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Nick, in a full environment suit like any sensible person would wear in untamed wilderness, is overseeing a small swarm of robots harvesting various useful plantlife from the uninhabited parts of a sparsely settled planet, when something suddenly comes tearing through the undergrowth towards him and it's not showing up on scanners-

He raises his hand-phaser, notices it has a mirror for a face and hesitates a little too long. And then he is in a clearing, cut off from his ship and 'bots, with all available sources of data telling him he just went through a jump.

What.
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And in the clearing is a lady knight in full armor on a charging griffin crossing directly in front of Nick to meet an ambulatory robed skeleton with red glowing points where eyes would normally live.

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He yelps in surprise, then stands up and starts running in the opposite direction. This takes a few seconds. Because of the suit.

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He is just barely clear of a fiery explosion, followed immediately by a flying chunk of shattered shoulderblade that whizzes past his ear.

"You!" calls the lady knight in Nick's own native language. "What manner of thing are you! Stand down if you are no dark thing!"
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He stops running. "What the hell did you do to that monster, because it seems a lot like magic which is a thing that always tries to kill me! This time by dropping me in the middle of a magic fight without my ship or 'bots! Augh!"

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"I shattered its soul-eye with a sword. What are you?"

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"I am a human from far, far away who did not! Expect! To be here!"

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"...You're a human? What are you wearing, what's the matter with you?" She slides off her griffin, tells it, "Calm," and clanks over to Nick speculatively, still holding her swordstaff.

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"This is my environment suit, it protects me from things. I'm not taking it off until I'm very sure I'm safe. Look, I'm from another world, assume I was raised by a hermit who lived in a cave or something when you try to explain things to me please. It'll save some time."

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"Very well: I am a paladin, my job is to kill dark things, and in that suit you look more like some kind of undiscovered dark thing than a human, and if you want to prove that you aren't a dark thing you will need to either resemble a human more or touch bare skin to my Winter Light talisman." She gestures at a pendant around her neck imprinted with a symbol.

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He depolarizes the visor, giving her a view of his face. "Does this help? Is your talisman going to do anything to me if I am in fact a human? And what defines a dark thing?"

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"The talisman does nothing to humans, but burns dark things. Dark things are evil entities of various sorts that oppose the Light and work misery. And yes, that helps, but you might still be possessed by a dark thing."

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He suppresses a sarcastic quip about fantasy games. Armasail can probably stand up to a sword, but then again she seems to have magic, which throws all the rules out the window. Better to be dead serious for now.


"...My sensors say there's nothing poisonous in the air. Alright. It'll take a minute to get a glove off." He works at the glove, and presents his hand when it's off.
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She touches the pendant to his hand. When he doesn't burn, she nods and puts it back over her head. "Well, you're definitely not a dark thing, and probably a human." She sighs, and then puts her hand over a bloody patch of her hair and says, "Winter Light, by your grace and to better follow you, I beseech your power grant me healing for this wound sustained in your service." There is a blue-white glow under hand; she repeats herself with a hand on her knee and then attends to her mount's injuries the same way.

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Yup. Magic.

"Do you think a phaser would be effective against dark things? It's a ranged weapon that basically pours large amounts of energy into whatever it hits. It could explode a tree."
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"It might be able to explode some dark things, then."

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"Yes, but... Okay. Okay. You said dark possession is a thing. How do I stop that from happening to me?"

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"You don't go near the sorts of dark things that possess people. Or you could keep the pendant, if you like, since you won't know how to be careful; I can get another."

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"You and your griffin are the one party out of two I've encountered so far that has not immediately tried to kill me, so I'm inclined to trust you more than I'd normally trust magic. I'd appreciate the gift. Does the pendant do anything magical besides repel dark things?"

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"Not outside a paladin's hands."

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"Do I need to be touching it or will it still help protect me if it's in a pocket?"

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"It will help more if you are wearing or touching it, but it is not useless in a pocket."

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"Right, so I'll put it on whenever I calm down enough to decide it's safe to take off my helmet." He takes the pendant and puts it in a pocket. "Which leaves the question of where I go now. Can I get directions to the nearest city?"

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"Leagues away. Ragnar can carry us both to the Order of the Winter Light's compound, and from there Andivar isn't far."

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"You sure? The suit's pretty heavy. And I don't traditionally get along with nonhunman nonplant life."

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"I can leave you here if you prefer, but you would have to walk for many miles to get to a village, let alone a city. Unless you're about twice as strong as a paladin, the fact that you can bear that load means that Ragnar can bear me, you, and it in the air for as long as it will take to get to the compound."

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"Oh, it bears itself, mostly. That's a trick with motors and electricity. I doubt it's much heavier than your plate, though, so I'll take your offer and thank you for it."

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So onto the griffin they get. Kaja helps him on - she's really strong - and then the griffin takes off.

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He holds on as tightly as he thinks he can do so without upsetting the griffin. It's kind of unnerving to be using a vehicle one does not directly control.

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The paladin doesn't seem to be controlling him particularly closely either.

"I'm Kaja di Ragnar. You?"
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"I'm nervous. Uh, Nicholas."

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"Are you okay? Height-sick?"

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"Not height-sick, I'm just used to flying my ship instead of being flown. It's a bit unnerving to think that I can't stop us from falling, even if your griffin is unlikely to fall."

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"He won't fall, and if you fall from him I'll catch you."

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"I wouldn't have gotten on if I thought he'd drop me, but I'm still nervous. It's hard to turn fear off. I'll be fine, this still definitely beats walking through unknown wilderness for weeks."

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"Yes, probably. Do you know how you got here?"

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"I was attacked by some sort of beast. A giant snake with a mirror for a head, or, instead of a head. It snuck past my perimeter sensors somehow, and when it 'ate' me, I was suddenly in a different world. That's when I fell in front of you and that skeleton-thing. As for how it gave me an jump to a new universe without hyperium and a singularity generator, I have no idea."

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"He was a lich. The snake thing... I have no explanation."

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"Me neither. My tentative plan is to build a new ship and go home, but it doesn't seem like you have the kind of technology I'm used to here. It'll be an uphill battle at best."

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"I'm not sure what you're looking for..."

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"Does 'computer' ring a bell'? How about 'electricity'? I'm assuming no, since swords are outdated weapons where I come from."

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"...Lightning? Sorry, the Winter Light's gift of understanding doesn't tell me everything there is to know about the words you're using. Swords hold blessings better than most things, but maybe that's not a factor where you're from."

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"Blessings are not a factor where I come from. We don't have dark things, or magic, or gods. We have to do everything by being clever with... Clockwork I suppose, and electricity, which could be summarized as chained lightning, and engines, which produce mechanical force, and computers that do lots and lots of math very very fast and this turns out to be useful for more than just accounting."

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"...That sounds interesting. It must be nice without any dark things, at least."

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"Yes, you can wander through the wilderness only fearing for wolves and bears instead of walking skeletons and so on. I don't think you really notice the lack of dark things until you visit a place that does have them. At any rate, would you like me to possibly make some useful devices?"

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"Maybe; what would you be making?"

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"It largely depends on what materials are available. Starting from the simplest and moving to the most difficult or complex: Mechanical engines that can move things and would power some other devices, water pumps and filters, a telegraph system that will allow fast communication between two buildings set up for it, light without fire via electricity, ice-making cold-making and heating machines, composite alloy/ceramic armor that is lighter and stronger than steel (though I have no idea how it'd interact with blessings), more sophisticated communication devices that can be moved around and will do voices properly instead of just simple codes, weapons of various sorts, computers which will take an entire explanation all on their own, robots which are non-alive mechanical servants that use computers and electricity to run."

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"...I'm sure you could find people who would want all of those things. Paladins in particular could use communication setups so we could show up where dark things were quicker, and maybe the armor. We can already do light; it's a prayer like the healing one."

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"I can take a section of the ceramic plating in this thing out and have someone see if it would be better than steel plate. Long-range communication is on the tricky side of things, if your society doesn't use electricity yet. I'll definitely look into it."

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"...The obvious way to test your armor is to hit it with a sword as hard as we can, so if you give us some to test you might not get it back."

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"That's acceptable. If it's just cut into pieces and not completely obliterated, I can fix it."

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"You said ceramic so I'm imagining it shattering, but maybe it's not prone to that?"

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"It's a special ceramic, and it's a ceramic composite. Ceramic is only some of the layers in it, which include carbon nanotubes, kinetic-reactance fluids, and titanium-steel alloys. And my joiner will mend a crack in just about anything."

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"...Okay. Huh, that could be really handy. The joiner."

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"If you're thinking surgery, let me warn you that it's not meant for use on living things. Its power source will run out eventually, and I can't make more without infrastructure. But if you think it'll be useful, I can try to rig a way to recharge it. And join things."

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"I was thinking busted staffs and armor and walls, actually. I have very basic field medic training but usually the idea is to get the dark things destroyed before they've hurt anyone."

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"Staffs and armor it could definitely do. Walls are big, it might be better to try something else instead of using the joiner's limited power on them. I also have a bevy of sensors and scanners. I'm trying to teach them how to detect dark things with the example of that lich as a dark thing, but I don't think it's working."

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"Well, liches aren't very common. It would be more useful if you could detect woke shadows, which can be very hard to find."

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"Please describe woke shadows."

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"They're made with a specific kind of candle, and whoever made them sends them after their enemies. They seldom directly kill people - they cause nightmares, intolerable ones that can sometimes cause literal death from fear, and they whisper to people, which in conjunction with the nightmares and/or sleep deprivation causes people to act very out of character."

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"...That's intensely creepy. What form do they take, though?"

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"They're shadows. They're insubstantial and can fold up in very small spaces. I have a probe in the shape of a Winter Light sigil to check people's ears for them."

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"I'm not sure how shadows are supposed to map to physical properties. I think I'd need to see one to learn how to find them."

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"That might be a little difficult, but maybe the next time we're out on a specific report or suspicion of woke shadows we could bring you along."

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"Are they impossible to control? At all difficult to destroy? What I'm getting at is, would you be offended at the idea of summoning exactly one long enough for me to get a good look at it before killing the thing?"

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"Possession of those candles is illegal, waking shadows is illegal, and I don't recommend talking like that around the other paladins."

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"I figured as much." Silent staring-at-landscape time.

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And eventually here is a campus of paladin-related buildings with walls around it, near a small city. Kaja lands.

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And Nick clambers off. "What kind of things does one do for a living around here?"

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"In the compound? One is a paladin or a novice or a retired paladin. Elsewhere? Farmers and shoemakers and moneylenders and stonemasons and carpenters and innkeepers and such things."

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"Which leaves me wondering how I will afford food and raw materials and such. None of the devices I described to you can be built from nothingness."

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"Well, there are the moneylenders I mentioned."

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"But the question is, will they trust someone with strange devices promising unheard-of benefits enough to deem it worth the risk of me taking their silver and never being seen again? I suppose there's only one way to find out."

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"You can show them the devices you do have," she points out.

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"I think I will go find a moneylender, then." His computer can absorb enough of the language to be going with, in an hour of wandering around. "Thanks again for the ride."

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"...You don't speak Cirth, do you?"

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"Not yet. My computer will pick it up well enough in a few hours, I suspect."

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"...Computers can do that?"

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"Yes. It's not perfect, though. And I'm missing three-quarters of the gear I would have for learning a new language under ideal circumstances. And it won't give me the language, not yet, it'll just be a sort of translator."

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"Huh. Still, more efficient than having even a retired paladin follow you around."

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"Automation is excellent. I should probably learn at least a little Cirth before wandering around the city. Is there somewhere I can get a meal around here?"

He takes off his helmet, and puts on the sigil-necklace.
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"If you'll come talk to the Bright Sister I will be able to offer you the use of the campus cafeteria for the time being, at a minimum."

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"It seems polite to explain myself to her, to the extent that I can, since you've just ferried me into her compound."

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"I'll get my armor off first and see to Ragnar if you don't mind waiting."

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"Not at all."

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Off she goes. He gets looks from paladins milling around but they're pretty satisfied by the sigil he's wearing.

Kaja comes back forty-five minutes later, looking much smaller without her armor. "Bright Sister is this way."
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Nick has been standing in a corner, doing computer things. He follows. "Any rules I should know?"

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"Be polite, call her Sister - that should cover it, more or less."

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He nods. "Let's go, then."

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Kaja leads him to an office, where they wait outside for a bit and are then admitted to see an elderly lady whose surcoat, like Kaja's, bears the sigil of the Winter Light.

"Sister, this is Nicholas. He appeared inexplicably near me a moment before I destroyed the lich."

The sister looks at Nicholas. "Appeared? From where?"
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"I am from another world, Sister. I was attacked by some sort of monster, a giant snake with a mirror for a head. When it 'ate' me, I suddenly fell directly between Kaja and a lich she was fighting. After that was resolved, I introduced myself, touched her sigil to show that I am human, and she offered to carry me here. I thank the Order of Winter's Light for its kindness, and I hope to find my way home, but it will be difficult to reconstruct the technology that allows me to cross between worlds here."

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"Hm. Well, Kaja, you may exercise your discretion in looking after him for the time being," says the Bright Sister.

"Yes, Sister."

"If you need to accompany him out of the compound or move your patrol or point-taking talk to Ebbe about your schedule."

"Yes, sister."

"Dismissed."

Kaja bows, and leads Nicholas out of the office.
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After being led out, he says, "I'll want to tell her about the communicating devices, once I'm sure I can make them."

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"It'll be helpful. People send us messages when they think a mage may be turning to dark practices or if they think someone they know is plagued by a woke shadow or if they notice an imp active somewhere or see zombies coming. But it's not as fast as we would like."

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"So about that food. If it's a cafeteria, I assume there will be other people chatting in Cirth, my computer can get a head start."

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"It's between main mealtimes now, but yes, there will probably be some people getting porridge for an afternoon snack. I can speak Cirth to you as well, for that matter, if I ignore the words the Winter Light supplies me in your language."

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"You should start speaking in Cirth, yes. Within half an hour I will understand a sufficient amount of it."

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She gestures for him to follow and chatters in Cirth. "I don't understand how a machine could possibly do what the Winter Light's gifts do, or even a facsimile, but I can't think of a reason for you to make it up..." The cafeteria is serving porridge and bread; there are cooking smells for forthcoming dinnertime coming from the kitchen, but none of that food is out yet. "Help yourself to as much of this as you'd like." She herself takes a roll. There are some younger paladins (who call Kaja "Sister") and some older ones who are also eating the supplied food rather than wait for a real meal.

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He takes porridge and a roll as well. "It will help if you name things, like," he points at a bowl, "bowl."

After that he listens and watches and eats silently for a while.
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Kaja helpfully identifies objects in the room - bowls, tables, benches, novices, initiates, bread.

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Nick repeats the names and composes simple sentences with them. But a demonstration of proper Cirth grammar from him will be a while yet.

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When she's run out of things to name she goes back to talking idly about things like places in town he might find a moneylender, the local currency, where he might find a mage to send him home if that's a thing mages can do (she doesn't know), possible applications for his joiner, another language spoken by a local minority that he might want to add to his computer if he can do that but she can't speak it right now because the paladin language thing only works with a target...

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After another bowl of porridge, he says in Cirth, "I know some Cirth now. It is good enough. I will go find a moneylender and show him my devices."

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"Do you want me to go with you?"

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"I don't think it will be very interesting. But if you want to, yes."

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"If you don't need me I'll stay here, but if you do need help I have permission to go with you."

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"It would be bad to misunderstand something important. I'd like you to come with, then."

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"All right. I'll talk to Ebbe and we'll find you a moneylender."

She goes and finds someone who is apparently named Ebbe, talks to him, and then heads out into town with Nick.
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Nick's computer listens carefully to all the conversation around him, absorbing more Cirth. Nick himself mostly seems... Unimpressed.

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"If you can't get enough lent to find a place to sleep tonight I can ask about letting you stay in the compound."

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"If I can't get lent enough to rent a room at an inn, I won't have enough to craft anything useful. I might ask to be paid to repair broken staffs and armor with the joiner."

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"We don't have a lot of those around, but it would get you some coin at least."

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"And presumably non-paladins have broken things. For that matter, my threader can make rope from wild grass. Rope is a thing that people sometimes need, yes?"

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"Yes. Rope from grass would definitely be useful if it were any good."

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"It usually turns out slightly green and shiny, but is not necessarily weak... What's rope made of, normally? Hemp and tar? For that matter I can probably make polyester, which makes for durable and comfortable garments if you blend-weave it with cotton. Of course, rope and garments will be my industry only if I don't get a loan sufficient to make other things."

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"I am not actually sure how rope is usually made. But you could probably make a decent living and set some aside with the rope and the polyester."

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"Or medicine! Can the winter's light heal people who aren't paladins? Do paladins get sick? Do you have access to antibiotics and antivirals?"

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"Paladins can only heal ourselves and our mounts, but we don't get sick. I'm not sure what those things are. ...And it's 'Winter Light', you've made that mistake twice now."

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"Winter light. Got it. And you're Kaja?" He lapses into his original language. "I'm a bit terrible with names if I'm not actively reminding myself of them, apologies. So, medicine is not my specialty, but most diseases are caused by tiny creatures called bacteria or viruses. Or sometimes protists or fungi or parasites that are technically animals."

"At any rate, most of them are as small compared to a gnat as a gnat is to a griffon, maybe smaller. These things like to live inside humans because we're nice and warm and moist. The human body fights the ones that would do us harm if allowed to multiply. Sometimes, it stops winning, and that's when people get sick. Antibiotics and antivirals help the body fight the things. All of this is a vast oversimplification, of course."
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"I see. And yes, you have my name right."

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"...Where's this moneylender, anyway? We've been walking for a while."
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"Another block, if I recall right."

And after another block there is a sign for a moneylender. In they go.

"What the blazes are you wearing?" asks a lady who is presumably the moneylender. The question is aimed at Nick, still tromping around in most of his suit.
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Back to Cirth. "It's foreign armor. I arrived here suddenly and cannot return home, but I know various crafts and I would like a little loan to get them started."

He proceeds to briefly describe a few of his ideas- polyester, mechanical water pump, non-candle light, cold-making machines. "I can provide a demonstration with the tools I have on me, if you would like."
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"Let's see it," agrees the moneylender.

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He pulls out a flashlight and turns it on, then hands it over.

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She looks at it, lights up various objects in her dim little shop, says, "You can make more of these?"

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"Not immediately. I'm cut off from most of my tools. And they need some infrastructure, that one is using stored energy that will last a few days at best. I'm not familiar with the markets here, but I would guess that a month's wage's worth of materials and a week or so of effort would be enough for me to start making more."

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"Have you got any business sense or are you one of those head-in-the-clouds inventor types?"

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"Er, sorry, I'm still learning Cirth. I'm not sure what you're asking."

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Kaja repeats the question, voice overlaid.

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"Thank you, Kaja. I think I know business well enough. I was a trader of sorts before I ended up here by mistake."

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"At this point you are only affecting your interest rate, not whether you get money at all," says the moneylender, "so take the high rate if you prefer, but would you tell me about your trading?"

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"I owned a ship, and I traveled between places exchanging commodities along the way. I didn't settle into one particular route because the ship was specially designed for long range and low maintenance. Most often I would carry things like furs, food, lumber, other raw materials. Many businesses in my homeland are very particular about the way they distribute finished goods, so I didn't even bother with those most of the time."

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"Particular?"

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"I'm not quite sure why, but few places are willing to sell or buy finished goods in any kind of bulk outside of a long-term contract. It'd be too much hassle to be a travelling supermarket, keeping track of every little thing and where I bought it and what it does, so I just stick to commodities and tinkering."

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"Are you going to operate your own storefront or sell through third parties here?"

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"Ideally the latter, so I have more time to focus on actually making the things. And other devices, many of which you would find equally useful. I would like to point out that the application I'm thinking of is installing fixed lights in a building, not necessarily making more portable lights. That's going to be easier to scale up because I don't think lithium is for sale around here, and lithium is a critical component of any reasonably efficient power-storage device."

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"I can't understand your jargon," says the moneylender.

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"It's much easier and cheaper to put lights in roofs and walls and run wires to them, than to make more that can be carried around. I predict that most of my business will be installing them in buildings and powering and maintaining them after that."

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"I assume the sister isn't going to follow you around helping you with your Cirth forever; are you going to hire help?"

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"Another device that would take a while to explain is teaching me Cirth. Within a few days I will be reasonably fluent."

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"The question stands."

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"I'll hire help if and when I find that I need it."

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"But you don't currently plan to?"

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"I do expect to hire help eventually, but not for a couple of weeks when I have some finished products to present to people. Sorry, I'm not trying to dance around the question, I'm trying to be clear and failing at it."

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"Hmmm." The moneylender steeples her fingers. "How much did you say you wanted?"

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"Two months' wage to produce a proof-of-concept. If you're impressed with the viability of that, perhaps four times more again to fund an initial spurt of production and sales. You know people are going to want this, candles are terrible compared to what I can produce. And once electric light takes off, I can make machines that produce ice whenever you want, powered by the same source. And half a dozen other things besides."

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"Whose wage, though?"

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"A dockworker's or farmer's or some other low-skill thing. I literally arrived here this morning, Kaja rescued me from a lich, I don't even know what the currency is called but I know I can make it work."

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"All right. I'll give you fifteen gold - in mostly silver so people will make change - at fifteen percent annually to be collected in six months unless you can repay sooner. Or, I'll give you thirty at twelve, if you hire my grandson, who I know will not steal from you and who can make sure you don't do anything obviously stupid."

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"I'm thinking the latter, if he won't want a ridiculous excessive wage. I'll need some copper to use as raw material, if you use copper. And how will the twelve percent annually be compounded? For that matter, this country uses twelve months in a year, correct? Some places don't."

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"Twelve months in a year, yes," blinks the moneychanger, "I can give you some of the money in copper -" And then she goes over the compounding math with him.

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Nick is either very good at math, or using a device.

"Sounds good. Where is the contract?"
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"I'll fill one in... I'm satisfied with the paladin's witness if you are."

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"Yes, same here."

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So they sign things and Kaja watches them sign things and the moneylender gives him a sack of coins and her grandson's address.

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He asks Kaja, "Are you terribly bored? Ideally I could talk to her grandson with you to translate if I run into difficulty, but if you need to return to your compound I will make do."

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"I don't need to be back until around suppertime, if you still need me, but you didn't seem to require much translation."

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"I think I'll be alright. I might mess up idioms and turns-of-phrase, but I have the basics. Thank you for your help."

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"You're welcome."

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"Oh, I almost forgot, you were going to test a piece of my armor! Let's do that before I forget again."

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"Sure. And you probably want to get... something... else... to wear."

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...He buys a set of cheap generic clothes- pants, shirt, decent quality boots- for as few coppers as he can get them. These get folded up under one arm.

Then he follows Kaja back to the paladin compound, removing some sections of plate from underneath the outer layers of the suit along the way.
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And Kaja fetches her swordstaff, and awaits a piece of armor.

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"I'm not sure I want to be holding it when you try this, you're likely to knock me over. I'll prop it against a wall?"

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"On the ground. We like our walls."

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He sets a forearm-guard, a shoulderpad, and a breastplate on the ground.

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Kaja fetches her swordstaff, stands at a reasonable distance from the objects, and brings the weapon over her head and down onto the breastplate with an earsplitting clong.

There's a dent, but it doesn't break.

"Nice stuff," she says.
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He fetches the armor. "It's resistant to fire, by the way, in that it won't let heat pass through it as easily as steel. I can make more, with a few days' warning and some coin for the materials. Would the Bright Sister be interested?"

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"Let me see how it takes a blessing," says Kaja, "before I spend her time on finding out." She picks up the armguard. "If you don't mind?"

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"I don't mind."

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So Kaja holds the armguard between her hands. "Winter Light, to safeguard your agents from violence and to better serve you, I ask that you grant some small part of your strength to this armor, to protect whichever of our sisters and brothers in your service may have cause to wear it. In your name let it be blessed."

The armor glows a little bit.

"Not as good as fresh steel," she says. "But that might be entirely because you've worn it and you're not a paladin. It'll break if you wear it again, incidentally. And it wasn't bad, and it does start stronger than steel. I bet Bright Sister would like to put paladins in suits of this."
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"...I hadn't expected it to become unusable to me. I wish you'd warned me. Well, in a few days I can replace it and have you bless a fresh piece and see if it turns out better. I still expect to make communication devices for the Order, which will take longer than armor, and I would like to know which to try for first."

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"No, the blessing will break, the material will be fine."

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"Oh. Shall I loiter and begin repairing it while you inform the Bright Sister of this and ask for her judgment on communication devices and armor?"

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"Yes. I'll be right back."

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So he loiters and applies tools to his armor. It'll never be quite as strong again because the inner layers will be ruptured, but once it's at least in the correct shape he re-inserts it into the suit.

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Kaja comes back. "Sister wants the communication things first."

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"Then I will make communication things first. The easiest communication things involve running wires to the places you want to communicate with, but I'll just skip straight to wireless kinds. Expect it to take at least two weeks, and there will be chores to keep them working."

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"What kind of chores?"

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"Changing drained batteries for fresh ones, keeping a fire under a generator that produces the electricity they need and stores it in batteries, managing the way they are linked together if you add more."

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"That doesn't sound so bad."

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"I can go over it in more detail when I actually have some communication things to present. For now, I'd better get to work. Have a nice couple of weeks!"

And he goes and finds that moneylender's grandson and explains the 'hiring him' condition on the loan, hires him, and sees about getting raw materials and a workspace.

Four days later he has a miniature generator on wheels that will take heat from a woodstove under it, and a long string of electric lights. He rents a wagon and drapes it in brilliant light and drives it around the city to advertise this new product.
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The electric light is a curiosity indeed. People keep coming to look at it.

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When he has a decent crowd he launches into a sales pitch about oh how much brighter these are than candles, and they don't make smoke, and you don't need to change them every few hours, all you need to do to light an entire mansion is keep a fire going, who would like to have them installed in their building?

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People want to know how much this would cost.

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The lights cost three copper each, installing the wires will cost about two copper per light. The generator costs eight silver, but several people who are neighbors can share it.

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This prices out a lot of people. He gets one immediate order from someone who runs a theater, though.

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So he makes plans with the theater-owner, hires some extra help for the next day he's free, and spends it installing lights all over his theater wherever directed and explaining how to work the generator and use the switches he installs. The generator is designed to be easy. Light the fire under it, give it a good shove, and off it goes.

While he starts working on radios, he investigates buying an empty lot and building a large plant from which he can distribute power to homes without having to sell them all a generator. Are there any inconvenient laws or bureaucracy that threaten to interfere with this project?
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The city has walls around it and is a little cramped, so an actually empty lot is hard to find, but if he's willing to settle for "unoccupied" he can get one within his means in an undesirable part of town.

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Adventures in being a utility company, what fun. It should be profitable at least. He starts assembling a large generator and substation in the run-down property. Before that's done, though, he has radios ready for the paladins.

He has a wagon of gear including a generator to hauled their compound and tries to find Kaja.
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The gate guard is able to tell Nick that Kaja is in the temple.

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"Could you please have her or the Bright Sister informed that the communication devices I promised them are ready?"

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"It'd be easier for you to go in and tell them yourself, I'm not supposed to leave my post."

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"I was not sure I would be allowed entry. Thank you."

He goes in and asks an initiate where the temple is and whether it would be rude to enter, as he wants to speak to Kaja.
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The initiate says he probably shouldn't go in the temple if he's not even planning on becoming a paladin.

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Wait, or bother the Bright Sister?

He elects to wait outside the temple, even if it's a while before Kaja is finished. Best to be polite to those with the attention of gods, and magic.
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Kaja comes out with some other paladins in about half an hour. "Hello, Nicholas. What brings you here?"

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"Your communication devices are ready. You can call me Nick, by the way. To make them work best I will need to place equipment somewhere high up in the compound, and the generator that will power your batteries requires a fire so it should ideally be shielded from the rain but in a place that is in no danger of catching fire. I can also install candle-less lights, if the Bright Sister wishes."

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"The lights would be most useful in the kitchen, probably, and perhaps an empty stall for the generator, the stable being made of stone and needing to be kept warm anyway? Unless it would disturb the griffins and winged horses. The tallest point of the compound is the temple spire but I don't think you should put things on it; perhaps the top of the novices' dormitory."

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"The generator makes some noise, but I am not familiar enough with animals to guess if they will be disturbed by it. The novices' dormitories would be sufficiently high. I'd like to explain the radios to you and the Bright Sister before installing these things."

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"How much noise? And we can go wait for her to have a moment if you need to speak to her anyway."

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"I can wait, yes. Not too much more noise than a crackling fire. My large-scale generators in town will be quite loud, though."

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To the Bright Sister's office they go. "That might or might not bother our companions but it's probably difficult to move, isn't it?"

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"Once installed it will be fairly difficult to move, yes. Perhaps another place."

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"Maybe the armory. It doesn't matter if the armory is loud."

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"Speaking of the armory, is there anything that could use joining while I am already here?"

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"I checked; someone did break a staff recently but the sword was fine and it's already been attached to a new staff. You could still fix it for next time someone needs one, though."

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"I don't plan to be here too often, alas, and I only have the one joiner. I'm working on improving the city. Once I'm selling everyone electric light I can move on to clean water, medicine perhaps. I still want to leave eventually but hopefully I can leave behind enough education to spread useful things around the world."

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"That sounds nice."

Here is the office. They sit down to wait.
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Nick looks distracted. Waiting is only really boring if you don't have a database of movies in your eyelid.

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Kaja just sits patiently.

Eventually the door opens and in they go. Kaja relates the plans. The Bright Sister thinks the best place for the generator will be in a specific dormitory, which Kaja says she will show Nick, but otherwise has no modifications to suggest to the plan.
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Nick would like to demonstrate the radios first. He offers a hand-sized device to the Bright Sister. After a quick explanation of how they are controlled by pressing some little buttons, he speaks into the one he is holding and his voice comes through clearly and obviously from the other one.

Then, it's off to the dormitory with some equipment.
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Kaja goes along to make it clear that he is authorized and show him where things are.

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The work will take a while, and a paladin's strength would be a handy shortcut. Not that Nick is particularly weak for a non-paladin.

Batteries are furnished and explained. A dozen radios are produced. "If you want any more I'll need two silver apiece for them, the materials are expensive. The radios will operate properly anywhere within 400 miles of the compound, or within 50 miles of each other elsewise. I make no guarantees for greater distances."
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"Do they need maintenance besides the batteries?"

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"No, but eventually they will break and I will need to fix them. I give them at least three years as long as you don't treat them too roughly. It would be a while teaching someone to repair radios themselves."

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"All right. Thank you very much."

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"You're welcome."

So Nick goes back to being a utility company. He builds a crude printing press while continuing to work on the big generator and investigates which books would profit best from being printed in this way. And he starts advertising that he'll take apprenticies who want to learn the ways of chained lightning.
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The most popular books around here seem to be Precepts of the Winter Light, an almanac, an epic poem called The Morning Sword, and the collected plays of a playwright from the capital city of this country.

There are a few enterprising young underemployed persons who'd like to check out his offer.
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The enterprising young unemployed people get interviewed. He looks for two people who are literate and decent at arithmetic, or who at least seem clever if they aren't.

And he asks around, tries to find out if anyone owns the almanac or the Morning Sword. He knows where to ask about the Precepts of the Winter Light. He makes his way back to the paladins' compound once again and seeks out Kaja.
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Only one of his applicants (besides the moneylender's grandson) is both literate and capable of arithmetic, and seems to have been fired from her previous job due to being an obnoxious person. She does, however, own The Morning Sword and is willing to lend it conditional on being employed. Another applicant knows where to get an almanac and makes no such condition of its loan.

Kaja can be found in the cafeteria at this time. "What is it?"
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"I made a machine that can produce many copies of a book much more quickly than writing it out by hand. I would like permission from the Bright Sister to make many copies of the Precepts of the Winter Light in this way. I would sell them for two or three copper each, barely more than the cost of paper and ink."

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"...I think you're confused about how our religious hierarchy works. You don't need anyone's permission to do that as long as you don't change anything in the Precepts."

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"Then I will stop bothering you. In my world copying books is incredibly easy, easier than a printing press, even. So intellectual property- er, ownership of ideas, is taken very seriously. I thought it best to ask."

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"We don't own the Winter Light's ideas. We just follow them."

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"I'll be sure not to change the precepts, then. How are the radios treating you?"

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"We've given them out to the mayors of towns too far to easily send runners. So far all we've gotten is two false alarms and a lone zombie, but it's still better to know about those sooner than later."

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"Indeed. Fare well."

Back to town. He can put up with obnoxiousness. He'll pay the obnoxious person the same as the moneylender's grandson and teach her things alongside actual work, with the warning that if she is careless or steals anything she is out.
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She is not careless and doesn't steal anything, she just keeps winding up in interpersonal conflicts with the other employees.

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...After a while of this, Nick starts giving her jobs that don't involve much cooperation.

The printing press is completed, and hardback copies of the Precepts of the Winter Light, that almanac, and the Morning Sword are sold at three copper each.
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And some of them are purchased, although mediocre literacy rates and low levels of liquid capital mean it's not all that many that fast.

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Modernizing a country is harder than he thought. But that's alright, the printing press can go in a corner for now.

He hires more people. The best of his old hires get raises and assigned to teach the new ones things, including literacy. The big generator comes online and he starts selling candleless lights more cheaply, with access to the generator being a mere two copper per month. Radios and music-recording and music-playing machines are sold. Vats of polyester are brewed and spun with cotton into a comfy blended fabric that he tries to sell to tailors. He has a team of five scout and map the surrounding wilderness with a crude-by-his-standards scanner, looking for metal deposits.
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The theater person who took the first batch of electric lights takes a music-recorder and starts selling recordings. Someone else buys a recorder and some recordings and sells recordings of the recordings, which annoys the theater owner so grievously that they have to take it to arbitration. Arbitration rules that no punishment will be leveled against the music pirate. The theater owner responds by declining to sell further recordings and simply holds "listens" of recorded shows at a discounted rate relative to live performance.

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Nick does not get involved in this dispute.

And his six month loan term is coming due soon, so he'd better stop spending capital on things. When the metal scouts fail to find any particularly good deposits for two weeks he recalls them and stops expanding his staff and just sells the things he already has.
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Polyester is pretty cheap and becomes popular among the poor, and among those so rich that they can accentuate it with obviously expensive things and not risk being mistaken for poor people. People of reasonable means and uncertain status mostly steer clear. Lights become increasingly popular, although a lot of people conservatively just put one light in one room of their house. Radios are distributed (less rapidly than paladins on flying creatures could ferry them around) and used to communicate between towns; this winds up serving partly as a replacement for their ineffectual postal system and partly as early storm warning. The theater person starts playing the first halves of recorded plays and songs over the radio; people who want to hear the rest have to attend a listen.

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Two days before the official repayment date of his loan, he goes to talk to the moneylender. Of the 32 gold and a bit he owes after interest, he has 29 ready. He reports that his businesses are steadily profiting, and asks for a few days' extension on the repayment of the other 3 gold.

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She'll give him a few days, although not without squinting at him.

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"I will have your gold." He hands over 29 gold now, at any rate.

He runs his stocks of materials low and gives some of his staff a few days off over their objections to make up the last three gold, and adds a silver to the moneylender's payment for her trouble.

When he's back in money he sends the metal-scouts out again, hoping to find a nice vein of titanium, iron, or at least coal.
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Out they go. One of them finds some coal in the mountains after enough tromping around in the cold.

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The cold-trompers get a break and are replaced with two other teams travelling further and further away. Coal is good, but he needs iron as well to really get going on the kind of industry that will eventually lead to spaceships.

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He could just buy some iron the next time traders come through - there's a lull between the times when it might snow and when it already has, when it's impractical to use sledges and when it risks getting you caught in a snowdrift if you use carts, but it'll snow soon. He could even radio someone far away about his demand for iron. (This is pointed out by his obnoxious staffperson.)

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He explains that the amount he can buy from traders is not enough for what he has in mind. He needs a proper mine, or at least a long-term deal with someone who has one.

But it's still a good suggestion, so he starts asking around via radio for someone with lots of iron to sell.
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Someone promises a cartload when the snow's on the ground, sooner if he wants to pay enough to cover possible lost days due to early snow.

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That's not nearly enough. But he'll take it anyway. The metal-scouts are just going to have to keep scouting for metal, hopefully he'll find some in the ground eventually. He goes about claiming or buying the land where the coal vein is.

Sometime between then and the first snow, one of his electricity customers electrocutes herself after cutting through the wires' insulation. Nick defends himself to law enforcement and arbitrators, talking about his warnings not to mess with the wires.

But that night he has terrible nightmares. Fires caused by electrical faults, explosions in the power plant, one of his employees screaming, his arm mangled under the bloody letters of the printing press...

The next night it's more of the same. Armies using the locomotives he was planning on building, nuclear technology in the hands of some unstable king. After that are dreams of being trapped forever, growing old and decrepit and dying of some sort of preventable cancer at the young age of 70. Dreams of his parents, laughing at how he fled from home but ended up stuck in one place anyway how pathetic.

Doxepine doesn't help. He's in a very, very bad mood by the end of the week.
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His staff find some iron! Isn't that nice? It's a long way away and a bit tricky to get at but it's plenty.

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Horray. Now he can start drafting plans for a steel mill. He'll need another loan.

Why won't these damn nightmares stop?! He's done nothing wrong, he's been careful, he's improving these people's lives by all accounts. Ugh.

He stops supervising his staff so closely and no longer comes out with new products. He runs out of doxepine. The nightmares stop, but the depressed, paranoid, angry voices in his head don't. He snaps at people who try to talk to him. He grumbles and delays when someone reports a problem with their devices or lights.
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The staff pick up the slack as best they can.

(It's only a matter of time before a little kid wants to see what's inside the wires -)

Obnoxious employee starts compiling radio news and printing it up for people who don't have their own radios.

(He's never going home, he's stuck with these ignorant primitives until his untimely death -)

The cartload of iron he ordered shows up.

(He might not even last to seventy, he could catch something from these filthy uneducated people at any moment and die, alone, while he slaughters a few million of the locals by electrical proxy -)
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He locks himself in his room for most of a week and watches movies from his cranial computer it'll break eventually, there aren't any proper surgeons here you'll never fix it, sliding coins under the door when his employees complain they haven't been paid. When he does come out, he kicks the business back into more or less the proper shape and makes slow, slow progress on coal-to-oil conversion and combustion engines the greedy primitives will just use them as war machines.

It's only when he happens to hear of a zombie attack on a neighboring village when he remembers that dark things exist. And one of the dark things that exist are woke shadows.

He scans himself with every still-operational sensor he owns.
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Nothing out of the ordinary.

He's just cracking up, that's all, his own mind is turning against him and if the medicine here is ridiculous the standard of psychiatric care is worse, he's just going to go steadily more insane until he hurts someone directly enough that they lock him away, and then every harmless thing he's tried to do will be dismissed as a madman's toys but that won't stop people from keeping things they can use to kill each other, no, practicality is always the ultimate concern there -
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He tries to shove the Winter Light talisman in his ear. This fails to work. Proof. That's what he needs. Objective proof from the people who deal with this kind of shit for a living.

He forces himself to be angry at whoever did this to him, not himself, not the rest of the world. He storms up to the paladins' compound and asks the gate guard how they check someone for woke shadows.
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"...Do you think you have woke shadows?" asks the guard. "Or someone else?"

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"Me. I can barely sleep. I keep thinking people are going to kill each other with my inventions. I feel like I'm going to catch some horrible disease and go blind and lose my hands and die. I tried to find them myself, but no, nothing, nothing. Your job is dealing with this. So, check somehow!"

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The paladin's response to this is to tackle Nick and start tying him up.

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They're trying to kill you! He struggles. Nick's strong, but not stronger than a paladin. He pulls his phaser- it's self-defense!- And throws it away as hard as he can force himself to do so.

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Once the paladin has him securely tied up he starts systematically patting Nick down with Winter Light sigils, not the pendant version but long slightly flexible wooden ones, one in each hand.

And when he pokes one into Nick's left ear there is a hissing scream, intolerably loud -

- and silence.
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He starts crying. "Oh, thank god, I'm not insane."

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The paladin does not untie him right away; he checks the other ear. "There might be some in your home. I'll find a novice to sit with you while I go check."

He finds a novice, who is a twelve-year-old girl who pats Nick's shoulder comfortingly and also doesn't untie him.
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He looks at his phaser. "Could you fetch that thing for me, put it back on my belt?"

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"What is it?"

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"It's a phaser. A weapon. If you don't want to give me my weapon back quite yet, at least make sure nobody else touches it?"

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The novice picks up the phaser carefully and puts it in her skirt pocket. "Once he's sure all the shadows after you are gone and you're feeling calm and collected we can untie you," she tells him.

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"They started the very same day that somebody ignored all my warnings and managed to electrocute themselves on their lights. I would almost think someone she knew sent them after me, but I'm no private investigator."

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"The paladins will do their best to find who woke the shadows."

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"Would you happen to know if my radios have been useful yet? Last time I asked they had only given false alarms."

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"A radio called a band of paladins over to fight a lich, just yesterday. They aren't back yet."

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Nick pulls up an engineering sim in his eyelid-screen and works on his plans for coal and iron mines, and a steel mill, until someone unties him.

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Eventually - it takes a few hours - the paladin who killed the shadow in his ears comes back and says his residence and business are clear and his employees haven't been having bad dreams. The paladin and novice untie him, since he's been pretty placid.

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He thanks them, receives his phaser, and goes on his way.


Three days later he drives a horseless carriage to the moneylender's place.

As soon as she's free, he reports, "I would like another loan, to produce those."
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She looks at it.

"How fast can it go?" she wants to know.
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"On good roads it can outpace a horse at full gallop for hours on end. On poor roads it will need to move more slowly. This is a prototype, I have discovered small flaws and opportunities for improvement, so the final version will be better."

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"How does it do with snow?"

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"About as well as horses: If you take it slowly and carefully, it'll do."

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"Deep snow?" she asks, looking at it skeptically. "You haven't seen winter here yet."

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"You're right, I haven't. If deep snow is such a concern I can build one with treads, perhaps. Such a thing would be more expensive, and slower, but capable of plowing through two or three feet of snow with ease, and deeper snow with slightly less ease."

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She nods, quotes him a lower interest rate and a longer period for payback.

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The problem here is that he'll need a lot more than 30 gold to get the mines and steel mill and coal-to-oil plant and assembly line up and running. He wants 400 gold in total, and has an itemized budget showing why such a large amount is necessary.

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She reads his budget.

She looks at the car.

She informs him that he will wish he'd never come to this world if he stiffs her, and lends him the money.
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"I wouldn't blame you for hunting me down if I stiffed you of this much money. I would do the same."



It takes months to get the coal and iron mines working. Winter comes and is as difficult as described so work stops. It takes half of spring to get steel mill operational. He uses the first few tons of it to build mining and industrial equipment and expand the operations. Come summer he has: Cars, mechanics, and a steady supply of fuel. Thanks to the production line a car is just slightly less expensive than a good horse, and faster, and cheaper to feed.

(He insists that anyone buying a car take driving lessons - included in the price of the car - for their own safety)
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People want cars! A considerable number of them, actually. The value is obvious. And they've had all winter to radio to other towns about them.

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He sells two kinds of car. A cheap one that pretty much just goes and steers and stops, and an expensive one for the more well-off folks, with heating and air conditioning, built-in radio, comfy seats, and so on.

The next vehicle he produces is a harvesting machine, which he demonstrates to great effect by bringing in a farmer's entire grain harvest in one day. He builds three and rents them out.

(He is set upon by woke shadows again by some jealous soul and troops up to the paladin compound after the first nightmare.)

By first snow he has a nice, treaded all-terrain vehicle. He sells them, and also fits some with snowplows and tries to get himself hired to clear all the roads so people can still use their cars.
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The people who find out that he sells cars that do heating are very interested. Can he make other enclosed spaces do heating? Could he make houses perform this miracle? Could they be warm in the wintertime?

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...Alright. Electric heaters and fiberglass insulation for everyone. He expands the coal-fired power plant to compensate. The moneylender gets her money back with interest by the end of this.


By next winter he has more mines, especially coal and iron mines, the beginnings of a nuclear reactor, trade deals with distant lands for exotic metals not found in good quantity nearby, and an electric train network between a few nearby cities.

At one point he produces the exotic armor he promised Kaja when he first arrived, and brings it up to their compound to see if it holds a blessing better when it's freshly-forged.
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Kaja blesses the entire suit of armor, piece by piece. It glows brightly, although she says it's not quite as bright as fresh steel; it still adds up to better protection. And who might this armor be sized for?

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"It's not sized for anyone in particular. They all interlock, see? Adjustable in something like a hundred places, enough that anyone about the right height can get it to fit properly."

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"About the right height meaning?"

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"Between five and six feet."

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"That will cover most of us, then, I think Anders is taller than that though."

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"I can make one custom and the rest standard. But... There is the issue of money. These are expensive to make and my feelings of charity to the Winter Light only go so far." He quotes a number. It's about three quarters as much as a good set of steel plate.

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"We can't replace everyone's armor at once like that - we are mostly funded by donations, and those mostly timed when people die and not at any steady pace - but I can speak to the person who handles our accounts and see how many we can order up front."

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"I'll leave this one for now. I'd like coin for it eventually, though."

He goes back to his newest pet project, a nuclear power plant. He is even more aggressive about safety and diligence and cleanliness among the employees that work on it. They put up with it, given how much he's paying them. It's been three years since he arrived, and a nuclear plant is perhaps step ten out of two hundred before building a jump drive.

Well, no sense dwelling on it. Back to work.
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The Order of the Winter Light want four more sets of armor and expect to be able to order an additional one per year, perhaps more, approximately indefinitely.

Nick's activities have made the city a more popular place to be and trade with. It's growing.
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He builds a sewer system. He makes more and more cars. He institutes a fire brigade. He builds electric wind turbines. He expands his little school system. He starts manufacturing pharmaceuticals.

Years pass.

The city keeps growing. He exports all his tech to neighboring countries. The nuclear plant comes online. He makes aircraft. He starts working on a spaceship, albeit not a jump-capable one. He expands the school system again.

More years pass.

He's filthy rich, now, so he makes large donations to paladin orders the world over. He gets that moneylender in on the ground floor of electronic banking and credit systems.

He pushes as many people as possible into his schools, and tries to make sure that it is good education and doesn't fall into any of the traps educational systems tend to fall into.

And twenty-five years later, he has a jump drive.

He finds Kaja, to say goodbye.
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Kaja is now fifty years old, and while Winter Light healing means she doesn't have any scars and looks younger than she is, she's coming up on retirement age to teach the novices or do other lighter work than going out and hitting things with a sword. She is at the compound when Nick turns up, on guard duty.

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"Hail, Kaja. It's been a while. I'm going home soon. Thought I'd say goodbye."

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"...Home? You mean - back where you came from? You've been here so long."

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"I'm not the kind of person who can really be happy spending years and years in one place. I might come back and visit, but I haven't seen my old friends or family for over two decades. Even if I wasn't too fond of my family. They're still family, and it's time to go home."

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"What about all your - stuff? Can your people handle it all right? Everyone's used to having it now."

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"That's what my schools are for. I've been having as many people as possible taught, as best I can. There are thousands who know how to make a radio now, and almost ten thousand who can repair a car. And dozens who can make more armor, whenever you need it. Everything that nobody else understands, I'll be bringing with me."

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"I guess I'd imagined you'd get used to it here. Settle in."

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"Well. If I'd married or made close friends I might stay, but I'm a lonely sort, I never did. Like I said, I'm a wanderer. You can't help being what you are."

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"That's true."

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"It's a tradition in my homeland to give a gift of silver for significant achievements, happy occasions, and farewells. You were the first person I met from this world, and you helped me onto my feet. Please accept this coin as a gift."

He holds out a perfectly circular shiny silver coin with an intricate etched pattern of swirls that is not in common use anywhere in the country.
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"Thank you."

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He gives a little bow. "Fare well in all your days."

He takes the train to his industrial complex, musing. The world is changing, because of him. Rapid change will start a revolution. Violence, maybe. But he kept the technologies he shared as safe as he could. They'll just have to deal with the rest.

He finalizes a series of ownership transfers, giving control of various industries to the best and brightest of his employees.

He boards his private jumpship and blasts into the upper atmosphere.

There is a brilliantly bright flash of light, and Nick is gone from the world.