that but my radio* is broken.

Take things people feel? Like make them feel less? If they are sad or too angry or need to sleep, maybe.

Moving very small things sounds useful for a lot of things. How small? Too small to see?

Looking at a lot of things all at once I think I also don't understand.

That's a lot of kinds of magic. I think even in not-true books for fun usually there are less.

Other magic that might be useful... We will want to find a lot of the kind of rock that you can make metal from, and make metal from it. We use a lot of metal, for eveything."

 

* = new words

**'Eat' is being used to mean both 'consume as sustenance' and 'destroy'.

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"Would you trade us a 'reactor'? Towns in the drydark need a lot of heat, even if it can't be moved around. Does a reactor get hot enough to melt metal?

The difference is that an 'aasimar' would take this piece of ice and make it stay exactly here and not melt" he holds the chunk of ice in midair and puts a flame under it with his other hand "but a 'gnomunk' would make the ice go away and then come back later, and it doesn't melt because where would you even put the flame?

One species, 'gnolls', can eat things, and the food is gone then; they don't need a chamber pot. Usually they eat stone. If radioactive trash is dangerous, it might hurt them before they eat it.

No one here can read thoughts, and no one of that species is coming here. Exodus should not be scared of that.

What are robots?

Picking up heavy things is done by 'harpies', who make heavy things lighter and then pick them up.

Is your radio dangerous?

Could telescopes and cameras, if they were here, see the shape of your ship before it crashed? With the big hot wing-shaped parts?

Moving small things is done by 'mouselings', who can make a second body for themselves. The second body has to be big enough to see, but it can see things which are too small to see any other way.

Looking at lots of things at once is done by 'tengu', who have lots of bodies and... hm, so a mouseling can only really think about one of their bodies at a time. Just like how if I put a hand between my eyes and look at your sunlight-image thing with one eye and at Merta with the other eye, I can still only think about one of those things at a time. But a tengu can think about a different thing with each of its bodies.

What kind of sick people do your animals smell? Like if they have a dangerous thing growing inside of them but it's still very small? ...most species here can smell better than humans here, so if someone is clearly sick we can smell that from the outside.

Our not-true books for fun also don't usually have as many new kinds of magic as there actually are, unless they're thinking about an idea for how humans might work differently. Some fun books add a single new species, or a new kind of magic that everyone can learn, and all the real species are still there, so you could say they have more kinds of magic than we have, but most of them aren't new. I've also seen some books that ask, like, what if the only species was frogolds? Could they survive? What would it be like? ...I once read a book that had three times as many kinds of magic, though! The real kinds, a not-true kind for each species that they had plus their real kind, and a kind about a 'god', a very strong magic person who doesn't die, one for each species."

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"A reactor is probably the biggest and most expensive thing we could trade. I think we would trade other things and get to know each other first. It can definitely melt metal." Also he thinks you might be able to make nuclear weapons with it? Which would be bad, obviously.

"Yeah, I wouldn't- Try to eat it with your mouth even if you have magic." He shivers. "Robots are like the PDA, but they have metal arms. They can do things that are simple if you tell them what to do. They're not people. I don't think radio is danger- Oh, 'radioactive' uses the same sounds. I'm not sure why that is. They're different."

"Telescopes could see the ship even far out. The big telescopes, I mean. Wings? Do you mean the 'radiators'? Those get rid of heat from the ship's reactor since there's no air to do that in space."

"Teeny tiny bodies that are animated by magic could be good for making more computers- Things like robots and the PDA. They're very small and delicate. I think I don't understand tengu still. I don't know much about things we smelled. A dangerous thing growing inside of them sounds like 'cancer', which is a big problem. People do a lot of work trying to fix cancer and got better at it eventually. You can cut it out, or hit it with radioactive things very very very carefully, or use drugs. Or all of those depending on what kind it is."

...........Don't proselytize to the aliens. It seems likely to get so, so messy.

"Some humans from Exodus think there is a god, and some don't. It's not polite to argue about it, but talking about it nicely is okay."

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"Yeah, radiators! That's what we thought they were for, nice to know we were correct!

We can usually fix cancer too, by using magic to tell it to stop growing, or telling the rest of the body to kill it. 

Only one god? That happens sometimes here - thinking that one god created humans or gave them magic - but most people think there are no gods or think there are many gods. And here too it's not polite to argue about it."

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He chuckles a bit. Kind of darkly.

"I hope everything turns out okay. I think I want to hear more about the FD and Lei. And Allheart. Maybe I should learn Sotalese properly or teach you English properly instead of our weird talking, but I don't know how to do that right... And I wasn't thinking good before. Anyway. The FD is a democracy? And Lei is a - saying who is in charge next? What is the word for that?"

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"I think that learning Sotalese is a good idea."

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"If some of what you trade to us is knowing things, I think we would like to learn English too."

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"FD is a democracy, yes. All the other countries are not democracies... The thing where the person in charge says who will be in charge next isn't important; the important thing is the each person in charge gives notes to the next person using 'elph' magic - that's his species - so we say that the other countries have elves in charge.

The other countries are different from each other by how the elves get jobs and move between jobs and lose their jobs. In Lei, the elves move around a lot, and they lose their jobs only when the other elves say so. In Sota, they don't move often, and they lose their jobs if enough people are angry. In Nitatlel, it's similar but the elves are not in charge of towns, they're in charge of a small job for large piece of the country. Nosimasna is like Lei but the elves keep their notes in a lot of small pieces and if enough people are angry they can take the piece of notes that are bad."

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"It's true that in Lei, elves don't lose their job unless other elves say so, but I think it's important to say that there used to be many countries like that, and people liked Lei better and moved to Lei, so that Lei got bigger and the other countries got smaller, and now Lei is very big."

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So, what... Lei is Imperial China and the FD is not early USA- Maybe revolutionary France-

-Actually, none of those, he's searching for familiar patterns where there probably are none again.

"...I think now that we can talk at all in this half language we should do learning Sotalese and English. It is good to meet new people and it's good to talk but it will be better if everyone can talk, not just me and you. We can talk enough to probably talk about things that are important or dangerous. It seems bad to keep talking 'maybe maybe maybe maybe' forever. Instead, do a thing that will be good later. Since we don't know how long until we find Exodus I still want to ration the PDA's charge- Only use two hours each wake. So we should get a lot of paper or stone for you to write on, and be ready to write down a lot lot of English things. I will write Sotalese next to English on the PDA so I can give it to Exodus later."

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Languages can be exchanged!

Does he want to stay with the expedition, or come to the diplomatic center where there are more people and plenty of writing material and much more comfortable weather?

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...He'd like somewhere more comfortable as long as they promise to send him to Exodus pretty quick once contact is made. He's a farmer, a bright one because Exodus chose smart people, but not a diplomat!

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Yes, absolutely. 

...They might be able to find Exodus in just a few cycles, though. How is Audron's project doing?

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It's going really well! His team, especially Klauva the werewolf, is working wonders on rapid prototyping of new designs. They have built an air-flyer that can hold a harpy, a catfolk powering the turbine (either of the two magic-users piloting the craft), and two additional people or a bundle of cargo. It's relatively slow (compared to his hopes, it manages maybe fifty or sixty klicks an hour in level flight)- The catfire only produces so much 'go'- And pretty tiring to fly for long durations, they haven't found a better way to run the controls than physically hauling on them with muscles yet.

But it flies well over the skies of the Chartreuse! Not tested in the drydark yet! He's kind of worried about not crashing into things when it's too dark to see landmarks.

Having harpy and catfolk magic available is really, really helping, here. They're able to just massively overbuild the whole frame and wings with still-relatively-thin spars and bars and wires of steel. Can you imagine trying to make something like this light enough to fly without magic? Let alone something to provide forward motion. Sheesh...

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The ground in front of the tube needs vampire inspection. So does the new construction. And Chime would really like to look over the whole ice tube every few cycles. After a short time fretting over the conflict, and then actually not any arguing with Fuzzer at all, she gets a catfolk escort out over the ice for ten klicks, and approval to spend her following shift riding the barge to the edge of the ice and back. 

Huddled amid the catfolk, bored, enduring the restless combination of piercing cold and crispy heat, her attention drifts to the wind. The wind isn't doing anything unusual, but in the odd dark landscape, it's a fun game to guess at the shape of the ground far in front, beyond her echolocation range, based on the wind in her face. A slight rolling turbulence indicates... a gentle hill. A sideways drift could be a mountain behind and to the left, or one ahead and to the right... but the pressure gradient is getting steeper as they go and apparently get closer to the mountain ahead... and yep there's a layer of turbulence.

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So Audron needs to know if there's a mountain in front of his contraption? She can do that. Well, when flying into the wind. When they return, flying with the wind, her warnings will be much more limited - there is a bit of distortion upwind of a large obstacle, but not enough to significantly improve on her plain echolocation range. But hopefully speed isn't as critical on the way back, with the wind helping them? And if they get lost, they can just go as high as they can and hang on until the chartreuse?

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On the topic of navigation, he can direct an air-flyer to Exodus! He's not saying how, sorry, but he's sure he can.

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Hooooo boy. Siamek is probably involved in some kind of "special effort". The kinds you hear grumbles and whispers about sometimes. And the other one is from Lei. Are there going to be people insisting on a Lei-FD balance? And cut the Allheart Alliance out of the plane ride? Because he's kinda pretty sure that most people who he hasn't trained and given practice time to are likely to crash this thing. Making it, instead, a version that carries six people in total would be a considerable additional expense and delay but maybe the next turbinewing can be even bigger and carry a dozen people.

Well, it's not his business to interfere! He got to build his turbinewing, and he's writing an amazing series in his usual compelling-personal-stories-and-cool-projects style. He got to meet the alien! He didn't say much, but technically he did! Other people can have their fun too.

He's willing to fly by vampire if Chime is willing to practice in lighted conditions with him so they're sure this works.

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It's day sixteen. The colony name vote finished several days ago. The name the votes ultimately settled on was 'Nivis', with 'Icehole' being a close runner up.

So, they have a name for their new home. Nivis. But that's the name for the colony, not the planet..

No answers were forthcoming from the senior officers. Lucy Carver has made some generic speeches about adapting to adversity, and getting your bearings in a new environment. There were a series of wakes, public and private. One part of the new habitat module was sectioned off as a schoolyard and playground, and the manufacturing systems were taken off repairs for a few hours to build a variety of simple toys to keep them from getting too bored or antsy.

The problem is the debris field. The Exodus was thoroughly disassembled by the crash landing. The debris field is wide, and from the outside, even intact-looking modules might be fine or might be utterly destroyed inside, necessitating cautious investigation. Furthermore, a lot of the debris has become buried in ice and snow, and there is still a haze of elevated radiation in the area- While only acutely dangerous in a small area downwind of the damaged reactor, it's a chronic hazard. Continuous cataloguing and mapping and tagging of the debris is necessary in order to make follow-on salvage efforts efficient. They have to plant navigation beacons. Mark safe paths. Stop to respectfully gather bodies, sometimes still in their stasis pods, and - store them in clearly marked "morgues", for lack of a clear decision on what to do with them. Pick up the most useful and intact pieces of salvage as they go, such as motors, medicine, power cells, and electronics. Follow careful decontamination procedures once they're out of the debris area.

There's a lot of factors slowing the process down. Even with Bass and Nina's clever idea to build a 'secondary site', not for long-term habitation but just enough to warm up in, store things, maintain the vehicles, and run decon procedures, the scouting and salvage process is still slow.

Also slow is the one vehicle that is dedicated to wider exploration. There's a lot of empty ice out there, and the terrain has been consistently treacherous. So far, no safe route towards the lit side of the planet has been identified. The furthest scouted path proceeds nearly two hundred kilometers on a winding reach before terminating at a massive cliff face of ice, leading down to more ice. If they have to build major infrastructure to get to a more hospitable area, they'll do so, once the overall system is sustainable.

However, there are still three rovers and dozens of people working on this, in continuous shifts, over the course of a week. They make rapid progress as time continues, with the colony shifting steadily towards reclamation of everything that was lost. Towards proper establishment.

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Despite his boys' best efforts and extensive scouting, the ship's bridge has not yet been found. Instead, they have found, among various smaller pieces of metal, of electronics and furniture and machinery from the ship's structure, the following:

Enough recognizable hull debris to account for six out of sixteen major sections of the Exodus's main structure. Much of it surprisingly intact, in large contiguous pieces... For the most part. If nothing else, that's a very large amount of metal ready to be worked into new equipment in the busy busy workshops.

An intact Brigman Core which has melted its way all the way down a hundred and eighty feet of ice, melting and boiling away the water into vapor as it slowly oozes blue plasma even now. Who knows how long it will keep going? They're certainly not touching it, and in fact put up plenty of warning signs, because they also found a crater that was eventually deduced to be the site of a former Brigman Core, which suffered some sort of catastrophic failure. Yikes!

Tragically, several Modules were confirmed destroyed, rendered into so much debris and scrap, only useful as base materials: One of the entertainment modules, a habitat, the second Hospital Module, and a mining module. Also a laboratory module- The rough structure was basically intact, but all the specialized equipment within was all but utterly ruined by even a fairly modest impact. Diamond anvils tossed out of alignment. Electron microscope filaments shattered. High-vacuum chambers ruined by a single microfracture. Vapor deposition chambers exposed to caustic damage from the very vapors supplying them breaking open. The research reactor and cleanrooms cracked and torn open, just slightly, but enough.

In terms of vehicles, two new rovers were located, bringing the grand total up to six- Though both were extensively damaged and needed several days to fix up. They also recovered a third heavy transport. The garage, accumulating a fairly large array of vehicles, has become a very busy place where over a hundred people work, and should accelerate the salvage effort even further in days to come!

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They also found two intact modules- A mining module, and another recycling module. Each recovered module is a wonderful shot in the arm and improves the colony's ability to maintain and process resources. While most of the processes are automated or semi-automated, enough equipment has been recovered intact that previous worries about idleness breeding frustration can be pushed a bit further away. There's plenty of work to be had in supervising, optimizing, and maintaining all the equipment. Even if it's still less than half of what they should have...

Extensive processing in the recycler modules is recovering a major chunk of trash and waste, reforming it into agricultural chemicals or plastic feedstock. The new mining module and the first one found earlier are finally relevant too, because a bundle of mineral probes was found, and after a brief consult with Lucy Carver, brought to semi-random points over a wide area, charged up with a huge power cell, and allowed to run. The probes dutifully dove through the ice and then the rock below, leaving a terminal and a trail of fiber optic wire as they delved. The principles involved in the scan software are complex, but the results are clear: A medium-sized deposit of iron, a large deposit of copper, and a small deposit of cobalt were all identified by the data from the half-dozen cylindrical drill cores. So as soon as they figure out how to safely melt a ramp and pit down to the rock surface, the mining rig will go to work, sending down specialized snake-like drills to dutifully core out all the useful ores and prepare them for processing into metal.

The icy foundations the rest of the colony is built on are also starting to worry her, but they seem to be holding up so far... Well, they're sinking into the ice a little bit over time, but it's not urgent on the scale of days. Maybe it'll be urgent in a couple months. Best to start thinking about it now. The reactor, transports, and mining equipment is pretty beefy- Could they clear out a large ice-pit, a literal fucking ICE HOLE like the funny name that almost won, and build there? That might be the best solution if a safe path to sunlit ground isn't found soon...

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The radiation poisoning scare is over; All remaining radiation poisoned patients survived. He is now only dealing with sniffles, work injuries, and the occasional ear infection, toothache, or eye exam. Shame about that laboratory module; It had pharmaceutical synthesis equipment. And cloning equipment, for replacement organs. He doesn't suppose that can be made a priority for the workshops to replace...? Hm, very well. He'll just have to make do with what he has from the mostly-intact hospital module. It will suffice until a proper high-tech industry can be built, one may hope.

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In security terms, no news is good news. Her team did have to break up a pretty nasty domestic argument, though. And a few more cases of graffiti. Certain subsets of the popualtion are getting less and less happy about not being on Avalon and not having answers as to why the crash occurred. Tension's rising steadily. Just something to be aware of. 

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Most of Lucy's time in private is spent planning industrial development. What machines, skills, parts, and materials are needed to build the tools to build more tools to build more tools? What is the most critical blocker on this 600-page hopelessly tangled web of a production plan? What are they going to salvage? What can they move around? What can they do without? She's good at it; She's always been better with systems than people. Her corporate experience wasn't white collar crime like so many stereotypes- No. It was a production manager for the factory floor that made machine tools. If Nina is running maintenance and keeping things that exist now going smoothly, she's focusing on future production.

Lucy announces the (true and accurate) statement that mapping of the debris field will be complete in the next six to eight days, with answers to be found and shared as soon as possible. The destruction of the Exodus is obviously a confusing and threatening situation, and she does not intend to hold elections until that is resolved one way or another. They signed on to Exodus, they read the regulations and agreed to them, the regulations are designed to create order in emergencies, which 'stuck on an arctic plain' still qualifies as. However! However, she solemnly swears to organize and abide by the result of a free and public election by, at the latest, three hundred days after planetfall, or 282 days from now.

Mary is right there with her, affirming the Security team's intent to uphold the regulations of the Exodus program in a fair and just manner, and so on and so forth.

...Might be good for her health if someone else wins that election, honestly. But until things are more settled, it's her duty to stay in charge and not fuck it up.

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In terms of space news, a second shuttle was found, but the terminal thrusters on its lander evidently failed and it hit at about a hundred miles per hour. The shuttle team take one look at it and just... Shake their heads. The engine section is obviously crushed, and one of the wings has snapped in half. A steel beam from the roof of the lander lies pierced through the cockpit glass. Maybe a few spare parts will be intact enough to be used in the other shuttle... But really, just melt the whole thing down for the rare metals, more likely. Two out of four shuttles accounted for, two still missing.

They've also found more solar panels. And more solar panels again, three large sets of them tucked away in a chilly warehouse for safe keeping until the day they can be brought to the sun... Or perhaps to orbit. Three satellite rail launchers too, one of them bent and burnt alarmingly with the electromagnetic catapults badly damaged, not to mention the satellite itself. But the other two were dutifully recovered and dragged in for evaluation and maintenance. If they can serve as observation platforms or communication relays, that would be very useful to the whole colony. Who knows what the rail launchers themselves can be used for. Trains? New vehicles? Weapons? Well, they'll sit in a warehouse until then.

It's been seven days since Marlene estimated nine days until the shuttle was viable. The recycling module is making the necessary fuel. The runway is built. Does two days still seem like the correct estimate?

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It does! This shuttle got lucky in the crash. Most of the damaged parts were easily replaced with spares packed in the same module. The horizontal stabilizer needed its left leading edge to be fabricated anew, and its trimming jackscrew, but those tasks were included in the estimate. The only substantial unexpected work was a leak in the A hydraulics, caused by the combination of a defective valve, the cold, the higher-than-planned pressure of the atmosphere, and a sequence of control inputs that would only be used in a rejected takeoff combined with sudden turbulence in the wind which has up to now been amazingly steady. It was caught by the fuzzer* Marlene wrote, a fact which she is very smug about, and fixed without exceeding the 'unknown unknowns' time included in the estimate.

*no relation

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Okay. Good work.

He writes up a mission plan: Mounting one of two recovered satellites in the cargo bay mounts, takeoff, and then ascent to an orbital height of 120 kilometers and deployment of the satellite by the cargo bay's mission arm. The orbital path will be a polar orbit and nearly perpendicular to the 'green band'. It will cover different parts of the planet over the course of a year rather than a single day, as the planet is only rotating fast enough to stay tidally locked with its star. The second one would hopefully be set into an equatorial orbit, a more ambitious flight plan requiring orbital plane adjustments and more delta-V... He doesn't think they can get all the way up to higher orbits where it would take fewer satellites to maintain constant coverage, though. Maybe if they ended up building a boost module, later, for one of their pre-fab satellites to dock to, but all the planning for them involved their already being in high orbit.

The satellite itself is a one-ton behemoth packed with computers, sensors, solar panels, and transceiver equipment. It has been checked over by himself and a few electronics specialists, and appears to be in good working order, though with the rough treatment of the landing systems you can never be certain.

Comments, concerns, etc, welcome.

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She thinks it through to herself... If he's circumnavigating the planet, and they don't currently know the weather on the bright side, is that going to be a problem? No, he'll be safely high up. The rovers searching for a path to the green band have mapped the terrain enough for a safe approach to Nivis from that direction. The shuttle will be very hot coming in - physically hot, not slang for 'excessive kinetic energy' - and the landing gear should be shielded from that, but just to be safe, she wants to install some extra temperature sensors on the gear? Touchdown when the gear is hot is probably fine, but as the shuttle slows down there might be a speed and temperature which would make the gear dig into the ice and shear off, causing catastrophic damage. And maybe touchdown isn't fine, actually, if it's hard enough. In extreme cases, a belly landing might be safer. She needs to run the calculations...

(And it's mortifying that she didn't think of this earlier.)

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Potatoes! Start with a few small ones on the side, boiled with salt, as a teaser. Then hasselback potatoes, latkes, patatas bravas, and now it's rice! Sushi first, obviously, with greens and egg and synthetic fish. Then fried rice, patatas bravas again (to keep them on their toes) this time with Mexican rice on the side, a comforting stir-fry, and then burgers with rice buns and french fries. Rice noodles for lunch and then a whole Chinese feast for dinner, poke for lunch and then, surprise, time for the Indian feast for dinner with pilaf and aloo saag and aloo paratha and paneer tikka masala.

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Hey Dr. Shor,

What are the differences between people and animals and things like the alien's image machine?

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"If you're asking about how human magic knows what sort of creature it's targeting, I have no idea. If by 'people', you mean creatures that think, then I actually believe that it's not such a clear distinction. Rats and fish are both animals, but rats are a lot smarter than fish, which are smarter than bugs. Human magic makes species that are as smart as humans, but being smart can't be solely the domain of magic, because male humans are just as smart as female humans. Catfolk are smarter now than they used to be, so if you put that much effort into breeding rats, could you eventually get something as smart as a human?"

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Siamek waves him to stop and quickly writes

alien machine math

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"The alien's image machine does math? Which means it's smart, but you think it's not a person? Because you mean something different by 'person'. Like, do we expect it to behave like a person or do we expect to have to keep it in a cage like a rat? Does it have feelings?"

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...yeah, 'does it have feelings' is close enough.

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"...I don't know. I don't know anything about how the alien's machine works. In people, feelings are sometimes connected to liefling-substances and sometimes they aren't. It's possible the machine might do math where there's a number for each liefling-substance?"

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You can have feelings without being aware of them. Can you be aware without having feelings?

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"How are those things different? People can have difficulty perceiving their emotions... I heard of a person with brain damage once who didn't seem to have feelings, but I don't know how you would tell if they actually didn't have feelings or just couldn't perceive them."

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That's horrible!

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"It was unpleasant reading, yes. But possibly not unpleasant for the patient."

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Not good either!

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"Presumably.

One of my classmates asked why the patient was kept alive like that, and the answer is that doctors should not kill without a way to know for sure that a patient is suffering, or some similar explicit request, or else people will be afraid of doctors.

I suppose an undine would be able to tell?"

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Nod.

Without an undine, can you tell the difference between being aware of most things just not feelings, and being aware of nothing?

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"The patient couldn't answer questions about feelings and desires, but could answer questions about other things."

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Can you answer a math problem without being aware of the math?

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"No?"

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Siamek writes on his tablet, holding it hidden with his upper pair of hands. With one lower hand, he holds up three fingers, as briefly as he can. Then two fingers the other lower hand. Then, immediately, he flips over the tablet:

How many?

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"Five.

Huh.

And you think a machine could do math like that, not being aware of it?"

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Nod.

And I think that would be bad.

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"Why?"

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Because he's on the edge of losing himself like that, he can't say, because it would hint at his magic.

The alien said the machine is not a person.

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And of course a bug-species wouldn't rely on the usual definition of a person as a humanoid who talks.

"You would prefer that it was a person in that sense, aware of being enslaved to do math?"

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Nod!

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"Would you prefer a person like that, who had feelings and suffered from slavery, or a person who was aware of the math but didn't have feelings?"

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Feelings.

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"Alright. Personally I find it distressing to think about the possibility that rats might have feelings, or taddies.

I know some frogold doctors who are more like you; they would be upset if they were sucking pus out of a patient and learned that the patient didn't have feelings, didn't have any suffering to heroically alleviate. For myself, though... A mouthful of pus is just a sensation, and it only bothers me if I let it. I'd rather neither myself nor the patient suffer over it."

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Siamek finds Harqa.

Can you sing to a rat? A fish? A bug?

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"Yes. Rats respond like people. Fish respond a little bit. Bugs only feel a few kinds of things. They will change what direction they're walking if you sing a bit of gentle touch at them, but get acclimated easily like fish. Anything stronger makes them catatonic for a while after you stop singing, in the same way no matter what sensation you give them."

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How does that compare with undines?

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"Undines can't get anything from rats or fish or bugs. What have you learned about the alien?"

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"Neither the alien nor his image machine is a poet. He meant it literally when he said that a 'radio' is for talking to people far away, and that's what a warbler is! It's a way to quote sound in magic-sound, without translating it into a magic-sound language. I think the aliens literally just talk out loud to a machine that warbles and then another machine hears the warble and speaks out loud to a different alien. The speech includes some of the 'English' words Miguel says but I haven't learned enough to tell what the other aliens are saying."

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Before Miguel leaves for the diplomatic center, Harqa confronts him, accompanied by Merta.

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"Harqa would like to say that Koy is neither a democracy nor a country ruled by elves. Because Hestlierre said that FD is a democracy and all the other countries are ruled by elves, and that's not true. Koy is ruled by a council selected randomly. They have shrines, but no elves live in Koy. Once a year, they hire an elph from Nosimasna to visit the shrines and give advice to the council, but the elph is not in charge."

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The journey to the diplomatic center will take two cycles. First, to the edge of the ice by barge, down the elevator (which is just another barge, with handles at the top of a rigid frame instead of at the ends of a slab), and carried in the arms of an equartier through a dark tube to the town of Kef, which is full of people and fire and stone buildings and the noise of the ironworks. A warm bath is available, then sleep in a stone box with clean blankets. The second cycle is back into the windy embrace of an equartier on the top of a starlit wall, passing over another town ("Archer's Tabard"), and eventually down into the ground, coming out into a dark humid room. He can rest here, in "Argolake", under the slightly-gray sky and cold drizzle, and then the last equartier ride is through a wide tunnel with barges and an underground river. They split off into a narrow path, and slow, and then the equartier sets him down to walk the last ten minutes by himself though an ordinary underground corridor lit by catfolk.

The diplomatic center itself is mostly just a bunch of tall rooms, each with a bed, a table, a tray of sand, a lot of chairs including some unusually large and small ones, and a small window in the ceiling admitting steady orange light. There's a conference room, and - everyone acts like this is a big deal - a garden on top with tables and a squiggly walking path, surrounded by farmland.

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He'll definitely keep Koy in mind. It's good to hear about less influential countries that are less able to control the agenda, too. He even writes a note about it.

The elevator nearly makes him nope right back out of the whole process. They're supposed to have safety features! Nearly does, not actually does. The equatier rides get accepted on 'I've already come this far' logic.

He takes photos of the towns and infrastructure as he passes. It's honestly really cool how things are done with idiosyncratic 'magic' and otherwise low tech. And, yeah, this big building is clearly a lot of effort at this scale. If they're really having trouble with food because the planet is either blasted wasteland or frozen wasteland, it makes sense that a garden is a big luxury.

He diligently teaches English to whoever is interested and avoids more talk about trade and politics and so on except as incidental to teaching English. Exodus can do a lot of things. He's sure that teaching them will go better later, when they know more English.

He's not a diplomat. He's a farmer. Please don't try to influence him. He wouldn't know what to do with it.

He also takes notes on cultural stuff, magic types, different countries, and does also make a spreadsheet with English to Sotalese equivalents, or the best he can do with a normal keyboard, and take photos of long Sotalese passages, to help speed up a computer smart person's attempt at a translator later.

He might be interested in farming practices if there is time away from English lessons. He can't contribute much directly though. They clearly know what they're doing here and and big advances on the state of the art are techy enough he wants to wait for proper contact.

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Safety features? He's surrounded by a flock of harpies, what could go wrong?

Got it, he's not a diplomat. See how his room is not the fanciest room available? That one is reserved for the future diplomat.

They have fertilizer (nightsoil and powdered minerals) and crop rotation and a great diversity of varieties. No pesticides, but not a lot of pests; apparently birds are mostly extinct, swarms of bugs can be baited and killed by lieflings, and diseases can be cured by ents. They use a lot of manual labor for tilling and planting and weeding and harvesting - especially gently harvesting from long-lived plants. Irrigation is through buried pipes. They don't use machines much. They don't have any farm animals at all. Their biggest worry is the wind eroding the soil - they spend a lot of effort making more soil with werewolf magic and importing nutritional supplements - and are eager to learn about hydroponics.

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The tube reaches the end of the area cleared by Chime and stops. If Audron's aircraft proves unworkable they can resume, but for now, the assumption is that the tube over the ice is not going to reach the aliens; its only purpose now is access to the ice for science and mining. The extra catfolk hired by the FD and Lei are staying - presumably Allheart or Sota or some other relevant polity made a deal providing water to FD and Lei - and there's lots for them to do: strengthen the ice tube, experiment with ways of making ice that keep the tube warmer, deepen and widen the supports for the floor, catalog the kinds of ice and the shapes it makes, and build a scoop near the elevator to catch wind and push it into the tube going darkward so that openings in the tube no longer let in raw frigid air hazardous to everyone who isn't a catfolk or boark.

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Chime and Siamek go to practice with Audron. "Neither of us are great flyers, but we do have wings. If the turbowing is about to crash, how should we help? Also, are we light enough to count as only half a person each? Then we could take Hestlierre and have space for two more, one Lei and one neutral... I'd like at least one more catfolk, with Tolesli from Lei as a natural choice. Maybe one tengu body, for communication and for additional flight, and I think they're pretty light too."

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If they get stranded, he could call for help, and FD might equip a rescue mission with another radiobug to find him. But without Mofil here to approve that comment, he shouldn't say it. The very thought makes him sick.

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The turbowing gently floats into the air, slightly wobbly and turning ponderously by tilting strongly to one side. Everything looks quite far away once you're up high. The wind tugs over their faces over the open top of the long trough in the central body where the seats are.

After careful weighing he agrees to a passenger list of himself, Chime, Siamek, Hestlierre, and two more if they're light enough. It'll be crowded. They can rearrange the chairs... Everyone will need to bundle up even with catfire to warm them. Because of the wind.

A crash would probably occur at around thirty or so klicks an hour; That is a fast sprint for a non-equartier, which isn't too terrible an impact. He thinks it would be best to brace yourself as best you can and just endure the hit? Duck down and curl up and wait for it to stop. They can wear rope harnesses like some harpy-barge riders do. The alternate is just jumping out and catching yourself as a flyer but if they're crashing there's not going to be much distance between the turbowing and the ground, so you'd hit immediately. Or hit the tail of the wing on your way out or something.

He's going to keep reducing the craft's weight until it stops completely, if there's an accident.

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"We can't help in any way, so it doesn't crash at all?"

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"Maybe you could? Maybe not. The metal wings are a lot bigger than yours! And you have to do counter-intuitive stuff to prevent a crash sometimes, like diving to pick up more speed. But even if you could it makes sense to prioritize your own safety, not trying to prevent a crash. We can build a new turbowing, we can hope for rescue if we crash in the middle of the ice, we can't bring back the dead. I guess - tell me if the metal starts to sound off, especially after any violent maneuvers?"

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Nod. "I will monitor the metal. I guessss there might not be anything I can do to keep us from crashing, but... diving to pick up speed seems straightforward to me. Vampires mostly glide - we can't frolic in the air like you with your strength and magic - so I know what it feels like to go too slowly and drop like a lost feather. I'll accept that you're the pilot and we shouldn't do anything surprising in an emergency, if you're sure, but... I would rather crash doing what I can to help, than jump free to save myself and freeze to death in the drydark because the catfolk died."

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"We don't really know what is the safest thing to do yet. This is all new. I've talked to people and if we hit a wall straight on at the turbowing's minimum flying speed this is about equivalent to - falling twice your height without anything to slow down. People die from that sometimes but they survive it sometimes too, if they protect their head or land well. And I think the most likely scenario that causes a crash, which is unlikely if I'm careful and cautious, is a piloting mistake that ends up in a spin. I wish we had permission to bring my friend Lenora in on this, she has a feel for it after months of controlling a little one with a cursor..."

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"Ayyy ya, politics. If you think it's best to stay put and endure the impact, okay... Is there something we can do in a 'spin', on your signal, practicing now? Is there something a swarming tengu could do?"

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"Rudder opposite the spin. So if we're turning right, you can fling your wing out left. We can practice signaling that but I don't want to start a spin on purpose."

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"Okay, captain."

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The tengu, once they arrive, is also amenable. And, with their contacts in Nitatlel, Sota, and the length of the expedition, they count as reassuringly substantial neutral representation.

"How much would Lenora increase the likelihood of success of this mission?"

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Shit, he has to be honest... No lying just to get her involved, much as she'd want to be.

"...Probably not that much. A second trained pilot to take over when I get tired would be good, but the list of people coming along is already full and she's FD like me, so, politics." He throws his hands up. "Training someone who's already going to pilot would be a pretty big delay. I think she's going to be better at training people to fly turbowings in the future than me, though. Like, going forward, after this flight. I was planning on making one with two sets of controls, for teaching, but uh, it's only been about... Ten cycles? So we haven't yet. ... I should bring some wakeleaves from a liefling for myself, the trip is likely to take hours and I might need them, I can recover later."

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"Is there a reason we can't land on the ice for you to rest? We'd have to pack more food? Not that much more, though..."

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"Would it be safe to take the chairs out to save weight? It's nice to sit comfortably and enjoy the view, here, but I expect to be cuddling close to the catfolk when we're in the drydark."

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"I don't want to land on ice repeatedly. There could be crevasses or upraised chunks of ice. But we could, if it's better than flying while exhausted. If we end up flying back and forth a lot maybe we build a rest area that's easy to land on and has... Reflective sheets of metal to shine catfire off and spot from a distance and see where the flat bit is, or something, or a catfolk whose job is to wait at the waystation and light it up. That sounds like a terrible job, though. And if we take the chairs out it'll be standing for hours, and that's a lot more tiring than you expect when the thing you're standing on is moving around too."

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"I was imagining lying down, or sitting on the floor? If it's possible to pass low over a landing spot, I can check that it's safe before we loop around and land; does that work?"

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"I guess that works, we can get blankets. I still need my chair because I have to keep my hands and talons on the controls. ...I feel really doomy about this. Low visibility, uncertain terrain..."

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"Landing to rest, or the whole mission?"

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"Landing to rest. Landing and taking off is the most dangerous part."

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"What if we planned to always land and take off with a tengu swarm? - If you're willing? Or would another harpy help?"

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"Yes, I'm happy to do that."

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"Yeah, that should work... Well, let's practice that a couple of times? And then we'll be ready to go."

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Does Miguel want to come to Orocide now? No? Such a skeptic.

Oh well, he's not a diplomat anyway.

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Lei proposes that the bounty of water be sent straight across the chartreuse, rather than turning along it tengward along hundreds of klicks of new aqueducts. The expanded habitable area can be divided three ways between Lei, FD, and the Allheart Alliance.

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Then there will be parts of Lei touching countries that aren't FD.

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So what? Or do you not want to admit that you need a steady supply of malcontents to sustain your population?

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We do not! Because it's not true. We don't want you to get all expansionist.

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If people prefer Lei to their other options, we need land for them, ideally at the expense of the country they fled. And they need a smaller area of land in Lei because we're so efficient, so it's in your benefit.

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How about the Lei portion is entirely brightward of the FD portion.

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No way. Then you'd control our water.

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Let's take a step back and discuss what we actually want. Could there be a new country that's not part of the FD but is a democracy that values freedom? Could there be a new ally of Lei, like Nkezet? And we'll start a new country, too, which resolves our own internal dispute between Sota and Nitatlel.

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That is biased against us. A country founded by Lei is Lei. A new free democracy will of course be a bastion of freedom and democracy but is not guaranteed to commit to the cause with the same certainty.

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People of Ansaf: observe this bastion of freedom.

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We're not violating anyone's freedom! We're just worried about coordination problems in international relations.

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So tragic that you can't use elves for that.

By the way, we want to attend any ancient shrines found in the drybright, with all recovered memories published truthfully and completely, as verified by undine.

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That sounds like a ploy to breed from an undine.

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Not if you develop a reputation of safely hosting diplomatic visitors!

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Also, you're just admitting that we were telling the truth the whole time?

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About that, sure. We haven't planted new apples in decades.

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People of Ansaf: observe the Lei's suspiciously narrow assertion. If they're even telling the truth this time, they just admitted to treating a vulnerable species in a way worse than anything in Ansaf's history. They're proud to still be doing it!

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It's better than genocide.

Our long memory is full of regrets, but at least we don't make the same mistake twice.

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Audron's turbowing is a vaguely sleek metal shape, twenty feet long and with a twenty-six foot wingspan. There are two sets of wings stacked atop each other and slightly offset, which were originally covered in thin canvas, but pounded-flat metal quickly proved less prone to tears and wouldn't you know it there's plenty of Molybdenum going around right now. They're connected by bars and wires holding them stiff. The original wing-warping scheme doesn't really work as you make it bigger, instead they have large flaps moved by a clever scheme of levers and wires. There's also a broad tail. The turbine is actually under the main body of the craft, near the front, with a small 'mouth' under the nose and a little hatch to light the fire-rod and more levers to control the air intake. This has the convenient side effect of spreading a lot of the heat along the bottom of the metal bucket. 

"Isn't she beautiful?" Audron sighs, and performs a thorough pre-flight inspection. Everything is in order.

The whole ensemble stack up into the bucket with a rope ladder. It only has one seat- For Audron to stay at the controls. The inside is full of exposed spars and structural wires, which have been hastily covered with blankets and little nubbins of rounded-off stone for the most worryingly protruding bits, while the outside is smooth and covered.

And then they light the turbine, and with some assistance by a brief swarm of Tengu bodies the craft trundles along to speed, the smooth skids sliding along the ice, and soon lifts slowly into the air. They're off.

It'll be a while. The turbine and wind isn't that loud (it's chilly though, or rather it's REALLY COLD and he needs a bit of catfire up near his face please) and even if there's nothing out there he doesn't want to take his eyes off the little wind gauge and pressure bulb. There's also a spirit level to try and give an indication of whether they're tilting that isn't relying on harpy gutfeel, but it is deeply unreliable, as they found out to their chagrin. Maybe they can sing! At least the chill wind on his face keeps him alert! Find the bright side!

Every few minutes Chime should double check that they're clear ahead, and Siamek should give him mysterious navigation instructions.

It takes a while.

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The colony at Exodus has been putting down kind of a lot of radio sources, actually.

There are 'warblers', translating sound into radio and back again. There are 'poets', transmitting immense strands of information to each other according to arcane rules at a very fast pace. There are other things that are neither of those, simpler than poets but more mechanical than warblers, dozens of them barking out a string of information once every minute, like clockwork. One component is obviously the current time. The others are less clear but don't seem to very much, just slightly.

There's also a VHF Omni-directional Range system, an air-search navigational RADAR in a tower, and an Instrument Landing System set up at Exodus proper, all of which is indistinct noise at this range.

 

One of the warblers is distinctly off to the right and closer to the plane than the rest of the noise coming in over the horizon. If you look really closely, you might even see a bobbing light on the ice below.

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Oh, Chime is checking every few seconds. She doesn't have anything better to do.

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Siamek directs them towards the place with all the warblers, since that's where the aliens are. The other signals are make the trip more entertaining, though!

One in particular is two continuous tones, with tremolo like a warbler but not modulated to quote anything, and one a pitch tremolo and one a volume tremolo. Both at the same speed, 36 times per [Ansaf standard] second. As they get closer, he notices that the phase between them is shifting a little... like the 'directional aspiration' in his native language! He double checks as they go, comparing the audible angle with the apparent angles between it and Lacrimos and it and the Great Radiobug, and sure enough, it's telling them what heading it sees them at. If that's why the aliens created it, for navigation, they should use it to approach Exodus in the intended polite route... which he has no way of knowing, oh well.

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Another angle-hummer!

And now a beam of steady consonant tones: a chord with two much lower false notes. And now that he's thinking about phase, he notices that the phase of the false notes shifts as they cut across the beam. Something else for navigation? Implying that Exodus expects there to be aircraft within the beam... He directs them to go back into it.

And there's another navigation beam! This one is for vertical position and points down, but there aren't any warblers down there... and now they're past it. Probably fine, but time to land soon? He catches Audron's attention and points down.

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By now they've been seeing a lot of the aliens' lights for the last while. They're lighting up large stretches of the ice field with miniature suns, spilling white across the ground. It's hard to tell much detail, but there are large boxy shapes down there, and what looks like figures in orange heavy clothing like the one Miguel was wearing. There are strings of lights on poles obviously working to define a road, or rather, several roads in diverging paths. There's enough light around here that you can even see the shape of the terrain from what spills out, faintly. Visible in a valley is a series of distant structures festooned with more lights... One of them is trailing a thin stream of steam into the air, leaving a white trail over the drydark.

It's exciting and beautiful.

Audron looks around for a good spot to land and immediately spots one in the distance. A long road of lights, two sets in a line, far up ahead. He turns and flies towards them, descending gently. (They're soon above the ILS's path, the lumbering orbital shuttle having a fairly steep glide slope compared to a biplane lifted by magic.)

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He's trying not to act too alarmed but, also, this is objectively kind of alarming. He finds Lucy's office, at the jog.

"Lucy. There is a biplane with aliens in it approaching the colony."

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"...You finally decided to grow a sense of humor?" She asks hopefully.

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"No. I'm dead serious. We can see them on the tower RADAR we set up for shuttle operations. We can see them with telescopes."

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"Okay. You'd never bullshit me about this. Aliens, fuck. I suppose it was a possibility..."

She makes a call on her tablet.

"Mary, please come to my office right away. There's something you need to see."

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"Yeah, I'm aware, boss."

What, did you think she didn't have a guy reporting to her from the shuttle team? What do you take her for?

"Uh, this is gonna be all over the colony in an hour."

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A warbler is now shouting directly at the biplane.

"Attention unidentified aircraft, Nivis flight control. You are flying without ground contact. If you can understand this, please respond. Over."

"Attention unidentified aircraft, Nivis flight control. We are clearing the runway for you and emergency teams are on standby, please acknowledge. Over."

"Attention unidentified aircraft, Nivis flight control. Do you need assistance? We count six souls on board. We can help you land if we can understand you. Over."

And so on.

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They're talking in English! He can't tell what they're saying, though.

(He does not mention anything.)

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"There's a nice long flat strong area below us now! It goes on for a while!"

Which Audron can probably see with his eyes, but just to be thorough!

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Hestlierre waves and flashes in Morse code: HELLO EXODUS

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Morse code?? He does actually know morse code, as ancient as it is. Some quick scrambling finds the spotlight controls.

DO YOU NEED HELP

And then a bit later:

YOU ARE FREE TO LAND

WELCOME TO NIVIS

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"Is there somewhere a little bit isolated from the main colony or anywhere sensitive we could bring them to?"

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"Sure, we've got a good amount of room thanks to all the Modules. There's some empty storage areas and a conference room down on the first floor of Seven-C."

They still lost a whole bunch of Modules, but a lot more of them survived than it first looked like.

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Dr. Montero knocks on the office door and says through it, "Hello. I'd like to offer my presence in a xenobiological capacity."

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She has a headache. She listens to the feed from the flight control tower.

"They know English, apparently. And morse code. What the fuck... Dr. Montero! You might as well come in, you clearly know what's going on."

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"They know English, apparently, and appear to be humanoid and come in several varieties. If you know anything about theoretical xenobiology you know how strange this is."

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"I have no idea what to think. Let's just... Wait for them to land, see what they say, and go from there. I'll head over to Seven-C and start, uh, organizing for it, I guess. Mary... Post some guards. Armed. We don't want people bothering our guests. Or them getting lost."

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"As you say, ma'am."

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"If you make first contact while armed, just be aware that is what you're doing, Navigator."

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"I'm going to review the charter to see what exactly we can and can't do to keep people away from the aliens. And what you can and cannot order us to do, ma'am."

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"I understand, and that's all reasonable. But let's get to it and hopefully get some answers?"

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The plane coasts to a stop on the runway and its jet engine (from the sound of it) winds down. The aliens hurry out the back, with the two who are on fire blocking the wind for the others. There are ten of them, five humanoids and five birds, and they seem eager to follow directions into the conference room in Seven-C.

They're a little bit smaller than human-average, with the exception of the giant beetle, and the birds, who are large for birds but less than four feet tall.

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The people with the fire have, well, feline features. They take it easy on the fire once they're indoors, showing that one is all-black and one is black-and-white. They're not wearing much more than cargo shorts.

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The person with bat wings and very fine brown fur stays at the back of the group, looking around. She's wearing high-waisted pants, a grey cape, and an orange balaklava which she pulls off - the tips of her 'fingers' seem adequately dextrous - and tucks under one wing.

(She does not examine the room with echolocation. If they've never heard of vampires they might have secrets on the other side of the walls.)

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The shiny black beetle waves his antennae in a manner that maybe seems friendly if you're a beetle-person.

(oops)

The shiny black beetle stops waving his antennae and keeps them folded down behind him.

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The birds keep a watchful perimeter and look over the room.

Foomp Whump Woomf Three of them vanish.

(Reviewing the footage frame by frame will show that they implode into balls of black feathers in a fraction of a second, with the pressure change you'd expect.)

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The black-and-white person glances around, especially at the humanoid with feathered wings, and steps forward. "Hello. We are very happy to talk to you, Exodus - naivihs. We are people on this planet. Welcome to this planet.

We learned English from one human. He is safe. He is in safe place.

We have many things to trade. We say, human think very funny, but we say we have magic. We want to trade magic for many things.

I speak English. Not well. He" Siamek "doesn't speak English but he hear and write English. They" he points at both tengu bodies "doesn't speak English but can say words slowly to human in far away safe place."

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The room is metal. The walls are some sort of weird plaster, and also metal. The floor is metal. The ceiling is metal. There's a stack of crates in the back, as if they were setting this up quickly and didn't get them all. There's a big plastic-and-metal table, and a dozen aluminum folding chairs, and warm air coming in from vents along the floor, and a large screen at the head of the table that's currently showing an abstract flowy-color screensaver. There's a wifi access point, a small box on the ceiling that's poet-ing away.

(And cameras. Yep. Some of those.)

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At the table are - most of the upper officers, Lucy, Shen, Mary, and Dr. Montero, and an aide each. Eight humans, to all appearance, three women and five men.

Lucy nods slowly. "I am Lucy Carver, Navigator. Person who finds where to go. I am the most senior officer of Exodus who did not die, so the rules of Exodus say I am in charge for now. We call this place Nivis now, not Exodus. First, you talked to a human from Exodus? Shen, pull up the casualty list. I'm very glad to hear that, even if it is just one. What is their name?"

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"Mm."

Tap tap tap. Shen's PDA poets to the roof-poet, and receives some information back. 

"I have it."

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This is so cool!

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"Pleased-to-meet-you, Lucy Carver."

Saying the name might cause drama, but he doesn't have a choice.

"Their name is Miguel Hernandez." Do any of them look suddenly afraid?

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Nope. No major reaction at all from any of them.

"Miguel Hernandez, Hydroponics. Noted as missing, presumed dead. I'm sure people will be relieved to know he's alright. Thank you."

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She relaxes a tiny bit. 1106/1500 --> 1107/1500.

"Thank you for rescuing him. I'll make sure to announce it. You must have been flying for hours in that thing. Do you need to rest? Do you need to eat? Magic... I saw the - bird - are the birds one person? It is hard to say 'I don't believe it' to something you see clearly."

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He didn't quite catch all of that... "Eat, thank you!" They have food, but it's important to start building an interdependent relationship. "We are six people. One, twoowoo, three, four, five, six.

Miguel say that one person here hurt him. Reason Miguel was far away from Exodus and walk on ice for a long time. He doesn't say name, say he want to talk to you and say name, but I say this now because I think to know this is important to you." And so, now that Nivis is warned, the perpetrator is less able to sabotage the talks to keep the secret.

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"I think we might be talking too fast, Lucy. I am Mary Hersch, I am in charge of Security. That means it is my job to make people safe. I'm very interested in investigating this. I'd like to keep this a secret until we can do that. That means not telling anyone else." And locking the audio recording. "Are you talking to Miguel with magic?"

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"Can everyone here eat all food that humans can eat?"

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"Yes, we eat human food. I think so. We have many species, all eat same food safe for a short time. If hurt we have magic." Although it would be unfortunate if they all got poisoned and the expedition had to build a whole new turbowing to rescue them or send a liefling. And, long-term, they would have dietary needs: Siamek needs specific raw vegetables, vampires need occasional bugs, and catfolk need a little meat even with the best bloodsquash and catbeans.

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"Miguel, we talk to Exodus!"

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"It is very surprising that people on a different planet look the same and eat the same things. Maybe we both came from the same place. It is almost as surprising as 'magic'. I am a doctor, a person who looks at people who feel bad or hurt or sick and tries to make them okay."

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They prepared for this. Sort of. He can just pull six trays of whatever-was-on-in-the-cafeteria from the foil warmer bag, utensils included.

"This is what everyone here is eating today. We have already eaten." He'll pass the trays out. 

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He drops his current conversation like a hot rock with a quick apologetic look.

"-Oh! You found them! Is everyone alright? What's going on there?"

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The food is rice, beans with cloves and cinnamon, vegetables sauteed in garlic, and fried strips of oddly-uniform meat.

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"Maybe we and you are from same place, yes!"

He speaks with the tengu in a foreign language... "Yes, we talk to Miguel now."

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"Auh ya fauhnged them! Is every'un alright? What's guhing on there?"

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She gets it first. Living radio. "Miguel, I'm Mary Hersch, head of Security. Please tell me everything you can, in as much detail as you can. Your pod number was number twenty one, correct?"

      Miguel recognizes Mary's name, and tells the story, growing rather angry and upset now that he's thinking about it again. Ahmat Singh, the motive of - some kind of jealousy or protectiveness over Marisa Singh, his sister. He admits he can't remember the words or much detail, the whole situation was very stressful, but he thinks his PDA and the suit computers were sabotaged by Ahmat. He reads out the error messages, it sounds like some kind of diagnostic mode.

"Please be assured we're going to do our best to get you justice, Miguel. I'm going to have people inspect the pod to verify your story, and we'll hold and question Ahmat. We'll get to the bottom of this. It's a bit difficult to talk like this so we can talk more later, but if you want to return to Exodus- Now named Nivis- With the help of our new neighbors, we'll be very glad to have you back. We might be able to send a vehicle for you too, we'll figure it out. And thank you for letting us speak to each other." A polite nod.

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Lucy has been watching everyone's expressions, trying to get a read on how they're taking the things being said, their surroundings, the food... She feels lost and confused, but only almost lost, which is an uncomfortable experience. Like she should be doing better.

...That was an ersatz radio, powered by magic. Could magic intercept their communications? Spy on them? Maybe it's advanced technology, 'magic' in only name... She refreshes a page on her PDA and watches to see if there's any reaction.

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He's... He's too emotional to keep doing English lessons right now. He needs a break. Hopefully everyone will understand. He'll go walk on the roof garden.

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Siamek has already figured out that PDAs are a kind of poet - Miguel's PDA just wasn't doing it for some reason - but this tells him something new: the name of Lucy Carver's PDA.

(He doesn't react much, and not legibly to humans, but his mandibles open slightly.)

Now if only he could get a look at what it's displaying. Later. He'll be sneaky about it!

For now he just focuses his attention on it in particular.

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"Thank you for the food! This is very good." Seems like the others are enjoying it too, although Siamek passed his meat strips to the catfolk.

"What kind of meat is this? 

We have gift for you too!" He puts on the table the following objects from his pocket: 

A fipple flute made of rock, like the emergency whistles they all have around their necks but larger and with finger holes. It makes a quiet low sound. Looking into the holes will show that the internal bore is all coiled up.

A ring of rock about 12cm wide, holding several thin layers of glass, mostly clear but with colored bits, arranged to show a pastoral sunset landscape, with a 3d effect from combining the layers.

A metal ring with an iridescent rainbow finish. Close examination will show that it has tiny parallel grooves, uneven, with tool marks resembling those left by a hand chisel.

A stone bracelet which unscrews into two separate parallel rings, revealing compartments in one of the halves containing tiny woven-reed sculptures. The other half has a small hole on the inside, feeding into a single toroidal compartment in which there are loose fibers of reed.

A pair of brown-and-grey gloves sized for a human, made from yarn with nålbinding. They're soft.

A wooden brush with wooden bristles, carved from a single piece of wood which, if the grain is to be believed, grew into that shape, bristles and all.

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"Thank you for the gifts. We didn't expect you so we didn't prepare anything, but we can find something I'm sure."

Seems like mostly art objects? Diplomatic enough. They will be passed around appreciatively. The glass landscape is pretty. The wooden brush gets the most interest, that would be really difficult to do normally...

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"The meat is called Scop. It did not come from an animal. We have made a species of tiny life that grows into Scop when fed properly. It's easier to look after than animals in some ways, and more difficult in other ways. It's safe and good for humans to eat."

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"I'll make sure to convey the compliment to the kitchen staff."

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"Wow! 

Do you want to talk about trade now? Scop is a very good thing. We trade magic for learn how to do scop?"

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"We might want to trade. I want to learn about each other before we do. Can we learn how to do magic? -We should all say who we are and what we do."

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Lucy, Mary, and Dr. Montero already did that earlier. The four aides introduce themselves and give a brief description of their occupation. An engineer, a security person, someone from maintenance, and a nurse.

"I am Shen Takagi, I - operate flying things like what you came here with. When I'm not doing that I organize things."

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"Can't learn magic. Many species, one species have one magic. Can't learn, doesn't need to learn, just have magic. Miguel say you don't have magic, but maybe, you have only one species, you have magic but you can't know you have magic. Maybe talk and then you know you have magic.

My name is Hester." Which is easier to pronounce for English speakers than [ˈxḛɕʎɘrɜ]. "I think about aliens for a long time, think about how to talk to aliens, how to trade. Now my job is to talk.

His name is Audron. He think about flying things. He also see things happen and talk about things. Everyone like when Audron talk about things. 

Her name is Chime. She use magic to look at wind. If a mountain is in front of us, she say 'mountain! go left!'.

Their name is tengu. They use magic to talk to people far away."

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HELLO! MY NAME IS SEE AH MEHK. I USE MAGIC TO SAY WHERE NIVIS.

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"His name is Leslie." As Tolesli choose beforehand. "He use magic to do fire, flying thing go fast. I use same magic to same.

This planet have many countries. This important we here talk to you have people three kind of a country, names is FD and Lei and Allheart. I and Audron and Siamek have country FD. Chime and Leslie have country Lei. Tengu have country Allheart."

He translates all that into Sotalese and asks if anyone wants to add anything.

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"I want to know how they fly- Why else would they have a runway and a thing that tells where to land! But it can wait."

He brought a lot of paper and his hands are warm enough to start writing things now.

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...These people need actual air navigation instruments that aren't someone listening to the wind.

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'Magic exists and you can't have it. It's not like we're keeping it from you, you just can't.' Convenient. Should she be thinking in terms of international relations, not first contact? They're speaking English, their mannerisms are remarkably human. It probably is a better model...

"It's nice to meet you all! I think we can probably both do good from trade. That's almost always the case when people choose to trade."

Miguel has been teaching them English. Has he been giving science lectures? Who knows? There's no point being stingy about basic knowledge, it'll inevitably come out either way and that would just leave everyone suspicious and resentful of each other, and it's just a bad look even to everyone else in Nivis.

"As a gift, we will make three PDAs with some teaching on them, one for each country. They will take some time to make. Fire magic might be useful, finding things magic might be useful, but I do not know what other kinds there are. It sounds like there are a lot."

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"Thank you for the very good gift!

Good you want to trade. Yes, we have many kind of a magic. I want to talk to you about five best kind of a magic, this I think, you most want.

'Werewolf': change stone's shape. Music gift, werewolf make this. Werewolf can change big stone's shape, make house.

'Kappa': create air and water.

'Aasimar': hold things in place so they can't move or change. Aasimar can hold big things in place.

'Frogold': put things and take things." Hestlierre hands over another object: a hollow glass ball half full of water. "This is a gift and this is a example. In the past I didn't give you this, because this is not good gift, but now give you because this is good example. How does the water inside glass? Frogold put water. Also. How do we do glass?" He mimes sticking together two hemispheres with a burst of flame from his hands. "Glass need hot. If no frogold, frogold doesn't take air and put air, glass break. If frogold, glass doesn't break.

'Liefling': change people and animals. This is a gift and example." He takes out a small bag, like the gloves but not as well made, and from rougher fiber, and he opens it to show leaves inside it. "Eat leaf to see more when dark. When liefling most safe, do magic for one person. When liefling safe, do magic for species. When liefling maybe safe, do magic for all people. Liefling do this magic many times for all people and we experiment eat leaf and all times this is safe, but this is liefling do magic for all people, not liefling do magic for Lucy Carver or Dr. Montero. Maybe safe but not most safe. In the future three days, leaf doesn't have magic.

More kind of a magic we write." He gives them flat stone with very small indented writing, describing the same list of species that the Lei emperor asked Miguel about earlier. (Including undines and mouselings. The name of the species which is translated here as 'tengu' is written with a phonetic transcription of the Sotalese word for tengu, which matches what Hestlierre said was the name of the individual tengu.)

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Magic drugs to enhance night vision? Magic drug synthesis targeting individuals? Oh he wants to do SO many experiments. It's a shame the pharmacological analysis equipment, what pieces of it have survived or been salvaged anyway, is more desk-sized than PDA-sized. Hmm... Drugs do decay quickly in some cases...

Anyway. Yoink. 

"We also experiment to see whether things are safe to eat. I will use things to look at the leaf and what it does, and then maybe someone can try it. We must be careful with our health."

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"The pressure differential from cooling gas would be rather troubling if you're trying to do this by hand... It looks like it's by hand and, uh, magic, I guess. When we make light rods our glass machines fill them with special gas just before we melt and pinch the ends shut."

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What kind of things should they put in the gift of knowledge? Grade 9-12 stuff? Maybe college 101 level. General math, physics, biology, maybe 101 level engineering topics. Some user manuals for electronics. No detailed technical information, nothing that could build industry by itself... Sell that as a bonus later on. No nuclear beyond brief mentions. Maybe redact modern explosives and firearms to the extent that's possible? Include history and social/government topics, or no? Ugh, her bright idea is already giving her a headache.

She reads down the list. Looks Concerned at a couple of entries, pointing them out to Mary. Mind reading, and illusions, and animation of reed figures. Mary nods.

 

Lots to say. Lots to think about, if you take the 'magic' at face value.

"...We, the people of Exodus, are living here in the place we call Nivis because it is near where we crashed, not because it is the best place to live. We are not going to die here, but we are not very happy here. It is hard to build on the ice. Making houses or other places, places to work, places to put machines, that would be good. Is there - places to go that are not on the ice and not where people already are?"

"I think I don't understand kappa. If an aasimar holds a thing, is it held like that forever?" That would make a good rocket launchpad. Or foundations. "Can frogolds move things they can't see? I will let Dr. Montero ask about lieflings and understand them."

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That reminds him. "There is a danger you cannot see in the crash site. It is called radiation and is made from a broken reactor. If you get radioactive dust - dust that makes radiation - on you it can make you sick now, and make things grow inside you that should not grow years later. We had some people get sick this way. If it is okay, I can go get a machine that sees if you have radiation on you." 

Because they didn't go through the standard decon in Maintenance because someone didn't want to show them Maintenance. He gives Lucy a slight look.

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Well, so much for not mentioning nuclear tech at all. She nods, accepting the rebuke.

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They really need to find the bridge. Did someone KNOW the 'aliens' were here? Is it a competing colony that got here first and then was forgotten about for ages? Has the world just gone insane? The world doesn't make any sense anymore... Very little of this shows on his face.

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"Yes. If you want werewolf magic to make houses, this is more easy in places where there is no ice, where they can change the stone in the ground.

There are many places where there is a no ice. Some places are dark and some are bright. Now, no one live in these places. But we work hard to find Nivis and we find ice too. Ice is very important. Now, no one live in these places, but soon people live on ice and make water. Water is very important for live in bright places. Soon, we have many water and we want to live in the bright places too.

There are many places. Places for all countries and places for Nivis and many more places.  We all live many places and we all are happy. But this is important to say: if no one live in place now, in the future we don't know who live there. Not: if no one live in place now, Nivis live in all places.

Also, there is one place too, the safe place where Miguel is. People live there... and some Nivis people come live there too, so this is more easy to talk to all countries?

Kappa make air and water. In the past, no air and water. Now, there is air and water." He mimes being surprised by a flame appearing in his hand.

"Assimar hold one thing. If they want to hold a new thing, they must put down the old thing.

Frogold can move things they can't see. They think about a place and move the things in the place, not think about things.

Machine to look at radiation is good. This is not a big problem, but this is a small problem, thank you. Liefling can fix things grow inside person, but... fix so they don't die, not fix so they don't hurt."

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"If a kappa was in a room and made air and water, the room would weigh more than it did before? If a kappa room was floating and made air and the air went out a small hole, would the room move?"

That is... Impossible. But everything is impossible until it happens.

Also it would be infinite free propellant. The tyranny of the rocket equation, shattered even more than the Brigman Cores did. But you could do it with much less high-end equipment than the thirty-billion-dollar Brigman Cores. You could do it with a simple nuclear core rocket, a few tens of millions of dollars at most, not that dollars is the correct measure for their capabilities now,  creating superheated steam instead of the usual hydrogen. The specific impulse doesn't matter if you're getting more.

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He brings five leaves with him as he leaves to get a Geiger counter.

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Mary goes with him to tell the guards Dr. Montero is allowed to leave and come back.

"May we live in interesting times..." She muses quietly.

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"Huh... We'll have a lot to think about what magic is useful. You don't want to say 'Nivis can live in all places that people don't live in now'. I think I understand. We need a safe way to go off the ice. We were looking for one but have not found it yet. Maybe soon."

The satellite would neatly solve it. Also help with communications issues, especially if they launch the other one. How hard would it be to make more comms relays, they don't need to be the behemoths of the Aurora's original design... But she's not a satellite specialist.

"We thought the planet was like that. Burning hot sun. Too cold ice. And small in the middle good place... How many people live in Lei and FD and Allheart?"

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"Yes, I think that is how it works. Before Audron make his flying thing, we try to make a different flying thing with a room like that, but with a frogold instead of a kappa.

Many million people I think?"

This seems like a good time to translate what they've all said and check in with everyone else on the expedition.

Is Siamek folding his arms?

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He is not.

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"We have one thousand one hundred and seven, now that we know Miguel Hernandez is okay. While we wait for Dr. Montero to get back, does any person here want things? Things to write with for See-ah-mek? Different things to sit on? Things like that."

But yes, it does seem like time for a quick break. The Nivis-ers confer quietly on one end of the room and send a few emails too.

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"I have questions about politics. Miguel say that Nivis now have one person in charge, but in the future, have democracy. Is that right? Nivis people, do they like aliens? Some like and some don't like? We don't want to make people afraid. What do you say about how to not make people afraid?

For us, all people happy because to learn many good things like scop. We have many species and often we have new species so new alien species isn't a problem. But this is important to say about three kind of a country: FD and Lei are at war. Allheart isn't at war. Now FD and Lei are at war slowly and few people are hurt, but we are afraid because maybe in the future FD and Lei at war quickly and many people are hurt. Also we don't know in the future what everyone does. Maybe Allheart is at war. Maybe Nivis is at war. Very bad. FD is afraid because maybe Nivis say Lei is better, say FD must die. Lei afraid because maybe Nivis say FD is better, Lei must die. What do you say about this?"

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"War is among the most tragic of human endeavors. Ah... War is maybe the most sad thing people can do... Slow war is better than fast war, but no war would be better also. And if we can have war with less killing and hurting and less - a complicated thing I'm not sure you have words for, 'perfidy' or 'war crimes', things that just make it harder to talk to the other person in the war because you can't trust them, like saying 'we will not fight tomorrow' and then fighting anyway, or things that hurt people and don't even help you win the war, like hurting someone who isn't fighting. Those are bad too, and if there has to be a war it should not have those."

"It is right that in the future we will have democracy. Maybe soon, maybe in three hundred days. Going from one person in charge to democracy when we have places to live and food and things are okay is in the thing everyone said yes to when we left our old planet. That is why I can't say yes to big things for Nivis that last a long time. I can't say 'Lei is better' or 'FD is better'. I don't know things about Lei or FD. I don't want to do things fast and wrong. I want to do them slow and right. Also, I have not been elected. -Elected is chosen by democracy."

She is also aware that Hester is, self-admittedly, FD. Though there are Lei people here too. Ostensibly. Trust but verify?

"Nivis people all know about aliens. The people who saw Audron's flying thing talked about it to everyone. I think most people will like aliens! But some might be very upset. We think aliens that look like us and don't look like balls of water or made of rocks or have seven legs and three heads or something like that, are impossible. We think magic is impossible. Some people might think you are - making it look like you have magic, but don't, as a trick, and be mad. Also they might think, Nivis is special because we know lots of things and can make machines. Lei and FD and Allheart are special because people have magic. If Lei and FD and Allheart know how to make machines, Nivis still might not have magic! ...We aren't letting people come here just because they want to meet aliens right now. There would be too many and it might be bad."

People will want to know if the aliens destroyed Exodus, but she doesn't want to admit they don't know what happened there to the aliens. She has a gut feeling they'll find out tomorrow. There was a shape spotted by one of the rovers that was curved like the bridge's nose...

"I don't want war. I think war happens when a country thinks something more bad than the war is bad will happen, if they don't. If aliens don't want to do bad things to Nivis, probably we don't need war. If aliens want to do bad things to Nivis, well, that would be bad... But I want to say 'that is bad! stop!' and not do a war. I want to ask the same questions? What does Lei think about aliens? What does Allheart think about aliens? What does FD think about aliens? What does Allheart think about Lei and FD?"

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"How do countries at war talk and trust things they say? How do we learn to do that?" He hopes the answer isn't that it takes practice and the aliens have had a lot of practice having wars.

"When you go from your old planet, everyone say yes to what else?

Some people here think that aliens must look like balls of water too, but some people think that aliens must look like people here. A long time ago, there were many animal species and no people species. A long time ago but less long, there were many animal species and one people species and one magic, magic to make more magic. But we don't know if one people species and one magic are new at the same time or at a different time.

When magic make more magic, new people look like people here. Why? Maybe because people must look like the one most old people species? Or maybe because magic must look like this always on all planets? We don't know. Why do we have magic? A long time ago a person give us magic, maybe. That person choose animal that looks like them and give magic make people...or, that person choose smart animal and give magic? We don't know. Maybe same person give you magic but you don't know, or maybe you are that person but you don't know? People here think many things...

All people are special. All people are interesting. All people must be happy. If we learn to make machines, Nivis people are still special and interesting and must be happy. One old species, you are very interesting!

So I say, people think many things about aliens. People are afraid. Some people want Nivis help to war, kill Lei or kill FD... Some people are afraid because Nivis is angry and want to kill all people here for a reason we don't know. People think many things.

I don't want to say what FD thinks. Now, I say what think and what many people think. In the future when talk to Lei people and Allheart people, I say what FD thinks.

I explain. Audron's flying thing is small. Audron and I and Chime and Siamek must go to Nivis. That is three FD people and one Lei person and no Allheart people. We must also be one more Lei person and one Allheart person. To choose is hard because there are few options - Audron make flying thing in Allheart so there are few Lei people. One Lei person speak English but he is big and flying thing small. One Lei person speaks English not well, and she is big but less big, but big and the flying thing is small. One Lei person, Leslie, doesn't speak English but isn't big, and this is good we have two fire people. Allheart have many options and choose tengu.

So now how many people speak English? Two FD people, maybe Allheart person far away talk to tengu, no Lei people. Two, maybe one, zero. In the future, one, one, one? Then we can talk about what FD and Allheart and Lei think. Also, in the future, we speak better English. Do you want to learn our language?"

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"...I think countries at war talking and trusting is very hard and not easy to say much about when you know little English. Also hard to say is all the 'regs', 'regulations', the things written down people agreed to. One thing they say is, all people of Exodus will get food and house and visit doctors and be free in some ways... I think it is impressive - wow! - that you know English this much from talking to Miguel.

We want to visit the place for talking you said earlier. We want to learn your language. We want Miguel to come home. We want to keep all the pieces of Exodus that fell on the ice. We want to tell the people of Lei and FD and Allheart and other countries, Exodus and Nivis is here to make things, not break them."

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This is about when Dr. Montero returns with a Geiger counter. (He is also eagerly anticipating an e-mail with the results from the pharmacological auto-identifier and toxicity screener that is looking at one of the leaves.)

He will, moving slowly and telegraphing his movements, pass it near but not on everyone present, including Nivis's people and the table and chairs and door.

"There is a normal amount of radiation present. You all have a small amount more than we do, but it is not a dangerous amount. You won't get sick. You will have a little bit more chance of bad growth inside you, 'cancer', if you stay here a long time."

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"Thank you. When in the future we speak better English or you speak our language maybe we talk about countries at war talking and trusting each other. 

All Exodus people have food and doctor and house and freedom, that is good. 

Thank you. Many days, my job is to learn English, all day long."

This would be the perfect time to talk about travel arrangements but Siamek is still not folding his arms. Soon they're going to have to talk about it even if Siamek hasn't made up his mind. 

"I think that you have all pieces of Exodus on the ice makes sense. We now have three pieces of Exodus on the ice, but when I tell everyone what you want, then you have them, I think. Pieces of Exodus not on the ice, we have? 

I tell to everyone, Nivis is here to make things not break them.

I think that Miguel wants to come home to Nivis, but I want to ask: if maybe he doesn't want to come home, what do you want us to do? This is not important now but maybe in the future this is important."

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The leaf is not any known earthly species, but it resembles Earth life in chemical composition and chirality and overall structure. The genetic code is different, and, even when translating the code, the genes are mostly different. There are no organelles with their own DNA, but there are chunks of DNA that look like they used to be separate before they were incorporated into the nucleus.

The leaf is not toxic to humans, nor is it very nutritious. It doesn't contain much beyond the minimum necessary for it to have grown. Nothing that looks like it would interact with a human to affect night vision.

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This particular machine isn't a DNA sequencer, but it can at least detect the presence of nucleic acid chains.

The next step will doing that sequencing, then finding a volunteer more eager to try 'alien magic' than they are cautious and test low-light vision in a dark room while attached to as many monitors as can be made non-invasive.

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"What parts of Exodus fell not on the ice? If it is a machine, we might want it. If it is just broken metal, we want it less. When we have more places they will still be Exodus but might not be Nivis. If Miguel doesn't want to come home I think it will be because he doesn't feel safe. We will work on a safe way to come home. If Miguel doesn't want to come home even then, the regs actually say people can leave Exodus if they want, if they say 'I am no longer a person of Exodus'. But I want to talk more before we have a lot of people saying 'I want to go be a person of Lei or FD or Allheart' or 'I want to go be a person of Exodus'."

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Shen's aide has connected his PDA to the projector (poeting along with an encrypted video stream, not out of any particular sense of paranoia but just because that's the standard), and is taking notes that are visible on the big screen at the end of the meeting room. Occasionally they tab out to check something from the public databases, that might be more comprehensible as the request comes from the aide's PDA, the 'basic' crew manifest in particular is not encrypted.

Meeting Notes

-Visitors: One speaks English, one writes English, bird tengu can talk to Miguel Hernandez.

-Miguel Hernandez is alive. He accused Ahmat Singh of attempted murder. Mary Hersch interviewed him and Security will investigate.

-Visitors can eat food that humans can eat. Visitors are interested in SCOP production technology.

-Visitors presented gifts

-Nivis speaks for caution

-Portraits of the Nivis people present dragged in from the crew manifest, with titles.

-Notes on visitors: Hester, Catfolk, speaks English well. Audron- Humanoid bird person, pilot, media figure(?). Chime- Humanoid bat person, sensor(?). Tengu- Multi-presence(?), comms. Seeahmeck, navigation(?), writes but does not speak English. Leslie, Catfolk, no English.

-Visitors mention three countries: Lei, FD, Allheart.

-Lucy Carver said that trade is good and offered a gift of knowledge

-Descriptions of 'magic' were given and discussed. Visible evidence of fire source, difficult to manufacture glass sphere prepared by 'magic'.

-Dr. Montero mentions concern over radiation

-Nivis asks if there are free places to live. Visitors say yes. Nivis can live in some of these places but not all.

-Visitor population many millions. Nivis population 1107.

-Lei and FD at war. Cold war, slow conflict.

-Nivis relieved it is not a hot conflict.

-All Nivis knows of aliens.

-Visitors say magic comes from one species, but don't know where that species got magic.

-Visitors don't want to discuss politics from potentially biased and limited translation.

-Dr. Montero scanned for radiation. No dangerous radiation levels.

-Nivis wants: Send diplomats. Fetch Miguel. Claims all salvage on the ice.

-Visitors clarify: What about salvage not on the ice?

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"The parts of Exodus fell not on the ice are broken metal, I think. If there are machine pieces, no one tell me.

Talk more before many people say to want to be people of a new country, why?" A good answer would be that the people are well informed about their choices. A bad answer would be because they have a specific reason to be afraid of everyone leaving as soon as they can.

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Siamek follows the aide's PDA... but its poeting is mostly incomprehensible. The internal workings of the screen are simpler. It's a poet too, a frequent final recipient of information from the PDA, and it does some very complicated math to turn the information it receives into images. So is that why so much of the poets' verses are incomprehensible, you have to do complicated math to get the real meaning? Such a fascinating art form, if it were art, but if the poets aren't people what would be the point of the art... Maybe the aliens who created the poets liked it this way?

He also looks over the visible notes with his eyes. He doesn't know a lot of those words, but he notices one error.

THREE *KIND OF* COUNTRIES

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"Mm? Oh. This planet have many countries. Lei is a big country, work together with a few small countries. FD is a big country, work together with a few small countries. Allheart isn't a country. Allheart is many countries that work together with each other. This planet also have a few countries that are not any of FD or Lei or Allheart."

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"We don't know what being a person of not Exodus countries is like. You don't know what being a person of Exodus is like. We don't know the rules of the other place. We don't know how to be good to people and not say things that make them sad or angry, we don't know what to do if there is a person doing bad things in other country, we don't know how to pay people or what is a safe and not safe way to use magic or machines... We don't know so many things."

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That's promising.

He can't delay much longer without being suspicious. "How much long time we stay here now? When we go, do you want to visit the place for talking?"

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"You can stay here and rest and eat one more time, if you stay in the part of Nivis we say is okay to stay in. Or if you want to leave soon that is okay. When we visit the place for talking, we want to send three people and some things. We have a rover, which goes on the ground like Audron's plane goes in the air. We want to wait to visit the place for talking until we can bring a lot of things... We have a lot more questions about countries and magic and things you might want to trade. And it will take more time to make the PDAs with knowledge. But if you are tired we should not keep talking."

The long term ideal vaguely shaping up in her head for a good solution is-

Nivis: The new Silicon Valley! Industrial powerhouse and computer manufacturer and research center. And cultural icon. Immigration, integration, democracy.

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"We are also going to give you a special talking thing to talk to Nivis from far away. It takes sound and turns it into special light, and then takes the special light and turns it back into sound far away."

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"Thank you.

How big your rover? The path to the place for talking is about so big" two meters wide by three meters tall "because the path is under the mountain. To go from on ice to on stone must use magic elevator. Also sometimes ice is dangerous, isn't ice but is air and fall and hurt."

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If they're not going to get the PDAs this trip, he definitely wants to stay, if that's an option. 

He 'finishes eating' and folds his (four) arms like a square knot.

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"Audron can make a big plane and you have all your things in the plane with you?" He translates the conversation and asks if Audron can in fact make a bigger turbowing?

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"Probably. Not fast. I'm pretty sure they have turbowings of their own. Ask what they need to land safely!"

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"The rover is bigger than that. It is almost as big as the plane. We know the ice is sometimes dangerous, we are being careful and think to make a road later once we know the easiest place to make a road."

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He is slows alarm at the thought of aliens trying to dig a tunnel under farmland and through towns, without werewolves or vampires! "To make a road on the ice is good. To make a road on stone is maybe good. To make a road on place where people live is bad. 

Do you have plane? We can make place for you to land?"

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Siamek can totally help them navigate with an angle-warbler and beam-warbler signal! Sadly, that's a secret.

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"Yes, making a road on somewhere people live would be bad... A runway for our shuttle to land on needs to be very long, and we need to put machines to tell if we are going in the right direction if we want to be safe. Shen?"

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"An I-L-S set... The V-O-R is too big. The ILS plus a power cell and wiring are maybe the size of two people. We can verify the ILS is set up correctly from the air. I think the risk would be acceptable."

But it's still their only shuttle, even if using it as a diplomatic jet is almost as important as putting up satellites.

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Very long, like the very long flat area where Audron landed? ...such a sacrifice might actually be worthwhile, but hopefully there's a better option. "Maybe we must make a new house for talking in a different better place. Can you fly and land in a hot place?"

It's a little suspicious that they're not willing to go unless they can bring a lot of things with them. Along with their only plane being big, and not letting the visitors see most of Nivis, it gives Hestlierre the impression that they need bulky artifacts with them to be safe in some way. Miguel seems fine, so it's not necessary for their survival, but either they don't want to have important conversations away from their artifacts, or they don't want their important people to be damaged by the separation.

"We must make a bigger plane to bring Miguel to here... in the future, we work hard at make plane and them we bring Miguel and also then we have big plane, you can go to place for talking. Now, you have questions about countries and magic and trade?"

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If Nivis isn't sending anyone to the chartreuse, he doesn't have the excuse to stay in Nivis because the turbowing isn't big enough to bring him back. But they still might have the excuse of learning each other's languages, since that's easier to do what you can point to things you can both see, and the radio Nivis is going to give them is only for sound. Which is odd, since Nivis is clearly capable of making a machine that sends images over a distance.

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"I think one of us is confused. Jack, pull up Paint and let me borrow your PDA?"

The notes on the big screen are replaced by a white field with a toolbar at the top. Shen takes a stylus and quickly draws a poor rendition of a globe. He paints a thick green curving line across it, then colors one side bright and one side dark.

"People of this planet live here," a red mark on the green.

"Ice is here." Another, blue, line some distance away from the green. "And Nivis is here." Another red mark well beyond the ice line. "Does that seem right so far?"

Pause to let people take in the (terrible) sketch.

"Did you fly from the green," pointer wave, "to Nivis? Or did you fly from the dark," wave, "To Nivis? I thought we would fly from Nivis to the dark and then go to the talking place however people go when they don't have to walk on dangerous ice. We could also fly to the bright and do the same thing."

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Ooh the screen has colors and ooooh that's how colors are described in screen-language.

Now which part of the PDA is making the screen language? Like Miguel's PDA, it only has a few parts, but none of them are the screen-language part.

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"Ah! We fly from the dark to Nivis. We can make a runway in the dark! This is good. To go from the dark to the talking place, to carry lots of things with you, go on different kind of a flying thing. This flying thing is big and slow and doesn't have fire, just have magic to make not fall on the ground."

A runway in the chartreuse might actually be fine if it were all shadowed, or if it were temporarily moved to cover intact farmland, but it's a relief to not have to worry about that at all.

"The ILS, how heavy is this? Two people's size, also two people's heavy?"

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He watches each part of the PDA... and there is actually screen-language there matching the image on the screen! It's just only there sometimes. The parts switch around between many jobs!

Now he can follow how the screen-language on the PDA is garbled with complicated math and sent via poets and then ungarbled by the screen. Each time the PDA sends new information, the complicated math has some parts that are the same and some parts that are different. There's also some numbers that straightforwardly count up.

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"The ILS equipment weighs a small amount more than me."

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"The things we want to bring to the talking place are... Lots of PDAs and screens," gesture to the screen, "A thing that makes those work better, thing to get electricity- PDA food- From light, things to hold electricity, things that use electricity to do work that we want to show countries and talk about if we want to trade, and a big thing like the radio for talking from far away but bigger, so we can do more than talk from even farther away, we can send pictures and words. Also a few things that the people who go are used to having and like."

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Ah, clever Hestlierre; Siamek was imagining that the ILS was made of solid metal like the other alien things. He gets to stay here and look at the machines, yay!

The part of the complicated math that is different each time is calculated in the previous math step! Even when the PDA's math part does something else in between, it remembers the numbers to use next time. And right, he already knows that poets have an excellent memory.

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"When we go from Nivis, we carry the ILS in Audron's plane? Two people must stay in Nivis... Maybe I stay, maybe Chime stay to teach our language, maybe Siamek stay to learn English? Maybe I go, because good to have two catfolk in the plane. What do you want?

Tengu stay? Tengu also go."

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"If people who are not of Exodus are going to stay here, we need to think about that more. Magic is scary. We don't know what magic can do. Maybe machines are scary to you, if you don't know what machines can do. We have rules about touching people in scary ways, or talking to them in scary ways, or doing things to machines that you don't understand, because that might break them or cause big danger."

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"Also we could get sick with your sicknesses and you could get sick with ours. I don't know how to safely treat people who are not humans. I can guess but I would be guessing. I don't think any of us want each other to be hurt or sick."

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"People looked at your plane, Audron. I'm going to also gift you an attitude indicator. It uses a spinning thing to stay pointing the same way no matter how you turn. It's very important for flying safely. I would feel bad if you didn't have that and you crashed, maybe it was our fault, we didn't help."

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"Thank you for the attitude indicator." He translates that for Audron.

"We won't touch people or machines in scary ways... if to explain scary ways we must learn better English, then how we to learn better English? Maybe we use thing like radio but bigger, show images and talk about images and learn better English?

When you say 'sick', you mean a kind of a hurt that go from person to person? This is dangerous now? Or only dangerous if not-Nivis people stay in Nivis? If this is dangerous now maybe we must leave now very fast and get a liefling and come back?"

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"I think it is probably not very dangerous. Fifteen people talking in a room and washing carefully is less dangerous for spreading diseases - being sick with things that infect - go from one person to many - than one thousand people walking everywhere in the rest of Nivis and touching everything everywhere and breathing everywhere. But not very dangerous is not 'not dangerous'. Also we can probably deal with it. I would enjoy talking to a liefling a lot. I think we can teach each other a lot. But we don't need one to be safe, probably."

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"We'll be glad to use the screens to help teach English, or learn your language, while you're at Nivis. When we send more people to the place for talking later, we will have a more of a foundation to build on."

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Ooh!! He should probably not take it apart to see how it works, but maybe Chime can see what it's like inside?? Later. Once they actually have the thing, it's clearly not here now.

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(She would be delighted.)

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Poets can only send images when they're close to each other? How odd.

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"Of course, we are careful and not wash. Is it safe if we stay in this house part only? Audron's plane can go, carry ILS, come back, carry liefling, carry what more?"

Will Audron in fact be able to find Nivis again without Siamek, and repeat the course that they now know is safe? Or if he still needs Chime, is he okay with making the trip to Orocide with only one catfolk?

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.......No, there's still a fairly alarming level of risk of getting lost and having to turn brightward - as best as that can be guessed - and just keep going. If they go by dead reckoning and stay high enough to see the many lights of Nivis even if they go off course a little bit, maybe...? Some quick math says that at even a small mountain's height it should be visible for a good long way away. So, yes probably, without Siamek is fine. Without Chime is fine if the attitude indicator lives up to the hype and the image forming in his head; He can just stay very high up and not be worrying about slipping down to a lower altitude without noticing it nearly as much.

(Siamek is totally a spy. A spying spy with secret spy magic. He feels a bit conflicted about it. Isn't this supposed to be a big international show of cooperation? Meh.) 

...If anything getting back to Orocide will be trickier since it'll be less bright. Only one catfolk would be fine. It will slow them down a bit. 

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"I think there was a misunderstanding. You said 'we are careful and not wash'. Washing would be good, not bad. I'm a little mad nobody thought of getting sick before we fed you. We are careful about sick spreading through food but we could have been more careful."

"The sick I am worried about is because of certain kinds of tiny life, 'microbes'. There are two important kinds, 'bacteria' and 'viruses'. They are much smaller than bugs the same way bugs are much smaller than people. They are mostly everywhere, and mostly harmless, but sometimes they can make people sick and spread by moving on things you touch or even in your breath. Washing with soap and hot water, and staying away from people who might spread microbes, and other things that are hard to explain, can help prevent microbes from spreading and making new people sick. Maybe mouselings can see microbes with a very small body. Does this sound familiar?"

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"Yes, mouselings can see some microbes! I don't know that there are two kinds of a microbes. I want to ask, one kind is small and the other kind is small and also hard to see? I understand now, washing with soap and hot water, like Miguel likes. Soap we don't use lots, water we don't use lots, usually we wash like this" he almost licks his arm but doesn't touch it "but this can spread sick, when many people wash together."

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Poets can't send images far away... Poets are, in general, limited. They can't just talk directly to their final recipient, they have to talk to other poets first. They can't tell when their interlocutor heard them, even if it's counting off the message it just heard and ungarbling it. For that matter, they can't hear when another poet has something to say; it has to rephrase it all into a different poem and sing it out for them to hear.

...sing it out, which is what he heard when he was far away. And he didn't notice the navigation machines - the 'ILS' and 'VOR' although he doesn't know which one is which - until he was close. Now that he knows what to listen for, he'll be able to hear them from anywhere, of course. But he couldn't do that before.

He always thought that radiobug magic was the magic sound they could hear and speak. But that can't be true. The aliens claim they don't have magic, and the machines don't really seem like mouseling cursors or elphin shrines, containers for magic; they seem like very complicated non-magical machines. So! The magic sound isn't magic at all? Radiobug magic is something else... like being able to focus on the navigation machines and the insides of the PDAs! Which the alien machines can't do since they're not magic!

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"I can see how that would spread sick. We have lots of soap and hot water if you want it. Nobody has explained the plumbing to you yet, I think, but that can wait. We also have spray that smells bad but kills most microbes, and there are drugs - like the leaves - that kill microbes without hurting the person much. I won't say you must wash like that. But you can. Viruses are even smaller than most small bacteria. They are different kinds of thing, a bacteria is like a bug and can make more bacteria on its own if there are things to eat. A virus has to infect something and make it sick to make more viruses. It doesn't eat. Some people say it is not even really alive."

Really, nobody at all can blame him for spreading basic lifesaving epidemiology and it will endear him to the locals and possibly get him an introduction to a liefling.

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"I can try to summarize the rules - for not being scary - if there is nothing else important to talk about right away. Most people of Nivis are sleeping soon, but aliens are very exciting so I can stay awake."

Lucy Carver made a decision, and she kind of hates it, but Lucy is the boss. For now, stall on meeting anyone else. And also: Prep for an immediate expedition to the probable (>90%) object that is Exodus's bridge. It's a two hour drive each way. Senior staff will be going, including herself.

After that, pending changes based on what they learn, open the gates to contact if any of the aliens are still here. No major information control is to be attempted except for a crude AI heuristic set to the basic SFW mode, with bonus 'restrict violent/weapons related content'. Plus an announcement to be nice to the aliens.

But that's later.

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"Thank you for explain-ing about bacteria and virus! I think mouselings can't see virus. Lieflings can fix virus sick, know that there is virus, but don't know what is virus.

We want safe for everyone, we wash with soap and hot water and spray." Bleaah.

"Do you want to talk to liefling, werewolf, gnomunk, frogold? Aasimar can talk in house for talking but not in Nivis because of politics. 

Rules say don't hurt people, don't hurt machines? We have same rules."

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"We decided I am going to be one of the people in the talking house. I would like to talk more about viruses and bacteria and things like that, a lot. I am the person of Nivis who knows the most about them. I know many other things also."

This is stated with absolute confidence as fact.

"I can wait until then. I want to learn your language."

Lucy doesn't trust him, which is kind of annoying, but he was really quite insistent. Some of the cargo is dedicated to SCIENCE.

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"Okay, so Chime and Siamek stay here? I stay here? Audron's plane go, carry ILS, come back with... come back yes or no?

You sleep, we sleep, then you ask more questions?"

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"We sleep except for two, who can teach English or bring things for you if you want. You all sleep if you want. Maybe more questions after sleep. Maybe you go after sleep. If you want to go you can go. If you want Chime and Siamek to stay, that is okay."

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"If Audron's plane comes back, bring the radio for talking far away so we can talk while flying. For safety."

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Siamek is making good progress, so it's fine to sleep now, even though everyone talking to the tengu will have ten hours for discussion without them.

Hestlierre doesn't like subterfuge, so hopefully the radiobug advantage won't matter. He can't stop it unless he genuinely thinks it's a risk to the relations with the aliens and thus all of Ansaf, but he has the freedom to judge priorities, and he thinks that making Audron fly back without sleeping would be too dangerous. FD is making a good impression so far, and the aliens like freedom and democracy.

So, they will sleep. Then Siamek and Chime will stay, but not a tengu body, for some reason which he doesn't understand but is not going to argue with. The aliens didn't request any particular species, and even made a point of turning down a liefling, so the two additional people who come next will have to be one Lei and one Allheart... and by that point, Hestlierre might go to the diplomatic center to be the FD representative, so maybe they'll have a new FD person too. The Lei representative will be the emperor, of course, leaving Mirana as the next Lei visitor to Nivis. He likes Mirana fine, but Mofil says she's a zealot... The Allheart representative will have to be Merta, so who will visit Nivis from Allheart?

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The plane departs in a flurry of flapping tengu.

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Chime teaches Sotalese, as is apparently now the common language of diplomacy. It's a fine language, widely spoken and all, and it's not even a big disadvantage for Lei, but the choice was petty. The common language of Ansaf is written High Elvish.

Sotalese has: serial verbs! No gender but four animacy classes and three levels of formality! Phonemic creaky voice! Three sets of vowels, which, in Chime's accent, are realized as front/center/back and none of them are rounded! (In Hestlierre's accent the back and 'center' vowels are rounded and the 'center' ones fronted.) Explicit topic and focus marking with particles, the most common of which sure looks like a copula in simple sentences but beware - it's not!

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Siamek happily learns how to use a PDA. With his hands. He's not going to transmit anything until he's far away and understands the limitations of non-magical 'magic sound'.

(He doesn't realize how lucky he is that sci-fi future touchscreens designed for a space mission work perfectly fine with his claws.)

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The magic leaves stimulate production of rhodopsin, which is made by the subject's body in a perfectly mundane way. It's just that, through no obvious mechanism, the genes are expressed more often.

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The gyroscope inside of this thing is really interesting! Shen warned him that it could be thrown off in various ways- Going too slow will make it slower to react since it relies on the airflow from the front to keep going, was the big one, and it will also wobble off course when turning. He thinks he sees how... But for now, he's composing prose about the Lights of Nivis and the Houses of Metal and the Many Machines and their love of Freedom and Democracy in his head, even if he didn't see all too much of it. Off they fly!

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Lucy, Mary, Shen, Bass, and Nina are all suiting up for an expedition to the probably location of the Bridge, the point at the far far end of the debris field where it must have finally wound up, further than literally everything else...

And Lucy's thoughts are taking dark turns. She quietly asked Mary if they could make more guns- The answer is yes, but not trivially. What about big guns? Bombs, to fit on the shuttle? Mounted ones for the rovers? Mary was less sure. So she brought in Nina and asked similar questions, making sure to carefully emphasize that it was about knowing the options. The locals seem friendly, yes, but there is a war on, and if you can't defend yourself... You're not peaceful, you're harmless.

The shuttles are not likely to be very weaponizable. They're very specialized, and aerospace has tight margins. Maybe they could mount one of the lasers on it, or produce an armed satellite to heft into orbit if push goes to shove, but that's it. Nina came up with ideas for good old-fashioned chemically propelled cannons, and also flamethrowers using runoff from the Recyclers, and also strong lasers using some of the more exotic electronic salvage. They have options.

(She's not going to mention the last idea: Nuclear weapons. She does, actually, know the physics involved there, and they can't, actually, make any of those... Not very easily at least. The fission plants use thorium, which is much harder to weaponize than the old uranium models. The reactor technically has a small amount of uranium-233 which is used as a catalyst, for lack of a better word, but it's not designed to be siphoned off. In fact, it's designed not to be siphoned off, thanks to the whole EU-China disarmament treaty: No nuclear weapons in space. Using a Brigman Core to do it... Would not be impossible, as those are very technically fusion reactors, but none of them are in any kind of trustworthy shape. The long and short of it is that making nuclear weapons would be a major industrial endeavor that takes two to five years, at least. Also, the stigma attached to them is massive, and they're too dangerous to ever use without it being a cataclysmic escalation, useful only as a source of terror and dread if one is pushed too far. So... No nukes.)

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Dr. Montero, meanwhile, takes a considerable dose of Modafinil and a few other little things, and begins learning Sotalese, and also programming a character set for it into the colony's servers, and also preparing the foundations for an attempt at machine translation.

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"Okay, I gotta ask. What the hell is up with the alien plane? It makes even less sense than somehow crashing on some god-forsaken ice sheet in perpetual darkness, and that's saying something."

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"It doesn't even have an engine! Or, it does, but there's no fuel tank or anything- Oh, we didn't touch it beyond pushing it into a shelter. I think they made it out of the busted Exodus radiator, it has that crispy shiny look."

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"The turbine is, apparently, propelled by magic."

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"Pull the other one."

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"We have camera footage of spontaneously appearing fire, and it certainly felt warm to me. Also, they gave us apparently-magic drugs- Montero fed one to a volunteer-"

She raises her hands to ward off the incredulous question.

"Yes, yes, reckless fools. After putting it in the tox scanner, and with informed consent and plenty of monitoring and stuff, Kaylee was happy to be an experimental subject if it was about aliens, and it's apparently doing something medically known but in a way that he doesn't understand at all. In the absence of a better explanation, we might as well use 'magic'."

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"Magic, sure. Makes about as much sense as the superconducty battery, to me."

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"It's not a battery, it's- Oh, for god's sake, nevermind. Look, as much as I don't want to be left out of this, maybe one of us should stay here just in case there's any kind of incident?"

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"Bass is the best driver. Mary knows override codes. Lucy is the leader. I know the bridge systems well. And you're good with machinery and improvisation. The only senior officer we don't really need is Dr. Montero, and he's still with the aliens, learning their language."

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"Fine, let's just get going. Maybe the magic aliens have something to do with why we crashed."

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"Buckle your seatbelts, ladies and gent! There's one really nasty slope we're going to have to cross but the rest should be pretty smooth, so sit back, settle in, and enjoy the ride."

The rover smoothly accelerates out of the opening airlock with an electric hum.

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"A thought strikes me. These people, the aliens, they have magic and they don't have electricity or computers, but - they aren't idiots. I've seen far too many stories where the evil empire dismisses the locals or the resistance or whoever as 'backwards savages' and gets bit for it. Ancient humans on Earth had different ideas, different societies, and limits, but they had the brilliance to use what they had- There is art, architecture, statecraft, literature, from every era of history we can recall... It shows that people have always been smart, driven, and adaptable.

They built a perfectly serviceable biplane. They're learning English from one of our own, and quick. They have some kind of understanding of medicine. I think... Magic or not, respect them. These countries, Lei and Allheart and FD, are - societies. Complex, interconnected, motivated to advance their interests. But also, be wary of ways we could be taken advantage of- Spying, or some sort of magic, or simple diplomatic out-maneuvering."

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"Heavy stuff. You were middle to upper corporate once, Lucy, right? Rhinemetall-Schneider, I think? Captain Espanoza had actual diplomatic and governmental experience, but... I think there's relatively few who can say the same these days."

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"I was an operations planner for the RM-Schneider heavy industrial works in Lille, yes. I did a lot of regulatory compliance work- Spoke to politicians sometimes, not that it's left me with that much an idea of what I'm doing. But more than zero, at least."

She has an idea how the backrooms complex works... On Earth at least. And some notion of negotiation and incentives.

"It might be corporate thinking but I want Nivis, Exodus, to become the next Silicon Valley. I don't want us to become irrelevant, out-populated by these countries. I want to build capital goods, machines that make machines, and import what we need to work them... Silicon chip fabricators, electronics lines generally, high end machining and alloying, arc furnaces, nuclear reactors, solar panels, robots, everything that can be termed 'productive capacity'. I want Nivis to be a center of learning, I want countries competing to send their brightest to learn. Not only is that... The way to spread the industrial revolution, and the decent thing to do... It's the option that is in good faith. We'll teach, and we'll build, and we'll become a cultural and learning center, and maybe a diplomatic center..." She trails off.

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"...We still have to defend ourselves. But I think I see what you mean. It's the cooperative thing to do. It's the thing that will cement Nivis as 'good aliens'. If there were a science fiction story about aliens crash-landing and hoarding their technology and knowledge, and aliens crash-landing and teaching people and trading away their technology... I know which one would have the aliens be - more morally correct. None of this 'not interfering with their path'. The Prime Directive always was bullshit in my opinion."

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"Morals and philosophy, pah. I guess we do pay you two to figure that shit out. Are you sure you should be deciding the future of Nivis, Lucy? You're gonna host elections sooner or later, right? You might get voted out. I know a few idiots who will say you're threatening everyone's safety and security by sharing anything at all."

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"Whether it's good for my chances of election or not, I sincerely believe it's just... The right thing to do. Absent further information, which we might be about to get."

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"Hoarding tech sounds like paranoid Cold War thinking to me, so I like your style, Lucy. Let's teach 'em and bring about an age of prosperity."

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"A rising tide lifts all hearts..."

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"Amen to that."

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"Yeah. Just, let's also not get lazy. These countries are going to be worried, and they're in a war themselves, so we should expect spies, and maybe some kind of hostile action even if not any real fighting. We'll have to step up the encryption... They might not have computers yet, but they have magic, and 'didn't bother to encrypt sensitive data' is probably on some kind of common sense checklist."

 

 


 

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"I want there to be lots of operations trading with the aliens, as soon as that's feasible. Not three, not a handful, lots. Although not necessarily one for every country, and I think that's the wrong way to divide it anyway."

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"Does that benefit us?"

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"Currently the expedition is lucky to be majority FD, and multiplying the expeditions would probably lose that advantage, but there are two benefits:

First, for all Ansaf, if one relationship breaks down it doesn't doom us all. Right now it feels like we're attempting to make friends with individual alien leaders, and we know they're going to elect new ones soon. Maybe they'll teach us about how countries can work together - maybe that's their species magic - but until that actually happens, this kind of relationship feels precarious.

The second benefit is for Freedom and Democracy. They already do democracy and care about freedom in the abstract. So, in what situation would they act in our favor most strongly? In a situation where they're empowered to act, in general, most strongly. Let them get information from many sources, let them express opinions and make choices without their entire future on Ansaf at stake, and they will benefit us.

As a bonus, if I'm the one pushing for this, they'll see that as further evidence of our friendliness, which can't be fake; we really do have the most in common with them, of the three factions, that's why we want them to see that clearly.

We have a resource here, in that we're lucky to control the initial communications with them, and this is the only way to usefully exploit that resource before it seeps away."

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"That's a yesterday's-rations fallacy... or not even that, since we haven't spent anything to get you in charge; it really was luck. But I follow the rest. Why are you so sure that we can't trust the alien leaders' friendship?"

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"I'm not sure we can't. I'm just worried that it's a risk we don't understand."

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"Not understanding a risk is not an argument for it being more risky."

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"It is when the risk is currently believed to be small. I think we're assuming, at least I'm conscious of avoiding my own tendency to assume, that just because the aliens have only one species and only one town, their society is simple.

Imagine that someday Ansaf sends a mission like Exodus to another planet, with the agreement that, for the first few deci-years, elves will rule, and then there will be democracy."

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"If, in this future, we have somehow neither won nor lost."

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"Right. And if there's a way to move shrines."

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"Catmother forbid.

So you're thinking that Lucy Carver is a variety of alien with the training or breeding to specialize her for ruling?"

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"Not necessarily that in particular. That's just an example of how friendship with leadership might be unreliable. And of course elves don't have friends; it's just an illustration. 

Do you know where our food is coming from?"

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"We're paying for half of it."

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"I mean literally where is it coming from."

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"From Nitatlel, on a barge through the Argo aqueduct, then by ship to Orocide?"

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"Yep, from Nitatlel! From a whole other country. Currently we and Lei are paying Allheart for this to happen, but normally, Argolake and the drydark towns get fed without anyone paying."

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"Just like the dark end of any county?"

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"Well, yes... This is just an extreme example. Why do they send food?"

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"Because if they didn't, Argolake would stop the aqueduct, and they're not protected by the Freedom to Live."

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"Chime claims Argolake can't stop the aqueduct. But maybe she's wrong - she was just guessing from what she saw while passing through. What if they did, then what would Nitatlel do?"

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"There are many diplomatic approaches."

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"Suppose everything fails except war, and Nitatlel takes Argolake. What happens then?"

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"They would fix the aqueduct... I don't see your point. If the aliens refuse to operate their machines, we could take Nivis and do it ourselves? You're saying we can't do that, and that's why this is different from every other trading relationship on Ansaf?"

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"I think it's an interesting situation: the geography - including the artificial aqueduct - causes there to be a town on the dark side of the mountains and a trading relationship between it and the people on the bright side. Of course, it doesn't say anything about the people's happiness or freedom or democracy. But the trade is destined to happen."

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"And trade with the aliens is not so guaranteed, because... because their machines and possible magic - and our magic - are not just lying there like geography. This trade can actually fail."

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"Yes. Our job is to make sure that the trade happens, that the system is healthy."

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"Ah, that theory. Don't you always emphasize yourself that a system being 'healthy' doesn't mean that it's morally good?"

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"Yes, but I'm not worried. Because neither Ansaf nor Exodus can dominate the other, the only threat is Lei, and they're in a weak position.

When proper diplomatic talks start, my job as FD representative will be to promote trade, to keep Lei from deceiving the aliens, and to negotiate in those few cases which still must be negotiated by countries and not smaller groups, such as Exodus getting land in the chartreuse."

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Mofil checks for eavesdroppers. "We might be able to dominate the aliens, although it would be evil and obviously risky to try. And they might be able to dominate us; their diplomatic magic could be dangerous."

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"The trade could still fail, since we don't need each other, like the people on each side of a county need food or water."

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"Less desperation is good."

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"I suppose there's a balance between the trade being sure to happen, and the parties' ability to push for favorable terms."

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The Bridge is an armored box which survived the destructive landing in mostly one piece, with bits of the surrounding compartments still attached, barely-recognizable crushed and distorted metal shapes like strands of rind clinging to the skin of a fruit. It rests at a fifteen degree angle, leaning forward and to the right. The first challenge is actually getting up there.

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Luckily, they were sane enough to bring along plenty of ladders, rope, and other miscellaneous tools. Improvising a path up to the most intact section of corridor leading up to the main bridge chamber takes about twenty minutes, and involves hauling a sheet of metal to the most precarious gap and then fixing it in place with a portable arc welder. It's ugly as sin but it'll stand up to being walked on.

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The bulkhead door resists them a little longer, since the whole frame is warped in a way that pins it in place, but Shen knows where to cut to shear off the hinges and bolts. With power tools, elbow grease, swearing, and another twenty minutes, they can get through that, too.

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The Bridge is not arranged to provide excellent views to camera crews, like many common visions of starship bridges. There's no open floor plan and sleek minimalist design. Handholds for zero-g maneuvering stud the walls every few feet, and relatively little attention is paid to gravity's call. Consoles and screens, ruggedized to Hell and back, litter every surface, including part of the floor (only part because it was intended to be used while under acceleration, just not as often), and the ceiling. Two long floor-to-ceiling columns break up the space into three narrow aisles while providing more space for readouts, controls, and emergency equipment.

There are screens and controls for every imaginable type of sensor. There are dozens of command consoles specialized for a particular aspect of ship operations. There is a giant viewscreen taking up precious real estate on one wall meant to show things the Captain thought important to have everyone be very aware of. There are backup manual controls and electronics panels for almost everything, with as many physical switches and dials as there are touch screens.

Many of them are dark and shattered, especially near corners and joints. But just as many are even still blinking faint green text and red error warnings, the triply redundant backup power systems still ticking along almost three weeks later.

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"If I recall correctly, the flight data recorder will be... Here." 

She opens a panel to reveal the bright orange box. It looks intact...

"Hopefully, we should be able to download everything and start piecing together what the hell happened. Mary, will you do the honors?"

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"The ship AI's servers will be behind that wall. That will have extensive logs of everything, and if Exa left us any messages they'll probably be there. And there are individual system computers as well. My station is here, and the navigational controls here..."

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"We're going to be here for a while, but let's pick the low hanging fruit first. Flight data recorder, and the AI drive."

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Five minutes later:

 

"Okay... Here we go. Flight telemetry, transferring to everyone's PDAs now."

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"...There's gaps. The- Here, at mission day 1453. The time stamps are continuous but there's a sudden jump in every reading, temperature, acceleration, voltage on various systems, and the Brigman Cores... Everything changes slightly, all at once. And then proceeds normally except the astrogation data is now... Junk."

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"It doesn't recognize the stars, so it starts making wild guesses about course and position... But look there, that's..."

He pulls up some more recent data for comparison.

"Yes, the system determined that it was approaching its destination here, and if you look at this constellation- The system came back online in the outer system of this planet's star."

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"So... The flight data recorder went offline for however long and came back up when we were on approach? Possibly some sort of hack or sabotage?" 

She's trying to figure out how she would go about tracking down a hack or glitch... Cybersecurity is not her specialty, though, and the Exodus's systems were always fiendishly complex...

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"We obviously were sabotaged- Or well, probably, but later. Here, explosion and fire in the starboard coolant loop, dropping pressure on oxygen tanks, fire alarms all over... Just two minutes before we hit the atmosphere. The last moments are really confusing. It looks like Exa put in some hard work to keep as many of us as it could alive. But... The flight data recorder never went offline. It has a radioisotope-based clock, even if electrical power was interrupted we'd be able to tell that more time had passed. So it really seems like... We were... Instantly transported from on course to Avalon, to approaching here."

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"Faster than light travel is, of course, not permissible under any known theory of physics. And yet, that appears to be what has happened to us."

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"Who the heck would sabotage Exodus? That's... Well, insane. It's like blowing up Aldrin Station, or a monument or something."

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"People have been blowing up all sorts of things for all sorts of reasons for a long time. My first guess- And it's a guess- Would be a rival to the Exodus Corporation, trying to ruin their prestige project. There are a number of ways someone could sneak sabotage through, especially if there is - a sympathetic member of the crew. Not everyone liked James Ryder, he was quite a divisive figure, politically, so there's possible motive. But then, why did the bomb only detonate on approach to a planet...?"

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Humans, she tries to remember, want to see the world through stories. If there's a satisfying story to be told here, that will serve their purposes well, though it might not be closely related to the truth...

She feels like she's falling, like the truth is a sinkhole that's about to open up under her feet.

"...Let's see what the AI core has to say for itself."

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"That's gonna have to wait a few more minutes. It sure looks like something tried to scramble all the data here. Random areas are flagged as empty and partially overwritten... Honestly, I'm going to need to take the whole thing back and do a forensic recovery on it to get more information, but a few of the files are mostly intact. Looks like... Some news summaries and message packets from Earth, and one video file that was written in about a hundred different places by Exa during re-entry..."

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"Let's start gathering and packaging the things we want to bring back to Nivis. Anything that could have data on it first, maybe computer equipment or sensors and instruments second... It's not like we're going to stick around and do a forensic crash site analysis, too much work to do."

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A few minutes later, Nina has assembled a mostly-uncorrupted copy of a half dozen news clips, and Exa's last message. She plays them on the large screen at one end of the Bridge.

The picture that emerges is a grim one: A few months after UNSS Exodus was launched, James Ryder revealed to the world that he had invented a prototype FTL drive, and installed it on the groundbreaking colony ship. The news soon after was increasingly factional and slightly unhinged- Newscasters lambasting him for lying in a publicity stunt, scientists claiming it is impossible, organizations condemning endangering people with experimental technology, demanding he reveal the secret. James Ryder and Ryder Industries evidently refused, and - the news is gappy and missing a lot of context, but soon after that there is a war between the United States and Brazil (mostly naval), and another one between China and Russia (mostly static in remote mountain regions), and some unspecified Trouble In The Middle East. Ryder Industries retreats from several countries as James Ryder flatly refuses to share the FTL technology, claiming he spent trillions to develop it. The world enters a worldwide recession thanks to the economic disruption.

Eva's message is just a short summary of these events, an apology for not performing better, and a tentative conclusion that the bomb was probably planted by someone from Omni Corp, Ryder Industries' biggest competitor and the other possible-nascent-megacorp; Unrelated to the hypothetical FTL device.

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"Well... Fuck."

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"What the FUCK! James Ryder always was way too fucking full of himself in my opinion. God! He played with our lives."

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"I seriously fucking hope there was a - a backup, or plans, or some sort of surviving equipment in the debris field, that we can use to figure this out- We're obviously not on Avalon, we were still supposed to go there, just instantly, so if we want to go home..."

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At least it's- An answer. It's James Ryder's fault. Or Omni Corp's fault, possibly. And of course, the international situation deteriorated back home...

"At least it seemed to be mostly limited, conventional wars. No weapons of mass destruction flying around. It's much less terrible than unrestricted war."

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"I'm not sure what this changes, if anything. But we're no longer wondering, perhaps... We can blame the idiots back on Earth and - try to move on, and build up here. It doesn't change that we need to be diligent and diplomatic, here."

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"Huge coincidence that the FTL thing is off target... And takes us straight to aliens. Magic aliens, no less. We don't have an explanation for that part."

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"Does it matter? We're here, they're here. Fuck Earth, fuck James Ryder, we're Exodus now. We can do better than that."

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"...God. I need to get some sleep. To figure out what to announce, and then sleep."

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If the Exodus's systems were that compromised... Who's to say that everyone in Nivis is who the crew manifest says they are? Hmm...

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Funny, how she was talking about how treaties and diplomacy can achieve peace just now, and they found out that Earth had two major wars and a number of little ones off the reveal of Exodus... Well, the concepts of embassies and treaties and neutral arbiters and paths of escalation and de-escalation should still apply... Well, pray the same doesn't happen here, with first contact. At least not for a long while.

"...Let's start heading back to Nivis and try to get at least, like, four hours of sleep tonight. I think... We should still be relatively open with information, and the previous decision still makes sense. We'll want to try to recover whatever we can about this FTL device... But it can wait until tomorrow. Maybe even until next week. Let's get going."

 

 


 

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Previously:

Halfway through the night cycle in the improvised visitors' quarters, there's a faint whirring sound in the ceiling, and then something drops a tiny mini-PDA (the size of a credit card) with a note taped to it through a narrow gap in the ventilation duct, on to the bathroom sink.

(No cameras in the bathroom! She's so clever!)

It lands with a bit of a clatter.

The note says:

To the aliens, if you can read this:

This device is designed to stealthily send and receive text messages to a group of concerned citizens of Nivis. As long as you only use it when not in view of the cameras (machine eyes) in the main conference room and hallways, and when this picture appears: [drawing of a check mark] - it should be undetectable to the Security people. You should not use this unless you need to. It is unlikely but possible that it will be traced back to us if confiscated and analyzed.

If Lucy Carver's administration is treating you well, I'm glad. However: Trust, but verify. We are working to provide options and alternatives if they are necessary for what is right. We hope that contact between Earth and whatever name you have for this planet is good for all people, for a brighter future!

-R

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Earlier, when Tolesli got up to pee, he found the object, recognized the word 'aliens', and slipped it into his pocket. Now, back with the expedition, he says he wants to stretch his legs and goes jogging in a loop around Orocide, and takes another look at it. 

...Yeah no, he has no idea what it says. He did some thinking on the turbowing and that's okay. If the extra PDA is a gift for Lei, ignoring it hurts Lei. If it's something bad, ignoring it while carrying it with him hopefully hurts Lei at least a bit, even if it's not the maximally gullible thing he could do with it.

His problem now is that he has to talk to the emperor. The emperor might support the FD, but has not given any direct sign of that to Tolesli. If he reports the alien object, or even just fails to conceal that something interesting happened and thus makes the emperor suspicious, the emperor will remember the event. Tolesli doesn't how Lei emperors audit each other and what limitations there might be on the spy emperor's ability to evade detection. So, Tolesli has to act as if the emperor is genuinely Lei. 

Elves are not as perfect at reading people as they pretend to be - observe that Tolesli got hired at the imperial shrine - but they're not bad at it. Tolesli's strategy so far has been to be boring, which works fine when he is busy gardening or thinking about gardening, and rarely interacts with elves, and will not work at all now. 

He's heard that pretending distress can cover up the tells of a secret, but he'd have to lie about something distressing, and he is not smart enough to keep a complicated story straight while also mixing it up a realistic amount. He was, in fact, specifically warned against this during his single visit to FD for training.

He could leave. He could keep running, destroy the object once he's far enough away that no one will see the fire, steal some food in Kef, and go to... go to Nitalhel, not through the Argo aqueduct, but by turning felward and staying in the stormlands until he gets to the dark end of the Sota-Nitalhel border. That way, if he gets caught, it might damage relations between Lei and the Allheart Alliance.

Another option is to be too sick to talk. When he was trained in FD, a liefling gave him a way to arrange that: if he bites the tip of his tongue while clenching his butt, a nodule in his kidney will dissolve and release an infectious plant - a 'microbe' as Hestlierre was saying the aliens call them... And Tolesli is worried that the liefling was lying and actually it would kill him.

Oh, Hestlierre, there's a thought. Could he talk with Hestlierre on the grounds that he's feeling bad and is worried about an alien disease that spreads to catfolk? If the object is a gift, FD will get it, but Tolesli will definitely get executed and replaced with a loyal competent representative.

Tolesli's replacement is a problem with all his options where he doesn't stay a Lei representative.

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Tolesli comes back from his run smelling of vomited alien food and complaining of joint pain.

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Quarantine the whole town of Orocide. Everyone who's been near the people who visited Nivis goes in a separate quarantine house. Four separate quarantine houses, actually, depending on which person they were near.

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The tengu's bodies that people in Orocide have been near are all fresh since leaving Nivis.

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Sure, that lowers the risk somewhat. People who have only been near the tengu don't have to be in a special quarantine house.

The four returning people, including the tengu, need their own separate houses.

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Why? Surely they can put the two catfolk together?

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Absolutely not. That's backward, and even if they're both infected, more exposure might make them worse, especially at the beginning of the illness.

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Remember, this is just a precaution. Orocide is still working on setting up the ice mining and is still likely to be ready to send ice on schedule.

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But, just as a precaution, Kef and Archer's Tabard are under quarantine too.

As soon as this is over, the alien artifacts will be a boon to all of Ansaf, may we flourish in peace!

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Some of the other catfolk mention joint pain.

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And, like Tolesli, they have nothing wrong with them that a liefling can detect.

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This is very convenient for Allheart, don't you think?

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Allheart has our full support and thanks for their protection.

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If a disease gets into a kitsune's body, teleporting carries it along.

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"Hello, Nivis. Hello Nivis. I'm Hester. The runway is ready. We're sick."

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No response for a bit.

 

Then, "Hello, Hester. Hello, Hester. This is Nivis Traffic Control. I introduce myself by role and not by name, for radio protocol. We also say 'over' when we are done speaking to reduce confusion when the sound is bad. You are sick? How many are sick? What kind of sick? Do you want a doctor to help? Over."

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"Hello Nivis Traffic Control. I'm Hester. I don't know what role. Leslie is sick. I am not sick. Four catfolk also are sick. The liefling can't fix, so maybe Earth doctor can fix? Maybe Earth doctor can teach liefling? Over."

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"Going by 'Hester' is fine. Or 'Ansaf expedition', or whatever role is good. Doctor Montero is willing to bring medical equipment and helpers and try to fix it, and is willing to teach. We will delay sending people to the place for talking and try to help. Does that sound good? Over."

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"Yes, delay sending people to the place for talking. We can go to Nivis? Medical equipment and helpers are heavy, when they finish, they must go to Nivis? So this is more easy, we go to Nivis? Also if they go here, maybe more people here sick. Over."

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"The shuttle can carry up to four tons of things... Tons is a weight measure. The radio weighs about one pound and a ton is two thousand pounds. And it has chairs for ten people. It is a good point, that maybe more people get sick with more contact. I will talk to Nivis people for a little bit, please wait for me to speak again. Over."

 

 

"We are okay with either bringing doctors and medical machines to the runway, or bringing sick people to Nivis. We are not sure which is better. You are there and can see things, we are not there. Over."

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"I will talk to Ansaf people for a little bit, please wait for me to speak again. Over."

 

"From Nivis to this runway, how long does the shuttle fly? Over."

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"One and a half hours from Nivis to the runway. Spend a few minutes at least on the ground, for being careful. One and a half hours back to Nivis. Then at least two hours of not flying, for being careful and spraying the shuttle with microbe killing chemicals. Over."

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In that case, the result of the preceding argument was that it would be 'callous to delay treatment', according to the magistrate of Orocide, especially by risking the safety of the whole turbowing crew on an exhausting repeat journey. 

"I say you bring doctors and medical machines to the runway. Over."

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Catfolk are getting sick, which means Chime's friend Calsa is in danger. He has to tell Chime -

And he can't, because that would jeopardize the secret of his magic. His gut twinges.

He flops on his cot and pretends to sleep.

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Dr. Montero has brought a lot of stuff, including full plastic biohazard suits and plenty of sterile supplies. They'll burn it, once they're done. He'd like to talk to the local doctors before doing anything. Due to pharmacological uncertainty, his current plan is to get saliva and skin swab samples from the sick catfolk and also from healthy catfolk and use the sequencer to detect what kinds of microbes are only present in sick catfolk saliva. If the saliva and skin swabs doesn't reveal any signs of microbes, a blood sample may be necessary, they use tiny disposable sterile needles like this. Then, maybe it's one that Exodus knows about and knows how to kill. Or maybe it's an unknown one and they'll have to figure it out. They could just use the usual set of anti-bacteria and anti-virus drugs Exodus has, or try more exotic options like a phage to hunt a particular species of bacteria or artificially produced antibodies, but he'd like to be conservative with new treatments on unknown biology. Talking to a liefling, a lot, would help with this. They can also do palliative care- Addressing the pain and monitoring for more serious issues and trying to keep everyone healthy and alive. Fluid IVs, lung lavage if they're having trouble breathing, and so on.

Nivis is undergoing a partial quarantine, itself, as well. Nobody who interacted with the aliens is sick, and everyone who interacted with them or touched things they touched or cleaned their food trays or anything like that is being made to go through checks (the same swabs and looking for unusual physiological signs), but they are being careful and double checking.

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The liefling has been relieving the patients' joint inflammation.

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The wroth doesn't smell anything different about the patients other than stress.

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The magistrate of Orocide approves of all the precautions, but says probably everyone will get better soon and then they can reopen the town.

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The saliva and skin swabs do not find any microbes only present on the sick catfolk.

Same with the blood samples.

Everyone has traces of Earth microbes on their skin, common types known to be normal on humans. The sick don't have a different amount or distribution than the healthy, except that Tolesli has more of several Ansaf microbes in his mouth, consistent with having thrown up recently.

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Huh. And if he also checks for known toxic chemicals, and for radiation, and for hormone markers being markedly different between healthy and afflicted... Any luck?

When did the patients first notice symptoms? Have they done anything like taken a fall or eaten anything unusual? Any common factors among the afflicted at all? (He maintains a smooth, calm demeanor and will discuss Exodus-style medicine with doctors Shor and Mipawtn in very tentative Sotalese, in the meanwhile. He can understand liefling-lexicon better than most non-lieflings, though from a totally different angle.)

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No luck.

Leslie went for a run, feeling fine, and suddenly became nauseous. As he was returning to the town, the joint pain developed rapidly. The other sick catfolk reported joint pain a few minutes later. Only some of them have had nausea, after not before, and not as badly as Leslie. 

Leslie didn't do anything unusual that Hester didn't, and Hester is still feeling fine.

One of the patients licked Hester briefly before he said to stop because of worries about alien diseases. Two of the patients are siblings who work together on experimenting with using ice as a building material; they were asleep when the party returned. One patient helped set up the ILS. There are now three more catfolk in solo quarantine just in case, and one gnomunk, all with only mild joint pain.

In general, the pain is only in a few joints, but which ones exactly varies from person to person. None of the afflicted have bio-children and only one has an adopted child... which might just be because they're younger than average.

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...He also approves highly of all the caution but the symptoms are mild and don't warrant more invasive checks yet. So, time for observation.

The good Magistrate might be correct; People have been primed to think about whether they are sick, and thus report so even if it might be nothing, or something else. It's still good to be very cautious, new diseases could be very very bad, but Dr. Montero and his staff should stop poking things for now, probably.

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Very well, would the guests like to sample some local delicacies while they wait?

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Certainly! He's good at talking to politicians and finding things to praise - bold frontiersmanship, etc - and quite curious as to the clever applications one finds for various magics.

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The magistrate is pleased that he recognizes the difficulty of running a new town. Of course his nephew (Merta translates this as 'friend child') Abilanedi has his thanks for fetching memories from Argolake.

There are three kinds of 'local delicacies': things which require gnomunk magic (fresh fruit), things that make use of the cold (shaved ice; a gelatin custard frozen solid and then fried), and techniques from the Frozen City (carbonated soup in a bread bowl; fruit with a baked chocolate shell).

The clever uses of magic that come quickest to the magistrate's mind are the newest ones: a narrow tube on a calibrated pivot that the goatseer used to make sure the runway was flat and will use to survey the ice-mountain when they start mining it; the hot blades with internally-circulating water used for cutting ice; a big turbine-but-opposite that rotates as the wind blows on it, used for grinding ice and maybe stone in the future; experiments with swirling air, initially intended for spinning yarn, which didn't work... All of that is basically just werewolf magic, though.

How long do the guests intend to stay in Orocide?

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The wind turbines could be used to generate electricity, which can be used to grow crops in hydroponics systems. There is much to teach and learn once things are more settled.

They'll stay until the sickness is resolved, perhaps another cycle at most if they're lucky, and then be fetched home and replaced with a diplomatic team.

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Shen, who piloted the shuttle down here, has finished his inspections and checks. They're going to be ready to take off again, and there's enough fuel to return. They also brought a VOR system and spare power cells. He sets those up while telling people the shuttle will take off back to Nivis soon, so please keep the runway clear.

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The people of Orocide will keep the runway clear, and also gather half a klick to the side to watch the shuttle take off! 

After a cycle, no one new has gotten sick and only Leslie is still feeling bad. Hester, who is still totally fine, visited him and says it could be a reaction to eating something new; the Lei diet is less varied.

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The shuttle taking off doesn't look like much to the people of Exodus, but it's a novel sight here. There are running lights shining steadily. The turbines whine, then roar, and the smooth metal shape picks up Equartier speed and smoothly lifts off into the air, ascending for a good while before turning deeper into the drydark.

 

Back in Nivis, they taxi into a hangar and can do a relatively quick post-flight inspection- It's not a commercial airliner, able to turn back around after half an hour if everything is arranged just so- And perform the slightly laborious four-hour process of loading the satellite into the cargo bay's secure mount. He's sorry to give the shuttle team a short turnaround window but Lucy really wants the satellite in orbit, today, and presenting a good face to the locals is also quite important. Maybe he can arrange time off or some kind of benefit about it.

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"Very well, Shen." She wants to say don't be stupid and soft, this is what the shuttle team is for, they drilled fast turnarounds back on Earth - but she knows she won't be popular with the rest of the team if she explicitly declines extra perks, and, curse her, she cares about being popular.

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Does anyone else think it's suspicious that the one Lei visitor claimed to have gotten sick, in an unverifiable way, and started a panic? What are they hiding from us? Where 'they', of course, are the elves of Lei and Allheart working together.

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Our diligent agent Tolesli Ratkeeper would never fake an illness! We're still slightly concerned about a magical plague, in fact, even though we now concur that it appears most probable that he simply encountered an environmental stimulus which he was unlucky to be vulnerable to.

Also, how could delaying contact with Nivis by a single cycle possibly benefit us?

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There's lots of ways there could be a temporary opportunity to seize a lasting advantage, perhaps using a new secret species to surveil or manipulate the aliens 

Nice try, but we're not going to give you ideas!

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So is there going to be another turbowing trip to Nivis? Or is all the talking going to happen at the diplomatic center from now on? He still feels queasy but he doesn't feel any worse as time goes by and is happy to travel. He's been learning English!

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Tolesli should not go back to Nivis, or he might get exposed again to whatever it was. Arguably he shouldn't get close to the aliens at all.

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If Lei gets to swap out a representative, FD wants to swap one out too.

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Weren't we just talking about opening up more parallel relationships with the aliens? Why does it matter what happens in the next few cycles before that's worked out and we stop counting representatives? What ideas didn't you want to give us, huh?

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"I can't comment on communications made by other agencies in the Freedom Democracy without specific direction from my superiors."

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Then Tolesli is still a representative of Lei, and Mirana will tutor him in English.

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Observing the planet of Ansaf from space: there's an icecap on the dark side, a storm on the bright side, no oceans, no active volcanos, and some craters softened by wind and dust and slumping ice. The habitable band is clearly wider than would be predicted by a simple model of a slightly-prolate-spheroid planet with random mountains, due to the extensive shade walls and bulges in the ground over excavation and places where whole mountains have been raised or lowered. If one projects the satellite images onto a 3d model and views it from a simulated distance, the planet looks like it has a flattened strip around it, like a round ball of clay that was very gently rolled over a flat table, and for once in astronomy, the visual impression is accurate.

The ground is flat and even, except in the brightest areas where it's crinkled, or when prevented from uniformity by mountains or elevated aqueducts, and even then the obstacles have edges that are straight and point directly at the sun, broken, if necessary, by sideways terraces. At four locations, a narrow slash of dark forest cuts across the whole width of the habitable band.

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Weightlessness is comforting. Pursuing a simple mission, a short orbital hop, is comforting. He can have a couple of hours of... Utter aloneness, except for the tertiary pilot, Lida, who is even more taciturn than him. She gets it.

The feed from the satellite is interesting. They've clearly done large-scale geoengineering over however many years. He's sure the more analytical folks back at Nivis are going to have a lot to look at. Lucy wanted that satellite? Well, there you go, much good may it do us.

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The satellite is really useful! It gives us intel on how these people work, where any visible fortifications, activity, or development are, an easier point of connectivity than an ultra long-range VHF radio system for the diplomats, confirmation of the habitable sector and the bright area, and detailed maps of the ice sheet. The could definitely build an utterly massive field of solar panels for 24/7 solar power in the long term, that's really convenient. No weather or night to get in the way! They're already going over the ice sheet maps to confirm a route for a more permanent road out of the dense ice, and onto solid stone ground, where they'll be able to build more effectively and trade more...

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...And that's his analysis from a Exodus-science perspective of what the liefling magic did in the case of the night vision leaves. It may be possible to design a genetic intervention to make such a change permanent, with careful enough study. He's heard there is a species that cannot be treated with magic? Perhaps Exodus's techniques can prove helpful there; However the politics shakes out, most people at Exodus will agree that sharing medical knowledge is morally good. They'll likely be recalling him soon but Dr. Montero would love a chance to scientifically study basically any and all species magic.

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The PDA given to the Allheart Alliance is kept in the diplomatic center, where representatives from all the member countries may consult it, submitting proposals the duke of engineering of Nitatlel.

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The Freedom Democracy takes their PDA by apple to the other side of the planet where radiobugs can poke at it.

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Lei creates a new shrine for the alien knowledge and shuffles elves to spread it to most of the Lei counties. A few counties are left uneducated to compare, but not half; it's clear that the lessons will be very useful.

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Having read the published summary, Meikalani prepares for change. Kef's water mining is no longer useful. Kef's water transportation, however, has a healthy future, albeit in blocks of ice rather than flowing water. Regarding steel, the situation is reversed: the aliens have better mills, but Kef's iron mines remain valuable.

Kef is ready to use the aliens' knowledge, but so is every other town. And, she must admit, the Kef spirit is not of particular advantage in applying it; the mill is operated by its own corporation, not by the town, but it is a corporation mostly owned by the magistrate of the town, and only one such corporation. Kef would not be any less prepared to renovate the steelworks if Fuzzer were simply the catfolk don, as he would be anywhere else.

What else distinguishes Kef? It's a place in the drydark where there is very little wind, so non-catfolk are more easily made comfortable, but the same goes for Archer's Tabard. It has friendly relations with its frogolds, and warm moist caverns suitable for wetlands species... and is especially vulnerable to drakebreath in the stagnant air, which also foretells a lack of electricity.

It has a population accustomed to individuals keeping money and exchanging it daily, but she doesn't know if that's an advantage for dealing with the aliens.

Metal is going to become more plentiful soon, which will ruin its value as money. One might think that there will be pieces of metal of convenient sizes to carry and convenient values, furthering the Kef spirit, but she considers this the optimism of a mind eager to cling onto specifics. Metal is not going to be trusted in the future.

The growing enthusiasm for credit might have an effect in either direction: to gather usage of money among elves and their trusted dons, or to provide it to all who are able to agree to a contract. How might she lead it to the latter? Kef can attract people with ideas, spurned by their local superiors, and eager to hire employees of their own without having to explain themselves. Dangerous, with the Kef experiment marred by selection bias. And the other towns may well be happily rid of their grandiose dreamers. How can she ensure the gathering of good ideas - good ideas that are also easily overlooked? It seems an impossible problem.

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Should she, Meikalani, give up Kef? There will soon be vast expansions into the drybright in need of magistrates, and with her experience she might take on a large allotment. Let Kef stay, and in a decade, it may be moderately more successful than otherwise expected from Abilanedi's mediocrity... and that will be entirely thanked on its aqueducts, not its economic system.

Should this location be abandoned, but for the pumping crews, once the iron is mined out? The population resettled in her new drybright lands, if they can be thither persuaded, in unison? Risky.

For now, she will wait to learn more of the aliens' intentions. For now, she will focus on exploiting the current extent of the water mines, redirecting the freed-up werewolves to prepare the waterworks for receiving ice from Orocide and floating it onwards.

...And she will - she's not even pretending not to direct the activity of Kef at her magisterial command, what an embarrassment for the Kef spirit already - she will build some rooms underground, insulated and humidified, just in case.

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What about the countries that are none of FD, Lei, or Allheart? Do we get to look at these miraculous alien artifacts?

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You're welcome to read our publications.

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What if there are things we want to learn that are specific to wetland life?

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Then talk to Koy and their scientists can submit the official proposal.

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The aliens are adorable. Yep she can touch the top of her head, she reach her arms all around, just not straight up. Yep she will give you a hug. Yep she can pick up anything with her wings as long as it doesn't require sticking a finger into a long finger-width hole - she can pick up a teacup like this with all her fingertips on the handle. Oh my what a question, hey the grooves on that guy's skull are really pretty, I'm going to go tell him. Well as far as we've discovered so far, I'm better than an ekeserei because I can hear how things are stressed. Yep I've been looking at Nivis, except for the places I'm not allowed, and it all looks safe. My fur is short enough that it doesn't require grooming, which is good since my tongue isn't the best at grooming, but sure you can pet me. That's enough petting.

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Siamek's friends at home have been telling him lots about how a PDA works. They have the advantage of being able to take one apart and transmit to it, but he has the advantage of being able to observe multiple poets working together in their natural environment. He has figured out precise limit on when poets can hear each other, although he's not sure of the capabilities of the finer measuring devices at Nivis, so he doesn't have a way to directly report his discovery and be sure of evading detection.

Poets generally talk to nearby poets, which gives the impression that they're weaker than they actually are. But when he looks inside them at the parts that hear other poets and decide when to pay attention, he can see the truth - and it's very simple! The prominence of a signal in a poet's perception varies with the true loudness of the signal, and with the inverse square of the distance to the singing poet. Inside Nivis, large pieces of metal obscure poets from each other, but elsewhere, this rule is exact.

Well, that's for any particular pitch. The 'range' is different for different pitches, but he's still figuring out exactly how. In any case, no kind of device should be able to hear radiobugs on the other side of the planet speaking at a normal volume.

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"...so, there's a country that isn't in the Allheart Alliance, and isn't an ally of Lei or FD, and they want a PDA. What do you think?"

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Present at the diplomatic center is Dr. Montero, trying to strike a balance between teaching and learning about magic, Riley Cameron, under instructions to push the narrative of 'selling machines and capital goods once we know what you even want'- She's working on a proposal to have a town partially built out of stone in exchange for about half a Hydroponics Module's worth of equipment, maintenance contract and tech transfer/teaching for further magic services TBD- And Sergei Kruschev, officially the diplomat-in-charge who spends a lot of time talking to Nivis but unofficially the one who's supposed to figure out how to 'win hearts and minds'.

Miguel has been sent home on another Shuttle run.

"Miguel mentioned that such countries exist, such as Koy. We have had a lot to think about, but I would of course be delighted to speak to a representative. An additional PDA is not something we can part with trivially, I hope everyone understands... But we can talk, and perhaps find a trade. The rising tide lifts all hearts, after all."

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Present for Ansaf: Hester and Mofil for the Freedom Democracy, Mirana and the emperor for Lei, and Merta and the tengu for the Allheart Alliance. Also available nearby are: Harqa, the duke of engineering of Nitatlel, the duke of trade of Nitatlel, a monarch of Sota, Fuzzer, Lin (a frogold from the expedition), Calsa, Siki, Doctor Mipawtn, Bzrot (the wroth from the Frozen City), and plenty of assistants.

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"I understand. The representative is not here but they will come here.

I want to clarify that Koy is part of the Allheart Alliance. The other country, Stchà, is talking to Koy and wants Koy to join a new alliance, but currently this is just talking.

If you don't want to give more PDAs, in the future how will you trade knowledge to us? You don't want to give more PDAs, is that because you want to trade them not give them, or because you don't want to trade more PDAs entirely?"

He makes a note to ask what a 'tide' is later.

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Ugh. He's a terrible diplomat, always losing track of these things. But it's his job to remain calm and know what Carver wants.

"We want to trade PDAs, not give them, because we can't make more yet. We know how to but it takes a lot of very big machines and being very careful. We think we will be able to make more in maybe fifteen to thirty deci-years. We want to build many great machines, we want all people to have what we have, and we can't do it alone. This requires trade. We will need metal, and magic, and smart people who can learn what we teach. When I said 'the rising tide lifts all hearts', this means that - when people know more, everyone is happier. Everyone has more things. Even if Koy or Lei benefits more than Exodus, Exodus still benefits. If we try to keep our knowledge and machines secret, it might help Exodus compared to the rest of Ansaf, but it is not nice, and does not help anyone. Instead, when all of Ansaf learns, there are smart people who might think of even more new things, who can make machines, who can make Exodus happier because there are more things in the world. We want to trade knowledge by teaching people who come to Nivis or to another new town that my friend Riley is talking to people about. But we are a little worried because we don't know Ansaf, and we don't know magic. So I will talk to the representative of Stchà, and maybe let them use the diplomatic PDA for a little bit, and see if we can help."

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"I understand, to confirm, the three PDAs are gifts for the expedition, not gifts for Ansaf. Now, no more gifts, you want to trade with all people on Ansaf. You trade knowledge how, not trade PDAs with knowledge, but teach people.

Suppose. Suppose the FD and Lei war becomes a fast war, suppose FD people and Lei people go to Nivis and fight, that is bad, so FD people and Lei people don't go to Nivis or the new town, don't learn. This is bad. So I think maybe there are three new towns. And I think, three is still a small number. Maybe a hundred new towns. So maybe many bad things happen, then trade is still strong, many people are still happy."

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"Maybe a hundred towns in the future future future."

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"Yes, a hundred towns is not necessary. Important is the idea, many trades happen, maybe a few trades don't happen, still many trades happen. Maybe having many trades requires many towns, maybe not. Maybe we can have many trades in a different way, an easy way."

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"Suppose Nivis teach ten people, ten people teach a hundred people, a hundred people teach a thousand people. What do you think?"

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"That would be good. We won't tell people what to do after they learn, they are free. Even if we would like it if they worked in Exodus, making things. I think people who learn and then teach might not know as much as the first people who teach. Or it might take a long time. Most engineers study for nine years of basic education as a child, the things every child learns, and then four or six years of specialized education in a university- A town of learning and teaching. We want to build a university."

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"Elves can learn thing and then give to other elves... memory of learn. Not weak words, and not strong learn like person does thing and knows thing strong... I think that you think that person go to university, go back, has weak words. This is wrong. Correct is: has memory of learn. Do you want that elves don't go to university, learn? You say this, people think that you like FD, don't like Allheart and Lei, this is big."

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"...I have not received specific instructions on the matter of elves in universities. If a decision on university attendance for elves could make countries upset and worried, we want to know more and talk and think more before making a university. We generally don't want to cause more fighting."

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"I understand, you need to think, you don't say now.

Now, I want to ask: many small trades, what do you think? One town, one university... suppose a person from Orocide goes to the one university and fights there. You say no more trade with Ansaf? You say no more trade with Allheart? You say no more trade with Orocide?"

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"I think we say, we want people to agree to the rules of Exodus before going to university, and then we want to have Security talk to the person as if they are a person of Exodus if they break the rules and fight someone. Maybe no more trade with Orocide, or less trade with Orocide. Only really bad things like hurting a lot of people, or breaking important machines on purpose, or breaking an important deal would mean no more trade with Allheart. I don't think we will ever say no more trade with Ansaf."

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"I understand, I am happy.

So one person goes to the university, a number of people work for you in the Exodus town. Those people, the number plus the one, do trade with you? If the number of people don't work, or if people fight, then this trade is finished, but other people can trade?

Those people maybe they live in a town together, maybe they are a family, maybe they work for a magistrate, maybe they aren't like that and they talk and do trade with you... What do you think?"

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"We can do many trades. We can say all our ideas for trades and pick the best ones. A lot of these things we are still thinking about. One step at a time. On our home planet we used money and credit to make trade simpler, and many people of Exodus like that and want to do that for some things or maybe all things, when we are more established. If we did that, people would be traded money for doing work for Exodus and then trade money to go to university. But maybe that's a bad idea for people from Ansaf. There are ways that kind of trading can go bad and some of them happened to people of Earth, like speculation bubbles or abuse of debt, so we know better now if we are careful. Maybe we trade another way, no money just deals like 'Orocide builds a town according to these drawings, and then 100 people from Orocide can go to university for six years and learn'."

He pauses.

"We would also trade useful machines for money, and trade money for metal or food- More kinds of food is nice to have even if we aren't going to starve without it because of hydroponics. If Nivis can support itself by trading, however, we can spend more time teaching and making machines. I think the world will look very different in fifty years, when people have learned, when we have more machines, when people make the machines that make machines. More food, more good things for eberyone. But maybe it could be forty years, instead, if Exodus trades for food and metal and magic, and teaches people, and builds a few more towns maybe in the drydark and maybe in the drybright and other helpful things. One idea for later we have is a railroad, a way of moving people and things very fast like airplanes, but much cheaper than airplanes."

He will show a video of the venerable and still well-functioning shinkansen on his PDA.

"It's quiet and comfortable inside, relatively few people could operate and maintain it on busy paths that a lot of people and goods travel on, allowing people to travel without needing an equartier, leaving equartiers the chance to run more flexible routes to different places."

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"We use money on Ansaf, but a single person doesn't usually use money. In countries with elves, the elves use money, and families, and groups of people of one species in a town, and - this is rare - groups who go to many towns. In the FD, a single person can use money but only a little bit of money.

Only elves use 'debt'. In the FD we could but we don't. How does debt work without magic? How can you abuse debt? What is a speculation bubble?"

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"There is a town where individual people use money a lot. I think it works good but this is a new experiment."

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"A railroad is like a cargo sled. Faster, but is there another benefit? Is faster important? We know how to make a cargo sled. All of werewolves, if they see a cargo sled, they know how to make it. A railroad is not like that."

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"Trains are faster, carrying more at once, requiring fewer people to operate it. Maybe you don't need trains, but something else. Most of the benefits of machines is doing work that people once did. There are many types but I do not know what is best, just like we don't know the best ways to use magic I suppose. There are machines that help with farming of course, hydroponics, and ones that weave cloth, or make fiber from things that are not hair called 'polyester fiber'. There are machines that lift or move things, and the PDAs, and machines that help cook food, and machines that make things cold, and machines that move water or air, and many more kinds."

"A speculation bubble is a little complicated... It's about people getting too excited and buying and selling things for prices that are way too high, and then people panicking and defaulting on debts - they can't pay it back even if they worked their whole lives, and the people who gave them money have to deal with that, and the whole money system sort of - breaks. It can be a problem if you use money that is fiat, just a number and not a thing, and aren't careful with it, and let people hold debt... I could talk for a while about ways to use money but I'm not sure it is relevant right now. I would say abuse of debt is mostly about ways that some people trick others into making bad decisions with money and agreeing to things that are unfair without realizing it, like 'you can borrow 1000 and if you pay back 1000 within a month we're done, but if you wait longer you owe me one in five more each extra month'."

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Ooh polyester and making things cold! Is polyester like the fiber stuff in the 3d printer?

Traveling merchants sometimes buy things that turn out to be less valuable that expected. Nothing important, at least not in Lei, just jewelry and clothing, and of course recently there was all the metal from the spaceship that people were excited about, which certainly caused some wasted effort but no one even went hungry, much less got enslaved, over it! Why would someone want to borrow money for a short amount of time anyway? They shouldn't be allowed to do that.

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"Polyester is the same class of materials as the 3D printer uses. They are called polymers, or plastics in casual use. There are different kinds for different purposes, like aluminum versus iron versus copper. Our uniforms are actually partly made of polyester- One moment-"

He opens a metal case under the table to fetch out a spare shirt.

"Here, if anyone would like to examine it. Plastics are lightweight and easier to make than metal in many cases. We can process exhalation and waste to make them- It's a specialized kind of machine that does it... The idea behind being able to do more things with money is for freedom and to let people choose how much they want things. Back on Earth, not all people could get the things they want- You can spend your money on nicer food, or maybe you don't care about nicer food and instead spend it on board games, or in-vivo genetic treatment, or your own education, or paying artists to make art specifically for you. And it would tend to make more things that people want, because people are willing to pay for things they want, and people want money, so people will make things that other people will pay money for. Nobody has to manage it, it just happens... In an ideal world. Our history is not perfect by any means- But that is why we remember it and know what went wrong and what not to do next time."

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They all touch the shirt and smell it curiously.

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That's the theory of the town she mentioned, Kef, which they briefly passed through on the way to the diplomatic center. As far as she's noticed, though, there's not been much change to the standard of living - there's more flexibility in gig work than in other towns, which some people like and some don't, but the same material goods and services are available in the same amount and quality as in any dark town. It's an odd town anyway, though, being deep in the drydark, and very new and thus selecting for people who want to be part of an experiment, so it's hard to come to a conclusion.

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The idea of the efficiency of a free market is weird but makes theoretical sense, sure... but why does it require letting people promise things they can't do, and then punishing them for it?

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The monarch of Sota and the duke of trade of Nitatlel have been informed of this conversation by the tengu and hurry in.

According to the monarch of Sota, it's possible for a magistrate to spend so excessively that the value of their money goes down, causing non-elves who possess their money to worry that the value will keep going down and try to get rid of it, which makes it actually go down even more. So kind of the reverse of a speculation bubble. It happened once, and now magistrates remember the disaster. Also now there's a law that at least 4/5 of a town's money has to be possessed by elves.

The duke of trade of Nitatlel says they have a system kind of like that, except that the 'money' doesn't stay in circulation. Trade money is created on behalf of each person, allocated by their don, transferred to producers, and then disappears. Engineering money and food money and entertainment money and peace money are similar. If you let money circulate indefinitely, it has to stay in existence indefinitely, which would allow some people to hoard it, and there would be the additional constraint of having to keep its 'value' stable.

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In the FD anyone of any species can use money for whatever they like. They avoid all those problems by limiting how much money a person can have at one time, by simply using coins a meter across that you physically cannot keep many of.

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"We call that an inflation crisis. The amount of money in circulation goes up and down based on what people do with it, and what the magistrate or whoever is controlling the money does. This sounds like a classic inflation scare- You can create new money, but only as long as the confidence remains. The confidence and agreement is what makes it have value. The Nitatlel system sounds interesting- Money allocated in narrow, specific markets... I suppose if one entertainer in Nitatlel got more entertainment money than all the rest, that benefits them somehow? It almost reminds me of some old programs on Earth that said 'if you are poor, you get some free money- But it can only be spent on food or a house'. Whether this is better than just making food and houses available for free... Depends on the people and the place, probably. We think some amount of inflation is good, if it goes up at the same time as more real value - more things people want and like. There are entire textbooks on this as a field of study and I am not an expert. I think some are in the gift of knowledge PDA we distributed, under the title 'economics'. The effects of money can be subtle and hard to measure, and I think it is simpler in some ways on the largest scale. I did not think millions of people could be organized well by magistrates and dons, before seeing Ansaf. Earth had eight thousand million people, and money all tracked by computers like the PDAs almost everywhere."

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The duke of trade of Nitatlel muses that inflation prevents people from hoarding money, and will be delighted to study the economics information on the PDA.

If you get lots of entertainment money your don will brag about you and you'll have students and children. If you can't get entertainment money, the local lord of entertainment will get someone else and then you have to do a different job.

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"Suppose I have a great idea, it needs money now and will be finished in a deci-year, I talk to my housechief, they maybe talk to the magistrate, and then they do the idea. Suppose my idea is for me only, then they give me the money and I do the idea and give them more money, okay. Suppose it doesn't work, what happens? Suppose my housechief made a mistake, then my housechief has a problem, we don't need to talk about that. Suppose I made a mistake, then, in the future I have ideas, they don't give me money. Suppose I use money to buy metal and go away by myself. This is a bad idea, why? I come into new town, I don't tell the magistrate because this isn't my town, I give people bits of metal for food and for they don't tell the magistrate...but soon, maybe days, maybe deci-years, everyone will know I did this bad thing, magistrate will know. And all this time I am not still even happy! My friends are in the old town, no friends in new town. I need to go back to my old town, stay in old town, work. Pay five more money? No, I don't have money. Work for Exodus, get money, pay? But I'm a bad person, I steal metal, Exodus doesn't want me...

In summary, I don't understand situation, I pay five more money each deci-year."

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"...I was following you up until going to the new town? Cycles of debt, and moving debt from town to town, and people not understanding what is going on are indeed problems. I might not understand you."

He certainly doesn't think there should be a freaking futures market or any of the other financial chicanery, even if it will probably inevitably creep in over time there's no need to rush it.

"People of Exodus are used to using money. Before we left our planet, everyone used money. They grew up doing it, and that is different than changing to it later. Right now in Nivis, everyone works without money and everyone gets food and houses and doctor visits and their children get teaching and they get time in the entertainment place, all without money. But that's special, because building a new town on a new planet is hard, and the rules of Exodus say we will do it this way at first, and then we will form a new government once we are settled. Maybe they end up liking not using money. Maybe they want to go back to having money and get money for working and spend money on things they want. Maybe they just use taxes- Instead of the magistrate making more money when they need to spend it, there are rules saying you have to give some of your money back to the magistrate... I think there are bad things that can happen in any way of doing things, edge cases and strange situations that the rules do not deal with well."

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"I'm trying to understand the extra five; I'm thinking about situations with borrowing money. Maybe my brother borrows money and steals it, now I want to borrow money and they say, you're like your brother, maybe you steal money, this is dangerous for us. We think that in a thousand situations like this, when do you steal the money, in five situations. We want five more money from you, now we are safe and you can borrow the money. They say this, I borrow a thousand, I give extra five.

This is what I think, one situation with extra five. But this situation doesn't make sense. Stealing money is hard. I ask: why extra five? On Earth, is stealing money easy? What is situation where they want extra five and I'm willing to pay extra five?"

 

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"There are taxes in Kef. Not for every person, only for every house, and for steel and water."

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"If I have a lot of money, and let a lot of people borrow money, sometimes they will make a mistake or decide to do things like run away, and I don't get my money back. If that happens I might lose all of it. Also it's a little bit of work to - have the money to give out in the first place, and to keep track of the money and when it gets paid back. So let's say one in one hundred people borrow money and then can't return it all, or can return only half. If I lend a hundred money to a hundred people, one of them doesn't pay me back, and I lose a hundred money. But if every person has to pay me back one hundred and two money, I gain two money ninety-nine times and lose one hundred money one time- So I gained ninety-eight money. So, without the extra money I don't want to let people borrow money, I'll just lose it sometimes and not get anything. But with the extra, I'm willing to do that because I expect to get a little bit more money over time."

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"I understand... What is abuse of debt?"

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"Is the extra ninty-eight a kind of tax?"

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"Abuse of debt can mean a lot of things. It's not just one thing. It's... Doing any things to people that are unfair and involve debt. Maybe someone says, we will pay you for this job but you have to live in this town where the work is... But I'm friends with the magistrate and they say you have to take a loan for your house, and the loan has really high extra amounts, interest, the extra on top of a loan amount is called interest. Or someone doesn't have any friends and needs money right now to buy food, and they were hungry and needed a loan once already and didn't pay it back on time, they did pay it back just too late... But they still need the loan to eat so they have to take it even though the loan-giver thinks they're risking not getting paid back ever so the interest is really high, like thirty per one hundred. Some people think the loan-giver is being unfair and the magistrate should say 'you can't give loans that have more interest than this much'. But then the hungry person just won't get to eat. So really you want to fix that - upstream, so people aren't so desperate in the first place... Or... Leaving something delicate where anyone could bump into it and saying, ah, you broke that, you have to pay to fix it, you don't have enough so you will get a loan from me right now! ...The extra ninety-eight is profit, not tax. Tax is when the government takes some money, because they are the government. Interest on loans is thought of as part of a contract. The government can also give loans and charge interest, but it's separate from tax."

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Looks are exchanged all around the table.

"A person doesn't have any friends, on Earth does this happen a lot?"

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"...I would not say a lot? I would not say never. I think usually this kind of thing, when someone says they have no friends what it really is- Your friends are not in the same town, they are maybe not even in the same country, you have never actually visited them with your body, but you still talk and share hobbies. Through computers, like the PDAs, talking at a distance over the internet- A sort of public square and library and posting board, anyone can put things on the internet and almost all PDAs can see it. An internet is working in Nivis but not on the rest of Ansaf yet..."

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"People like this only have friends only on the internet only? Where is their family? If they go to a magistrate or someone and say: I don't have food! Something is wrong! Then what happens?"

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"Yes, people like this only have friends on the internet. Some people don't like their family and go away from them. Different countries do different things. A lot of places go- Everyone gets some money every week, and the amount is supposed to be enough for food and a house. In my country, Ukraine, the magistrate or someone would say, 'Are you not getting your money? Where did the money go? Is someone taking it from you? Are you addicted to expensive things?'. If I said yes, I am addicted to things, or someone is taking it from me, they would talk to the police- Security people, or mind doctors, and try to stop the problem."

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"But if there is no crime and the person is not addicted, just foolish, then they say, we gave you money and you are foolish and now you don't have food, is that what they say? Then they need money and there is abuse of debt?"

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"Yes, if they spend their basic badly, and alienate their friends and family, and are mean so people don't want to help, and are very foolish, yes. Then they need money and there is abuse of debt. We have a saying, 'you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make it drink'. -A horse is an animal."

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"Ohh, okay. Whew. The people don't have friends because they're mean.

Wait. The people have friends on the internet. Why... Are they mean to people nearby and nice to people on the internet?"

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"Sometimes. I've heard people say it's easier to fit in through a screen. Or the opposite- Nice to people nearby and mean on the internet... I feel like my explanation is missing a lot of pieces since I'm trying to use words people probably know."

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"Maybe. I think that this is a small problem, and only mean people have it. But you talk about it seriously and make me think it's a big problem. Is this situation a small problem, and the other situations are big problems? The magistrate says you need a loan for a house, the leave something delicate so that people break it? Or maybe I don't understand something."

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"All the situations are scams, all are bad and some people will try to do them anyway. It is a problem that we must be on guard against. It was a bad problem for a while on Earth, and got better later when more countries started giving everyone money. Some people want money and don't care that their smart idea for a scam to get more money will hurt other people, and country governments do things that are good for magistrates and bad for everyone else because they have incentive to. You have to design governments and rules so that the incentives don't make it a good idea to do mean or stupid things. This is why I like democracy. It's harder to to get everyone to vote for you than it is to make everyone afraid the people loyal to you will hurt them. So magistrates and other officials have reason to be honest, and nice, and competent."

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"Like the inflation crisis, it is rare but we must be on guard against it... You're on guard against it by giving everyone money, and by the design of your government..." and she really wants to say more about that, but she's representing Allheart and must preserve the Allheart neutrality.

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"Three kinds of government you talk about: Nivis, and democracy, and everyone is afraid of people loyal to one person. In the past, we have countries of everyone is afraid of people loyal to one person. Usually one catfolk. Then we make elves. Catfolk know that elves are useful for knowing things, but they don't know that, if give memories, elves can trust each other. And if other elves trust other people, elves trust those people too, everyone trust everyone. Surprise, everyone fight one catfolk.

Now, lots of shrines. Shrines are old and useful. Shrines are delicate. Shrines need guards. Now sometimes everyone is afraid of people loyal to one shrine. Other shrines see problem, see problem get bigger, talk, and the same thing happens again. New rule: shrines must let people leave, and town with more people must have more land. Also number of the children is important, but now I talk about shrines.

Shrines aren't people. They aren't happy or angry or afraid. But elves are happy or angry or afraid. We can say, the shrine wants a thing. This is wrong, actually the elves want a thing because of the shrine. But that is complicated talk for elves. Most people say the shrine wants a thing.

Shrines are delicate. What kind of shrines live? Must have people want shrines, must have people like shrines more than nearby shrines.

Bright towns and dark towns, they make a county. County with metal and county with glass and county with new species, they make a country. Monarch of country has friends, like you say, this is a problem. Now sometimes everyone is afraid of people loyal to one elph. Again, other elves trust each other, make new rule: elves are all the same. Elves watch each other."

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"But this isn't democracy, it's just not making the people so angry that they attack the shrine. People in Lei don't have freedom. Since they don't know freedom, they aren't angry, but it's bad that they don't have freedom."

He's been thinking about debt. Normally, if you convince someone to give you money so you can do a project that benefits everyone, the person with the money gets gratitude from everyone for funding the project. The person who did the project doesn't have to pay back the same amount of money, plus interest - that would be silly since most projects don't make money at all. The point of funding a project isn't to make money. It's to do your part to support everyone else's Freedom to Live.

But what if you work for Nivis so someone else can learn at the university, and then they don't want to do the job they trained for? They're not violating your Freedom to Live, just treating you unfairly. What are you supposed to do, duel them?

So it seems like there's an argument for forcing them to repay their debt to you by working at the job they trained for. It just violates their Freedoms to Travel and to be Happy, and possibly also their Freedoms to Live and Die and Grow and Speak. Which is out of the question, so the Freedom Democracy will have a harder time getting people to work for Nivis and fall behind other countries.

He'll talk to Mofil after the meeting and hopefully he'll have a solution.

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"If your money is tracked by computers, does that mean you can give money to someone on the internet?"

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"I would call a country of everyone being afraid of one person or a small group, 'autocracy'. We use the suffix 'cracy' to describe kinds of countries. There is also 'theocracy', where religious leaders who say they speak for spirits or things like that rule, or 'aristocracy' where one family rules and passes rulership to their children... I am not sure what I would call the shrines system. It is not a theocracy, I think... The magic of elphs is clearly a powerful tool for trust. Earth has no such tools. This is good to know- I am learning, I want to learn more. Shrines are not elves, just like I am not Exodus, yes, I agree. Governments and towns and shrines are made of people, and of rules, and they do not always..." He meshes  his hands together, "Agree well. What do shrines do to make it so one wrong elph does not hurt things?"

"-And yes, you can send money to people over the internet. There are schemes of encryption that I am not the best person to explain, to make this private and - so you don't have to trust if you know the math and look at what the computer is doing. This sometimes get used for scams, people lying on the internet, but everything will have some scams. It is good if you know how to spot most of the scams, it is easy and convenient."

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"We don't have theocracy. If you say the metahuman wants me to do something, I say why. If you say a spirit wants me to do something, I go talk to the spirit. Well, I talk to friend werewolf and they talk to the spirit... I guess maybe a spirit rules, is that a theocracy? But spirits don't rule well, they say many different things and people argue. Democracy is better."

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"Yes, democracy and elves, both are better than spirits."

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"Elves have many jobs, frequently move to new jobs. This is Torig's dance. If a bad elph hurts people in one job, we know! Next elph is good, difference is clear. Many elph jobs are - not rule, do watch other elves. Look in shrine, ask why magistrate do this, ask why shrine doesn't remember that, ask why does magistrate want to hide memories? Skills for asking are in shrines, but many small shrines, not big old important shrines. If a bad elph hurts people and hides, we break the bad watching shrines. We don't think, why are the skills bad, we just try new skills. We talk to people, many people, not only housechiefs, many kinds of people, and ask, does the magistrate want you to keep a secret? They can't keep a secret from elves.

Nosimasna has many small shrines, like Lei has many small shines for watching other elves, Nosimasna uses same idea but all shrines. Lei has many useful memories now, old shrines are useful, but Nosimasna is example."

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"Everything will have some scams? Maybe I don't understand scams. I think scams are very rare?

If there is a scam on the internet, like... I say I send you a book, you pay me internet money, I don't send you a book, what happens? Oh, internet money is private, so I say, if you pay I send you a book! You must pay! And you say you pay me already! The police ask me and ask you and they don't know about the money because the money is private? Is that correct?"

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"That is mostly right for internet scams. The internet is free, and sometimes it's also anonymous- Nobody knows who is saying things. Which is good for freedom of speech. What happens is, someone takes your money and doesn't send the book, you don't get your money back. You say on the internet- That guy is a scammer, he took my money! Don't trust him! And people do not trust sellers who do not have a good reputation on the internet. Sometimes there are broker organizations, where someone says, 'you can buy and sell things on my internet place and if there is a scam or a dispute, tell me, I will pay everyone back, but I will keep one in one hundred of the money every time and I will kick you out if you have disputes often'. Or there are money-handling organizations that say, 'whenever you pay someone, actually I pay them and you pay me back later, and if someone scams you, we will deal with it instead of you, and you pay just a little bit extra'."

He shrugs.

"Or you can carry physical money around and go to places to buy things in person. Convenience? Risk? Extra cost? It depends on what is most important to you sometimes."

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"Freedom of speech, meaning you say things...how? However you like? How does anonymous talk on the internet help with that? I guess, I understand that it means you can say things, but I don't understand why people listen?"

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"It means no magistrate can go, 'saying that is a crime!'. Freedom of speech is not freedom to say anything with no consequences, or that people will listen. It is saying things and the government won't stop you. Unless you use speech to do crimes, like trying to get people to hurt each other. It is a matter that is debated often among Earth societies, where the right to speech ends and the right to safety begins."

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"Oh dear. Trying to get people to hurt each other isn't a crime here. Er, it is if you lie, but if you say you want to hurt a person and I hear you and then I hurt them, that is my crime not your crime. I'm worried now. In the past, I think that we can go to Nivis and, we don't hurt people, don't break machines, that means we don't do crime. But now I don't know. Maybe you have more crimes.

I guess we have many crimes which you can do them just by talking: scams, violating Freedom to be Happy, say secrets, lie and say that you are police, in the past there was male-human disiniuria... Trying to get people to hurt each other, this makes sense, this is a crime.

I'm embarrassed. I think about aliens lots, very strange differences, but I forget that you are aliens, I make mistake, I make danger of causing crime. We must talk more."

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"The country Kemnl has male-human disiniuria. It has elph disiniuria too!"

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"Lei has elph disiniuria, but we learn and find bad elves before they do disiniuria. Last elph disiniuria happen many decades ago."

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And of course the FD has elph disiniuria, but if he said that he would be getting political. He glares at Merta.

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"We don't have rules about disinuria... Using some kinds of weapons is treated more harshly than using your fists. I think perhaps I don't understand something. What are some examples of disinuria?"

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"Examples of disiniuria: A catfolk burns a werewolf. A werewolf makes a hole in the ground with a thin door on top, opens the door to make a catfolk fall down the hole. In Kemnl, a male human lies, says he is a diplomat, does diplomat things to hurt someone... or is diplomat, true, and then lies and hurts someone. A werewolf hits a frogold with hand. An elph in Kemnl lies about shrine memories to hurt someone. An elph in Lei - I don't know. A catfolk makes a female human pregnant with catfolk, makes her not kill the child. A vampire and a boark go into a mine, the vampire knows that the mine is dangerous, the vampire says, I'm tired, I go home, the mine is safe, you stay... and the mine falls down and hurts the boark.

Examples of not disiniuria: A werewolf does the hole and hurts a werewolf. A werewolf hits a werewolf. A werewolf hits a child werewolf. In Sota, an elph lies about a shine memory to hurt someone. A catfolk tries to burn a werewolf but the werewolf is better at fighting. Examples are crimes, just not disiniuria."

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"It seems like a lot of things are disinuria."

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"Hmm. Disiniuria is if you use a difference between species to hurt someone. There are many differences between species, so many kinds of disiniuria, but only one rule."

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"Why is disinuria a crime? Is it scary? Is it unfair?"

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"Disiniuria means that if a catfolk is angry and hits with hand and if a catfolk is angry and burns, this is two different things. The burn is more scary. If one crime, hit or burn, I must be careful so catfolk are never angry. If disiniuria is a crime, hit and burn are two crimes, I know that catfolk know that hit and burn are two crimes. I know that if catfolk are angry, they maybe hit but they never burn.

Catfolk are scary... Werewolves are scary. Many species are scary and many species aren't scary... but if I am a mouseling, all species are big, all species are scary. Some people want to think about, if I am a species and you are a species, are you scary, for every two species. They want to think about every two species.

Some people say, if some species can do disiniuria easy and some can't, this is unfair. In Kemnl, a male human is maybe very angry, can't do disiniuria. But a catfolk, a little bit angry, can do disiniuria. Different size angry, this is unfair, they say. But... If a person does disiniuria, they must die with disiniuria. Some people say, every species must can do disiniuria, for killing like that. Some people say no, a friend of a different species maybe kills like that. People think many things."

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"...I will try to understand. I think now might be a good time for a quick break."

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Riley Cameron has been charged with negotiating the construction of stone structures and infrastructure for a non-glacierized town. She'll talk with whatever representatives are present to arrange this. On offer is metal, machinery (especially hydroponics, but a polyester mill or other things are possible), possibly PDAs or training and education. 

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All those things sound good, although they're more interested in metal for nutrition than as a material. They're not sure how to come to a fair deal, since it's going to be so beneficial for both parties.

Where do they want the town to be located? Near Orocide? Close to the chartreuse or close to the glaciers? Near the border between Allheart and the Freedom Democracy, or the border of FD and Lei, or close to only one of the three factions?

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The duke of engineering of Nitatlel wants to know if they already have a detailed plan, and if so, if it requires precise measurements, and if it requires particular types of rock... werewolves can 'stir' rock to make it stronger even if it starts out bad, like shale say.

Also, how much protection will they need from earthquakes? They're used to protecting shrines, which are made of stone and can't have any damage you can see or feel - but are the machines even more sensitive than that? The usual shock absorbers require periodic re-inflation but they have machines to pump air, right?

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The Frozen City is near the border between FD and Lei, just saying...

Here's an idea for a fair deal: how about Exodus and Ansaf both get a new town, or equivalent population growth? So, Exodus could trade something with metal or hydroponics or just some electric lights?

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Huh. What metals are most dietarily useful? They haven't identified a lot of drydark mining sites yet; Cobalt, copper, and iron. Most of the other metals they have in lower quantities and lack an assured ongoing source and so are less eager to part with.

They do have a detailed plan. A computer program and a team of engineers helped put it together based on the desire to build out more industry and also a small university. There's aboveground and belowground portions, roads, warehouses, residences, water pumping and sewage plants, a small airport, and all sorts of additional buildings. It adds up to kind of a lot.

There's lots of small holes and tunnels plotted out for the walls, and there are particular building codes for earthquake safety and fire safety and so on, and yeah, it requires precision down to about 0.3cm, especially they also plan to fit out everything that gets built with machinery- Plumbing, electrical wiring, WiFi, etc. It's plausible that LIDAR units and other surveying tools will be helpful on that front, and they'd like to be involved in the excavation process as observers at least, and are happy to let the builders also observe the electrical and plumbing outfitting in turn, if they like.

They also have information about earthquake precautions. Shrine levels of earthquake precaution seem perfectly adequate. Particularly sensitive machines (like ones for making computers) or ones that cause a lot of vibration themselves (power production and bulk processing) will be built into special housings for that purpose.

Exodus would be happy to trade some of any of those things! Exact amounts can be demurred on for now, they're not really sure what a fair level is yet either. Maybe the equivalent of about half of what it would cost in machinery and effort to do it themselves? Oh, and they can comfortably feed up to about 600 workers for the duration of the project, from hydroponics and SCOP. Maybe less if werewolves eat more than an average human.

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The duke of engineering doesn't think that musical descriptions of metals will be useful, but did bring samples. If Riley has an x-ray spectrometer handy, the most critical samples are manganese, selenium, and cobalt. Zinc and molybdenum are also important but there's enough of those. And there are probably other necessary substances that people need and can't make within their bodies, because people still suffer from forms of illthrift that lieflings can't diagnose.

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Wow those plans are really complicated. Werewolves can make parts accurate to 0.3cm if they have a way to measure it, or even much more precisely for very small features, but making a whole house that precisely will require measuring tools. They have an intuitive sense of where their enervated rock is, but it's similar to their sense of touch - more accurate for smaller objects.

Normally a dark building is raised from the ground by a single werewolf in a single session, but maybe they should consider making smaller parts first and then assembling them. That's similar to how Exodus makes things without magic, right?

Doing it in a single pass is obviously much faster if it's possible, but the worry here is that each werewolf will spend a whole shift enervating a house just to make a few small adjustments, and then the next wolf will have to start over. But how fast can they measure a building and communicate the needed changes with their 'LIDAR'?

Werewolves who are lying still using their magic don't eat that much, but if they're doing heavy labor they'll eat more than humans. Werewolves like meat but don't require it to be healthy, so they'll be excited about the SCOP.

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How are they looking for mining sites? Would a vampire help?

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(Dr. Montero has an x-ray spectrometer handy! And might have some ideas on identifying illthrift causes later!)

They have some of this one, cobalt. And yes- Most things they build are built in parts and assembled later- Foundations tend to be dug and framed out, then steel rods prepared, then a cement and rocks mixture is poured for everything that would normally be werewolf work... She brings out the LIDAR system from one of their crates (they brought a lot of gear to show off, she says wryly) and takes about a minute to set it up in a corner. It shines red light in odd patterns in all directions. Then she reports exactly how long and wide the room is and the exact dimensions of the door and skylight- They could call out adjustments about that quickly. The LIDAR unit even has a mode that will compare to what the plans say and call out discrepancies. And she agrees that SCOP is great- There's a few different strains, her favorite is ""turkey"", you can get it almost chewy enough to feel real, she ate real turkey once.

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That gets her sympathetic looks from Mirana and the catfolk assistant.

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Earth has so much soil just lying around!

How about they use a hybrid approach: take stone out of the ground in pieces and roughly shape the pieces in one shift, then an Exodus team puts in the metal, then the werewolves enervate a chunk of building (each werewolf with their own self-supporting vertical slice) and finish it with guidance from the LIDAR. That means long shifts for the werewolves, but the second shift won't have any physical labor, and both shifts will be mentally taxing only for the last few hours.

If this doesn't work, they can do it in smaller steps and only assemble the pieces at the end, but the duke of engineering wants to make sure Exodus sees the benefit of using werewolves!

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They won't just be using werewolves, though... They'll probably want a few catfolk, at least at the beginning? And definitely a vampire and a mouseling and some harpies and gnomunks and boarks.

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By the way, how fast do Earth humans reproduce? How much population growth was Exodus originally aiming for, and will all these new towns change their plans?

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It's possible the steel reinforcements aren't necessary if werewolf-reinforced stone is sufficiently strong, which would speed things up- They should get a sample back to Nivis to test it on a hydraulic press, maybe, something they DIDN'T actually bring along. She'll write to the engineers back home and see what they think.

...Actually, can werewolves enervate in narrow shapes? Could they, for example, separate a large slab from its surroundings without having to enervate the whole thing? In that case, one of the Transport Vehicles' cranes could speed up that part of the work a lot if they make eyelets to run cables through at the top of the slabs for hauling around.

The topic of population growth is maybe slightly sensitive and she doesn't want to speculate too much; On Earth the number of children one has depend on a lot of factors but they hover fairly close to replacement level in most places. Exodus people were selected in part for a desire to have more children than average, but the crash, uh, kind of interferes with that. Anyway, the new towns are both to give people currently living in Nivis more space, to build out industry and machines, and in case some Ansaf natives might want to become citizens of Exodus.

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Samples of stone with various degrees of stirring, coming right up!

Werewolves can enervate narrow shapes, but it doesn't save much time, which is mostly dependent on the distance from the werewolf to the farthest enervated point and the complexity of the shape. The typical process for moving stone is for each individual werewolf to make a disk starting from the center, with a little help from other werewolves to form the rim, then roll it to its destination while enervating out to the rim and stirring the insides, and put it into its final shape, all in one shift. But yes in the special case of moving a lot of stone a long distance, without stirring the insides or changing the overall shape, they use tricks with big slabs, measured accurately from the start.

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Are they ready to accept immigrants, then? Or at least ready to talk about immigration now?

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"We can at least talk about immigration in general terms," Sergei says cautiously, coming over from the other conversation. "We would be delighted to accept immigrants who think they would have a good life in Nivis or other Exodus towns, and who bring new skills and understanding and magics to build the future, as long as we do not have too many all at once before we have the chance to build more hydroponics."

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Countries on Ansaf, if they're not at war and both ruled by elves and both have another thing that might be offensive to discuss, generally accept immigrants freely and redistribute land accordingly. Nowadays this only matters to the farmers right up against the borders, but it's a very old and respected treaty. If Exodus is going to limit their immigration, the upside is that they don't have to immediately figure out how to fairly redistribute land outside of the chartreuse, containing discrete hydroponics buildings and discrete electricity generation machines rather than an even layer of farming. The downside is they have to work out the details of limiting immigration, in both directions...

Is Exodus going to evaluate applicants somehow? Will applicants need to already know English and be familiar with the laws?

Will Exodus let people leave? If they leave for Allheart, the tengu is sure that the country that receives them will try to pay fairly for the knowledge they bring.

It would be wise to balance immigration from Exodus between Lei and FD, and that probably means balancing with Allheart too. And independent countries like Stchà. The obvious way to do that is to set the immigration limit to be a fixed fraction of population.

As for Ansaf, there are only a few countries and a few species who are prevented from leaving. Allheart doesn't do that at all.

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Specifically it's the FD that prevents undines from leaving, and the Frozen City, an ally of FD, that prevents aasimar from leaving.

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Exodus thinks that if they have no limit on immigration, they might have a food crisis, that's all. They had not planned to stop people leaving (if educated people want to go abroad in protest that's really their prerogative), but they might set limits on exports of machines. And they might want to talk about an extradition agreement.

(He frowns thoughtfully at the mention of undines and aasimars.) 

If there's a wait list for immigration to Exodus in case they get way too much interest, that might just solve it neatly. They have a working model of computer translation into this language, so English while quite helpful is not even strictly necessary. Exodus would consider people working and using their magic, contributing, to be good, but... He's interested in hearing more about the land exchange treaty to see if it might have useful ideas for what is fair.

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Maybe instead of land, they could transfer a portion of their electricity supply? Or money of a type that can buy electricity and hydroponics supplies and whatever? But then who maintains the machines...

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Maybe the equivalent of land isn't electricity, it's sunlight in the drybright and wind in the drydark... but land in the chartreuse is already all farmed and it's easy to change its ownership without disrupting the crops. It's going to be a long time until anyone is using every last bit of their sunlight and wind, which means that exchanging light and wind ownership won't be any benefit at all. Maybe accepting an immigrant should also come with a one-time payment to use for increasing solar and wind capacity, and hydroponics, and whatever else an immigrant needs... the land itself also isn't going to be fully occupied for a while.

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The treaty, at least for land that gets direct sunlight, actually already specifies a segment of sunlight rather than an area of land!

Regarding extradition, that should be fine for cases where someone leaves a jurisdiction and is later discovered to have committed a crime. Does Exodus have crimes you can do over the internet?

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There won't be enough machines for every part of the globe to be used for a long time. On Earth, not EVERYwhere was used and they had billions of people.

There are crimes you can do over the internet, mostly consisting of 'deliberately messing with computers that aren't yours over the internet' in various ways, and the ever popular fraud. Internet regulation is probably its own whole separate discussion.

...Either included or separately from the immigration discussion, perhaps Exodus could get some kind of special exception for a section of sunlight-receiving land, and a small chartreuse-corridor, possibly underground. One thing they are considering, maybe in a few years when the industry is there, is a mass solar farm in the drybright and a major superconducting cable set, to carry that energy through the chartreuse to the drydark, where it can be used for industry and melting. Such infrastructure is bulky and dangerous if not treated carefully, they might want a section of space that's fairly large on human scales but still small for a planet, a kilometer or so, to account for security perimeters, monitoring, repair equipment and housing for technicians, useful near-existing-countries infrastructure, and so on. Another thing they are considering eventually is the construction of large orbital mirrors to light up the drydark.

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(Riley has just realized she never answered an earlier question about how they look for useful mineral deposits; They have specialized probes for it. They dig deep and then extend further probes in branching directions, gathering tons of data about magnetic fields, X-ray and seismic shifts, and so on, before producing a prediction of ore deposit locations based on a mountain of geological data and previous scans and ore findings on Earth. Most of the probes had a lot of single-use parts and have been used already, exploring for drydark resources. They've been a low priority for refurbishment or building more of, so far.)

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Fraud, like the scams they were talking about earlier? It sounded like they had ways to deal with them without making them crimes? Is... computers getting messed with a big problem? ...They can talk about this separately, sure.

If the superconducting cables are underground, will the strip of surface still be usable for farming?

Orbital mirrors, wow!

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(Then they don't need a vampire to help with the mining, oh well.)

The nearest border between FD and Lei is a straight strip across the chartreuse about 20m wide. It doesn't have any typical farming and isn't part of any towns. Technically its ownership is split between the two belligerent countries, but the people who live on it consider themselves independent. The most notable inhabitants are the ents - it's a thick forest - and an unknown number of tengu.

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"The surface should still be usable even if we require a fairly large underground space for the cable... And, well, yes, computers are a complicated multifaceted tool that are - integrated through most aspects of Exodus - that's like asking if magic or cooking getting messed up is a problem."

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(The tengu glances at Mirana, since it sounds like the underground cables will substantially reduce the need for border fortifications, which is good for both FD and Lei, but possibly better for one than the other and they're not sure which way it'll be... Mirana seems unperturbed. Perhaps having the machines at the dark end of the cables close to Lei is more important to her.)

Hrmmrmm sure if there was a way to mess up magic or cooking, that would be a problem, and if there was a way to do it from a distance, wow, the world would look very different! The tengu isn't sure how, exactly, but messing up magic or cooking would be a potent weapon, and of course doing that would be a crime - unless it wasn't a crime at all! Like how some places don't have elph disiniuria, because it's expected that elves will use their magic to do things like staying in charge and judging disputes, which sometimes hurt people.

Backing up for a moment, the reason the tengu is hesitating about crimes on the internet is that Ansaf doesn't have crimes that an individual can do from a distance long enough that it crosses borders. Well, okay, a drake could stand on the Sota side of the mountains and breathe hard and try to hurt someone on the Nitatlel side, and in that case Sota would be alarmed and happy to do an extradition. But the wind doesn't blow directly across most borders. All the examples that the tengu can think of are either borders between countries that are both in the Allheart Alliance, and/or borders with small wetlands countries like Koy and Stchà, where the wind would be going towards the hypothetical disiniurious drake.

If two farmers got in a fight and tussled back and forth over the border between, say, Nosimasna and Sient, the dispute would be judged by the magistrate with jurisdiction wherever they ended up after the fight, or they would choose a magistrate together, possibly randomly. If both people retreated to their home towns, refused to coordinate, and each complained to a different magistrate, well, the elves would work it out, and probably, in addition to the regular judgement, both of them would be punished for 'provocation', a broad and somewhat misnamed term that means pulling any kind of funny business with the law.

So if someone in Sota messes up a computer in Nivis, either that's a diplomatic incident between the two countries, or a whole new kind of crime they don't have experience with. Is it possible for Sota to set up their internet so that it's impossible for people in Sota to mess up computers outside Sota? While still having the benefits of buying stuff from Nivis or whatever?

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Sergei thinks about this very very seriously.

This is indeed a problem; On Earth, countries' internets are so densely interconnected that this sort of thing happens a lot. Most of the time it doesn't end in extradition or a diplomatic incident if it was just people insulting each other or sabotaging a single website. You have computer security people fix those things and move on. Only sabotage of security or research things, or spying for a war, or sustained campaigns of computer abuse like twenty people all doing the same thing to every computer they can find, or things like that, got countries VERY upset and causing diplomatic incidents.

It is possible to segment the internet into various sub-networks with limited or specific ways of connecting to the computers on the sub-network, mostly for security purposes. They do that already in a lot of ways, for a university's computers, or the reactor computers, or the Security team's computers. Hypothetical-Sota could have a Sota-Internet that only allows connections to other computers in Sota. Maybe with a special portal computer that acts a bit like a kitsune transferring messages to the Exodus internet, but only if they're addressed to a list of specific, approved Exodus computers- Ones for sending diplomatic messages, ones for talking about purchases and immigration, and so on, limiting the scope of the potential problem.

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Yeah, partially separating the internet by country seems wise, at least for now. 

(Merta and Mirana emphatically agree.)

They should see what the Freedom Democracy wants...

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It sounds like the elves are trying to hide something, and dividing the internet might suppress people's Freedom to Grow. The FD wants a full connection with the Exodus internet. They will make messing up computers a crime and, thanks to their undines, they are sure they can prosecute it themselves.

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"Oh, that reminds me. Exodus has serious concerns about the freedom of Undines and, separately, of Aasimars, to immigrate. Restriction of freedoms to certain groups, with various justifications, has historically been abused on Earth."

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Indeed, the Freedom to Travel is the fourth most important Freedom. In the case of undines, their Freedom to Travel is overridden by the most important Freedom, the Freedom to be Free, protecting the whole country and the Freedoms of all its inhabitants. Currently, the war with Lei is balanced and hardly ever involves actual violence. Currently, FD has the military advantage of the undines and the military disadvantage of respecting its people's Freedoms. If that balance was disrupted, people would get hurt, and Ansaf would lose one of the only two countries that advocate for Freedom. The other being Exodus, of course.

The Frozen City doesn't actually prevent aasimar from leaving; its people are just very dutiful and don't want competition. Mofil acknowledges that not wanting competition is a slightly dishonorable motive, but the Frozen City is an ally of the FD, so he must advocate fairly for its interests.

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"We understand that just saying we don't approve isn't likely to lead to a change in policy, and that military balance considerations are touchy at best. However... We don't approve, and we would be interested in talking about deals or changes in conditions that could lead to an end to discrimination by species."

...But after that the discussion can move towards a general 'how does the internet even work' where he tries to explain DNSm and encryption basics and so on.

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Dr. Montero has a lot of questions about the biology of different species and is quietly mentally sizing people up for willingness to participate in abominations of science radical experiments. Are any species interfertile without Ansaf-human magic? Just how similar are Ansaf-cats to Earth-cats (and any number of other plants and animals for that matter- It's really quite odd!)? Would there be any humans willing to be gene-scanned to see if they're similar enough for Earth-designed genetic retroviral optimizations to take? And then try one, if they are?

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Of the nearby people, Hestlierre and Lin seem most intrigued by discussion of biological modifications. And Merta, but Calsa looks concerned when the topic comes up and talks to Merta in private afterward.

The only interfertile species anyone knows of are ents and lieflings, in both directions - the children take after the mother. Some pairs of mammal-derived species can get pregnant enough for a liefling to detect but soon miscarry.

Ansaf cats are long extinct, and Ansaf wolves more recently, but mice and bugs and plants are available. The mice aren't exactly any Earth species, but they're definitely rodents. Similarly with the sunflowers and rats and wild-type corn. Drake-made plants like garosmaize and bloodsquash are distantly related to Earth species. Some species, especially microorganisms, are recognizable as related to Earth life but nothing more specific.

Lots of Ansaf-humans are interested in risking their health for science. They're homo sapiens, but not homo sapiens sapiens. Probably interfertile with Earth humans. The gene therapy should mostly work, depending on the exact genes targeted by a particular optimization.

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He studies the genetics carefully and gets permission from Lucy to try a relatively simple and conservative change on up to 10 volunteers. How about this one that adjusts the feeling of hunger downward and satiation upward (and incidentally can alleviate heartburn and some gut-health issues)?

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Woah. Even if it doesn't reduce actual caloric needs, reducing the suffering caused by being on half rations is awesome!

How long until one that works on werewolves.

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Back in Orocide, Tolesli has been studying English and following the news from the diplomatic center.

He finds an Earth-human who looks official. "I want to be a person of Exodus. I know that it's dangerous and I might get sick worse, but I'm sure that it's what I want."

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(A version for werewolves might be available in 4-6 weeks.)

 

"-Uh, let me figure out who to ask about that."

Ten minutes later the nurse comes back. "They want to know if you're fleeing danger from your home country. And that there's not necessarily any guarantee you'll be able to go back, and you'll have to learn English and technology basics, we'll organize classes for it once we have a few immigrants. Of course we'll do our best to heal you but at this point the disease does seem to not be too alarming, from a medical perspective, I think you'll recover fine either way."

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"I'm kinda fleeing danger - Not now, but if they discover that I asked to immigrate to Exodus then I'll be in danger."

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"Okay, well, the answer they gave me for 'yes' was 'Exodus welcomes everyone, and we haven't agreed to an extradition treaty yet', so I guess that's fine probably."

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That's ominous! But his chances are still better in Nivis.

And of course he has a mission!

"I understand. I want to be a person of Exodus. I want to leave Lei, and I want to warn you about them, and now that I'm doing that, they'll be angry and I really want to leave Lei. Officially, when do I become a person of Exodus?"