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Lady Katherine does not rush back to Milliways, since that gives off the wrong impression, but she moves quickly, making long strides that seem more elegant and poised than hurried.

"I do believe I should discuss this venture with our governor before getting too excited. Would you terribly mind waiting before we set to work, Nimo?"

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"Sounds like a good plan, yeah, let's."

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"Thank you." Is Valanda still in the main bar area?

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Yes and he's noticed the open door.

"Hey, Katherine, want to do something about your world?"

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"Yes. We should sit down and talk about it. You can join us if you like," she tells her door-holder.

"I think I'll wait... Outside? If you don't need me."

"It won't take any time at all from your perspective, then. Thank you."

Her door holder goes outside and shuts it behind him. Katherine gestures towards an empty booth.

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He goes and sits there.

So does Nimo, she'll just presume she's invited until Katherine actually says otherwise.

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Kat glances at her a bit askance but doesn't say anything.

"...Your friend Liane and I both failed to think about the rest of the world last time we had a Milliways door. I want to hire Nimo, a force mage or two, possibly a heat mage and a few others, and evacuate or supply the entire world."

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"We talked about evacuating the world, the reason we didn't was the travel time with the door open traded off against distributing heat cores. That's not a problem I've solved since then. If you have there's still the size of the door and the fact that it'll be hard to place tens of thousands more refugees at once. We might be able to do it, though. I'm in favor if we can."

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"A few months of time have passed there. Nimo, can you tell me how many settlements got heat cores?- Wait, no, the door's closed. Well. With a force mage, the travel time concern is mostly obviated. Nimo suggested going back to Har, getting out of my house somehow - through the windows, perhaps, and I'll tolerate a demolished wall, it's important - and hiring one."

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"Travel time's a worry with force mages too, you know, no reputable pilot will fly faster than they can react if something comes up," says Nimo.

"Yeah, but say we get five dozen working in parallel," says Valanda. "...I'm not going to pay for five dozen and eventually I'll run out of land to give away, how are you planning on funding this?"

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"I have some savings and can appeal to the town for theirs, but that's not really enough. I can also tell them to get started on building scads and scads of temporary housing. We can probably work with much less land per person than you gave the first round of immigrants. As for the rest of the money, an expedition to Harrods. There are liable to be tens of millions of pounds in banknotes in its vaults. Bar accepts defunct currency, and so long as it's recognizable, if soggy, that will fund quite a lot."

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"That works. And I bet I can find someone who can find at least a few dozen of them jobs if they come to Ira Sani. Then again you all didn't like the idea of coming to Har much and that was when there weren't that many other people to hold doors for you. Think we should get some other people in on it, offer everyone more choices than you had?"

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"Har has some unpleasant failure modes for us, and I think many people will choose to stay where they are. Conditions are improving, they won't trust us entirely, they won't like the idea of Har's laws. As for other people and other worlds, yes, I think we should. I don't know if anyone here is going to be in a position to accept thousands of refugees, though."

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"Well, if we get enough of them helping, no one'll need to take thousands. Maybe we should put up a sign while we talk, so people who could help know what we're up to without us having to bother anyone."

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"Worth trying. Though signage doesn't have the same pathos as talking to people will, it gives us more exposure. I'll think about a good message."

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"And it won't annoy them, can't forget that. So when we do this, will everyone in your world speak English?"

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"No. Perhaps three fourths of the survivors will have good English, looking at these numbers." She pulls out the map. "Other survivors from France, the low countries, the Nordic states, I'm not sure if these groups will be Austrian or Germanic, these are probably Russians - Oh, I just realized." She points to Texas. "They must be burning petroleum. Clever. Anyway, of the natives who outlasted the cold alone, and any survivors from places other than the United Kingdom or America, few or none will know English. I have a little French and Russian, and we can probably scrounge up someone with any given European language. If only one person can talk to a group that makes things harder. Hmm... For natives we can't talk to, we can't explain Milliways. So I'm inclined to just give them some useful things that are easy to use - invulnerable tools, heated items - and let them make of it what they will."

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"If there are multiple groups of those in different places it'd be possible to let them communicate through illusions. They might not understand each other but they could learn after a while."

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"None of them are illusion mages. What do you have in mind?"

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"You know, like illusion shows - Nimo, you'd know more than I would - "

"Paired objects with knowledge and illusion enchantments, each one shows what the other one sees and hears. You want them to come with boxes that block the magic just in case. Making them do translation would be harder but people on either side could point at things and name them. That what you mean?"

"Yeah, those."

"We can get a pair or several but they're on the expensive side for enchanted things."

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"Technology can accomplish the same sort of thing but it breaks down a lot more readily than something with proper defense magic on it. Hmm. I think whatever happens, we're going to want someone staying in Milliways permanently, to look for opportunities. So that can go on a list of helpful projects and we'll look into it when everything more urgent is done."

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"Yeah. How much is it going to cost me to buy your house?"

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"You want to buy it? I was going to donate it to the New Dover Council and let them turn it into a resettlement center or whatever's needed. I'll get it back, or a new one, eventually."

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"Yeah, I want to buy it. If you were thinking of giving it away free I'm guessing it won't cost me too much, but I'd rather not just take the land I promised you without any compensation."

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"I am not, to be honest, quite sure I want to sell it to you. You've been very kind, but there are other concerns. Is there any particular reason why you have to own the entryway to Milliways?"

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"Yes. I need to be able to make sure that everyone who enters Har is willing and able to obey the law. If I don't, you can bet the imperial government will hold me responsible even if you're the one who held the door. You're not in as much danger if I let criminals in."

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Oops, she'd forgotten about that bit.

"Someone will commit a serious crime eventually. If thousands and thousands of people are involved it's all but guaranteed to happen sooner or later, even if people are individually, on average, quite law-abiding."

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"And I'll make that argument to the imperial government when I have to, I'll point to the crime rate among natives, but if they buy that then I still have to make sure the people I let in aren't any more criminal than the ones who live in Har already."

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"Hmm... I am a little concerned you will end up denying people I want to include, mostly. Will you want to limit how many people immigrate, or just make sure they understand that the law is the law, or...?"

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"If everyone ends up wanting to come I might want to limit it to a certain number, but they probably won't. Who do you imagine you'll want to bring in that I won't?"

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"People with violent or criminal pasts who have reformed and won't have to do that sort of thing anymore? I'm not entirely sure."

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"I wouldn't turn people away just for that. Just if they seem like they'll do it again."

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"...Hmm. Fair enough. Would it be alright if I sold you a lengthy lease on the house and land, instead? If not-"

Her named price is less than what it cost her to have a nicer house than most of her neighbors built, but not by that much.

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"I can afford that. I hope you don't mind but I'd rather wait to pay until after we've talked about it where someone can scry the deal."

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"Of course. I'm a bit peckish - I'll go get a signboard and something to eat. Do you two want something? I'll buy."

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"Oh, always. See if Bar can get you something Hylian-style, they have good food there, I bet you'd like it."

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"...I'm full from earlier but thanks anyway."

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She goes and gets food.

"Hylian-style looks tasty! Thank you for the recommendation. Here's your plate, Valanda."

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"Thanks! So will most of the people from your world be against slavery, or just the ones from England?"

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"Not everyone, I think. But most of them, probably."

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"Good. If this goes well maybe abolitionists will be a voting majority in Ira Sani, then maybe I won't have to run for a second term."

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"That would be an exciting development, to be sure! I imagine an abolitionist governor would irk the imperial government a lot with incessant attempts to figure out some way to get rid of slaves - though honestly, what you've done is a step in the right direction. Laws about fairly treating slaves, or somehow distinguishing minor slaves, will be called for I think - but that's for later."

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"Yeah. If it weren't so dangerous to let someone loose who doesn't know what they're doing, we could require parents to free their kids when they're grown, but that'd get everyone killed pretty quick." Sigh. "You know, if you want it to be your problem I'll endorse you."

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"It's intimidating. But I think I could handle it. And someone has to handle it."

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"I'm not intimidated! I just hate every minute of it. So we'll try to get as many of them through as we safely can - I hope Liane wants to come."

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"Perhaps she actually will, if the situation on Earth improves enough!"

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"I can't imagine she'd have any reason to stay if we offer everyone a ride to Milliways. Even if they don't all take it. ...Hey, is time still paused in your world? You said time passed while you were in Har, so is having you in here enough to stop it now?"

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"Well, I intend to go back. Intending to go back is what pauses time according to one of Bar's rules of thumb. Nimo, if I open the door for an instant, can you tell if time passed without us there?"

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"Not literally instantly but if I can have a second or two, yeah."

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So she produces a ring and tosses it gently and goes over and opens the door for a moment and then shuts it again and comes back over.

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"Yup, time's stopped there."

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"That's a relief. We can recruit from Har and plan without things deteriorating any more out there."

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"So you were suggesting more heat cores and I thought we should have illusions for different groups of people who are staying. And we need to find and rescue people in parallel, not serially. How many force mage teams do you think we'll need?"

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They get to work on planning.

 

A few people approach them because of the sign. One of them is from another Earth where it's 1812, and from Australia, and would be happy to let a few dozen people through if they'll work for his shipping company. Pay's fair, or so he claims. One is from some kind of magic theocracy and doesn't explain very clearly and says they only want unmarried women. Katherine makes a face and says that that won't be necessary, have a nice day. One of them is from a rich, liberal, English-speaking-for-some-reason not-Earth place, and will let one family of refugees through and no more.

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"Wow. You'd think Har would be the least helpful."

The next person to see the sign offers asylum and personalized language-tutoring and job-finding for "lots of people, maybe most of them" by which they turn out to mean a couple hundred.

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"That's still quite helpful if anyone would like to go with you. Thank you. We still have a lot of planning to do but with any luck, Milliways will be convenient about timing."

She's going to verify that his world is a decent one with Bar later, of course, though.

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(Based on its published works that world is a low tech one with high infant mortality but the country the door opens on is politically stable and cosmopolitan.)

"So when we open the door to Har we start knocking down walls, I buy your house, we go to the city looking for force and illusion mages to hire - maybe we should get Nikolas while we're there, I bet he has good ideas - anything I'm forgetting?"

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"Should the imperial government be aware they're going to have thousands of new citizens soon, or is it better to ask forgiveness than permission in this case?"

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"Let's let them figure it out. I'll send them a letter when we're done but they'll see when people start showing up."

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With the door open they can get out without too much trouble. Valanda pays Nimo to watch the door for them.

In the capital there are only a few force mages interested in working for them right now.

Valanda goes to check if Nikolas is in his store.

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"Mr. Roth is not in today!" A cashier cheerfully informs him.

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"Did he tell you where to send people who are looking for him?"

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"Uh no but I can take messages that will be sent to him via computer."

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"I'd like it if you'd tell him there's another door in New Dover and I want his advice about things."

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Click click typety typety- "There, message sent. I don't know if Mr. Roth will-" Ping! "-Uh. He'll be here in five minutes, apparently, Mr. Valanda."

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"Thank you! While I'm here can you recommend me any force mages?" His hands go to his necklace as he asks.

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"I'm afraid I don't have any particular recommendations for force mages, but we do offer a few transportation products by special order."

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In that case he'll go wait outside for Nik.

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And he seems to just appear out of nowhere with a slight breeze, like it amuses him to do. "Good afternoon, gov."

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"Nimo found a door, it's in Katherine's house, I thought you could help with things. We're heading back there as soon as we've found some force mages, wanna meet us there?"

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"I have a bunch of force mages I've been paying to send things into orbit, you can borrow those if you wanna pay them. Depending on how many you need a trip to the mainland might be called for. And, sure, Milliways is always fun."

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"I would love to borrow those. We're going to need so many. Who are they and how do I find them?"

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He gives names and probably places. "I'll let you pitch this job yourself, since I still don't know where it is."

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"It's in the icy death world the English people came from. See you at Milliways if you're going."

And he'll go try to recruit Nik's force mages.

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They're used to generous pay, but are totally up for being hired, including the thwilit with two force mage birds in its flock.

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Hey, a thwilit! Convenient! He hires one of their illusionists too.

Now where's Katherine gotten to?

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She's still in Milliways, writing prepared statements and explanations and lists of cheap-ish but useful presents for the many different groups they'll be talking to soon. Turning the factory shanty-town into a sort of processing area is on the docket too.

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He shows up back at Milliways with some mages in tow and a bunch of paperwork to try to finish whenever there's downtime.

"Hey! I couldn't find as many force mages as I was hoping but I've got some."

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"Welcome back. We can work with that - I've brought in a few people from New Dover to delegate to. The general idea is that each force mage has two liaisons, and will drop one off, then go drop the other off, then retrieve the first one and anyone who wants to return with them, then repeat. Efficient use of force mage time. I'd rather be able to stay in contact with all the liaisons, report everything back and organize it with a central staff, sort of. It's much easier to adapt that way. But if knowledge magic relays are expensive that might be a bit prohibitive."

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Oh look the sneaky vampire is here. "I'll donate a bounce sat and let you borrow a few hundred satellite phones for some collateral equal to the cost of manufacture, for this."

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Katherine fails to not startle. "-Thank you. Can those stay in contact through the entire world?"

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"Maybe a third of the total land area, with only one sat. So maybe you need two, that's not too pricey, and works much better." He shrugs. "You'll also want gear to organize and tabulate the phone data. I'll set it up for you but I'll have to charge at least nominally for that."

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"We can probably afford a nominal charge. Mind if I talk about the details with you in a bit?"

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"Sure. I'll be back when you're free."

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"And you've already rounded up all the translators we'll need? Where are we going to put them while we're vetting them for immigration, the backyard?"

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"Most in the backyard, some in rented rooms upstairs."

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"Have you already gotten those places prepared for people? The backyard might need beds, if this is going to take long enough. And leaving a bunch of copies of the laws around for them to read while they wait wouldn't hurt."

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"I was planning to ask Bar for copies of the laws when it's time. And I was also planning to set up staging areas in the factory, and on my front lawn. If we can keep everyone in constant contact, we can prioritize the sick and homeless and only bring people through as fast as we can handle them. You may want to screen many people at once for their likeliness to comply with the law, if you're going to gatekeep. I intend to pre-screen people as much as possible to reduce the part that depends on you alone, but it's still going to take a while."

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"Yeah, it'd be convenient if I could talk with people on the flight here - actually it'd be convenient to let them read our laws on the way here, maybe we could send the force mages out with copies. How are you planning on pre-screening?"

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"Law tests, interviews, including interviewing people who know the people. If we're uncertain, perhaps a brief consultation with a knowledge mage to see if they have a bad history. I think we can discourage those who don't have much chance of actually complying with the law from wanting to go to Har."

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"That... sounds like it should work. I hope it does. Are we going to do something about the people right by the door first?"

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"I am going to recruit them to help, or process them into Milliways and Har as a test of the process we have literally just invented, or get them out of the way via bribes, whichever ends up being easiest."

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"Sounds good to me. Do we need to do anything else before we start on that?"

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"I want to have Nick's equipment here, and go over the plans and procedures with all my helpers, make sure they understand it all, see if they have any input."

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"Sounds like a plan to me. I'll go get laws and things from Bar, then."

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And they organize things. Katherine is a little bit in over her head. She doesn't let it show. She organizes and tabulates and has meetings and makes plans and writes tests and all manner of other things. It's three weeks, subjective, less for most others, before she's confident enough to kick this whole thing off.

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He spends the time talking with Bar about the right format to hand out copies of laws and Hari lessons in, looking over maps to see where they can put this many people in the long term, talking to other bar patrons who might be able to take people in, and getting a list of things Bar can do for frostbite and lost limbs in order of price for frozen death world inhabitants.

"Let me know when you think it'd be helpful for me to talk to anyone."

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(People from New Dover have started building a tent city just south of the existing town, and would like to plan the expansion with him.)

"Probably in an hour or two. Would you like to come along and observe as we set up?"

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"Sure."

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And Katherine and her small legion of helpers go through, carrying some useful presents for the locals. She goes straight for the Mayor again and steamrolls him entirely in the following conversation. He quickly agrees to let everyone here learn about Milliways and Har and serve as a test bed for their process.

Nick and his force mages start on assembling the satellites, carted through Milliways in door-sized pieces.

As long as the other force mages are here and being paid for their time and not yet retrieving survivors from all over the world, they can help build temporary housing and a few can go on an expedition to Harrods with Nathaniel and a few other trustworthy people while Katherine tries to keep everything organized and moving forward.

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Liane ignores all the hubbub and soberly packs her things, what few things she has, and then walks towards the mayor's office-turned-command-center. Valanda is there, and Lady Katherine, and a few of the others she met before.

"Hey, guys." ...She's got an extra metal limb, now, her right leg, and seems a lot more subdued and pale than before.

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"Liane! I'm so glad to see you. You've got to come see New Dover, it's great and it's only there because of you."

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"Ah. That's nice." Huff, huff. She takes deep breaths and leans against a wall. "Yeah, I think I want to go there, now." She taps her two metal limbs together. "I've paid an arm and a leg. Heh. Think I've done my bit."

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"You really have. Do you need any help?"

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"I'll be alright. I am done adventuring, though. Probably never going to be really able to do anything more strenuous than laundry. Which sucks, but, lots of things do. I'll deal. I'll move in to the slavery empire, since it sounds like lots of people will."

 

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"If you can't find anything to do I'll find you something once you've learned Hari. I'm glad you're coming to Har, you have no idea how glad I am. Do you want a hug?"

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"You know and like another me, right? I don't really know you that much... I could use a hug sure."

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"Oh, I love the other you I know, but she's not the one who got me New Dover. She's not the one who found Milliways and could've been safe and chose to go back to save people - actually she did that too, but that's not the point."

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She walks up to him and holds her arms out tentatively - hug?

"I did what I had to, yeah? Hurts, now. But I don't regret it."

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He holds her tight. "I bet laundry is still a waste of your talents, you know. We'll find you something more fun and show you the whole town of people you saved and it's all going to be fine."

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She's maybe crying a little. And shaking a little. "There's - gonna be a new city. Full of survivors and hope."

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"Because of you."

He won't let go until she does.

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"Not just me. And - you guys - I could have done this, what you're doing now, the first time..." Deep breaths.

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"Nah. If I hadn't had New Dover I wouldn't've taken as many. And getting even ten thousand people all vetted and taught Hari would've been just about impossible, but now I've got more people who can translate and explain things."

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"Guess it all works out in the end, huh."

Sigh. Unhug. "...Thanks. I'll see what life brings me next, yeah?"

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"It'll be something cool. Well, go on, there's law codes for you to read and a whole new world when you're done with that."

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She goes, smiling slightly.

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"I'm assuming she's a shoo-in? And... I can see why you like her."

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"Unless she tells you she only wants to come so she can kill all the slaveowners, yeah, I want her in Har. Isn't she great?"

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"Selfless, steadfast, heroic." Nod, nod. "She's the sort of person who thrives when there's dangerous work to be done. I'm not so sure how she'll cope with safety."

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"There's dangerous work in Har but I'm not sure she can do any of it. I'll be keeping an eye out for jobs she can do, though."

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"It wouldn't be danger per se - more... Things that need doing."

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"There's a lot that needs doing, but she doesn't seem like she'd like trying to figure out child welfare laws that don't create perverse incentives."

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"Yes, that sounds difficult and not really to her skills. Perhaps an airship captain. Or emergency responder."

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"Yeah. If she were a force mage it'd be easy, I'd have half a dozen jobs to suggest just that I can think of right now."

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"I am hopeful it will all turn out fine."

 

Meanwhile, back to testing out their process. The expedition to London's banking district goes well - the New Dover Resettlement Fund is now pretty rich. They buy lots of stuff - books, tools, vehicles - from Bar to give to the people who want to stay on Earth and rebuild. Three hundred and forty-five people of the group that lives near the door want to move in to Har. A few hundred more want to go live in Milliways with the generous living expenses account Katherine and her cohort can afford to give them, which will last them couple of years. A few dozen want to sign on to the evacuation and rebuilding effort, which picked up the name 'New World Administration' somewhere along the line, and Katherine gladly integrates them. And another couple hundred want to just stay where they are. The weather's been getting better lately, anyway.

(There are more than a few arguments and a few fights, mostly over family drama. One man stabs his wife in the leg and is dragged off to a makeshift prison. There are a few duels, which were legal before the Great Frost and nobody seems inclined to punish the victors of.)

 

After four days, "I'm fairly confident the ones who want to move to Har will be peaceful and productive. They all passed the imperial and Ira Sani law tests - even the kids - and they've all been interviewed. We have transcripts. Most of the reason they want to move in is to help liberate the place - free land and access to mages who can do wonderful things for industry and science won't hurt, though. We will be able to pay for all that land at a good rate, mind. How do you want to handle final interviews?"

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"I think I'll talk with the ones who were getting into fights - that includes the duels - and I understand that in your world people take certain kinds of promises really seriously, do you think it'd be okay to have them all swear to follow Hari law or would that be a bad idea for some reason?"

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Nod, nod. "That would work. Keep in mind that some people take oaths more seriously than others. But asking folk to swear to God or on their honor and life that they intend to be peaceful citizens of Ira Sani and follow the law has no hidden flaws as a plan that I can think of. Perhaps not children under six, there are a few families with those."

They can just get that started, then. Some people have been peaceful and will gladly, eagerly even, swear to those terms. They shake Valanda's hand and thank him for the opportunity. Most of the rest are a bit more neutral about it.

There are five people who've been in fights or duels and have to explain themselves to him. Their explanations, in order, are 'my husband is a selfish idiot who was trying to control me I just want to be where he's not', 'it was the heat of the moment, I was in the wrong, it was only one punch but if you bar me for that so be it', 'he challenged me to a duel over this stupid old painting what was I supposed to do???', 'we were celebrating the good news by drinking and we argued a bit and I don't remember anything after that - I'll stop drinking', and 'I wasn't just going to lie there and get wailed on I don't regret putting that bastard in his place'.

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He likes all of them as people, anyway. He lets them know that Har doesn't have marriage, does have command magic that can be used for addictions, and understands the idea of self-defense. He watches how they react to that.

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...How does not having marriage even work? Well, she'll be glad to be divorced anyway.

The second guy just nods without any particular expression.

Duels are probably illegal there, right?

Maybe he ought to get that done for his drinking. He does like beer but he doesn't like who he is on beer.

Good, because that was totally self-defense.

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Wanting to be friends with all of them was totally not the goal. Whoops.

Yeah, they can come, they might all be less violent in better circumstances.

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Yay!

The door to New Dover opens to let hundreds of people through, annoying the other bar patrons. A few people go home with said other bar patrons - the ones who volunteered to take a refugee or five, anyway. They're going to hold the door for a while to let everyone who just went through get sorted and settled a bit and to cart through Milliways purchases.

Non-Frostworld-or-Har people slowly clear out and nobody else seems to be coming in. "I wonder if the door slows down external traffic when people do things like this?"

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"I guess no one could come in while the door is open."

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"We've been letting it stay closed for a few hours at a time here and there... Well, I think we can still accomplish our goals even if we stop meeting new people. I think we're off to a good start."

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"Seems like it, yeah."

 

And meanwhile the force mages are ready to get flying.

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They have a big staff sitting in a crowded office with lots of telecom equipment telling them where to fly! They've even practiced this a bit with more local flights already, just to get the coordination down.

Force mages can fly all over the place, but especially north. There are a lot more small groups of people than big groups, but the big groups are so much larger that they account for most of the actual surviving population. The prioritization system aims for those who seem likely to be most in need first, though. Mostly it goes well. Force mages drop off liaisons and supplies and let them get to explaining all the weird stuff going on lately. A few of the groups they contact react badly and shoot at the force mages' levitating cabin things with those cheap-excuse-for-a-force-mage weapons called 'guns' they all got briefed on.

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One of the force mages getting shot at decides to spell out "SEIHRA WAS HERE" in the sky with broken pieces of guns. Any more attacks?

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Running and taking cover, mostly!

A few of them are trying to do something with a large machine that doesn't look like a gun...

The person she's supposed to be dropping off here is talking to control, "Shooting at us, yes - Seihra destroyed the guns - Roger that. Seihra, control says to get out of here!"

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Well, that's no fun, but off they go.

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The guy talks to control for a while. "...Control says they have some kind of exotic weapon, probably that big machine, and they're pretty hostile. Don't seem to be starving or anything. Better just to leave 'em alone, they're not even close to anyone else, good riddance."

Force mages can go to places that don't shoot at them. And shooty places' neighbors can get some weapons for self defense, too. They can take their time a little bit on this end of the door.

When it comes to the door back into Har, they get screened people through the door as fast as they can, opening it for thirty seconds and rushing forty or more people through, and slamming it again. If they're done by the time the Imperial Government can so much as show up to object, so much the better.

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The imperial government notices eventually. They have a force mage in the air already by the time the last of the immigrants are through... but nowhere near Ira Sani yet.

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Katherine is in the main bar area buying books, computers, construction equipment, food, and other such things and getting them out the door as fast as possible.

...They don't want the imperial government in control of the door. They could be a lot worse, but they're paranoid and authoritarian and might be a disaster. When they get a radio call from a lookout that someone is approaching New Dover at speed, Katherine tells everybody that it's all in Har who's going to Har.

No other visitors have come in yet. She shuts the door relaxes a bit from the fast-paced ordeal that was that big evacuation - and it's not even over yet, they have to build homes for everyone on the other side. She would like to wait here for years and years, looking for someone who agrees with her and could bully the Imperial Government into figuring out something else to do with all the slaves - but she'd get old, and so very bored, too.

She unwinds for one last day. Nimo and Valanda have all the time they could want in Milliways, and then she exits too and lets the door close behind her. At this rate, she's probably going to see Milliways again eventually, anyway.

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Valanda and Nimo both come out with lots of otherworldly books. Nimo is months older.

"Well, I guess shutting it is one way to settle things. Want me to try to talk to them for you or do you want to do that yourself?" Valanda asks.

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"Well. That was an adventure, but what happens now... I probably look like the mastermind behind this no matter what you say to them. But they like you better, I think. I'll talk to them if they want, but let's have you do it first?"

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Out he goes.

"Hey, did the empire send you?"

"Yes," the belul force mage flashes a badge, "where's the door?"

"Closed now. And all the immigrants were vetted and shouldn't be any more likely to be criminal than anyone else. They're from the world that invented the automata, I thought some of them might have valuable skills. And they shouldn't be much of a danger even if anything goes wrong, they can't use our magic."

"Where are you putting this many homeless people?"

"I'll make New Dover handle that."

"Uh-huh. They want to see you in Mar Geru in three days. They'll cover travel expenses."

"Sure, I'll be there. Thanks for checking up on things, a bunch of people coming in could've been bad."

And back he goes to check in with Katherine and see if anything's gone wrong yet.

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Nothing has obviously gone wrong yet. But there are literally thousands of homeless people wandering around the outskirts of New Dover, but most of them brought blankets and a few other essentials through Milliways, and they're already getting started on arranging for people to sleep in rows in every house, church, factory floor, and even the heat-enchanted park gazebo - as well as starting construction on a sort of tent city just outside town. There's some grumbling, but there's also a lot of celebrating. Katherine is in the thick of it - organizing a trip to the mainland to buy a hundred tons of food, currently.

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Well, that's better than it could be. Probably shouldn't interrupt her.

Is Liane anywhere findable?

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She is sharing automaton operation tricks with some of the locals! Her voice carries pretty well, so probably findable!

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And he'll have to try to speak English, without having any shared language or translation effect to fall back on. Great. That's terrifying.

"Um. Excuse me, Liane? Found a list of jobs to you, they don't need good Hari or magic or legs."

He offers her a few sheets of paper stapled together.

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"Oh, thanks. You doin' alright? The Lord-y types bother you much? Wait, this is a democracy, just a slave-democracy, so they're not Lords..."

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"They don't bother me much, I talk to them soon. If you need a Lord-y type talk to me."

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"Oh, right, English and Hari is a thing. I'll probably try to learn Hari. All this is exciting! Good luck and all!"

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That sounds like probably a dismissal, probably. "Good luck and all!" he echoes and off he goes to get things done.

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She helps with the 'building a city from scratch' thing for a while. Eventually she gets bored of it and eats from one of the common kitchens going up, and she has a lot of money from saving bills and turning them all in at Milliways, and starts hiking the distance to the other city, Riuhiu. (There are automata-buses and force mages going back and forth but that's way too crowded.) She doesn't get all the way there by nightfall, but she's well used to sleeping in random cold places, she throws together a makeshift shelter and she has her sleeping bag. She gets there in the morning and wanders around for a while, clanking slightly.

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Signs point to the imperial and state government offices. An adult agerah and two kittens are going for a walk around town at the moment.

A noticeboard near the middle of town has a lot of ads, mostly in Hari, one in Ilan. Two are in English and seem to be new:

Hari and Lexori conversation practice for 24 rings per half hour, look for Exav the human on the first floor of the red building with the vines.

 

i want to buy humans. talk to han the erel illusion person at the market stall in the morning.

 

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Aww, the kittens are cute! It's only slightly weird that they're people!

...She had better not go looking for Han. She knew that was the norm here, but eesh. Hari practice is probably a good idea, but she should try to figure stuff out at least a little bit on her own at first. To the government office! They have a thing for that!

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They have a thing for that, yup. Just got a new shipment in this morning, figuring they'll have a lot of interest now.

In the video a cat seems to be naming objects.

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Eh, this is going to take a while. Kind of boring, but definitely necessary. She'll sit next to a building somewhere and people-watch and listen to object-naming. She has the grammar and pronunciation writeup that some linguist made on Learning-Hari-For-English-Speakers, too.

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She'll have such fun learning the tones.

There are all sorts of people out and about. There's a man with pointy ears wearing a baby who seems to be asleep. There's someone selling some sort of plants that have barely sprouted, from a cart parked on the side of the street.

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Well, it's not that much worse than Swedish, which she learned bits and pieces of what feels like half a lifetime ago. 

Pointy ears probably mean 'not a human'. Probably. Maybe it's a medical condition. She hops to her feet and tries to figure out what the plants are, once she gets to a point where she's bored just trying to memorize stuff.

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There are a few kinds and they have labels. They're such little sprouts it's hard to tell, but there's arugula, alfalfa and sunflowers. The seller tries to explain something about them. He's wearing the symbol for inheritance magic on a necklace.

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"Hari is not! Sorry!"

She doesn't recognize the symbol. And she's not a farmer. But hey, plant seedlings, neat. Maybe she should buy some and bring them back to New Dover? ...Eh. She'll mention this stall if she sees anyone speaking English, though.

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The inheritance mage seems confused and doesn't try to answer that.

A belul notices her accent and approaches her when she's done looking at plants. "Hello, my English slightly exists, can I give Hari and learn English?"

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"That sounds good! I'm not a teacher, though. I am not a mahan," she finishes, gesturing at the government-provided language tutorial.

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And this is what a belul looks like when they're... laughing? That's arguably a laugh.

"Mahan is boring anyway," the belul says in Hari. Then in English: "Is English first or is Hari first?"

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Well, hopefully she'll get the joke later?

"'Should we do English first, or Hari first?'" Shrug. "English first, and Hari second, switch every few minutes?"

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"...Is good. What is minutes?"

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"It's good, that's fine, sure. All things that mean 'is good'! Minutes is, uh, are... Tick, tock, tick, tock, are seconds, sixty seconds, uh, five twelve seconds is a minute..."

She's not trained as a teacher or anything but she will gamely try her best! And chatter and try to absorb stuff from this belul when it's her turn, too.

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The belul has lots of questions and lots of Hari pronunciation tips that are only sort of comprehensible.

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She's focusing on the grammar and vocab bits of Hari. Her accent is kind of awful. Tones are weird.

"Learning Hari is hard. Learning English is hard. Hey, why do you want to learn English?"

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The belul decides answering will be good practice and does it for free.

"Ira Sani people speak English. People know new automata, they speak English. Important people like you."

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"Yeah, I guess so. Well, I don't know how to make automata. I just know how to use them." She shrugs again. "Me? Important? That's a laugh."

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"What's a laugh? Is a laugh wrong?"

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...She laughs. "What I just did is a laugh. 'That's a laugh' is like... 'No, that's not right'. And also funny? It's an idiom, like 'letting the cat out of the bag' doesn't actually mean a cat was in a bag. Idioms are hard, don't worry."

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"I understand. Hari is like English, it has hard idioms."

He tells her some.

He'll keep on being a sort of okay language teacher as long as she's interested in chatting.

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This is pretty productive and more entertaining than listening to the boring government standard language tutorial.

"What do you do to work?"

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"I used to sell fruit back in Erhau before void magic was legal anywhere, but now I do magic research. What do you do?"

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"I was a scout! Scouts go places, look for people, watch for danger, help other people survive in nature. Probably not anymore. I got hurt pretty bad doing that."

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"That would be useful. Did it pay well?"

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"Nope. They promised me a spot in one of the cities for my family, but they didn't pay up on that." Sigh. "Everything was falling apart, the government collapsed, and money wasn't worth anything more. It paid in food and other stuff I found and scavenged, I guess."

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"Oh, no wonder you came here. Our government usually keeps its promises. Unless you count campaign promises, maybe. Are you still with your family?"

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"Nope. They're... Gone. Such is life."

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"Yeah, I never stick with one partner more than a couple years either."

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"That's not what I meant. Family is for life for most of us. It hurts that they died."

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"Oh, that makes more sense. I would never do it that way, it sounds horrible, but I know there are agerah who do."

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...Sigh. "Yeah. Well. Goodbye, hope you learned something."

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"Find me again if you want to talk more."

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"I'm sure plenty of people want to learn Hari over in New Dover, just head northeast until you see a tent city. Or catch the bus. Either way."

She walks away. A stroll down the market might cheer her up. Or be depressing again but in a different way if there are slaves for sale out in the open.

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There aren't any slaves for sale today. There's a child who's technically a slave but he doesn't seem to be for sale. He's sitting in front of a store reading a scroll.

There's someone hanging out turning things different colors. There are some frustrated people wearing magic symbols but not getting any customers. There's a doctor's office. There's someplace selling illusion shows.

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She should probably figure out what kind of magic corresponds to which symbol at some point.

Hey, shows! Like the videos Bar showed her. Those are liable to be good Hari practice! She heads for that place.

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The illusions are in sound-baffled boxes with still pictures and labels on the lids, maybe because it'd be really obnoxious to have ten shows talking at once. Three of them have names that are spelled in ways that Hari words are never spelled: two of those are illustrated with pictures of caralendri, one with a map of the mainland. Others are titled in Hari. They all have summaries in smaller, denser text that might be hard for Liane to read yet. There's Where Is Exav This Month, illustrated with a picture of a belul on a beach. There's The Ring Of Twilight, illustrated with an adult human and a baby agerah. There's Understanding Ereli, with a picture of an erel.

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Is there a proprietor around she can ask about the shows? Ring of Twilight looks like some kind of fiction, but a lot of the others seem to be documentaries.

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Yup, there's a caralendar politely trying not to obviously watch her.

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She hasn't made the connection that eye contact is impolite here, yet. "Hello! I want to ask about the shows, is it okay?"

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"Of course. What about them?"

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"I want shows that are... Not about people and places? ...I am not good at Hari. Do you know English?"

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"Not much," he says in English. "I try?"

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"Fiction shows? Fake stories, made-up, not about real people and places? Is The Ring Of Twilight one? Do you have any more?"

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"Yes! The Ring of Twilight is not real. You want them," he points to four shows including that one. It's not very many at all compared to the total selection. "They are a little different than Hari is the Language of the Empire. You touch them and you say 'liceti' so you see them. Say 'morati' so you do not see."

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"Oh, that's handy." Do they have price tags? If not, she'll ask how much they cost.

"Can I buy one not sound box?"

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They have price tags.

"I don't sell the sound baffles but my son does! At the moment he'd be up on the third floor of that building," he points. "Tell him Anran sent you, he'll probably answer."

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She buys all four fictional things with a high-value ring picked out from her backpack, and stuffs the shows in there for now. "I go find him."

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The building he's in has an elevator. Aside from the elevator and stairs there's only one door on the third floor.

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Is this his house or something? Seems like it, anyway. She knocks on the door.

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A caralendar answers. He's wearing an extremely flowy star-speckled black robe that seems to flutter without any wind stirring it. How he keeps it from tangling around his crutches is a mystery, maybe it's magic.

"Are you with Silver Productions or what?" he says.

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"Uh... Anran say I can buy sound baffle?"

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"Sure. I'm guessing you want one that'll just fit a copy of Hari is the Language of the Empire?"

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Thinking, thinking, "...Big? I get more shows?"

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"I have some big enough for a dozen that are still pretty portable. I've got bigger ones but you might have a hard time carrying them, unless you're a force mage. Want one that'll fit a dozen?"

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"Okay! Ooh, can this sound baffle-" she indicates her prosthetic arm by waving it around some, doing something with what's left of her real arm to make the elbow bend and the little claw at the end clack together.

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"You want it not to make any sound when you use it? I can do that for twenty-four rings."

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Not quite, but why worry about the details? "Is deal."

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He silences her arm. "Try it, see if that's how you want it."

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She waves it this way and that. Lacking the clickety-clack she's gotten so used to, as feedback, is actually kind of disconcerting. She nearly whacks herself in the head with it, unable to hear the telltale click of the elbow locking, throwing off her balance.

"...Can you do less not noise? Not all noise, not none noise?"

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"...I think I can do that. Forty-eight rings if I can, I'll put it back how it was and you won't owe me anything if I can't?"

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"Will break if, uh, open my arm?"

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"I'm not sure what you're asking. Spells break if the objects they're cast on break. Bending your fingers or elbow won't break it."

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...Showing is easier than telling. She unlatches the hand and forearm and starts disassembling it further, revealing some fairly complicated internals.

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It'll take him a while to figure out how best to do this. But if she doesn't interrupt he's just going to figure it out right now.

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Heh. Scientists. That's fine, she can listen to Mahan while he does that. And even answer questions if he has any!

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Eventually he figures out a way to do exactly what she wants that'll resist almost complete disassembly and reassembly. It's slightly more complicated than what he was thinking of before. Does she still want it for 96 rings?

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She starts putting it back together.

"I get new one soon maybe. I come back later, 96 rings? Also, sound baffle box rings?"

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He quotes her a price for the box. "And of course you can find me again when you've got your new arm."

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She pays. "Maybe also leg."

This seems like a good time to attempt to find someone selling metal. Better stuff than steel exists, after all.

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There are people selling metal ingots and other raw materials. There are smiths who can take commissions. There's someone selling a variety of blades and other tools, some of which are partly made of metal.

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The smiths who look commissionable can be asked about copies of her prosthetics that aren't so darned heavy in halting Hari!

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One of them thinks that should be doable. It'll take a while, it looks like they're pretty complicated and they wouldn't be the only thing he'd be working on.

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Ehhh. Nah.

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New Dover proper is still a buzzing hive of activity, and a few hundred of their people have descended on Riuhiu instead. They're talking on the 'phones' that Nick guy sells and grid-searching, hiring dozens of mages of all kinds, especially sun, force, and structure - even a few void mages.

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There are a few just hanging around wearing magic symbols and waiting for customers, but not on the scale they want. There are people working other jobs who can be lured away if this job's going to pay more than what they're doing now. There are people who'll sell them recommendations for other mages to try. Hiring dozens of every kind of mage will take a while, though, and cost a lot.

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They have a lot of money. Not an incredibly vast amount of money, but enough for this.

They test each mage on a variety of tasks in an area set aside for exactly this. They'll pay 288 rings just to do the test, and pay a lot to work for them if you pass, more the more kinds of tasks you can do safely. The work will last a week or two probably, after which the need will be less and the pay accordingly will go down.

 

They won't hire slaves. Even if this slows things down a bunch.

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The tests weed out a handful of incompetent mages who probably shouldn't be doing magic at all.

Are they sure they won't hire slaves? What about this thirteen year old whose mother is sick and can't work? He has such big puppy-dog eyes.

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That's above this hiring lady's authority. Lady Katherine said no slaves, and that means no slaves.

The church will totally feed sick mom and kid and get them a doctor and a death mage all free if they want, though.

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They don't really trust that offer but they're out of better choices. The mom's not the kind of sick a death mage can help with, though.

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They get a lift with a sympathetic man who promises everything will be fine.

There's a line for treatment. Nurses look over everyone who comes in to prioritize - They're triaging. It's warm here at least, if incredibly busy. Is the mom dying, bleeding, or actively getting worse?

(Also, have some biscuits and water in the meantime.)

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She's not going to keel over in the next day, probably. She's got some kind of neurological problem that gets better and worse but mostly worse. If they're not going to be able to help can she sell them her son? He can work, are they really really sure they don't want any slaves? Because they seem like one of the better options if it's going to come to that.

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"We do have slaves technically, since all our children have to be, but we don't treat children as slaves. We'll take him in if the worst happens, but for now I think he'd rather we focus on helping you. Our doctors have been learning a lot recently, from a magical library of sorts, and we might be able to help. It's just that we're really very busy at the moment. We can get you to see someone in an hour or two, I think. Are you in pain, miss? What are your names?"

The nurse doesn't ask about the kid's father, he's pretty obviously not in the picture here.

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"I'm Echan and he's Isava. I'm always in pain, but even if you have anything for it I'm not interested in wasting the last of my savings on that. And if you wait for me to get executed for stealing you'll pay more at auction than if we come to a deal now."

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"I might be able to get you some painkillers without charge - and I'm not the one who would be... Buying... Isava if that turns out to be the best course of action, but I'll find out who would be and get them to come here and talk to you, okay?"

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"That might be nice."

Mhm. Free painkillers. Probably very addictive, then.

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They're left alone for a while after that. The busy tent hospital full of people who mostly only speak English bustles all around them.

Their nurse comes back after about half an hour with some aspirin. Opioid painkillers are a bad idea to combine with an unknown neurological condition. They're not addictive. Is there some way she can prove that to Echan's satisfaction? Also, a doctor can look at her soon but probably won't be able to figure out what's wrong right away.

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She doesn't believe them but she doesn't have much left to lose by going along with what they want.

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Taking a few aspirin does not have an immediate dramatic effect. After a few minutes it might be doing something?

 

A doctor gets to her spot in the queue and attempts to figure out what's wrong with her in more detail than 'some kind of neurological condition'. There's lots of medical literature available but they haven't really had time to review it all yet, which might hinder this effort.

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She has so many different symptoms in so many different places it rules out a lot of things unless she has more than one thing happening. Might be multiple sclerosis. Might be some new Hari thing they've never heard of.

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The doctor asks for help from another, more senior doctor. The more senior doctor suspects something and borrows a knowledge mage and investigates - after asking permission - Echan's nervous system.

Yeah. It's multiple sclerosis. They don't have any way to treat it non-magically, but a medical structure mage might be able to reverse the very specific kind of cell damage that causes it. It would definitely be an experimental untested treatment, though. They would want to extract nerve cells from a dog or something to give the structure mage practice first, too, so it'd be a few days if she wants them to try it.

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A few days might be fine but it'll be pushing it if she can't find work immediately once she's better. What is all this work they're hiring for and will they still need any of it done in a few days?

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The Order of Mercy will totally feed her and house her for free, at minimum until they can try this treatment, and probably for a while after if she needs to get situated after recovering. Helping people is their holy purpose.

They're building a city! From scratch! It's going to be such a great city, with subway trains and efficient sewers and piping and magic-powered electrical grid and nice homes and parks and lots of businesses and an airport and a seaport and a glorious gigantic cathedral and he could go on like this for a while but he should probably get to the next patient sooner or later. Here's some paperwork, Nurse Helena will find you somewhere to rest, it's all kind of chaotic right now but everything is going to be great, soon! 

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Sounds overwhelming to Echan but Isava likes the idea of moving there.

Well, they'll stay and impose on the Order of Mercy for a while, anyway. Echan would like to know why they're doing all this.

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"Because it's the right thing to do. Because nobody deserves to starve and die in the street, or to be enslaved forever and worked like a dog. Because if everyone is kind and giving, everyone will be happier and more productive. Because we believe in a higher purpose, a noble calling more fulfilling than wealth and comfort, and we have faith that God's plan has sent us here to help everyone suffering in Har and spread this message. Because as long as a single other person is in pain or hungry or cold, and we can fix it, we should fix it."

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"...I think I like you. Can I join you?"

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"We'd be very glad to have you! You should attend church services, they're good for a sense of our community."

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The two of them will do that next time there's a church service.

Meanwhile their small army of hired mages will try to get their city built.

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Turns out building a city - or a medium-sized town, by the standards of old England - is hard. Even with most of the planning already done and powerful magic helping. A force mage can move ten tons of dirt with a thought, but there's a lot of detail work. The new refugees are motivated to work hard and a cadre of administrators keeps everything in line, but they're not going to hit their overly optimistic two week goal.

They have everything needed to house and support 10000 people in the medium term built - a slightly more permanent temporary hospital, contracts for bulk food delivery, temporary showers and bathrooms, and dozens of rows of heat-maged tents - after two days.

They start to go block-by-block on installing city infrastructure. Sewers and storm drains, then subway tunnels and stations, then fresh water, then electrical wiring, then streets and parks and such, then building foundations, then building frames, then finishing the buildings and letting people move in. (Slightly less planned suburban space is being worked on too, as are special projects like bridges, the airport and seaport, and so on, but slower.)

The old New Dover, while less than a year old, nonetheless has some historical value and is going to be left alone for now but eventually all the shiny infrastructure will be sneakily put in under it.

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Liane goes back to New Dover to try and get a replacement arm, but they're all extremely busy and improved prosthetics are a few items down the list - not that literally every ounce of effort is going into the new city, people are doing their own thing or celebrating or relaxing, but still.

So eventually she goes back and tries to find that smith again.

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That smith is still findable and still taking commissions.

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She doesn't really want to leave her prosthetics here while he does it, she kinda needs them to, uh, do things, is that OK? If not, how much extra for a rush job?

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She can keep them, but he'll need to get a good look at them and how they work now. If she doesn't have any illusions on he can pastwatch her if he realizes he needs to check something again, but knowledge mages do cost money, he'd rather take good notes and not need that.

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She doesn't actually know how they work beyond the obvious, but he can totally look at them and watch her use them and move things half-disassembled and so on.

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He does that for a while.

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How much is this gonna set her back anyway?

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Kind of a lot, but a lot less than it'd be where she came from.

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She has no idea how much these things should cost, she got hers from an engineer who just kind of gave it to her. But, sure, deal, here's the cash.

She finds a spot a bit outside of town and watches her shows while waiting for her shiny new arm and leg. What's The Ring of Twilight actually about?

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It's some kind of fantasy series that starts on an island archipelago on a tidally-locked planet orbiting a red dwarf star. The sun is always low in the sky, unmoving. Magic is different in their universe, but of course it exists.

A war leaves an agerah orphaned at less than a year old, so off she goes to try to make her way in the world. A human soldier on the opposing side takes her in. He struggles to give her an adequate explanation for why they're still at war when no one wants to be.

Meanwhile the little agerah's older brother comes back from the war and finds out that their parents are dead. He hires a team of human mercenaries to help get revenge for his parents. But before they can put their plan into action, they hear about a plan by the beluli on another island to exterminate everyone on their island and move into the empty space.

The two factions try to make peace and work together to stop their mutual enemy, but they mistrust each other and the beluli take advantage of that to trick them each into thinking the other side has betrayed them. They nearly lose everything.

The little agerah realizes that she's had family on two sides of this war. She's loyal to the side she was born on, that her parents were on. She's loyal to the side her adoptive parent is on. When she brings this up to her brother and the human, they realize that if they were each other's family then they could trust each other. The little agerah's brother uses his mind-editing magic to make himself think that the human is one of his siblings. The human unwards his own mind for the agerah mind mage to do the same to him.

They fight off the invasion and follow the invaders back to their own island. The beluli try to sue for peace. But how can they be trusted not to try to kill everyone again, given the chance? Their world has no command magic. But there is a way if they'll just let the mind mage change them. The only problem is the beluli have no reason to trust that they won't just be slaughtered afterward anyway. So why shouldn't they just destroy the island and kill everyone? Sure, they'll die, but so will everyone else. At least the beluli won't be the only ones to die, that way.

The human who adopted the little agerah asks the mind mage to make him love their enemies. Then he goes to his knees sobbing, begging for peace.

The beluli accept the deal.

Now that both islands are safe from each other, they realize they could unite all the habitable lands on their planet. The entire ring of twilight.

...It's kind of a long series, she might not want to watch all the rest in one sitting.

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Okay, nice message, but the weird mind-twisting magic is kind of intensely creepy.

What other shows did she impulse-buy earlier, anyway?

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Two are in Ilan instead of Hari. The last one is called Order and Law in Thervigenia. It seems to be some kind of crime drama set before the empire.

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Too many new languages. Annoying.

The crime drama might be fun, though.

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A murder happened under a very extensive illusion. The knowledge mages are stumped! They call in a brilliant detective, a caralendar death mage, who has no special magical advantage so she uses the power of deductive reasoning! They solve the case and the episode ends with the murderer's public execution. It's not a merciful death. Only a minute of it makes it into the episode but the sun is shown a lot lower at the end than the beginning.

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It's not that much worse than hanging. They hanged murderers sometimes.

The ones in Ilan are annoying her. She tries to figure out if there's something like the government Hari tutorial, but for Ilan.

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The imperial government doesn't seem to have anything like that.

If she catches Valanda just getting back to his office from visiting the mainland, he'll tell her to try Ariu Moves South. It's for the wrong dialect but it should be a start.

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"I think I'll just forget it, maybe go complain. You want these shows? Not like I can use them."

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"I have this one! But I could buy the other one, I guess, how much do you want for it?"

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"Just take it. And if you don't want the other one I'll just drop it on the street or something."

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"...Sure, okay. Thanks."

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"It's not even that much money? And I'm annoyed more than anything else. Bye for now?"

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"Sure, bye, come back if you need anything."

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Back in New Dover, the doctors have caught up with most of the miscellaneous injuries and illnesses their immigrant population brought with them. They have a few structure mages try the nerve repair treatment on a couple of dogs, those being at least mammals and the best analogue currently available. Their nerves weren't damaged in the same way, but it's better than doing no test at all. It doesn't seem to do the dogs any harm.

Would Echan like to try this experimental only kinda tested treatment?

It's got a decent chance of helping, but might do nothing, and might even make it worse (though they don't think so, the science checks out and dogs were fine, but then again they were dogs not humans...)

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Echan would love to try anything at all at this point.

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Okay.

They try it, a knowledge mage and structure mage working together. (This is getting kind of expensive, but the doctors aren't complaining.)

Extremities first. They stay well away from the brain and leave the spine untouched too.

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Doing just the extremities gets partial results. After a while Echan announces that she can feel her right hand again. She could maybe go back to work part-time now, she's optimistic that they've probably saved her life at least for the next few months or so. But she's still exhausted and blind and in pain.

 

...Isava might hug the doctors, if they seem like they'd like hugs.

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That's good! They could try this same thing again, on more parts of her. They were just taking it slowly in case something got worse. And there are other things they can try. Drugs from Milliways with a lot of otherworldly medical knowledge to back them up, but it's all experimental and it would be totally understandable if she wanted to stick with just this, in case trying more things makes it worse again. They could also try and figure out how to get various aid devices and prosthetics and pain drug regimens to work for her.

Hugs maybe not, but one of the doctors will pat him on the shoulder in a vaguely fatherly sort of way? ...A nurse looks at the doctor a bit disapprovingly and will totally hug Isava.

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Then the nurse will be the one to get very hugged and thanked for saving them both.

She can think of some devices that might be useful. She's cautiously optimistic about trying the same treatment on the rest of her body, but that seems riskier and she'd rather not die before she can free Isava. She'll try it if she has to, but maybe they have part-time work for her now? She can sew and work with leather.

- Isava interrupts to tell her to please not make that choice just for him. If she just doesn't want to risk getting worse, fine, but can she please not make him the reason she's still sick?

Echan laughs. "I'd be fine, now, but since you insist."

"I'm not insisting! Just..."

"Okay. Anyway, I'll have them see how well they can fix me. You never know, maybe I'll be cured."

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The doctors want her to rest and eat well for a day or two, observing, and then repeat the process. If this therapy helps Echan recover, they can use the same treatment for other people with the same thing.

The nurse doesn't argue with them, exactly, but she knows that Echan wants to be able to work again and feel useful, so suggests that she could try sewing as a, uh, dexterity exercise. Get used to using the hand again, reinforce the pathways. The doctors think that's fine as long as she doesn't overstrain herself or anything.

"I'll fetch you some shirt patterns, hon, and needle and thread. We'll even pay you for it, thirty rings a shirt."

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"Good, I've spent too long resting already."

She's slow at it. She's quick when she's actually sewing, but she takes long, frequent breaks.

She's a lot better after a couple of days. Some of that is the treatment, some of it is having hope, some of it is having something to do. She's more animated when she talks. She's up more often. She listens to things happening nearby.

She tries to convince Isava she'll be fine if he goes back to Riuhiu to look for work but he's not letting her out of his sight right now.

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The nurses continue to bring them both food, and will chat with them. She gets paid for the sewing on time. (The nurses aren't even taking a cut for fetching supplies and delivering the finished shirts.) Doctors and nurses and patients talk about a wide variety of things, though it's all English except for a few people trying to learn Hari.

They also bring Isava books to read, and perhaps he'd like to go to school once they have that organized? Most children in England went to school, learning math and science and reading and writing, and optionally history or cooking or balancing a budget or morals and philosophy. They're going to make it free.

The doctors think they can try the same myelin-restoration treatment on more parts of her, now, if she wants. Particularly her optic nerves. There's nothing wrong with her eyes - so if the nerves recover, they think that her vision might come back.

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Echan lets the nurses know that she could teach people Hari or Lexori.

School sounds like a great idea but will he have to learn English first?

She does want that. She wants that very badly.

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Nurses spread the word! Some people want to talk to her in Hari. Mostly not the same people for very long - most people who come in here get hurt, get patched up, and then leave. They seem weirdly reluctant to pay for Hari lessons but will do things for her or try to teach her and Isava English in return.

They're going to have at least one or two teachers who teach in Hari. Probably a lot of the other kids will know only English, though.

They try it. They do the same cell-restoring treatment on most of the peripheral nerves in her body, focusing particularly on the optic nerves.

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If they're willing to trade English lessons then she assumes they're just not very liquid right now. Probably because they just arrived and don't have jobs. She could use some English lessons and so could Isava.

Well, she's better now. Hard to say if what's left is permanent damage or if they just need to keep going with her brain and spine or if it's both of those things. But she's happy with the results, she'll recommend them to anyone else who needs help.

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There is definitely some permanent damage. And trying this on the spine and brain is probaly more risky than peripheral nerves, they're different sorts of things to an extent.

Is she going to move out of the hospital now or stay and acclimatize? They can probably let her stay for another few days but will have to start asking for money sooner or later. They also have experience in helping people recover. Special exercises, fitting aid devices, and the like.

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She'll stay another day and then go home. She'd like to know when they expect to have school organized and what they'll need to do to enroll Isava.

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The school will be ready in like a month. Probably she just needs to show up again closer to that? They're still organizing most of their... Stuff.

A city has sprung up outside of the hospital. The rows and rows of tents are thinned out some, and tall buildings in a strange style rise up in neat lines closer to the river.

Some travel services have sprung up on the road out. Automaton-bus fare back to Riuhiu is 6 rings per seat.

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...Do they need any help organizing their stuff?

If not she'll just head home.

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They think they have it covered, and that getting this much organized in a week and a half or so is already pretty impressive. The city government is going to have city taxes and city ""laws"" (you agree to follow the rules when you enter - technically it's a sort of common contract and there are probably going to be issues with that eventually but they don't think becoming their own state is a good idea right now.)

Ahem. Anyway, no, they're good on administrators and organizers thank you.

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Of course, she's very impressed with them.

And off they go.

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Nikolas gets a letter from Lanisal. When would it be convenient for him to come visit her?

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He sends a letter about how very busy he is in return, along with a package containing a prototype satellite transceiver and instructions for attaching it to her computer and installing an also-prototype email client.

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They are all very grateful for such a generous gift. Would he like the clan's help with any of the things he's working on right now?

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Detailed feedback on the gifts would be appreciated! He's curious whether any video games or other programs have come out from them yet. And he's about ready to send them info on how to make websites. When the internet becomes a thing, having useful or fun websites ready to go will be good for both the clan and his business.

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They've done a timewasting game and extended his calculator and are just finishing testing a family tree program. They send detailed feedback on everything.

Lanisal will be ready to launch some new shows as soon as the internet is a thing.

They wouldn't like to interrupt anything, but he would be very welcome to come visit at his soonest convenience when things are quieter.

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I get the hint. Three days from now, sunrise?

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Three days from then at sunrise Lanisal will be ready for him.

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"Glad to see you've made progress on the programming. Handy things, aren't they, computers?"

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"They're wonderful! I'm glad to see you, I have something to show you that I didn't trust could stay hidden well enough in the mail. Mind if I show you where we've been keeping it? It's under an extra layer of illusion, even being inside the house doesn't let you look."

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"Likewise, I'm sure. Oh, you've come up with something good, have you? Alright, let's go see it."

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It's over this way. She leads the way.

"We haven't done anything with it yet, at all. Haven't showed it to anyone either. Haven't mentioned it to anyone outside the family. Anything we could do seemed unfair to you and I consider you a friend."

And here they are at a small secret room with a table covered in notebooks and a blackboard covered in diagrams. In the middle of the table on top of one of the notebooks is a computer, but not one of the ones he's been selling.

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"I see. Yes, of course. I didn't have any illusions on me coming out of Milliways - this does change things a bit. I never really expected to be able to keep the secret forever, nobody is perfect, but I had already screwed up the very instant I entered the world, eh? Heh."

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"Yes. But the Vesairel clan won't be making any use of this. Not to compete with you, anyway, maybe you'd like being able to collaborate with someone who knows what you're doing."

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"Yes, it's a lot easier to collaborate than to try and reverse-engineer the whole thing, isn't it? You could probably start making your own working computers by using knowledge magic on this one, eventually... I have been sort of running myself into the ground because I'm too secretive for my own good. Hmm. So, you want to get more involved on the hardware side of things, or on running the internet, or what?"

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"It's Seli who's most interested, he's been so excited about examining the inside of a computer. I don't think I know enough to say how he'd be most useful but I'm sure he would love to work on whatever you think he could help with. I can go find him for you if you'd like to talk with him about it?"

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"Hmm. Yeah, we should probably chat. I don't just need programmers, either. There's something I'm working on... Know anybody who fancies themselves an investigator or a judge? Someone to resolve disputes?"

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"I have cousins who are police officers - state, not imperial. I know the people who keep order within our clan, but I'm not sure if that's what you mean."

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"I have cooked up a system to make traceable, safe financial transactions over the internet. So that people can buy things off a website without having to physically send rings somewhere. Electronic commerce was a big deal for the internet of old. It could use some extra eyes on the design, looking for loopholes and legal issues. It could also use a dispute resolution mechanism, so that fraud is harder, and that requires a judge - if not an Imperial judge."

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"I think you want a lawyer, someone who can tell you about relevant precedents. If you want my recommendation, I think Sardev Varoran could be helpful. I know who to ask to put you in touch with some Anavel Sani state judges but I don't know any personally myself. How is this system going to work?"

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He explains it.

You go to an office set aside for this and give them some rings. You get a name, a password, and a little highly secured encryption widget. This is a 'virtual necklace' that has exactly as many rings as you put in. You can withdraw the rings in your virtual necklace by visiting the place and giving the correct password and having the widget - with a slightly longer verification process if you've forgotten one or both of those things, and a grace period for his bank to give the rings back if you want to withdraw a really huge amount all at once.

Web site owners can put in a bit that connects to a set of computers that only do virtual necklace transactions. It will show a prompt saying 'you are sending 30 rings to...' You have to enter your password and the six digit number on the encryption device, and then it will verify that the info is accurate, and then it will subtract rings from your virtual wallet and give a transaction number. (The transaction number is for tracking disputes and such.) There's also a nice program that shows transaction history and status and so on.

When you receive rings, you get them all at once, once every 10 days, and pay a transaction fee of 1/288 of all rings received (rounded up). It's free for spenders to encourage people to spend, but businesses will find that they are a lot more trusted online and have an easier time finding customers if they have a Virtual Necklace.

As to fraud and disputes - he's mostly concerned about customers who send money and then get defrauded and complain (he wants it to be as easy as possible for customers, and have a reputation for security, so everyone uses it), or people pulling complicated schemes involving moving money around and this somehow reflecting badly back on the virtual bank. You can cancel and raise disputes about transactions, and have it automatically reversed or sent to someone to review the dispute and decide what to do, depending on circumstances. He hasn't worked out all the details on that yet, and kind of needs a lawyer's input there.

He also has lots of technical detail about how it works and how it should be fraud-resistant and fast on the back end, which he does his best to explain in understandable terms.

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"That sounds incredibly suspicious. What's your plan for getting people to trust you?"

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"Extreme customer-friendliness, exclusive virtual-wallet-only discounts, sign-up bonuses. Give me 12 rings and get 144 free, try it out, see that it's not fraud-y, and let it build up a reputation. Maybe work out something to make transactions optionally scryable. Also, how else are you going to buy things on the internet? 'Mail in your rings to this address in norvand'? 'Go to my store in riuhiu if you want to buy it'? The former is also kind of unsafe, the latter is very inconvenient."

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"I can see how that would be useful. Especially in small towns, I think. It isn't a scam, is it? I wouldn't tell anyone outside the clan if you said yes."

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"I'm sure I believe you on that with absolutely no hesitation or reservations. No. It's not a scam. I'm not even gonna get into fractional reserve banking, an entirely different thing which is in fact kinda scammy. It's a perfectly legitimate way to make the internet more useful to the average person, which I intend to run cleanly."

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"I wouldn't betray a friend for the sake of a few strangers who we've stipulated are the sort of people who fall for scams. But I can see why you'd hesitate to believe me about that. What's fractional reserve banking?"

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"Well - and I'm not going to do this, it seems like the kind of thing that might get me enslaved or executed if it fails ungracefully - imagine I do this virtual wallet for a while, and I have everyone's rings, right? Sure, they can come claim them at any time, but if it turns out enough people find the virtual wallet convenient, maybe they tend to not. So what's stopping me from making loans with those rings? What's stopping me from granting virtual wallets and owing people five rings for every one I actually have? They're not going to come and actually claim all their money. At least not all at once. So, I lend out more money than the bank actually has and make a tidy profit by charging interest in that expanded amount. I have a reserve of actual rings, a fraction of how many rings I owe people. That's fractional reserve banking. And I'm not gonna do it here, because it's liable to get me executed."

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"...Yes, that sounds like the kind of thing I was imagining when I said it sounded like a scam. It sounds like that's an accepted business practice where you're from?"

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"Yes. It's more complicated than that by far, but in short, yes. It does have advantages, but I'm not optimally educated to explain or defend them. There were a rough few centuries when folks first came up with the idea."

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And that's about when Seli shows up.

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"Hello again, Seli. You can thank Lanisal for, ah, convincing me that I ought to collaborate a bit more."

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"Thanks, Lanisal. So..." Seli asks so many questions.

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He's not scrupulously hiding the answers anymore. He gives lectures that wouldn't be out of place in Computer Architecture 202 or Operating System Design 313 at a university.

He's clever. He's not a vampire, but he's clever and enthusiastic and Nick does need to delegate.

At a stopping point Nick says, "So, I think I want to hire you full-time to develop computer programs and hardware with me. And possibly some others if anyone you know would be good at it. I have too many things going on to personally oversee all of them anymore, is the thing, so I need to let other smart people have stakes in it. Much as that makes the control freak in me cringe. There's you, there's this caralendar called Nimo - Saramel, I think - there's someone from New Dover who's a fairly brilliant mad roboticist, that'll be fun - a few others I've been farming out programming work to. Maybe a dozen or two people in all. Ideally, I'd get everyone working in the same building, see what we can come up with."

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"That would be fun. You want me in Ira Sani? For the long term or just for a while?"

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"I'll have to think about it. New idea, this is. Maybe depends on how well you can keep up."

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"Of course. Hey, have we been keeping you from getting breakfast? We have human blood if you want something."

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"Oh, have you been keeping some on hand for me? I don't need three meals a day anymore but I won't say no, if it's not too stale. Oh, hey, you think tourist trips to the Moon would sell? I made a capsule that keeps air in a while ago to have some force mages put up the satellites."

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"Yes I think that would sell! I want to go! And the blood's been warded since just after it was drawn - the wards will break when you open a bottle. It's in the kitchen cabinet, I can show you the way."

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"By all means. I'd want to make a bigger, upgraded capsule for moon trips - maybe also have sun and structure mages along who can clean the air in the unlikely case my machines fail. The one I have now would sustain a dozen full grown humans or caralendri for twenty-ish hours. Less agerah, more essi or beluli or whatever. And, like, I'd put in plumbing and private rooms. The moon would be a day trip, seems pleasanter all around."

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"...Someone's going to want to found a state on the moon just because it might not get them killed."

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"Maybe I can sell them a lot of oxygen recycling gear and the like. It's probably still pretty easy to die on the moon if you're not careful, I'd advise someone to have at least three copies of anything important and test them often."

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"Yeah, personally if I wanted a state I'd just have an island raised from the sea for it, it'd be a lot safer that way."

And here's the kitchen. Some of the family is there eating breakfast at the moment.

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Nik socializes, acting perfectly pleasant while slowly getting more irritated and tired of it. Eventually, he goes to have business meetings elsewhere on the mainland.

His big think-tank plan will start taking shape later. He sets up meetings with lawyers to hammer out the legalities of his e-bank. Seli is welcome to come to Ira Sani and tour his factory and workshop. He should probably learn the basics of all Nik's various projects but choose one or two to focus on after that.

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Back in Ira Sani, while the talking heads of New Dover continue to build automata and infrastructure and the school and the hospital and so on, and debate on whether to ban nudity, pornography, and prostitution within city borders, a bespectacled man finds the office of the woman who's been advertising security and bug-catching services. He has a shielded briefcase with him.

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"Hello, what brings you to me today?"

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"Well, ma'am, I'm new in New Dover, and detection equipment is something of a skill of mine. It seems like the devices I can make may be of use to you, and to that end I'd like to demonstrate them."

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"I see. Here or somewhere hidden?"

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"The devices themselves are warded. If you want me to demonstrate them and show how to use them, here is fine. If I am to explain how they work, I'll want you to buy the knowledge and to do it somewhere warded."

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"Let's start with the demonstration and I'll think about whether I want the explanation."

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"Sure! Okay, so, I have a wall ultrasound that can help detect cavities or other anomalies, I have an electronic noise listener that should detect most things using electricity, I have a radio noise monitor and a frequency penetration testing tool - see if any wavelengths of light are leaking - laser mapping tool, uh, camera finder..."

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"Can you show me that they actually work?"

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"I am honestly doubtful that you have any hidden cameras or listening devices in this room that I could conveniently suss out as a demonstration. I can scan your walls and show you where the support beams are and if there's any secret doors or the like. Should work even on knowledge-warded structures, too."

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"That would be something."

There is a secret door. The room behind it doesn't allow any sound out.

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If the seams of the door, or whatever lock or latch mechanism there is, aren't also silenced, they'll interfere with the sound pattern and he'll see it.

Even if that doesn't happen, the sound-absorbing room creates a dead zone that changes the infrasonic rebound a bit and will let him tell that something is off about that particular wall, even if he can't find the door.

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"You could maybe have figured that out just by scrying at the right times but I think I want the explanation. How much?"

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"Well, I'm not a knowledge mage. Hmm, let's say twelve for an overview of the principles? Blueprints are not on offer unless you make a really good offer."

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"This way, then."

She shows him to a different shielded room. The door to this one is visible.

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He follows.

He explains ultrasonic imaging! It's a really cool thing, isn't it? If something has different feedback based on conditions, any kind of different feedback, you can use it as a detection method. It works best if you use some kind of contact gel but he didn't think she'd appreciate him smearing gooey oil all over her walls and it worked well enough didn't it?

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"A ring if you'll tell me how you learned about this?"

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"You know, I don't quite understand offering rings during casual conversation, but I'll take it. I figured this one out in an experiment in my mechanical engineering class at Cambridge, and refined it in various ways since then."

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"And what've you been doing with it since?" She offers another ring.

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"Some doctor friends of mine found it useful for seeing inside the body. Knowledge magic kind of obviates that. They also used it for structural analysis, checking if damaged buildings were safe to enter, looking for flaws in wood timbers and steel... That sort of thing. I was thinking about using an analytical engine or computer to refine the output, make it easier to read. I could only tell about your door because I have experience with it, a layperson would not have been able to find it, I think."

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"I bet this isn't the only invention you've brought to Har. Want to take the time to tell me about anything else I might want, since you're here anyway?"

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"Certainly!"

He can go down his whole list, sales-pitch style, including half a sentence hinting at the operating principle for each device.

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"Do you even have time to use any of these? Or make enough of them to sell everyone who wants one? It seems like you'd have more time for inventing if you just sold the blueprints."

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"That's definitely a possibility! I might even go that route! Inventing is more fun than salesmanship! But for now, I have them, I put quite a bit of work into them, and I need money but not urgently. So the offer for the blueprints would have to be pretty good, to be worth handing off the work I put into them."

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"It's not just these. We could come to a deal once and then next time you come to me with something about as useful and I give you about as much and you never have to find a buyer again. So. How's 14976 rings?"

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He does some mental math, converting it to pounds. It's not a bad payday. However, on the general principle that you should always negotiate, "...No, that's not really enough. Perhaps if this were a barely-functioning prototype it would be, but given the amount of work I've put in and the usefulness of this device I should expect, er," He slips into English, "Twenty five thousand?"

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She haggles.

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He backs down fairly easily, the final amount isn't that much higher than her initial offer.

"It's a deal. Well, I'll actually have to go fetch all my notes and touch up some of the documentation - er, do you have a warded box I can put them in? I've just been keeping them indoors."

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"Yeah, it's around here somewhere... yeah, here, no charge if you give it back when you're done."

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"Thank you. Should I go now, or would you like to talk about the ultrasonic scanner a bit more before I do? No more careful answers. You're getting the blueprints anyway. Oh, and you can have this one for cost of parts, that's about, er, 144."

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"Might as well bring it now. Want half the rings before you go?"

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"No need, no need. This is civilized business after all. I'll be off, then, and back as soon as possible this afternoon."

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Foreigners are so weird.

She's still at her office in the afternoon.

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And he's back with her box of documents. "Hello again. Your name is Nimo Saramel, correct? I'm Curtis Warden, I realized on the way back that I never properly introduced myself." He presents his hand for a handshake.

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She shakes his hand.

"Yeah, that's my name. You come back next time you invent something, okay?"

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"I have more inventions now. And... You don't want, say, an explanation of how to efficiently build it, or the nuances in using it?"

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"That would be good. That won't cost me extra?"

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"Not unless you want to monopolize me for hours, no. I was assuming an hour or two of consulting on design was included with the blueprints!"

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"Oh! Then have a seat, get comfortable. Would you like some greens?"

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"And besides, you're 'in' on the technical secrets now, so you might have an interesting new perspective - and it'll be fun. Sure, thank you. Er, do you know if all your greens are alright for humans to eat?"

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"I think so but I'm not sure, can you have arugula and alfalfa?"

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"Yes, I recognize those. We don't find them tasty necessarily, but they're quite edible. Usually we would add other things, but I'm hardly complaining."

He starts unpacking blueprints and sketches. They're kind of disorganized, with a patch-job unifying them into one sensible document.

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Nimo is very interested.

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Curt is an enthusiastic inventor explaining one of his inventions! He's having lots of fun. Barely touches the snacks.

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She has lots of questions.

"...You know what, if you don't come up with anything new, come by anyway if you feel like talking again."

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"I'll probably take you up on that! I hear you've been learning to work with computers, actually, I might want your input on computer programs and interfaces and so on."

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"That'd be good, do you want to schedule a time or just show up and hope I'm free?"

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"Schedule, I think. I can probably come back any time that's not - tomorrow, or the morning of the day after that."

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"Three days from now in the afternoon work?"

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"Sure! I should be moved in to my new place by then. I was at the end of a list for an apartment until I bought my way to somewhere in the middle - no wife or children and no favors owed from anyone doing the planning, see - but I will soon finally have a proper residence again, privacy and quiet and a big comfy bed, I've missed it so. Goodbye for today, Miss Saramel!"

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Three days from then she's waiting for him! This time the available salad comes with pecan pieces and dried fruit, if he'd like some.

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Pecan pieces and dried fruit are a lot more palatable.

They can talk about programming! He got a computer! It's surprisingly similar to setting up automata but computers can work so much faster!

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They can! Has he thought about having a computer control an automaton?

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Yes, and a bunch of other people are already working on it, the problem is essentially getting the computer to move the controls on the steam core that powers automata. And feeding data about status and positioning back into the computer. And building a useful library of automaton control functions. He's not closely involved though, and it feels vaguely wrong to be duplicating engineering efforts.

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"Yeah. But it's good to know what they're up to anyway. - Oh, that reminds me, you mentioned other inventions besides the detectors and I've been assuming you'd either sold them already or lost the plans in the frost, but I might as well ask if that's right..."

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"Well, most of them, yes. That or they're scryable now if you look hard enough." He shrugs. "I have a few other varieties of detector that are still secret, and I made an automatic decoding device a while ago, turns morse code into English letters and vice-versa. Most of the other things I've been working on, I wouldn't consider myself the sole inventor, so I can't just unilaterally sell them."

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"What do you use morse code for?"

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"Morse code is designed for any signaling methods that rely on a two-state system. Say, flicking a light or an electrical signal on and off. Or flipping a mirror over. Or even just drawing in the snow. For a while they were the best they could do for communicating at a distance - telegraphs. Could still be useful in the absence of magic or technology that works better."

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"...Oh, of course. I bet it wouldn't be hard to come up with a program that would do that for Hari letters, too. Probably easier with computers."

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"Indeed! Morse code uses the Latin alphabet - shared by a lot of languages - short and long 'on' periods, with pauses of different lengths signfifying words and punctuation. There are only twenty-six things that need to be produced so it can be short enough to remember. It may be difficult to copy it with a few added or removed and different associations for Hari, given the somewhat pictographic nature of the thing... And I'm not actually sure how Ilan or any of the other languages here work..."

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"All our languages use the same alphabet, mostly - did your world have some that didn't?"

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"Yes, there are quite a few writing systems. No shortage of unusual ones from isolated populations, like the pacific islanders. The original Roman alphabet strongly influences much of the world, from Cyrillic to Finnish to English to Spanish, but there's quite a bit of drift, too. Notably, China and the other Far East nations have an entirely different writing system of characters, where there are thousands of symbols each corresponding to a single word. Some are a bit like multiple letters are written on top of one another, combining other characters, but most are almost pictographic. I am, er, not a linguist, however, so I don't know much more about it aside from - actually, it's a bit like Hari, with the tones - hmm."

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"Huh. You know, I think your world was just more than ours. More people, more languages, more ways of doing things."

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"Quite possible. There was no shortage of people trying to kill each other, but we didn't have natural faculties capable of annihilating continents... There are only a few million people here on Har, correct?"

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"Less than two million. The population's growing a little, but we never really recovered from... uh... tens of thousands of years of war, but especially the continents sinking and the late warring states period."

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"I've heard something about a demographic shift. That when the world is rich and full of distractions, people want children less. It sounded like nonsense at the time, but perhaps I should look into the population statistics here."

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"Yeah, that happened. The birth rate for caralendri is maybe close to a dozen children per woman and that would be enough to grow the population if half the men weren't with clan higher-ups who can barely remember their names. I think the agerah population might be growing?"

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He blinks. Right, caralendri are not humans. "...Er. All the executions can't be helping, either."

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"Are there that many? I think there's less than an execution a day worldwide. But if they don't have kids who don't have kids who don't have kids I guess that adds up, yeah."

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"Well, there are probably other factors. This place sounded somewhat execution-happy when they were explaining the law to us is all. I may have to do a proper investigation at some point - speculation is not science."

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"Oh, what kind of investigation? Can I help?"

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"Sociology! It's a bit of a niche field, but I'm sure I could find some useful texts and advice. It may be useful to look into why people make the decisions they do, and what effect laws, magic, and technology has on those decisions. Seeing why people decide not to have many children, for example. Or possibly how to reduce crime rates in a more humane manner than draconian punishments. I think it'd be interesting, and a local perspective would be useful. Sounds fun."

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"It does, let's. You want to start with a survey of people asking how many children they have and why?"

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"I remember reading that asking people why they do something doesn't always get useful or even correct answers. Perhaps we should start by finding some relevant books and reading them, or talking to a sociologist to get an idea of where to start? Surely there's at least one among all the people who came along."

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"You'd know the imports better than I would. I can look for anything that's already been written about local birthrates, there might be something."

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"I know who to ask to get pointed in the right direction! But I don't honestly want to run off and get started on it right now - I just got here. I'll write down what we have so far-" He pulls out a notepad and pencil to do this.

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"Okay. So what do you want to get out of the research? I'm just curious, so we might as well aim it at whatever you care about most."

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"Ideally, we uncover a deep and sublime cosmic truth about the nature of personhood and consciousness. I don't think that will happen. If we can figure out whether population-level birthrates will continue to fall, perhaps even lead to extinction - seems worth looking into. Understanding the causes of and ways to deter crime that aren't almost as harmful as crimes themselves would be good too."

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"Almost as harmful as crimes? What exactly is the problem with our justice system that you're complaining about?"

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"Slavery! Slavery is a massive waste of intellectual capital. Shackles are an affront to the ideals of liberty. There are softer ways of rendering someone harmless. It's- Well, we considered slavery and substantial coercion a crime in itself. It's a bit hard to explain."

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"A waste of intellectual capital? Are you worried people who can't follow incentives or understand the law are sitting on brilliant inventions they're keeping secret out of spite or what?"

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"Not every slave will come up with a brilliant invention or write a compelling novel or design a beautiful building, but some might. And the ideals of liberty are important to those of us from England or America, they're a bit harder to sum up quickly."

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"What would you rather do to criminals, just bind their magic and hope they're harmless?"

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"I don't have anything specific in mind. I was never a politician. Laws ensuring slaves are fairly treated, or some clause for being eventually freed? Some other way of restricting people, perhaps with bindings? Our legal system was kind of awful too. But that's no reason not to try and improve things."

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"We have bindings besides slavery, we can bind people against violence. If you've reoffended enough times to get killed or sold you've figured out how to circumvent those. Unless you're a thwilit and your family disowns you, then I guess you don't have to have ever done anything before."

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"...It's possible I don't understand the Imperial justice system well enough to legitimately criticize it yet. I hadn't heard of bindings against violence. And it's less objectionable for multiple murderers or whoever to be enslaved, though crimes of negligence or accident still sort of rankle. Children are going to be the really touchy subject for us."

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"If children are the problem it won't do you much good to research criminal justice, will it?"

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"I'm not sure I follow? We - we think it ought to be a crime to not free your children. More or less."

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"And if they can't follow the law, what then? Would you have to free them anyway and then get blamed for what they do?"

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"Yes, that's rather the sticking point. It's a whole - a whole system, where someone is responsible for everyone and - ugh. Perhaps I should not have come here. I'm no good at this."

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"Maybe you'd be happier if we looked at something besides criminal justice first."

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"Or you could not blame parents for what their kids do after their majority. How long does that last anyway? How does it even work? If I had a son and he stabs someone at age eighteen, a year after majority, is it my fault? What about twenty-two? Am I at risk of random imprisonment because he might steal something, for the rest of my life?"

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"It depends! I'm not a lawyer, don't take me too seriously, but I think it's a judgment call based on whether a reasonable person in your position could have guessed that would happen given the information you had. Uh, like, there was one case where someone got assaulted by a force mage and slammed against a wall and hit his head, then committed three assaults in one day, someone tried to get his mother charged with freeing a person who can't follow the law and that didn't stick. I guess you could get arrested and tried if someone complained even if you weren't guilty but that could happen with any crime."

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"...Anyway, yes, I think you should have to release your kids anyway by default, unless you can prove that they're not capable of following the law."

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"I guess. Most people do that anyway. Usually. If they don't disagree on politics or something."

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"But some people are terrible and don't, for various reasons. Like wanting free labor, or disagreeing on politics, my god."

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"Yeah, I guess. You think everyone's your clan, don't you? At first I thought it was just the other humans, but it's everyone, isn't it?"

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"Well, I don't think the entire world is my family, exactly, and I'm not sure how much feeling is associated with someone being in the clan. But broadly, yes, I want everyone to be free and happy and live long prosperous lives, at least inasmuch as this doesn't hurt other people or trade off too much of other things I care about."

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"You know, I bet that worked great where you come from, but you're going to get taken advantage of here because nobody else thinks that way."

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He shrugs. "I'll try not to expect kindness. But I don't think I'm going to stop being kind. Probably going to be interesting to observe the changing values of the Immigrant population. I honestly don't know if we'll stop thinking this way eventually!"

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"Maybe you'll manage to make enough friends that everyone you meet does the same for you."

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"Hmm. Maybe." He scratches his chin. "This is sort of a difficult topic - perhaps we should go back to discussing technical things?"

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"Yeah, we probably should. Have you had a chance to try learning to program?"

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"Yes, I bought that book. Interesting stuff. Haven't had the chance to do much with it yet, with everything being so busy, but I played around with the tools, did some math. They'll be useful for data processing. I might write a statistical analysis tool, or something."

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"I figure in a few years everyone will at least sort of know how to program. It's good to beat the crowds, make a little extra by selling programs before everyone else starts, but I'll probably quit doing it professionally when it's as much of a buyer's market as magic."

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"There will be different levels of skill in it. From what I hear only a few knowledge mages can make fine instruments - programming will be similar, I think. It's already the case that you would prefer to have five skilled engineers than twenty mediocre ones on a complicated project."

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"I think if I had any reason to want to I could learn to enchant an object to parse natural language, I've just never thought that was the best use of my time. But I guess someday programming will specialize like that."

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"I wonder if there's a way to figure out how the computer works, on the basic physical level not the logical one, so we can look for shortcuts or useful quirks? There were books in Milliways on computers, but I don't know what sort of implementation this is. I can't pry my way into the case and look at the hardware myself, but I might want to do experiments to see what kind of operations slow down these computers the most."

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"...I read some things while I was there but I think that's the kind of thing Nikolas would know."

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"Yes, and he doesn't want to talk to any of us about it. 'Trade secrets'. Cleo's hopping mad about it."

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"...He has a price but I'm not sure you have enough rings. Then again I think his price is going down, might be worth a try."

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"Hmm, maybe. Question is, would it even be worth the investment? It's only one curiosity in a world full of them, after all."

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"From what I read in Milliways, yes. Definitely."

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"Perhaps I'll take up a community collection and someone on the planning committee for the new college can go negotiate with him."

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"When you're talking with him, ask him whether he wants you to be the first ones to see where he's vulnerable to some kind of virus, or if he wants some agerah in Devor to be the first to figure that out."

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"-What does pathology have to do with computers?"

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"It's a metaphor I found in some books from his world. He'll know what it means."

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"But the usage in this context implies the computers can be sick, and that the sickness can spread... Oh. Oh, of course. Heh. I'm going to try and write a 'virus'."

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"Ha. Okay. What kind?"

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"Well, I don't know how it'll work yet, but the results - obvious but ultimately harmless, hopefully. Demonstrate that it could be done. I don't actually see the need to mess up other peoples' computers."

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"Who do you want to demonstrate that to? Because if you make it too obvious to too many people that just makes it more likely someone else will try it and maybe hit your computer..."

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"To Nikolas, of course. He'll want a security expert who can hurt his systems working for him, like you said."

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"So how - never mind, you probably want to do it yourself, don't you?"

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"I could be convinced to work together on this, too - but not until I've had a good try and failed, I think. My pride desires no less."

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"Well, I'll be interested to hear how it goes."

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"I'll let you know! I'm accumulating a list at this point - heh."

With that, conversation turns a bit more casual and relaxed. Curt knows just enough to be interesting about a wide, wide range of topics, and is plenty interested in Har's clever achievements too.

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And Nimo's interested in just about everything. Not necessarily knowledgeable about everything, but interested.

"...You know, I'm surprised you're single, you'd think all the human women would want you."

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He blinks owlishly. "Well, I suppose it's never come up? Engineering school is very time-consuming, I didn't want to court anyone while working on that. And then I had my job, it was good but demanding work. And then the frost. So I never found the time. And it's not like I needed to carry on the Warden name, I have three older brothers to do that for me. Well. Had. Now I have one."

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"Oh. Wow. Humans are lucky, I guess, I couldn't get away with ignoring romance and focusing on my work."

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"It's a strange thing to do for us as well, though perhaps not as strange. But see, exactly this - ignoring romance in favor of work - this may be the demographic shift in action?"

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"Huh. Yeah,  it might be. I guess your birthrate should drop too. What is it now, anyway?"

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"I don't remember the exact numbers, I'll have to look that up, but something like four or five on average?"

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"That's lower than caralendri but you don't have as much time - we usually space ours out, do you do that?"

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"I'm afraid I don't know. We shouldn't extrapolate too far with this, but my brothers are all years older than me, but about the same age themselves..."

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"Huh. Kind of a weird pattern but yeah, we'd need to know about more families before we could say we really know anything."

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"I'll add it to the list! Good data is the cornerstone of science, after all."

He does that.

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The ten thousand new immigrants to Ira Sani continue to build their city. It's not all hope and roses, however. Some of them get into trouble.

Some people go out hunting the wildlife for food, riding an automaton re-designed to be a bit quieter. They shoot at an agerah who wasn't wearing anything identifiable as clothes, at least from a distance. They miss, but the agerah breaks one of their guns with sun magic in retaliation, turning it to useless gold. The hunters apologize for the misunderstanding, but that agerah is deeply annoyed and reports them to the Imperial Police as soon as he can.

Some of the less devout men of New Dover start to realize that prostitutes are actually pretty easy to find on the mainland, much easier and safer than trying to find someone who will have sex for money in the low districts of English cities. And they're cleaner and cheaper on average, too. The rumor mill churns this tidbit excitedly, passing through pubs and such like quicksilver, and a lot of the unmarried men start to spend their days off in Erasi. Someone even opens a pub there for all the New Dovites who aren't currently looking to buy something to hang out in, renting a space near the airport.

There's a construction accident. An administrator tripped and stumbled into a working force mage while inspecting the site. The caralendri force mage dropped the huge concrete mold he was carrying, which ended removing a man's arm and killing another young man instantly. Lady Katherine tries to console the grieving parents and wife - that it was a terrible accident and they stopped work to look at why it happened and revised procedures - but they don't accept it. They go to the police and demand that somebody get arrested for this!

New Dover's residents continue to be weird about slaves. Anyone who owns a slave and is derisive or openly hostile or meets some other mysterious criterion sees their open friendliness turn cold, annoyed, and hostile. They don't seem to think of their own kids that way either, never referring to the children as slaves and almost never using command magic on them. Some of them will try to lecture slaveowners, too.

A bunch of fourteen and fifteen year olds end up arrested for harassing random beluli and agerah in the Riuhiu market, but it's not clear who if anyone they belong to - knowledge magic tracing them back hits frequent blind spots since they emerge from the Milliways door - and the kids are kind of terrified and mostly refuse to speak to the police.

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The imperial police offer the hunters lessons on identifying people and native Ira Sani wildlife by their silhouettes. It's a mediocre lesson and it was clearly thrown together on the fly in response to this situation but it's free. Also they have a court date in a couple of weeks. The police don't seem to think they're very likely to be convicted or much of a flight risk, all of them are let go on their own recognizance. One of the officers points out they could shout and see if they get an answer next time they think they've spotted some game, but another one points out that that wouldn't work with essi or ereli.

A few more human women move to Erasi from other parts of Meiu. Some of them and a caralendar investigate the pub.

Is the accident pastwatchable?

New Dover becomes a less popular tourist destination among slaveowners, except for the few who think being lectured sounds fun.

The police let the kids and the public know that if no one comes forward to claim them they'll be sold. Or killed if they don't sell. Valanda hears about it and wants to see Katherine at her soonest convenience.

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Well, also, if you shout the animals hear you and run away. That agerah looked kind of like a polar bear, they hunted those a lot before. They'll remember that there aren't any polar bears here next time.

It's a big room with human-sized tables and chairs, and a dozen human men drinking alcohol and singing badly! There's music playing from somewhere, and some kind of game involving throwing things is going on in the corner. A man standing behind a high counter cleaning glasses waves at the newcomers.

The accident is pastwatchable, yes.

One of the kids breaks down in tears and then names someone as his father. (Katherine thinks she is aware of the problem and is heading to riuhiu right now.)

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They buy that but if this happens again they might not buy it again.

One of the women wants to try the game.

They pastwatch it. Then they look for any previous pastwatchable suspicious interactions between the clumsy administrator, the force mage, the injured person or the dead person.

They try to track down the person the kid says is his father.

Valanda waits for Katherine to show up.

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They show up in court on time.

It's darts! These two - three - five guys will all try to explain darts at once until the bartender shouts 'cool it!' at them!

The administrator is kind of mean, but she's like that to everyone, nothing that screams 'revenge' or singles the other three people out pops up. The force mage was calm and professional through it all. The dead guy and the injured guy were apparently pretty close friends.

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They're not convicted of anything.

It's fun! She's not bad at it.

Yeah, that doesn't look suspicious. They tell the grieving parents and wife that it was probably an accident.

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They go back to hunting things.

People are betting on whether she will win. Someone offers her a beer.

Aren't there negligent death laws or something?????

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She'll pass on the free drugs while she's trying to win this game. Is the person offering the beer also betting against her?

This is no longer the imperial government's problem. They can bother the state or the city.

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Nope, he's not betting at all and seems kind of annoyed now. His buddies make fun of him.

They express the opinion that the Imperial Government is useless and evil. They go complain to Lady Katherine again. She gives them a thorough overview of the new safety standards and a lot of money and is genuinely sympathetic - but in the end, it was an accident. That administrator is paying for a lot of their compensation money, which calms them down some. There's a funeral. The first grave in the church graveyard is tearfully filled.

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She keeps playing. It's kind of a lot of fun. Maybe if someone makes her an offer she'll quit and get to work, otherwise she'll just keep going.

The imperial government declines to do anything yet about the really concerning misconception that it's useless.

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By some unspoken agreement nobody makes her an offer or brings up sex. Though a couple might be flirting? A bit hard to tell. They'll play darts with her all afternoon though.

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After a few hours she figures she found the wrong place and offers a ring if someone can tell her where the people looking for human women are. Not that she minds the game, it's great.

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No, this is the place, you're just not supposed to- It's a pub, it's for drinking and games. It'd be a completely different sort of place if it were a place to buy sex.

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"...Should I go stand outside the door so people can make me offers?"

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"Maybe so."

"I'll make you an offer..."

Bartender speaks up. "Shut up, Carl. Not in here, you hear me? This is a respectable establishment."

"Fine, fine."

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She goes and stands outside the door.

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A couple of guys follow and make offers. One of them is pretty drunk. The other is Carl.

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She haggles for a while.

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Carl bids higher, grinning lecherously. Drunk guy says he'll still be here later.

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Great, she gets paid today and doesn't touch drunk guy.

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The next day the pub has a sign on the front saying No prostitution on premises.

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...Can she still play darts, though?

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Bartender looks suspiciously in her direction often. Bartender decides not to make her buy something or get out since she's encouraging other guys to stay.

One guy says quietly, "I'm thinking of opening a place for, uh, your job. Private rooms, discretion, comfort, security. And it'll be a place for that line 'o work, so the men won't be so very hesitant, you'd get good business at your own pace. Sound like a bright idea?"

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"Maybe? I'm not sure if it'd be an improvement... are we even allowed to have this conversation here, because I really don't want to get kicked out."

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"I think they'd be happier about it, more relaxed, willing to pay more. And, enh. I don't think he'd kick you out, but anyway, we can talk later."

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"Well, you'd know these people better than I would."

She'll try to talk with him when they're both leaving.

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"Hey."

They talk business. He opens a brothel - it proves popular among the New Dover visitors, though plenty of them stick to the pub or just wander the city too.

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Well, the guy who this kid says is his dad is not currently pastwatchable. Last seen going into a big apartment complex that's covered in one giant ward two days ago.

Katherine shows up and finds Valanda, looking deeply concerned.

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Some imperial police pay a visit to the apartment.

Valanda would like to know if she knows about any other kids that no one is responsible for or if these are the only ones that anyone knows about yet.

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They don't know the code for the electronically locked door. All the locals avoid them.

"I know their parents, all four of them. We have a list somewhere. Some people, the fools, tried to hide or obfuscate it. To make a point, or something."

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"Did you bring the list? Do you know where the parents are right now?"

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"No. But I know these four. And yes."

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"We need to find them and give them to the imperial police, for a first offense they'll only be fined and made to take a class. Then I need the list. And it's possible the kids will be sold, what do you want to do about that?"

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"Are they going to be charged just with what their kids did, or something else specifically for failing to control them-"

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"It could still go either way. They aren't coming forward to claim them, though, so I think it'll be the second thing, they'll be charged with freeing children too young to follow the law."

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"I don't think they even realize it's happened yet. It's only been a few hours. And it's customary to let your kids do their own thing during the middle of the day."

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"Then maybe what you want is to get them to show up and explain that and take responsibility for everything. That'll at least make it less likely the kids get sold."

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"If they get sold we'll have someone outbid everyone else. A few of us decided to go around to all the major cities and buy up orphans when they come up for auction and it looks like they'll die without us, this is the same. Convincing the parents that they've actually done something wrong will be - ugh. I know I assured you about the people we were bringing in, but Mr. Griffings is going to be intolerable about this..."

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"Why will Mr. Griffings be intolerable?"

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"I think he will in fact decide that his kid deserves a good scare for getting himself into trouble and not come forward for a while, while simultaneously complaining that nobody was keeping an eye on him. The man is a hypocrite. I'm trying to think of a way to make him face up to it - though ideally without getting him charged with freeing a minor." She rubs her temples.

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"It would probably be a bad idea for me to go try to talk sense into him myself. If he doesn't come forward that'll be bad but mostly for him and his kid."

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"Yes, and that's what I'll threaten- Oh, I see how to fix this. I can probably have or at least threaten to have his sister claim young Xander Griffings, he'll hate that and do it himself to preempt it."

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"Good, I'm glad you've got something that might work. That seems pretty urgent, but I don't want to send you away and then have you have to come running back here..."

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"They're not going to sell or execute the kids the very same day, are they? Surely sometimes it takes a few days to find a negligent owner? -I'm wondering if just pretend nobody knows them, let the auction proceed, buy the kids, and then the parents get off scot free - but that seems antagonistic and rather cruel to them, perhaps not."

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"They might start trying to find the kids' biological relatives if no one will claim them. Might be able to. It's... not illegal to be this uncooperative but I really don't think you have the goodwill to burn with the imperial government right now."

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"Nobody's going to want to let imperial police into their places, or let them examine them." Sigh. "Well. We were supposed to know what we were signing up for, but this is - depressing."

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"If they've been in public without any illusions they can be examined. I don't exactly understand how it works but there's a special part of your inheritance that you can only get from your mother, they can compare that and find mothers or grandmothers or siblings... I don't want to make them do it that way but they can."

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"The all-seeing eye of the Law." Sigh. "And trying to secede would be a disaster, of course. I should probably go drag everyone to the imperial office."

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"Please. That will help a lot."

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She heads back to do that. It'll take a little bit of blackmail and a lot of fast-talking.

(The police officers who tried to find the one kid's dad will still be stuck outside his apartment building unless they try to break in or go somewhere else. People are staying inside to avoid them, staring from windows suspiciously.)

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They look around the building for any visible backdoors and pause to have someone try to pastwatch some of the construction.

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There's a door into a sort of courtyard area they could maybe fly into?

What are they looking for in the building's construction?

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They send for backup to come keep an eye on the courtyard, at least.

They're looking for the construction of any exterior doors that aren't visible anymore. Or any sign of a tunnel out. If it comes down to arresting someone inside they're going to watch all the exits they can.

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There's a couple of temporary doors that were bricked over. The windows are mostly glass-paned and could be opened. There are tunnels - sewer tunnels! A big maintenance conduit holding steam pipes and electrical wires and so on! Apparently they designed them pretty big, for some reason. Definitely big enough to walk through. Both structures are entirely scryable, though, so hopefully there's no need to go down there unless someone tries to escape through them.

A woman gets tired of waiting for the police officers to leave and 'sneaks out' through the courtyard, into another building, and out that building's front door.

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"Excuse me, do you know where we can find Joseph Lawrence?" one of them asks her. In English, they've had a couple people learning English for the past few months.

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"Look I just want to go get food and you people are lurking outside my building all day, can I go get food or am I going to get arrested for not answering?"

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"You won't be arrested for not answering."

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"In that case I don't really want to tell you anything, am I free to go, officers?"

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"Yes, but how many rings would it take to change your mind about that?"

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No amount of rings would be worth being the woman who ratted somebody out to the imperial police - well. It depends on what he did. "Ugh. What do you want him for, anyway?"

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"His child seems to have been involved in assault and attempting to keep people out of public places."

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"Oh, Christian's in trouble? Yeah, someone should-" Ohhhh. "-No I want nothing to do with this I just want to go find something to eat, okay? You should probably talk to Lady Katherine or Captain Edwards or something."

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"How many rings do you want for telling us where to find one of them?"

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Can she be done with this already please???

"Someone at Town Hall would probably know. I'm... Going to, uh, leave now, okay?"

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"Okay."

Not long later one of them shows up at Town Hall to ask about Lady Katherine and Captain Edwards.

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The receptionist says Lady Katherine is on her way here right now, she's just gotten a message from her on the computer asking about the imperial police and how she wants to talk to them. Captain Edwards is probably in his home, but she could call him?

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"Which of them will be here faster?"

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"Almost certainly Lady Katherine, sirs. She apparently hired a force mage and is proceeding here directly. Five minutes."

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Then they'll wait for her.

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And here is Lady Katherine, slightly out of breath. "Hello, officers. I'm the one they're calling Lady Katherine - Katherine Cromwell, or just Katherine, if you prefer. I have every hope I can get all eight of the people you want and resolve all this as best as we can."

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"You want to round them up yourself? Or would you like our help?"

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"If I round them up myself it's much less likely to spook them into doing something unfortunate. Maybe hand them off to you one at a time? I can bring you along if you prefer, however."

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"We'll leave you to it if you think that would be best."

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"Yes, I think that would be best. I did try to impress the implications of imperial law on everyone, but old habits die hard. Leaving your children alone is not at all unusual where we come from, so I can see how this ended up happening. All I ask is that you please keep in mind that this is the first exposure to imperial law enforcement for - I think all eight parents."

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"Of course. Just let us know if there's anything we do for you."

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"I think what will work best is if you - force mage, yes? - fly me to where I think they are, are on hand to watch them once I collect them, and wait until I collect everyone and then take them away all at once."

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They have a couple more details to work out and then they can help her go find everyone.

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She talks her way into two apartment buildings and two houses. In each case, she comes out a few minutes later with a sulking, anxious couple. They whisper at each other a bit and mostly don't talk to the officers, but are compliant.

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Well that's a lot of people. And off they go back to Riuhiu.

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Katherine is getting kind of tired of this sudden running around and has cancelled several appointments over it, but will come along if nobody objects.

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They certainly don't object.

Once they get there one of the officers wants to know if she'd be willing to answer some questions? For a few rings, of course.

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"I reserve the right to decline to answer if I think it's best and I certainly won't say no to rings, but I also think making sure we don't have problems with the law in New Dover is important for its own sake."

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"I'm glad we agree. What sort of response would these people have expected from the authorities they're used to?"

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"Slavery was illegal in England, but parents were still understood to be responsible for their children to an extent, moreso the younger the kid is. However, it was also generally understood that the younger a child is the less anyone was responsible for their actions. If a pre-teen broke somebody's window, the parents would be expected to pay to replace it and perhaps scolded for not raising the child better. If a teenager like these children did that, the teen themselves would be punished, more likely, the fine would be harder, perhaps either the child or a parent would be jailed or punished with lashes, and also made to pay to replace the window. As an aside, it's considered cruel to punish women with pain, but not for men. But that's irrelevant."

"In this particular case - teens over fifteen, assault and removing people from public places? - The parents would possibly expect their children to be jailed, and for them to be alerted by the police that their children are in trouble, but not arrested themselves - and eventually the child goes before a judge and the judge decides whether to sentence the child to jailing or labor in a work camp or, if they were not particularly poor, a fine which the parents would pay. And in any case, the parents are likely to punish the children themselves when they're eventually returned."

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"So they'll be having trouble with the idea of taking responsibility for their children? Is there anything similar in your society that would make a good analogy, say if an automaton hurts someone...?"

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"Moreso with older children, but yes, that's the key point here. Hmm... Automata are actually fairly new, I don't think that analogy would really resonate. Perhaps, even if it's outside of their direct control, say if a gun goes off by accident or you start a fire by accident, you are still responsible for the results? It's - The idea of very strictly controlling one's children, the label 'slave', is very aversive, is the problem - the idea of owning slaves at all is aversive, and one's own children even moreso. That is the single biggest tension point that anyone in New Dover would say is the thing they like the least about imperial law, and it's a very strong sentiment."

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"The age of majority for humans might be too high, I know the governor thinks so. But I can't do anything about that today. If owning people is that aversive we can help you arrange buyers or euthanasia..."

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"No, no, that's worse, that's handing them off to someone who will then own them, or murder, in their minds. Please don't so much as hint at that."

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"It's not that you object to owning people, it's that you object to people being owned? Or just your children?"

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"Yes. More the second thing than the first - hardened criminals or people incapable of participating normally in society, we still don't like that, but we don't like it less. It feels unfair, much the same way agerah want to pay people back both good and bad, we want things to be fair. If everyone were freed at least once unless they were clearly incapable, that would be something we approved of quite a lot."

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"But before then someone needs to be responsible for these kids. If you're determined that it should be them, I can see what I can do, they're close to their majority and I might be able to convince the right people..."

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"Hmm... Does the law see a difference regarding repeated offences for a crime committed by one's slave, which you become responsible for, and one committed personally? That is, if your slave assaults someone and you are punished for it, and later you assault someone, does that count as a second offense of assault?"

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"Yes, that would be a second offense."

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"...Hmm. I appreciate the idea, and if you could at least float it to the right people, the news that you tried would mollify New Dover a fair bit, but I don't think it's worth a politically expensive fight if it turns out to be one. Perhaps we can establish something like that going forward later, but we don't need to hammer it in right now. These people knew the law in the end, they were just careless - or deliberately ignoring it, which would be worse."

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"I'll try."

He does try. He tries publicly. Anyone can scry it for New Dover. He fails. It's the parents who end up on trial.

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Katherine notes down his name and tries to find out how to do that officer some kind of favor later. Money seems a bit crude and possibly afoul of some impartiality or lobbying rule, but if she can't find anything more appropriate it'll have to do.

Yes, their kids totally did those things, and they're totally their kids nobody disputes it (though they complain about the ownership thing some), and yes they jointly own them how else would it work?

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The court scries the incident with the harassment of locals. Yup, that sure is some harassment of locals.

The parents each have a chance to say something in their own defense if they'd like.

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They've been advised in private by Katherine to say that they've learned their lesson and that they'll be disciplining the kids so they don't do this again. They say that in various phrasings.

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That's very reassuring.

They're still found guilty of assault and fined. They're also all offered a free parenting class.

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...Two of them are morbidly curious what monstrosity of a parenting class the evil government will come up with.

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The evil government advises parents to use incentives to encourage their children to follow the law. Parents are encouraged to avoid being too harsh on them for minor offenses because that would compromise their ability to threaten even worse things for worse misbehavior. Parents are encouraged not to hit their children in the head or feed them lead if they expect to ever free them.

Some suggested commands for parents unsure how to prevent children from breaking the law are "don't touch anyone without their permission, except in self-defense" and "don't take things that don't belong to you" but of course it's hard to use command magic to exactly cover every law and nothing else. Parents can confine their children to specific areas if that helps keep them away from temptation!

If they need help getting their children tutors there are some recommendations! All these people are competent and can teach some part of the imperially approved curriculum!

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Command magic is really quite awful. (They don't say this out loud.) And they're probably going to send their kids to the New Dover schoolhouses, though private tutors could probably find some work in New Dover.

They punish the miscreant teens in various ways and do in fact threaten worse if this sort of thing happens again. New Dover moves on.

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A handful of doctors, mostly not working together, approach the Order of Mercy about recruiting some of the immigrants for medical studies. Would anyone be interested in having limbs or teeth or nerves regrown (...or maybe just damaged even more, but they'll definitely get paid for participating!) or having the amounts of different hormones in their body systematically increased or decreased to see the effects? Would anyone who's planning on having kids soon like to try having kids with different genes turned on or off to see what happens?

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The otherworldly doctors are a bit cautious about this sort of thing and would like to go over experimental methods and biochemical pathways and so on in a fair bit of detail with the prospective researchers. (The consulting is free, though if a particular doctor doesn't seem to get it they'll stop listening to them.)

Limb and tooth and nerve regrowth studies have a lot of potential depending on the exact methodology used. Worst comes to worst, they can probably just amputate or pull the tooth again if the results are undesirable.

Hormone studies they are pretty skeptical of - probably want to try it on animals first and see if it kills them or makes them miserable, and then when it comes to people, slow and reversible changes. Even moreso with the children's genetic studies. They'll want to very very cautiously select those, and again, try nonsentient animal models which are not great and have a lot of different genes, or cell cultures which are not people and will lose a lot of useful detail, but where an analogue can be found they can rule out lots of definitely-a-bad-ideas. And the generations of mice are much faster too, which will speed up experiments.

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They have several methods they want to try in the regrowth studies. Some seem safer than others.

There are problems with those kinds of studies! For instance one time they discovered a way to make cells immortal and it turned out it caused cancer. Another time their mouse model of sex determination turned out not to explain caralendri at all. But then they tried studying sequentially hermaphroditic fish and those also don't work like caralendri. Animals have the advantages of being cheaper and living shorter lives but they're not preferred.

But fine, if they want to restrict themselves to things that have been tried in other species already, there's this hormone that increases life expectancy in mice but maybe has weird side effects, there's a hormone that's important for seasonal cycles in beluli but humans have it too and it's not clear why, they're pretty sure adding an extra X chromosome to human females won't do anything but they'd like to be even more sure... They've got a list!

One of the scientists wants to maybe buy a human or two, maybe a breeding pair, so they don't have to worry so much about whether they want their children to have any genetic diseases.

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The doctors would also prefer to keep to experiments where the mechanisms in play are at least vaguely sort of understood - they have Milliways knowledge giving them bright ideas of their own too and both sides can probably learn a lot just by talking to each other - they start approving a couple experiments at a time after a week or so of chewing it over, and publicly ask for paid volunteers. There's plenty for limb and tooth regrowth, a few less for nerve regrowth, and a mere handful for for hormone or genetic experiments.

The one who wants to buy a human or two will not be getting them here that's for damn sure. And the Order of Mercy won't want to help with experiments on slaves. They're giving the other medical associations a lot of money to not use slaves and everything.

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Some of the things they try fail, and fail painfully, but eventually they end up successfully restoring some frostbitten nerves and missing teeth and... the limb regrowth method that gets the best result is painful, very slow and some people find it disgusting to watch happening at all or horrifying to watch happening to themselves. But if anyone's willing to stick it out it eventually ends up with a functional limb. The scientists are so glad there are so many immigrants with old injuries to test things on!

That's great for those associations but this guy's independent! Are they going to pay him personally not to use any slaves?

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The Order of Mercy does their best to keep everything happening as friendly and ethical to the volunteers as possible. They analyze and write up studies and reports on it all. Most people drop out of the best limb regrowth method! Those that abandoned it halfway through worry about whether they're going to be worse off then before. A few don't drop out! The doctors mutter about a less painful way to do it. A couple people who didn't initially volunteer are interested in having it done after it turns out it works the best out of all the options tried!

Probably not. If he comes up with an interesting and valuable study all on his own and promises to share the results, or if he works with them to test something, they'll pay the volunteers themselves up to a reasonable amount, though.

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The people who drop out should be safe leaving it half-done. Probably.

While they're still getting a good sample size and looking for side-effects they'll continue to pay people to get their limbs fixed. After a while it should be the other way around, though.

Fine. But they're clearly bad at judging how interesting and valuable a study is. As evidenced by the fact that they don't think systematically checking to see what every human gene does is interesting and valuable.

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They'll do follow-up observation of all the people they treat. (Speaking of which, how is Echan getting along with her multiple sclerosis treatment?)

Investigating the human genome is indeed interesting and valuable! But not worth killing hundreds of babies, and that is totally what it would come down to. He can test the effects every human gene - in cell cultures. They'll even provide all the materials for it and actually pay him to do it. He can test specific genes that he has a good reason to test and that probably won't horribly hurt the baby, in consenting informed volunteers looking to have a baby.

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One of the second wave of limb-regrowth volunteers seems to be a bit of a hero to these people. They look up to her.

The pain is not fun but she seems pretty unaffected by the body horror aspect of the whole thing. It's definitely worth it for the prospect of being whole again, though.

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The side-effects mostly seem to be what you'd expect from any procedure that takes a lot of time and is very stressful. Some people get the shakes, some people feel wrung out for a day or two. One limb has a problem with the cartilage, but they can redo that, that's simple and quick and mostly painless. Nothing more serious happens.

Echan goes back to work and just manages to pay her rent on time (and doesn't eat for two days to manage it) and doesn't have to sell Isava. She shows up to church services.

Liane might find that it's way more comfortable than some things she's been through. It still sucks, though.

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She has all her arms and legs again! It's almost a miracle! Except that magic and doctors did it, not God. (What did God ever do for her, anyway...? Well, she's still alive and things are getting better and maybe that's God's doing, there's that... But that the winter came at all is a bit harsh of God...)

She doesn't go into shock or get the shakes, though she does have to rest for most of the day after doing it. It actually feels really weird. The returned arm more than the leg - she's been without it longer. She's wobbly and uncoordinated at first and dedicates a lot of time to just getting used to doing things with two hands again.

...She hears about the airship works that are being built. Some very, very cool machines are being worked up using a combination of Frostlands expertise, Milliways knowledge, and Hari magic. Sleekly aerodynamic things that can cruise at 70 knots and don't need to carry any fuel, giant tubular constructs with immense amounts of useful lift manufactured with defense and void magic. Magic airships. Of course, she immediately goes and gets herself hired as a test pilot.

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Some people inquire with Valanda whether the land originally set aside for an airship-airport is still available. And also, if Riuhiu could maybe use a subway system like the one New Dover has just finished building? There are quite a few kinks to work out still, but it's very very useful for making an accessible and pleasant city.

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The land for the airport is still available!

Riuhiu is still too small to really need public transit but it could grow! Might as well get in at least one city-center stop now before something else is taking up that space, right? Might be harder to retrofit than to just start now.

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Some people would like to buy that land and build an airport on it now.

It would probably be harder to retrofit, yeah... They can put in the skeleton of a single station now pretty cheap and have it be ready for if Riuhiu gets big enough to need a whole system.

With force mages, the cost of tunneling and laying track is actually pretty manageable. Still expensive, because they have to put in wiring and ventilation and do defense magic in an earthquake-safe way and stuff, but manageable. A future project might be a Riuhiu-New Dover railway, which would be faster than the force mages and automaton-buses people are currently using to get here and there. Something for the future, maybe.

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There's some interest in faster Riuhiu-New Dover transit, but maybe not enough to make a railway profitable any time soon.

Some people think the airships are very cool and want to try them just to see what they're like. Some people want to know if they'll be offering transoceanic flights back to Mar Geru.

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These are just prototypes. Hmm... For a small fee and signing a waiver they can ride along with the test pilots, sure.

They're probably going to do transoceanic flights sooner or later! Airships are expensive to build but won't drop out of the sky if the force mage screws up (and might end up being cheaper to run than force mage transit too).

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Private air carrier Lanadi's Flights is interested in backup lift systems that could allow just one force mage to handle a flight, since people wouldn't die if the one force mage got distracted or had a heart attack. Is New Dover selling anything like that?

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They could probably design something like that. The easy and cheap-to-develop option would be to strip off the engines of one of their airship frames and use that. They'll only charge the cost of the frame for that, fairly cheap.

A custom development project for something that stays compressed and then deploys in an emergency - they'd want to charge a fairly high fee to develop it. But it'd probably be cheaper once invented and also better suited for their needs, barring the usual caveats about reliability, etc, etc.

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They'll test out the easy option and see how they like that for now, but maybe they'll be interested in something custom later.

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Their airship frame turns out to have nice aerodynamic and stability properties, as well as useful navigation instruments on the bridge. The failsafe dumps a whole lot of ballast out if a sudden descent or other issues are detected, and might have a false positive if their force mage pilots move too quickly. They also might want to strip out some of the seats in the cabin area to make room for people other than humans and caralendri.

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They fly that for a while. It does reduce personnel costs! They're tentatively happy with it but they'll wait a while before they decide whether to get more.

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A couple of months pass. New Dover is up to a lot of things all at once. Everyone has new lives here, now.

Liane Hunter spends a lot of time thinking about her past, how she got here. She grew up as a snot-nosed tomboy, flying airships, cleaning and doing household chores and running down the streets as a messenger girl. It wasn't a great childhood, but it was... Safe. Nostalgic, thinking about it now. Her parents loved her and all was right in the world. When the Great Frost came, of course she volunteered. She could do no less. It was satisfying, being able to contribute.

And then the betrayal. The elites of London taking all the evacuation transports for themselves. They had been lying about creating enough space for everyone the whole time. Hard but noble work became grim endurance. She was crippled twice, but oh, she made such a difference... Milliways might be the real miracle in the end. Maybe she should have stayed there. (Bah, can't change the past.)

...The second accident was awful. Trapped down a deep crevasse of ice, in constant pain, barely able to move. She couldn't start a fire. She could barely make a little snow hollow to keep in a bit of warmth. She knew in her bones she was going to die in there. That turned out to be wrong in the end, but she still thought about her life a lot. Reminiscing about growing up. She saved a bunch of people. Maybe she's dying, but they're not. She saved little kids, with their eyes full of hope and their minds full of wonder...

After that, she realized she wants a kid. It's not something she can pick apart or reason about, but it's definitely there. But she'd hate marrying and being dependent on someone. Besides, who would want to marry a washed-up twice-cripple? But once she got to Har... The world is full of possibilities. They're not all going to eventually freeze in the cold, there's a whole new world with lots to do and actual magic.

There are single parents here. She didn't even really think about it before - but no, she doesn't actually need to marry someone to have a kid. She doesn't need to find someone who'll tolerate her, and take vows to serve him as a wife...

There's another part to her tail-chasing musing. She knows about sex, vaguely. Sometimes other women talk about it. It sounds like something she wants to try. But unwed sex is a sin, everyone says so. She hasn't done anything more than kissing and naughty wandering hands with Timothy Farlane, a baker's son, for a couple of weeks. She got her airship job right after that and when she got back, he was engaged with someone else. But she liked that feeling, his hands on her...

The church can't be correct in all things. God left them to freeze to death. Maybe it actually was the End Of Days. She doesn't know - she used to listen to priests on this kind of stuff, and now... She just doesn't know.Whatever. She wants a kid. She could hire a doctor to do that for her, she's heard of that being a thing, but that doesn't feel right. It's not how kids are supposed to happen. They're just supposed to happen when you lie with a man, if God or chance or whatever wills it.

...This seems like something she can compromise on. She wants to have sex and see what it's like and turn her imagination into reality, but it's a sin. She wants a baby, but she doesn't want someone else's baby, or to have a doctor magically put one inside her. So. She can have sex with people, and if she gets pregnant, having a kid was meant to be. 

The thought is exciting - both halves of it. She finds it hard to stop thinking about it. She can't very well do it with other men from New Dover - well, a few of them probably would have sex without marrying her, but then it'd get back to the town rumor mill and she's still vaguely mortified - on the other hand, who the father is doesn't actually seem that important when she thinks about it. And if she has a kid from a Hari man maybe they'll be more likely to have magic?

She can't make that plan sound bad in her head. She's nervous about it, but... She's never been one to come up with a plan that sounds good and then not do it. She does her level best to become one of the pilots on intercontinental flights. The first few flights she spends a lot of time checking over the airship, studying the job, making sure everything runs smoothly.

Eventually she starts wandering around the cities she finds herself in and wondering who she should, ah, approach for this. (It's a little terrifying to consider!) They don't find it awkward. They don't find it awkward at all. After wandering around for most of an afternoon she sees a few people openly ask each other if they want to have sex, and a couple of people selling it (or who own slaves and are selling them, which is just - ugh, but it would be a Terrible Idea to try and do something about that).

...She still can't bring herself to just. Find an attractive guy and walk up and say 'I want to have sex with you'. It's - it's - mortifying is the right word. Maybe someone she knows from the city after all...? Someone who doesn't hold the church strictures quite so dearly and won't talk about it far and wide? But, no, everyone she can think of that she knows and likes is married, or so young that it would be weird.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.

...She knows the governor of Ira Sani, Valanda, a little bit. They talked about Hyrule and the other her and Milliways and a few other things during the evacuation. He would probably keep it quiet. And it's not a big deal here, right? And he knows another her, so maybe he'd know the best way to- But how would she- What would she even say to him?

Aaaaaaaah.

Still, that's the thing she can think of that makes her want to crawl into the ground and hide in shame the least.

She flies back to Ira Sani. She gets a couple of days off. She goes to find Valanda and says she wants to talk about something in private when he's not busy.

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He can see her today if it's just going to take a couple minutes, tomorrow if she wants him to block out half an hour or so for whatever this is about.

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"It's either going to be a very short conversation or a pretty long one. Tomorrow's probably, uh, best, I guess?"

(She's oddly nervous.)

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Uh-huh, she probably wants help with a project and expects a quick no if he's not going to help. Maybe she thinks she has a plan to end slavery.

"Okay. I'll look forward to seeing you then."

And tomorrow he's waiting for her. With snacks, would she like an apple?

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"Sure, thanks... Sorry to bother you, you seem really busy... It's just... You're one of the only Hari people I really know at all? And-" It's not awkward for them, it's not... This was a terrible idea...

"T-This is so awkward, I'm sorry, I promise there's a reason I want to talk to you - do you mind if I ramble a little bit before asking my, uh, ask?"

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"Go ahead, we've got time."

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Deep breath. It's not awkward in Har, it's not forbidden. Put on your big girl pants and lay out your reasons in as few sentences as possible and get it over with.

"...Ever since I got hurt, uh, the second time, I've wanted a kid. But I don't want to just - I don't want to adopt or have one with magic or doctors, it just feels wrong, I don't know if that's greedy. And I also want to - to - see what sex is like." She goes tomato red. "I think I want to do those kinds of things. I, uh, imagine it. But I can't go ask someone from the Frostlands about that. I've decided I don't care if God says we shouldn't have sex without marrying, but I think they all still believe that. Anyway it seems right to - start to indulge and if I have a baby that way then I get a baby but - I've never - I tried to make myself ask people in Anavel Sani City but couldn't do it. I think if I - do it - with someone I know - I won't be so hesitant any more. Sorry to ask you this but - I wondered if you'd be okay, uh... Helping me? I'll just go away if you don't!"

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"I don't have a lot of people to recommend... maybe Mahan, he wouldn't be interested but I can pay him, is he someone you know?"

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...That's almost funny. Almost.

"I've heard of Mahan one of my friends knows him but I meant, uh, you?"

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"I would love that but I can't get anyone pregnant without magic. I really wish I could, I'm honored that you asked."

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"Oh..." He looks sad - she almost moves to hug him but that would be kind of off given the current topic-

"...Well. That's not - sorry if it's painful, for bringing it up. But. I have never done - that - before - and I still want to anyway. So I can... Learn. So I won't do something weird and wrong. And maybe also get over all the embarrassment. And also I like you. If you want."

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"I can do that! I'd love to. Tonight?"

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!

"Yes! For sure! I - ah. Thank you?"

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"No, I should thank you, it'll be my pleasure."

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"I am. Very nervous. But I'm already looking forward to it! I just need to know, uh, where and when and I can get out of your hair."

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He lets her know where he lives and when he expects to be done with work today.

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And she knocks on his door at that time! Still nervous. Butterflies in the stomach.

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That goes well.

Not long later, Katherine's police officer friend would like to talk with her when it's convenient. She can even bring human-suitable snacks if Katherine would like that!

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She has snacks of her own but appreciates it. Perhaps at four today? Wherever is convenient.

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Anywhere hidden would be convenient and four works.

Iralan has a gift for her when they meet. It's a necklace with a pendant that changes from red to blue and back to red at a constant rate, about ten seconds for a full loop, for timekeeping.

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Her office is hidden and less than sixty seconds' walk from one of the subway stops. "Oh - thank you. I can see this being useful for relaxation or breathing exercises. We actually have timekeeping devices as well, perhaps I should get you one in return some time."

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"Oh, tech timekeeping, I'll have to take a look at those some time. So! Have you been able to get all these people registered to vote yet?"

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"We've been a little busy, to be honest. I'm sure plenty of them have gone off and registered on their own."

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"Okay. The deadline isn't until a week before the election, but sometimes there's a last-minute rush and you have a lot of people. - Let me be honest with you, my cousin is running for imperial chief justice and I think you have every reason to want her to win. You can let me know if you need help getting people registered or anything else."

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Aha. "I think we can organize a voter registration campaign. I like your take on law, of course, but I do think I'd like you to elaborate a bit. And perhaps she'd want to visit and make a campaign presentation here? I know we're a very small voting bloc, but we are one, and if you're that sure we want her in office I'm sure all of us will enjoy such a thing."

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"That might be a good idea. It might be tricky to make it work, since she doesn't speak English yet and I don't think all of you speak Ilan or Hari. But whether we can make it work or not I'm available to answer questions. I mainly expect you to vote for her because she wants to simplify criminal penalties so they're the same across species and that would mean humans would be subject to lighter punishments overall, compared to now."

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"Lighter punishments is not precisely the thing we're most concerned about with imperial law, but it's probably a good thing... Live translation is notably difficult, but there are a couple of people who might be able to manage Hari into English with a bit of delay, for everyone who doesn't know Hari."

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"If you're willing and able to provide translation I'll let her know and get back to you with some times when she'd be free to come here. Is there anything else I can do for you now?"

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"Nothing I can't look up myself. I wouldn't want to impose on your time. Thank you for the visit - I'll look into getting a translator and let you know if we have anyone who feels confident to translate a live speech and questions-and-answers."

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"Okay! Thank you for your time, you can let me know if you'd like any help."

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"Have a good afternoon."

 

 

It turns out they don't have anyone who feels confident translating a speech into English live. It takes several years to become fluent enough in a new language to efficiently translate it live, apparently.

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A while later, internet connectivity launches! You need to buy this telescoping receiver thingy and give it a clear view of the sky and plug it into the computer, or plug it into a wi-fi device and also plug one into the computer. And also pay a monthly service fee, later, but it's totally waived for the first six months!

You can register a free electronic mail box and give people your email address and send encrypted messages with the computers now! You can look at the electronics store catalog online and find great online-only deals! (You need to have a special code and give it to the cashier to get the better price.) You can post online ads for a small fee (inquire in person)! You can stream a variety of freeware-ish videos Nik accumulated or negotiated for, for the low price of occasionally being interrupted with an advertisement! You can play silly little online games! You can go to a dozen or so private websites that have been set up, such as this one about Nimo's security and privacy consulting! You can read a somewhat limited selection books at this free online library! You can use these free internet messaging boards Nik set up! You can search the entire not-very-huge-yet contents of the internet from this handy website which also tells you about how you can set up your own website or hire Nik's company to do it for you!

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Some people start buying the receivers.

Valanda puts up an official site listing the state laws of Ira Sani, the name of the current governor, and the date of the next state election. The site is in Ilan and Hari. He looks for someone who can translate it into English. It claims there will soon be a way to contact the office of the governor through the site, but there isn't yet.

Lanisal claims her clan's name before anyone else can and turns that into control over the Vesairel clan's official website.

The message boards attract spam.

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They're pretty cheap! He's taking a loss on them to get the internet off the ground.

Governments get special governmental website addresses, which look shiny and official.

Nik looks the other way since she is a Vesairel, sort of, but warns Lanisal not to try to pull that on a large scale.

What kind of spam? Random low-quality posting, or what look like bot accounts? Because it'd be surprising if that happened so quickly.

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The spam is mostly people who saw a nice thing and wanted to break it by posting the whole alphabet as many times in a row as they could.

Lanisal doesn't even pout about not being able to pick up all the interesting domain names. Instead she puts up another site for her business and announces the upcoming launch of five new shows. Buy a password and see the first episode of one of them online before the official release! Buy a different password and get access to her old shows.

The Varoran and Marenasar clans want their own official websites too. They want to know if they can have the special governmental label on the grounds that they're very important to the internal politics of Anavel Sani and act like governments for their members.

The imperial government puts the imperial laws online, including all the appendices.

The (technically) governor of (technically) the state of I Don't Like The Other States, a quarter-square-mile island off the coast of Rasa, would like the shiny government seal for her website. The only thing she wants to use her website for is listing her state law. Her only state law is that no one else is allowed within her borders besides her, on pain of horrific torture. The imperial government's official list of member states confirms that I Don't Like The Other States is a real state which was founded thirty years ago and almost never engages in interstate commerce. Functionally it's really more of a protest against the existence of other people than a state. Where its population even heard about the internet is unclear.

The (not even technically) self-proclaimed solar lord wants a shiny government seal for his website where he explains that as the king of the sun and moon he's aware of the secrets that the imperial government is hiding from the people! like the existence of nineteen extra types of magic, a colony on the dark side of the moon, and the "fact" that there are no other planets in their solar system!

Dareni starts a list of websites that seem legit to her. Enumerating every legitimate website on the entire internet is totally possible and totally something she can keep up as it grows! Totally.

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Forum acquires a character limit and a thirty second post lock and a block feature. If anyone would like to be a volunteer moderator and take vengeance upon spammers they may apply here, abuse of moderator power results in revocation of same.

Someone shares the passwords to Lanisals shows on the public forums. Nick tells her, "I warned you."

Governmental seals are limited to states and state sponsored organizations. I Don't Like The Other States can have one if it's insistent enough. The solar lord can't. The clans, he'll think about it, supporting evidence for the people treating them like a state thing would help.

He suggests that Dareni think about programming something to automatically judge websites somehow. There's ways and ways.

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A lot of people would like to be moderators, actually. A disproportionate number of applicants are ereli. One of Lanisal's boyfriends applies.

"You can't buy advertising like that for any price," she says.

Well, for example, people don't go around wearing clan symbols they're not entitled to. And when the clans make it known that how the clans dress is how the clans dress, other people don't try to look like them, usually. And people in the city of Anavel Sani started obeying certain Sorota public health policies before they became law. The state of Anavel Sani was acknowledged to belong to the six clans of the Confederacy when Anavel Sani became a state.

The solar lord now thinks Nikolas is secretly controlled by the sea anemones and warns everyone not to trust him.

I Don't Like The Other States cites the imperial recognition of the state as an entity separate from the state of Rasa. Also, it's been a state longer than Ira Sani. Also, look at its governor's fangs.

Dareni agrees that's probably a good idea and she'll think about how to do it.

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He chooses a bunch whose applications look better than average and lays out a bunch of forum rules mostly about civil discourse and makes a special moderators only board and tells them to talk to each other when moderating, too, and figure out how to run this whole thing. Probably some of them will not work out and get moderator power removed, and a couple of them can become Moderator Moderators (AKA Administrators) later if they're good at it. That position even comes with a little pay! He's curious to see how the ereli work out, he's not really sure how ereli work, still.

If the clans can get the Anavel Sani government will write to him to say that the six clans are closely associated with the government, they can have a slightly less shiny government-affiliated-organization label. Individual cities, the Hari Medical Association, and the like get this tier of shiny label, so it's not bad.

Nikolas has a rather impressive set of fangs and predatory snarl too. The impromptu intimidation contest amuses him greatly... But the private island can have its governmental label, the imperial government acknowledges them, fine.

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They get the spam under control. One of the ereli takes the initiative to try starting some useful threads.

The clans talk someone who works in the Anavel Sani government into writing to him to point out that no one has ever served in an elected position in Anavel Sani without belonging to one of the clans.

A disproportionate fraction of early internet adopters seem to be ereli. Shortly there's a website for pictures of delicious-looking beluli.

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This seems to be going well.

 

He leaves the moderators mostly alone, but will program in additional moderation tools if they're easy to do and they present a good case for them.

Sure, but are the clans actually related to the government in some official capacity?

He looks into why a disproportionate fraction of internet early adopters are ereli. Possibly it's related to how he suddenly had dozens of ereli wanting his pod homes all at once.

 

The search engine lets you choose what species you are now. If you do, it'll show you things you're more likely to want to see better (guessing off species generalities), for example not showing any agerah food blogs to beluli or whatever.

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No, the government of Anavel Sani is technically in theory a separate entity from the clans that the clans just happen to have controlled uninterrupted for centuries.

There's now a website for the organization of ereli dedicated to improving erel lives. They assess candidates for public office based on how their proposed policies would affect ereli. They pay people to do things like test out pod apartments and then they tip other ereli off about it. They help ereli raise law-abiding well-educated children. They fund medical research that might extend the life expectancy for their species or figure out non-belul blood sources that might be cheaper than beluli. Somebody involved seems to think the internet is promising.

Reactions to the search customization are mixed.

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Then they don't get the shiny governmental labels.

He writes in saying that he'll take advice and feedback into consideration.

Well, they can always opt out of customized searches. He's not going to turn himself into Google, tracking everyone from the shadows.

Now there's signs in his stores and a section on the search engine homepage advertising the electronic bank! Focus-tested ones per species, if you chose a species for the search engine! Haven't you wanted to buy something on the internet but been scared it's a scam already? This solves that problem and makes its money by charging a tiny amount to the people receiving money. And you can get a cool game, shiny computer peripheral, or six months of your own website free if you sign up for an account!

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Lanisal opens an account with the internet bank, but no one else in her clan does yet. A handful of other people open accounts, Valanda among them. Ereli start opening accounts, mostly with only small amounts in them for now.

A farmer starts taking online orders for fruit delivery anywhere on the mainland as long as the order is big enough to justify paying for the trip.

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The computer parts and website services store gives you a discount if you pay online! Nik pays Lanisal to set up online orders and give a discount to them, too! He approaches a few other big mail-order companies about making them their own website and doing online payments, look how much dough the fruit guy is raking in, see? And air travel companies, if people can book a flight online and pay right then it's very convenient and you don't have to pay a ticketing agent, the computer does it all.

He's definitely losing money, but that happens in the establishing stages of a business.

The city of New Dover gets a semi-official website, with maps and tourist information and so on. The Order of Mercy gets a website and puts up free medical advice, which people might not trust of course, and its own private forum where nurses and doctors will give general medical advice for free, unless they get overwhelmed with asks. Though, they know humans best. A bunch of other immigrant companies set up their own sites, from the church to a beer-brewing company to someone who owns a rather fantastically decorated botanical garden to the Automaton Appreciation And Advancement Academy. ('Academy' is a bit of a stretch even if they do teach people, they picked the name because they liked how it sounds in English.)

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Lanisal starts selling online, now without courting piracy on purpose. The airlines still want to weigh all cargo at the airport but start taking reservations online.

The New Dover sites all attract some people, especially the Order of Mercy one.

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It looks like web hosting is going to be a bigger revenue stream than the online bank for now. Well, as long as he starts making loads and loads of money soon.