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trade my soul for a wish [Steel]
Steel summons Demon Cam
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Cam is dipping a grilled cheese sandwich into a bowl of tomato soup when he feels the summons. He goes ahead and grabs it. Doesn't even drop the sandwich.

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He is outside, on a flat stone platform at the top of a dry-looking hill. A tall woman is glancing between some markings on the edge of the circle and a page of notes, facing away from him.

The circle, drawn in charcoal, is covered inside and out with scribbled notes describing colors and shapes.

(She knows two languages, neither of which are at all related to English)
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...Nor to any other languages Cam knows.

And the colors and shapes are doing squat to bind and gag him.

"Uh," he says in the one he judges to be her native language. "Summoner?"
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She spins around, abruptly moving backwards five feet as she does. Her hand goes to a dagger on her belt, but doesn't draw it. "Okay. So did Kell or Durant send you, and how'd you manage to sneak up on me?"

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"...There seems to be some sort of. Anomaly or misunderstanding or something. I don't know who Kell or Durant are, you summoned me, I'm assuming it was an accident, I appeared in this circle."

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"I summoned you? I... wasn't aware that was a thing. I was just diagramming a new spell, I haven't even shaped out the stream for it yet. I'm sorry?"

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"Oh, it's... no trouble. Looks like you did it by accident. Ah, where are we?"

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"Three miles off a trail six miles off a side road ten miles off of the Opri-Nel mainway. I didn't want anyone spying on my experiment."

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"I need to know where we are in slightly broader terms than that."
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"Well, this is the wilderness of the east-southish part of Central Telra. Prefecture 9, sometimes called the copper lands. We're not currently in the jurisdiction of any specific cities. Any ideas on how I can undo - whatever I did to summon you?"

The word for 'cities' implies city-states, and not just collections of people.
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"I was more hoping for planet and calendar year. And I have a very good idea, but this situation is as far as I know unprecedented and it might not work, plus I'm not sure I want to go home yet."

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"Planet? Why would the planet have a name? Year - 6893 or 1201 depending on who you ask. Telra tried to reset the yearcount, but it didn't catch on in most of the rest of the world."

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"I see." Pause. "So, I'm a demon. Demons make things. Do any things need making around here?"

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"...We could use a lot of things made in a lot of places. Preferably spread wide enough that no one person or small group controls them, because that would be likely to result in unpleasant political and social consequences. In the short term, I would like you to make proof."

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Cam has part of a grilled cheese sandwich left. He holds up his other hand and makes a paper cup of tomato soup. Dip. Bite.

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"That is sufficient proof. Do you have access to the bluestream? If you don't, roads and buildings and water pumps and elevators are still physical things, we can just go straight to installing magic instead of needing to build them."

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"I don't know what the bluestream is. Perhaps you could tell me."

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"It's... The framework of magic. If you are a shaper, which I assumed you are because usually only shapers can safely withstand any significant body modification, you can see the layer of magic over the world, and change it from useless fog into structures of sorts, and then use those structures to do magic. Magic powers most of the economy. People fly heavy loads on roads, artificial light and heat grows our crops, and so on."

"Oh, magic costs. Making structures weakens your strength and coordination temporarily, on the order of a couple of hours only. Viewing - or listening to - the stream takes away your physical senses for a proportionate time. Actually using magic dampens the emotions, or hurts if you do too much. Does any of that sound familiar?"
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"Demons can casually add almost anything we want to our bodies. Subtracting's a little harder. None of this bluestream stuff sounds remotely familiar; my magic's costless."

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"You're a demon? Either my mythology's wrong or you're awfully benign for one or you're running some sort of con. Any which way you'd terrify Durant, he's a scheming, monopolizing hawk taking advantage of tariffs and market scarcity. Oh, shapers can be made. At least from humans. You sit in one of the stone circles and if you're lucky, you get sensory deprivation and then magic. If you're unlucky, you get intense pain."

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"Your mythology is wrong - well, I'm assuming, since you didn't realize I was one or know we could be summoned or that we make things - and I'm pretty benign for a summoned demon."

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"My mythology says that demons are empathy-less creatures capable of disguising themselves as anything, who eat magic, enjoy watching suffering, and cannot be killed. And I appreciate it. What kinds of things can you make?"

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"I may or may not be able to make anything that is inherently magical - I can't normally do it but it might be that I could if I were copying something. I need surprisingly little but still some information about what I'm trying to make. It can't appear more than about five or six times as far away from me as the sun, can't appear in motion, and must be matter, not energy or antimatter."

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"...The Senate likes to ban books. Useful books, even. Can I have a copy of Yero Green's The Art of Healing and Transmuted Medicines?"

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"I could conjure it from that description, but I don't know what's in it, so I would have no way to know if you just asked me for a misleadingly titled book on how to make high-yield explosives or something unless I hung onto it and read it first," Cam points out.

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"It's a medical treatise by a renowned doctor who supposedly made more progess actually understanding the body's microscopic workings than anyone else. It was banned - well, the ostensible reason was that it's dangerous hogwash, but my friend Link claims it's not, that the Senate doesn't want improved medical care because it might threaten the power structure. I'd treat it with appropriate skepticism and not stick people with strange medicines before testing them on rats and monkeys... And I know how to make explosives already, though I get the sense you wouldn't appreciate a demonstration."

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"...It seems, not guaranteed but extremely likely, that I know more about medicine than Yero Green. Also, I am immune to conventional forms of harm and don't actually mind that much if you demonstrate an explosive here with nobody around, presuming you know how to avoid getting yourself killed. What the hell kind of power structure is even plausibly threatened by improved medical care, what, do you do your agriculture with zombies?"

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"...No, those are fictional. The kind of power structure where the oligarchs have relatively advanced medical care all to themselves and want to keep it that way, is the idea. Not that I give it much credit. But for the off chance the book is actually useful and actually has some decent medical advances in it, I'm willing to spend a lot of time researching and verifying and testing things on mice. And being very careful and conservative when applying the things that worked on mice to humans, I'm not stupid. Though if you have better medical knowledge than him that is entirely welcome."

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"What are some relatively recent medical advances that you know about?"

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"Morphine, which we make with magic but is not magic all by itself. Less invasive heart surgeries. A way to repair ruptured blood vessels by careful incremental transmutation, though it doesn't work on capillaries. I don't know how to do these things, I'm not a doctor, but I know of them."

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"Okay, so not dismal, but I'm way ahead of you. ...Of course, none of my medical textbooks are in a local language."

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"Presumably there exist language textbooks, yes?"

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"The languages you speak are completely unrelated to any languages I've encountered before. I got your languages when you summoned me, so I can translate, I could probably even come up with a curriculum, but there are no textbooks aimed at local speakers."

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"Where did you come from, anyway, with different medical advances and different magic and so on? And would you mind stepping out of the circle so I can get to work on my sun-eater spell? Oh, it won't eat the sun. It's supposed to let me survive for a long while on nothing but sun and water by turning carbon dioxide and water directly into sugar."

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Cam gets out of her way. "This circle should be all used up as far as summoning demons is concerned, but do they usually look like this? I live in a place called Hell, but there are other places, most notably Heaven, Fairyland, and the mortal world."

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"Spells are usually more efficient in terms of cost to build their structure if they're circles. Actually marking out the circle is for convenience only, I can do it completely invisibly for magic I have more practice with. Let me know if or when you want to go home. If you can. Because if Kell annoys me enough that I finally snap and run off to the northern fringe or the stone teeth, er, the mountains in the west, you might not be able to find me."

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"I don't actually anticipate wanting to go home and stay there in your lifetime unless it's to test whether summoning and dismissal work as normal here before collecting other daeva for some large project."

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She starts pacing slowly around the perimeter of the circle, alternating between intent and blank stares at its contents. She also seems a little - droopy and tired.

"If you say so. I'd say I'd object if you started doing evil things, but you could have appeared a boulder over my head and run off cackling hundreds of times by now."
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"Actually, if you die - assuming things are working normally - I go straight back to Hell. If I were inclined to run off cackling you'd be unconscious, not squished."

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Assuming he's not lying, of course.

"Say, can you make me wings? I assume you know enough to tell whether my body can take it. I won't even look too terribly out of place, they're uncommon but not unheard of. Just expensive and prone to complications, done our way."
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"I can make you wings. They'll even work. If you ever want to take them off again, though, you will have more trouble with that than I would if I wanted rid of mine."

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"Morphine is a thing. Magical cutting and cauterizing is a thing. I'd need a doctor, but not a quest across the ocean to the Ancient Shrine of Power or anything."

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"Oh, no, that's not the problem, I can make them without nerves in the joints and you can slice them right off without feeling a thing, you'd have to worry about blood loss but it sounds like you have that under control, I was just talking about the scarring and the muscles in non-wing locations you need added on to work them. I can define what is and is not part of my body at any given time and anything that isn't doesn't tend to stick around to wear out its welcome, be it scar tissue or extra layers of pectoral, but you don't have that advantage. If it doesn't bother you I can totally make you wings and the substrate for them, what kind of design do you want?"

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"We can do scar tissue. We can remove muscles, if we do it carefully, but not put them back. Thanks for the caution."

She takes a piece of paper and four multicolored bottles of ink and telekinetically sketches. It's startlingly detailed for how little time it's taking, though perhaps the magic helps with that.

The end result looks a lot like a cross between a fairy's wings and an angel's. With longer than average, relatively unfluffy angel wings as a base, the feathers are colored vibrantly in a symmetrical rainbow pattern. She has the joints and feather types for each section correct, mostly.

"It'll be great to fly without needing magic to stay up, I suspect. Magic dampens your emotions."
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"That doesn't sound like any fun," Cam says. "Okay, I can do these - I might have to deviate from your design on the internals here and there to make sure they'll get you in the air, but they'll look like this and handle about how you're expecting. ...Your shirt has a back."

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"It can be useful, too. If I'm about to do something I'd regret, I sometimes remember to hover or slightly warm up a cubic mile of rock or something instead. Ah. Yes, it does, and so do my flying leathers. This may have to wait until I find a tailor unless you want to appear clothes for me on top of wings."

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"I can get you a new shirt," says Cam. "Specs on the new shirt?"

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"Like this one, cut for extra back muscle and wing holes?"

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"There are front muscles too," Cam says. "Have to anchor the whole thing. It may affect your balance, too - improved mine, but mine was shit to begin with."

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"I can catch myself with magic by changing the next half-foot into a tiny section of road-magic if I fall. A sort of - clip or button to help getting it on and off over the wings would be nice, though. It won't change my overall shape too much, right? No looking like a barrel or anything."

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"Nah. I mean, I could do a neater job if I were an angel, but that'd also take a lot longer. You'll maybe need to replace more of your wardrobe but you'll be about the same shape. I was thinking halter top style? Tie it at the small of the back and behind your neck?"

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"That'll work. I might need new flying leathers for winter, but that can wait. Thank you, by the way."

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"Hey, no problem." He hands her a new shirt and turns his back, whistling.

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She walks down the other side of the slope a ways, and is back a couple of minutes later. "Will it hurt at all?"

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"Not directly. It'll feel very weird, and if your nocioception is wired atypically it might make you tense up enough to hurt that way. I can sedate you if you're concerned."

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"Unless your sedatives can wear off in five minutes, I'll take my chances. I am confused about what you might want as payment, since you could just make a mountain of Silver Circles."

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"I usually work for book recommendations, but I do not need any today. I just plan to be here long enough that this amount of work is nothing compared to your ongoing goodwill, you know? Say when."

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She closes her eyes. "When."

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It feels really, really weird.

The wings appear folded heavy and soft against her back, but she can move them as soon as they appear.
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"...Huh. I was watching the bluestream as you did that. I could tell you were doing something, but no further detail than 'something'."

The wings extend. "And this is pretty strange." They flap a couple of times, in a way that does not get much lift. "I like it. Gonna get used to them a little more before trying to fly, though."
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"Flying might take some work. You can catch yourself if you flub it, I guess."

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"But if I catch myself out here I'll get tired and weak, which likely does not make for good flying. I'll wait till there's a road, and I can fly with bluestream if I fuck up doing it with wings. They're very pretty, though, and I'm getting proprioception. Convenient. Thanks again. I've no interest in a tail, though."

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"Suit yourself." Wag. "I like mine, but they're not universal even in Hell."

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She goes back to pacing around her circle, presumably doing magic to the space within it. The wings flare once in a while as she gets used to balancing with them, and accounting for the extra drag on normal movement.

"Are you going to be particularly bored if I finish my experiment before going somewhere less wilderness-y? I predict two, maybe three hours."
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"Recommend me a book," shrugs Cam. "Actually, recommend me a library, more efficient that way."

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"Eh. Fiction or non?"

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"Do separate libraries have those?"

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"A whole library is a lot of books, and I don't want to be responsible for including things you'd be bored by. Alright, try Opri Grande's main library. It's a university for shapers."

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"Cool, thanks." Cam makes a bizarre stick-shaped device, which appears in his hand and proceeds to project light in a square beside it.

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"That is not a library. That is not a book."

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"No, it's my computer. With the library on it on top of everything else usually stored there. Demons can do format conversion just fine even if translation evades our magic."

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"I have to assume it's some sort of incomprehensible technology. Are all five thousand-some books written inside that somewhere, ridiculously tiny?"

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"It's... more complicated than that. Sort of, though. Five thousand, really? That's an entire library here?"

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"Well, it's the school's main library, which is kept pretty tidy generally and doesn't include all the specialties. I was concerned about the size of five thousand books, let alone a hundred thousand. If you want all the books just go grab Capitol Spire's library, archives and all. They'll have five of anything Opri does."

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"But now that I've already made the computer I have to make an entire separate object for that," he says, making an entire separate object and wedging it into a space in his computer.

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"I did not know computers were a thing. Sue me for wastefulness, you might even win with all the gold you could toss around."

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"I'm teasing. Mostly; I do try not to make more things than I have to. Can't get rid of them without setting things on fire or equipment I cannot safely have here."

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"Sensible to be careful with space. It's not like you're going to run out of things. If you want to read about the bluestream, try looking for Why Blue? An Overview of Magic's Biggest Questions. A bit rambly and philosophical, but otherwise a good introductory theory text. For fiction I'd recommend the Ace's Tail series. Ace is a wandering adventurer who rights wrongs where he finds them. They're a bit two-dimensional, but I like them."

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"Sure. Thanks." Cam prods his computer into coming up with appropriate character encodings for the new alphabets, and then tracks down the first book mentioned.

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The first few chapters are about what bluestream (supposedly) is, a step by step guide on doing one's first shaping (which mostly seems to consist of willing things in the correct way), the most elementary or common uses of it (light, heat, and motion mostly), and brief descriptions of the kinds of things one can do when one is more learned.

The broad categories each get a chapter. Agriculture, construction, transmutation, healing, and thermo-kinetics.

'Transmutation' sounds a lot like chemistry with magic, since it talks about elements and compounds and so on. 'Thermo-kinetics' similarly sounds a little like physics or engineering. None of the knowledge contained therein is particularly impressive by Cam's standards.

The book describes how one becomes a shaper: One sits in the stone circles. About 70% of the time the person who goes into it will enter sensory deprivation for five days and wake up a shaper. The other 30% experience intense pain that bypasses all known anesthesia.

Apparently statistics show that it's completely random, not disciminating by age, gender, race, health, education, personality, sexuality, or anything else they could think of to investigate. Nobody knows why the stone circles do this, or how to get it to work with a different arrangement, a different kind of stone, etc.
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This is all very interesting. Cam wonders if a circle would even work on him. He can probably get most of the conventional end results that these people use shaping for his own way, but multiplicative possibilities with his tech and making are tantalizing.

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Bluestream cannot accomplish inherently magical ongoing effects. Examples: If you build something, it has to stay up with physics and not magic. Shields only last as long as the shielder's concentration and continued existence in a friendly section of stream.

The book speculates wildly on how bluestream would behave if it didn't have a planet underneath it to anchor to. The bluestream thins out as you ascend above the thickest part of the atmosphere, and anything one makes starts degrading faster as well. This is why most cities are at low altitude.

The last chapter details the basics of a system for how to mark down and read basic arrangements of bluestream (it includes an example map: a firepit that you can light yourself, or just keep it burning with magic) and mentions that more detail can be found in most intermediate textbooks.
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Cam wonders what on this planet makes bluestream... but it seems they don't actually know.

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(The book mentioned in passing that living things exert little disturbances on the bluestream. It is generally assumed that the fog is millennia of accumulation of this.)

Steel is now standing in the middle of her circle, arms and wings outstretched, perfectly still. The surrounding area becomes significantly dimmer, almost like twilight.
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It could just be life in general, but his making wings did something to it too, so it can't be something literally physical or chemical about the life, since - well, he did start the wings full of a copy of Steel's own blood, so maybe it could be some trait of native life. Further tests necessary. She didn't mention if the tomato soup's appearance did anything.

Cam's computer automatically compensates for ambient light.
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That's pretty much it for the first book.

After a few minutes, the light goes back to normal. "I declare the experiment a success. Made me a bit thirsty, though, would you mind filling my canteen?"
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"Just water?"

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"If you want to make me apple juice or raspberry sourdrops, I'll hardly object. No caffeine or alcohol or anything stronger, please."

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She gets apple juice. Sparkling. "There you are. Hey, I want to test a thing. If I make a butterfly can you tell me if it does something to the bluestream like making your wings did?"

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She takes a swig of juice. "Ah, carbonation. I'll watch, sure. Appear it a few inches above a hand so I know where to stare."

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Cam holds out his hand. He makes a pretty blue morpho - deliberately attending to the fact that he means to make an Earth one.

The butterfly lands confusedly on his hand, flaps its wings a few times, then flies away.
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A couple seconds' pause, then. "That did - something. I was listening and looking both. I heard a faint echo of bass, almost like what healing makes. Your soup was different, almost transmutation-y. And it was like the butterfly - shoved out all the fog that was in its way when it appeared. It has a strange outline, though not as strange as yours. What kind is it?"

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"Blue morpho. I promise not to make two of anything until I know what species you natively have in the area. What's my outline look like?"

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"Like a person. But a weird person. The features I know to look for to see if you're sick or hungry or hurt just aren't there at all, and you have some weird, almost non-geometric twist to half your patterns. I don't think anybody would notice it unless they looked closely."

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"There is a distinct limit to how much I can get sick or hungry or hurt without my own express permission. The twist I have no idea. Can you name a local butterfly species?"

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"Tricolor Copperwing, eastern variety. They're local."

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So Cam makes a tricolor copperwing, local as can be...

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It's a butterfly. Its wings are very shiny, and a section of them does indeed look like copper.

She blinks. "Yep, that's it. The effect on the stream seemed exactly the same as your morpho."
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"Okay, there goes one hypothesis on what the heck bluestream is. Well, partially, anyway, maybe the difference would be too small to see or I made the morpho incorrectly."

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"What was the hypothesis, exactly?"

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"The book mentions there's less bluestream at higher altitudes, and also that living things affect it. I don't have a good way to test the hypothesis 'there's a magic rock at the core of the planet' but I could give a whirl to 'life on this planet has something about it that generates bluestream'."

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"Try making some other life from your planet, and some from mine? I can kill things you make so they don't become invasive." She names half a dozen more insects, and a local species of rabbit.

"...What would be really interesting is if I could somehow get to orbit without, you know, dying. We could see if the stream is still anchored to the planet and rotating with it. If I try to make something, whether it flies away at high speed before I'm done because of the orbital velocity thing."
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"Oh, I can make us a little spaceship. Trouble is, then there's a little spaceship, and I'm not confident I want to leave one lying around."

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"Of course you can make a spaceship, why wouldn't you be able to? You'd free up big chunk of the magical workforce with nonmagical water pumps, farming equipment, and elevators, by the way. Though trade school graduates are pretty inflexible and would likely need further education."

"Would a thoroughly hidden or possibly violently disassembled little spaceship be safer? You can bury it under a hill, possibly letting the hill fall a few feet onto it, when we're done."
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"I mean, I could also slag it. Just trying to be thoughtful. Elevators, water pumps, and all manner of exciting agricultural devices are also available once I know how best to distribute them."

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"Hmm. I want to warn you, the balance of power needs upsetting, but if we do it hastily people will be hurt more than they need to. The Telra Senate likes to send in the army when any one city grows too powerful. They call themselves a republic, but... Each city gets one vote. Guess who casts the city's vote? Whoever's been appointed by the Senate to oversee the city. The current system is better than lawless anarchy, but by appearing things you have a good chance to undo it without the tremendously nasty 'civil war' parts in the middle. You'll want proof, of course."

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"I do tend to like to know what's going on before I disrupt governments, however dodgy their systems of representation."

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"You'll notice I'm not asking you for weapons or anything else government-disrupty. Do you want to try making a few more alive things now, see if I can find a difference, or start hiking back to town since you don't seem to want to make a ship?"

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"If somebody sees a ship going up or down what will they think it is?"

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"As long as they see it from a fair distance they'll probably think it's someone's magic experiment. It's fairly well-known that abandoned wilderness is the place to do magic experiments. Small chance you'll set off rumors of disaster, unexplained flying objects are signs of calamity to the superstitious."

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"That's not so bad. All right. Wanna go to space today?"

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"You're immortal, or claim to be. I'm not. It's safe and reliable?"

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"Yeah, humans in the mortal world I'm accustomed to do space travel routinely. Some of them live on the moon and others have colonized a second planet."

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"In that case, yes. I'd like to try to learn one of your languages at some point, even if there's no translation-dictionary. Seems like it'd be convenient."

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"Sure. How do you best learn second languages?" asks Cam, picking a flattish spot to make a little two-seat shuttle.

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"I learned Henta by listening to a description of the grammar, learning the alphabet, memorizing a few basic nouns and verbs, then total immersion because I was in the Crownlands."

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"And that seemed pretty straightforward to you? All right. So, I speak lots of languages, and my computer can translate serviceably between all of them. You want something similar in structure to one of yours? Something you'll find easy to pronounce? Language with the best vocabulary and most native work?"

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"It could have gone better, but I managed." In Henta, "Hard work may not make an adult, but avoiding it makes a child. That's an old proverb, and one I took to heart. A compromise between grammar and most available work, would be nice."

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"Okay... do you mind viciously terrible writing systems? Because Chinese is very popular, especially in writing where the dialects don't compete, and it's got deliciously simple grammar, and its characters look like this and there's thousands of them." He shows her a sample on his computer. And opens up his spaceship and motions her in.

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Steel pauses to investigate the spaceship. "Does it use the Reaction Law to fly? Tlane is symbolic like that, but honestly Chinese doesn't really appeal if there's thousands of different characters to re-learn. I can tolerate grammar in exchange for a phonetic alphabet like Henta has."

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"I don't know of a Reaction Law under that name. I can give you a physics lesson but it'd take a long time. How regular do you need your phonetics?"

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"The reaction law states that anything exerting a force has an equal force exerted on it in the opposite direction. Moving things with the stream is thought to push against the entire planet, but this has not been proven. Two or three different pronunciations per letter would be fine, especially if grammar can help tell which to use. A dozen, no."

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"The reaction law is involved but not the only thing going on here." He takes off, thinking about languages. "Maybe Italian. How pronounceable does this sound?" He speaks a couple sentences of Italian.

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She repeats them and only drops one vowel. "Close enough. What did that mean?"

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"This is sentence in Italian. It has a lot of interesting cadence but not that many vowels," translates Cam.

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"Seems like a good choice, then."

She looks out the front of the spaceship. "...Wow. This thing is fast."
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"Yes it is."

Up up up.

"So, Italian's subject-verb-object. To say my name is... uh. What's your name, I'm Cam."
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"Ha, we haven't introduced ourselves yet. My name is Jean, but please call me Steel. It's traditional for skilled shapers to take a nickname. By subject-verb-object, do you mean..." She says 'you' 'fly' and 'ship,' which is not a correct sentence in Tlane.

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"Yes, like that." He makes her a piece of paper with the Roman alphabet and a description of the corresponding sounds in her own and hands it over. "Alphabet, sample sentences on the bottom, sound 'em out."

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She rolls through the alphabet a few times, singing the sounds to a little tune, and repeats the sentences with slightly varying pronunciation for a while.

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Cam corrects her when it's more than just accent creeping in, and then tells her what the words mean - "my name is Jean", "I am a shaper" (Cam makes up an Italian approximation of the concept, etcetera. Then she gets a sheet of paper with basic verb conjugations and pronouns.

"...Aaaand here we are in medium orbit," he says.
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"My name is Steel," she repeats firmly in Italian, using her word for Steel.

She looks at the stream. "Interesting. There's only the tiniest haze of fog outside the ship, but inside has as much fog as ever. I wonder..." She droops a bit. "If I try to do something fifty feet off to the left of the ship, it flies away behind us. If I do something five feet outside it, it sort of... Shears. The more distant parts fall away faster than the closer parts. And if I do something inside the ship, it decays noticeably faster but continues to exist. Large vehicles or heavy loads can disrupt roads a little. Maybe the stream wants to be stationary relative to nearby matter."
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"Except you can use it to fly, right? How fast?"

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"About one and a half, maybe one and three-quarters measures a minute, on a good road." (This is about forty-five miles an hour)

She pivots her head. "Oh, the pattern I made inside the ship is falling behind us after all, just much more slowly."
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"This suggests that it still cares about the frame of reference of the planet. Mind going higher?"

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"Not at all. But I need to be back in Opri three days from now, so no long journeys, please."

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"Sure, I won't try that far, I just want to break orbit and see what that does."

Up up up until it's no longer "up" but "away". Italian, meanwhile.
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Prepositions and conjugation give Steel some trouble. Vocabulary mostly does not.

When they're far away enough to be clear of any lingering fog, she stares at the closer of the two small moons. "I can tell where the planet is easily from here, it's a circle of bluestream-fog. But if the moons have any, it's incredibly thin."

She makes a few steam-things. "Anything too distant from the ship just... Collapses into fog that spreads out into nothingness immediately. If I go closer, it holds together a little longer. The lightball I made inside the ship is steadily wearing away at the edges, too, but it's not drifting around."

She walks a few feet. "...That completely destroyed the lightball. At home they can last for months before needing shoring up, even if you walk through them all the time."
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"But it's not falling behind, like we're flying away from it and it can't keep up, it's just disintegrating?"

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"Yeah, it's just disintegrating. And adding to the fog in the ship, which is seeping outside the ship. That stuff outside is really thin but it isn't falling behind either."

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"Okay. So... close to the planet, magic wants to stay stationary relative to the planet. Farther away from the planet, it wants that harder. Far, far away from the planet, it doesn't realize there is anything to want and sees no reason to behave at all. To anthropomorphize."

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"I think it more wants to be stationary relative to the largest or nearest-by clump of physical stuff. Like... It seemed like it was trying to be stationary relative to our ship, but that effect lost to the planet's bigness. Can we land on one of the moons?"

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"Sure." He fiddles with the instrument panel, and descends to the largest moon.

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She does some stream on the way down. The moon behaves much like the planet: Once they get reasonably close to it, the stream starts drifting to the reverse of the ship's relative velocity.

Once they land, she builds some more things and glances at them between Italian practice once in a while. "My patterns are holding up better than they did in the middle of nothingness, but not as well as on the planet. This is starting to get tiring, though, I'm done testing things for now. Would you mind making me a nice, hot pastry?"
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"Are you allergic to anything?"

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"Hm. Not as far as I know, but I don't know all the things you might put in food to be allergic to."

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"Probably safer if you're more specific so I can copy something you've had before, then. I can deal with an allergic reaction but I'm sure you'd rather I didn't have to."

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"Indeed. How about a pear shortbread cake, filled with cranberry preserves. Made by 'The Orchard Bakery' at Opri, 382 Echo Street, 4th floor, Suite 3, if you need a specific example."

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Pear shortbread cake with cranberry appears, complete with paper plate; he hands it over.

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"Paper. Because it's disposable, right?" She takes a bite. "Ah, tastes like it's fresh from the oven. Thanks ever so. Any new hypotheses on the bluestream?"

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"Maybe it just likes matter and life separately in different way. Planets and butterflies alike. Moon's smaller than a planet, spaceship is very little compared to either..."

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"It seems like it likes sticking to matter, and life makes it. But hey, people have been trying to figure out what the bluestream is for centuries. Even with otherworldly knowledge and a damn spaceship, it's a bit impatient to think you'll figure it out in a day. Incidentally, I'm starting to get tired of not being able to make even little magic things stick around."

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"Right, back down we go. I can probably find where we took off from, but you might want to help navigate when we're up closer." Up up and away from this moon.

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Some of my stuff is still where we took off. Nothing private. You could land us closer to Opri and let someone else find and use it if you don't mind replacing it. Then again, may as well go get it because anywhere near the city will be harder to hide this thing. Where we took off is a fair bit to the west and a little to the north of where a certain canyon splits into two canyons. I'll point out the specific trail I was following when we get lower."

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"Mm-hm."

Towards and down, down, down.
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Italian practice! She speaks Italian (slowly and carefully, to pronounce everything right) when giving final directions.

"There is the Opri-Nel big road. I took a left two road past that house... Then I took the trail that passes the hill that looks like a lumpy pear... A-ha, I see the flat rock I made to test that spell." Point.
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And Cam lands near the rock. When they have exited the ship, he considers it thoughtfully, then makes a tarp and a layer of sod that blends in with the landscape over it. "That should do for now unless it's obvious in bluestream or something."

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"It's... Not obvious something's there. But it does look a bit odd, stream-wise. Maybe put a few bushes and flowers up and it'll fill in with insects and natural noise."

She notes the condition of her circle, how much it's decayed in the few hours since completing it. Then she starts packing up her gear and tent.
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Flowers, copied from local incidents. Decorative shrub.

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"Good enough. Let me destroy what's left of my thing enough that nobody can copy it."

She does that. "Time for a hike. Three miles until we're somewhere I can fly with the bluestream."
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"Will it be conspicuous if I fly?"

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"No. You have wings. Fully functional wings are pretty uncommon compared to cosmetic butterfly wings or something, and yours are an unusual design, but they're a known thing. I'm only walking because I don't trust myself to not fall out of the sky yet."

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"All right then. Lead on. Have an Italian children's book." He presents her with a book, and then he takes off and takes his computer off his belt loop to read while circling over her.

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"Ah, I'm no good at reading while walking. Flying, sure, but not walking. Thanks for the thought."

She walks downhill.

Soon she's on a rough dirt road smaller than either party's wingspan. "Here we go. Any tips for a first-time flyer?"
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"Move your wings together. You might want a running start. However good you are at reading while flying, don't do it on day one." He lands; his computer becomes surrounded by a nice-but-battered-looking leather case and goes back on his belt loop. "The important thing is to keep air under you with lots of surface area and glide as much as you can; flapping is tiring and also cuts your surface area for part of the time you're doing it, so only flap if you have to."

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"I can do a flying start, even better."

She hovers five feet up, leaning forward, wings out, and pushes forward at near-running speed. The wings tense as she drops the hover. She glides forward for a bit, then pitches to the right and suddenly stops herself.

"Okay. That was a glide, kind of. Do I need to be going faster?"
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"I... can't easily tell by looking when you're using magic for it or not, which doesn't help me give you tips. I can take off from a still start, it's not necessary to be moving, a lot of people just find it helps."

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"I'm nervous, is all. It took a while to master flying by stream, and I took some spills. That old hesitation is coming back."

She shakes her head and tries again. This time it seems to work better. After a jump-start and a few hard flaps, she's ascending steadily. "This is very strange! How do I turn!"
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"That's when you stop moving your wings together. Which way do you wanna go? That wing goes down, other one goes up -" He get a bit ahead of her. "Watch." And he smoothly swoops left.

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"If I fall out of the sky, appear something squishy below me, please." And stop flapping, get used to gliding for a bit - woah the wind changes, well of course it does - and she dips one wing, raising the other, to slooowly bank left.

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"All right." He flies nearby, not close enough for his wingbeats to foul hers.

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She ascends some more, and practices sweeping left and right a little more sharply. "I was right. This is thrilling! With the stream you're just pulling yourself along, but this is like - playing soccer against the air or something."

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"This metaphor is new to me."

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"I don't know. I'm not really thinking about words much right now. Hey, you can see the mainway from here. Opri's over there, shall we head in that direction?" Point.

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"Sure."

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Fly, fly, fly. She does a shallow dive, but holds off on any more daring tricks. "Say, what're you reading?"

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"More advanced theoretical magic stuff."

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"Ah. I've probably read half of anything on construction or thermo-kinetics you find. Half of my job as civil service administrator is researching better spells and double-checking everyone's work. Is it giving you any ideas on how to make my employees' jobs redundant? Because that would be pretty great, given how many people are tied up in this. Maybe we can get the compulsory labor repealed if workforce needs drop far enough."

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"I mean, maybe, what do your employees do with themselves?"

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"Work the water pumps and monitor the water quality. Operate the public elevators. Light up public areas at night. Make and repair buildings, bridges, roads, tunnels. Deal with snow and other inclement weather. Deliver letters and packages. Keep stores of food for emergencies. Keep emergency services ready to respond to fires and injuries. Attempt to predict earthquakes. Maintain the magical infrastructure for all these tasks."

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"I can spruce up your water handling, I can make elevators that don't need a person in them, um, electricity is a thing, I can make buildings and bridges and I can under some constraints make roads and I can produce tunneling-related equipment. I can't control the weather except to add water to the system, which you proooobably don't want me doing on any significant scale, but I can do snowplows and maybe tweak your postal algorithms and supply vehicles to do mail runs in. I can make shelf stable food, although I don't want to screw up your infrastructure for doing that yourselves in any way without knowing lots more about my long-term availability and public reception. Similar with emergency services, although I can do snazzy firefighting gadgets and if I'm satisfied your police aren't evil little tyrants I can do policing gadgets too. I can do medicine, great heaps of it, I'm specially trained. I cannot predict or prevent earthquakes; what I can do is cause them in more or less the same way you might already start small forest fires to prevent accumulating tinder, but it's a risky proposition. I cannot interact with your magical infrastructure at this time."

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"I wouldn't trust the police. And the only reason Opri's civil services are in such good shape is because Grind, the civil services chief, likes gloating about her well-run city and so does not embezzle nearly as much of her budget as her neighbors do. Water handling and elevators will be excellent. Electricity... Does not translate."

"I can probably help you do a few of these things without getting called out on it, especially the water. Grind assigned me control over the water section, oh, three and a half years ago. I built pumpjacks to pull water from the aquifer instead of the river, and now we don't have people magicking gigantic tubs to rooftops anymore. Cut the water section workforce in half, after the initial investment and training."
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"Electricity: tame lightning. Runs all the cool future swag. I can probably do some of your water stuff on pure mechanical if you want though."

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"Tame lightning. That's a bit of a scary thought. What would be best for the water stuff is things that are low-maintenance or at least low-workforce. Is the general plan here 'improve things and deal with violence or other unpleasantness as it occurs' or something else?"

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"My plan is 'implement unambiguous, safe improvements while getting enough of my bearings to make fewer things ambiguous and more things safe'."

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"Makes sense. I maintain that you are likely to have to deal with an army at some point. The Senate does not like rapid change. I guess you'll believe me when it happens."

They're getting close to the city now. It begins suddenly, with high square walls. Inside the walls are clusters of colorfully decorated buildings, all at least six floors tall and some as much as fifteen. Some of the buildings have large sections open to the air, entire parks halfway up the city, and raised pathways are everywhere as well.

"We probably want to land and enter through the main gates, for politeness to Kell's guards if nothing else."
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"I'm not really... scared of an army? Like, it seems like your magic system all has to play with physics, so I expect my ability to break physics attempting to harm me will remain intact. Also I could just sort of tranquilize them all." He lands where directed. "It could get inconvenient if they did something like hold civilian hostages or invent the deadman switch but I'd still give myself swell odds."

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"Good for you."

She descends gradually as they approach the city, landing on the side of the large road leading up to it. The guards are wearing chainmail and carrying crossbows. She shows them some sort of badge and they wave her through the gate.

They ask Cam, "Do you want to sign into Opri as a visitor, or a temporary resident?"
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"What's the practical difference?" he inquires, tail slowly drifting left and right.

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"Temporary residents are subject to taxes for any money they earn, inside or outside of the city, as long as they're registered as such. They are also permitted to own real estate and enroll in the public schools, if they so desire. And temporary or permanent residents are ineligible for extradition."

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"Visitor, please."

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"Please wait a moment."

He comes back with a form. It wants Cam's full name, trade name if applicable, gender (male, female, non-binary), age, magical status (shaper, non-shaper, not attempted), a written description of his reasons for visiting Opri, city or country of origin (if applicable), and his signature under a paragraph agreeing to abide by local laws and ordinances.
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Cam writes his nickname phonetically and, finding the W in his surname awkward in this alphabet, just translates it. Male. ...Twenty-two. Not attempted. Tourism and visiting friend. Not applicable. "Do you have a summary somewhere of the local laws and ordinances?"

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"Don't harm others except in self-defense or registered and approved duels, don't steal, don't cause a public distrubance, if a guard or member of the police tells you to do something obey, don't harass people, don't interfere with the operations of the government, don't distribute controlled substances without a valid medical license, no public obscenity, which means you'll need a shirt... There's more, but that's the majors covered, I think."

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"Steel, did I leave a shirt in your bag? I think I might have left a shirt in your bag."
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"Ah, right. Here." She hands him the shirt that wasn't there a moment ago.

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"Thanks." Cam puts it on. "What are the limits on what guards and police may tell people to do?"

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The guard gives an annoyed huff. "To arrest or detain a person, police must have a reasonable belief that they are involved with or have information about a crime. Police are not permitted under any circumstances to order you to commit crimes, to harm yourself or others, or to perform magic. Barring a clear and present danger or reasonable suspicion of a crime, they are not allowed to enter private property unless invited, or to order others to leave their private property."

Steel is glancing nervously between Cam and the guard.
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"Okay, I can live with that." Sign.

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"I should hope so," the guard mutters. "Wait... You filled out the form incorrectly. You're a shaper, right?"

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Steel has half a second of Cam blinking politely to step in before he has to make something up.

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"It's a new technique. By expanding the muscles and skeletal structure of the upper body, non-shapers can sometimes withstand the modifications necessary to grow wings. It has negative effects on the heart unless closely monitored, though."

"You'd know more than me," the guard shrugs. "Have a nice day, Steel. Remember to keep your shirt on, Cam."
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"Will do."

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After they're away from the guard, "I could have sworn I warned you. Wings make people assume you're a shaper. Shapers can withstand our method of body modification more easily than non-shapers."

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"Yes, you told me that. You didn't tell me it meant I'd have to pretend to be one. I can't produce proof of that on demand - can't see the stream, can't transmute things unless I happen to know enough about their chemistry to do it by making and then only in limited ways, etcetera. What about being a shaper helps with the add-ons, anyway?"

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"Keep in mind that I'm not a full doctor, I only took a half-load of med courses for three years. Our way of body-modification is a lot less finessed than yours. The going theory is that shapers unconsciously support their add-ons in ways that baseline humans can't. Shapers will grow capillaries in a new appendage all on their own, they generate their own skin and sweat glands, their new bones grow marrow without grafting, their minds more easily learn how to control new muscles, and so on. Non-shapers do none of these things, so it's all manually created, and it's too easy to miss something and end up with a defective body."

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"Huh. I don't see what about shaping should do that."

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"Me neither, but the evidence speaks for itself. Are you going to find a hotel? I'm not that keen about letting you sleep in my apartment, to be perfectly honest."

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"I don't have to sleep. Does the city completely go dead at night? I can just wander around, familiarize myself. Or find some nook to read in."

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"It definitely slows down at night. I'm heading to my office right now, to get some documents, and then we can head to the pump facility and see what you can do for it. Come to think of it, I don't feel like waiting for an elevator, and I have these shiny new wings..."

She takes a bit of a running start and flies up, landing in a park suspended halfway up between two towers, a few blocks ahead. "These wings are convenient as well as awesome."
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He follows her. "Aren't they just?"

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"Well I'm hungrier than usual, and they seem like they could get in the way sometimes, but yeah. Civil service building is this way."

The 5th floor of all these buildings is almost like an entire second layer of streets. Entrances to businesses, homes, workshops, offices, government buildings are all lined up along wide pathways that escape being 'streets' only be the absence of horse-or magic-drawn wagons.
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"I like this layered look. I bet Fairyland has cities like this. Hell can't organize well enough and Heaven does a cave network shtick and humans where I'm from can't fly."

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"I think the reason we're vertical like this is so that we end up with almost a cube or sphere of constructed bluestream. It doesn't degrade nearly as quickly when it's in the middle of more bluestream. I wonder if you'd like to see the urban farms later? They're very magic, compared to using fields and natural sunlight."

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"I mean, I won't be able to see the magic, but it could be instructive anyway, sure."

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"Later, though. Here's the office." She goes in, and explains to the receptionist, "I'm just going in and out, Lina. I found a foreign expert and we're gonna give him a tour of the pump building."

"No tea, then?"

"No, thanks." She shows Cam into an office, which is crowded with neatly labelled and organized boxes and folders and papers and maps, and starts gathering papers.
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"You know, if you can adequately specify the files you want I could just recreate them all, but maybe that would be more trouble than it's worth."
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"Probably more trouble than it's worth unless you put them on a computer and also teach me how to use it... Pumpjack diagram, water use statistics, the water main map... That's all I wanted." She carries a small stack of notebooks back out the front.

On the way out, the receptionist asks, "Did he do your new wings, boss? They're very fine work."

"He did, in fact. But I have to be on my way, sorry." Back into the air! This time she flies to the top of a building that takes up two entire blocks and manages to be taller than 90% of the rest of the city.
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"Now people have conflicting stories about whether I'm a shaper," remarks Cam. "Hopefully that doesn't bite me."

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"...Oops. Well, Lina isn't very gossipy at least. And they aren't supposed to make you use magic, you can lean on that if anyone confronts you about it."

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"Yes, I caught that."

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Fly, fly. Land on a roof. "This is actually one of the farms, we took over the top two floors and built the water infrastructure there." She goes in, revealing a warehouse-sized room filled with pipes and about fifty pumpjacks. Each pair has one bored-looking person sitting nearby and moves in sync. One set of jacks is offline, being inspected by someone in a red uniform.

"Behold, two-point-six million gallons per day of pumping capacity. The water gets squeezed through a sand filter and activated charcoal on the way up, and we change out the charcoal and re-activate it every two days. It sits in the tall tanks on the roofs, then drips down along mains embedded in walls and pathways to other buildings' roof tanks. The main sewage plant is outside the city walls, I can show you that later. What do you think?"
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"Not bad for working without electricity. I'm going to guess you don't have hot running water? How's the water pressure, is taking a shower here like getting rained on?"

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"We have hot water, heat is easy. But it's usually lukewarm or cold again by the time it gets to whoever's using it. Most showers aren't very strong, especially if the building's water tower isn't close to full."

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"Right, so I can definitely improve things. Where are you collecting the water to begin with?"

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"Some from the river in the canyon, but the city of Nel kept complaining that we drain the river too much, so I convinced Grind to pay for a drilling operation and now we get most of it from an aquifer about half a mile below ground. This was a couple years ago. The whole thing is chugging along without me, now."

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"Aquifers do not have infinite supply. I don't know how big yours is; do you?"

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"No, I do not. I just know it's there. I think we're the only city in the prefecture that collects from an aquifer, at least. Nel drains the river, Zalti pays for supply from the east in an aqueduct, and so on. How would you measure the aquifer, anyway?"

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"Ways and ways. If I knew how big it was I could refill it; if I try that blind I might pop the sucker. Will Nel mind if I dam the river as long as they get the same amount of total water directed back along the same channel by the time it gets to them? Collecting energy from falling water is one of the best sources of tame lightning. I can also do floating windcatchers and solar panels but you'd want lots of them and they have a little eyesore problem - like, I can do pretty solar panels but you are kind of already using your roofspace more than I'm accustomed to humans doing."

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"Nel wouldn't complain, probably, but whoever's upriver from us might. I'd have to look at some maps and do a flyover to tell if anyone's house would become a lake if you put down a dam."

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"Well, yeah, one does generally do a survey before these things. I know how."

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"And the dam would be to power the new pumps and new everything else you make here?"

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"You could get enough juice out of it to power other stuff too unless it's a really puny river. ...The hot running water thing will need to involve installing new plumbing systems in all the plumbed buildings though."

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"Many buildings already have hot water plumbing. They use separate tanks on their roofs, they just need to be made hot magically."

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"Oh, I may have misunderstood. Is there a separate thing at the faucet to solicit hot water, and it just doesn't work that well?"

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"In most buildings, at least, yes. The problem is the tanks that supply hot water don't keep themselves hot, they must be kept hot by someone physically visiting and magicking at them, which is moderately annoying."

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"Right, I can fix that, and insulate the pipes, and if that doesn't do it there can be smaller electrical tanks at more points throughout the building so that the water doesn't have to travel so far. Getting electricity from place to place involves wires. I don't have to gut a building to put wires in the walls because I'm a demon, although it will help if I can get enough access to see what I'm doing."

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"Well, there's ventilation ducts. Some buildings also have a central column that the main pipes run up and down."

She yawns. "Hm. It's getting late. I wanna show you the farm downstairs and then get some sleep."
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"Sure. What do you grow here?"

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"Mostly a cereal crop rotation. A cycle of corn, wheat, soy can be grown and harvested in ten months if we magically create the perfect growing conditions. Two floors are orchards. One floor grows smaller plots of fresh greens and other small plants on much more complicated cycles, some as short as a month."

She leads him down a stairwell. "This is the temperate orchard. We also have a tropical orchard, a few floors down." It's as bright as midday sun, and as warm and moist as a Mediterranean spring. There are lots of trees- Apple trees, pear trees, cherries, various nuts.

In between the large trees are a few smaller trees, plenty of bushes, and what looks like the occasional carrot, lettuce head, or potato. They make very efficient use of the farmspace. A few people are on hovery patrol routes through the farm, inspecting various plants. One person is picking blueberries with magic.
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"You know, I might be able to get you better higher-yield seeds and kinds of food you don't have, but I likely can't improve on the setup otherwise without spending a lot of time hanging out on farms personally. I'm very impressed."

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"It's good to hear that we're getting things right. There was a food crisis a couple of centuries ago. Growing food with magic has become an art form, since then."

She takes him on a quick tour through a few other floors. The tropical orchard is uncomfortably hot, and the cereal crop floors are boring in comparison.

"Good night, I suppose. You can find me in my office a couple hours after sunrise tomorrow."
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"Sleep well. I'll go familiarize myself with the city and read things."

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The city is substantially quieter and less busy at night. Someone somewhere is making enough light to make main parks and roads bright enough to navigate, but most buildings are completely dark.

In addition to the strongly interconnected paths above ground, there is a network of tunnels connecting cavern-like basements. These only go down a few floors at most. Police patrol the streets, but there is a more run-down 'bad part of town' that gets fewer and more cursory patrols.

A few restaurants and stores are still open. Most of the bars and nightclubs are, too. There are only a dozen in total, it's not really a huge city after all. It'll take only a little searching to find a quiet and relatively isolated nook to read, indoors or out, if he wants to do that.
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He peeps at a restaurant to see if they have a style of disposable cup he can copy so as not to stand out while drinking lots of coffee. He can always go with the more direct caffeination route if necessary, but he does like coffee.

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The only disposable cups anyone uses are made of a breadlike substance that doesn't seem to absorb liquids.

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What a peculiar substance. But it'll probably hold coffee, right? He makes a breadcup and fills it up and sips as he hunts down a nook.

Yay, a nook.

His computer can go inside a book cover. The glow is pretty faint around the edges and can just look like he's shaping a reading light or something.
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A few people passing by give his wings interested or curious looks, but nobody bothers him. After a couple of hours it starts raining.

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His computer is waterproof but this will make reading a "book" suspicious. He emerges from his nook to see if anyone here has an umbrella so he can just have an umbrella.

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Nobody visible from here has umbrellas. Mostly they are keeping to spots that happen to be semi-enclosed so that no rain blows on them.

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Dang. And he hasn't spotted any plastic either, which means no transparent poncho to tuck his "book" under. He makes a bag, with a strap that goes down between his wings comfortably and looks like innocent canvas on the outside. Stashes computer, its discreet case, and fake book cover. Finishes current cup of coffee, nibbles rim of breadcup. Goes back to wandering the streets, not much minding being rained on.

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The rim of the breadcup tastes like salty crackers.

Even more shops and restaurants are dark by now, and the lighting on some of the side streets is shutting off. Slightly chanty-sounding songs spill out of the bars. It turns out that one of the nightclubs does triple business as a brothel and a casino (they give him a job offer).

A few police patrols seem to pay extra attention to him. It's probably just the wings. Someone offers him a 'silver circle' to repair their magic stove. "If ya know how, of course. I just don't want to wait for the utility company to get to me."
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Cam declines both offers of employment. While he is a very pretty demon he does not think the line of work is for him in any quantity. For the stove: "I don't really specialize in kitchen equipment, sorry."

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"It was worth asking. Thanks anyway."



At some point, it stops raining. It's past midnight by then.
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Cam finds a place to sit, sits on it, and resumes surreptitious reading. When nobody's looking he dries out his hair and clothes with puffs of hot dry air.

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He can keep surreptitiously reading until morning.

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Cool.

When the sun's up he goes to Steel's office.
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There is a different receptionist this morning. "Hello sir, what business do you have with the Civil Service today?"

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"I have some business with Steel."

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"I'm sorry, sir, but she hasn't come in yet this morning. You can wait in the lobby if you like, or I can take a message for her."

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"I'll wait."

He waits. He reads. He brushes up on his electrician stuff.
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Steel comes in about an hour later. "You're already here, good. Let's go into my office and discuss that surveying plan."
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"Sure." In goes Cam, tail aswish.

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"I should probably introduce you to Grind before making any major changes. She's the big boss of civil services. Were you going to fly over the canyon and check for inhabitants?"

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"Inhabitants, structures, suspicious geological features that might not benefit from being underwater, yes."

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"Alright. What do you-"

"STEEL!" Someone shouts through the door, "I need you to tell me all about the stranger you've been showing around so I know exactly who or what to go after if he breaks something!"

"Ah. Perfect time to introduce you to my boss." She opens the door to reveal someone who might be completely non-descript compared to the rest of the population if not for the tattoo of a circular saw-blade on one cheek.

"He's right here, actually. Cam, meet Grind, the Opri Overall Civil Service Administrator. Grind, this is Cam. I'll let him choose how much to tell you. His trust is worth more than you pay me."

"Really? Well, at least you're honest about it. Cam. How do you like my city?"
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Cam blinks at the... tone of this interaction. "Uh, hi. I was really impressed with the farm I saw," he says. He also liked the vertical layout and the bread cups but maybe those are everywhere in the world.

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"She's always like that," Steel says, "Doesn't see the point of being polite. That's half of why I like her."

"Exactly so. You like the farms, huh? How about Steel's water pumps? The new lighting system that lets only half a dozen people light up the whole city's public spaces? What about our nice, wide roads and elevated parks. I'll have you know that Nel has a terrible messy layout."
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"I've never been there so I couldn't say."

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"So why are you here? What's got Steel so interested in you she gives a damn personal tour? You're not her boyfriend, I can tell that much."

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"I am not her boyfriend. Uh, your ostensible motivation was to know who to go after if I break something. I'm not planning to break anything and now you know who I am, why do you care so much about my opinions and personal life?"

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"Because Steel wants permission to have you do things to my city."

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"Yes. Non-breaking things."

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Steel starts, "He suggested building a-"

Grind holds up a hand. "When you have a specific, detailed plan written out, give me a copy. If I don't hate it, you can do it. Don't expect money from me unless it's a really great idea." And she walks out.
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"What a friendly person," remarks Cam.

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Shrug. "She gets things done."

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"It's probably going to look pretty weird if the detailed plan looks like 'Cam is going to donate a lot of wire he has, don't ask where he's keeping it, and install it in buildings, don't ask how he does it so fast'."

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"It would be a lot easier if you were willing to tell her that you have a new kind of magic. We can pretend it's more limited than it actually is, maybe. I don't think she's the kind of person to question strange magic systems. If you said you were doing it the the stream she'd have thousands of questions and demand to see the diagrams. But foreign magic? How does she know what it can and can't do?"

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"If you say so. There is separately a question of how high-tech I should make the dam and wiring and things. It's almost a linear tradeoff between features like efficiency and safety versus the ability to easily teach locals to maintain them. I won't be making anything with a manufacturing defect, I have no reason to use flimsy cheap materials, and the high-tech stuff wouldn't want upgrading or replacement nearly as quickly - but if something catches fire or someone goes around deliberately cutting cables you want to be able to patch it yourselves if you can't get ahold of me, I assume."

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"I had to train people for three months to use the pumpjacks and filters without constant supervision. Some training is definitely an option. Can you make things - modular? So if the power cable is cut or the primary whatsit breaks you can just pop in a new one. Then they can have a supply of spare parts."

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"Yes, for the wiring that works. I can color-code and standardize everything since I'm starting from scratch. It won't work as well for the dam, which is an enormous architectural thingummy."

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"We have people who know architecture and mechanics and water physics pretty well. Whatever technology that makes the electricity, not so much. I should keep learning Italian, maybe I can translate some useful books."

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"At its most basic, electricity is generated by shuffling magnets around. It's just convenient to make the water move the things that do the shuffling. I'm thinking I'll make a properly modern dam. Done to demonic engineering standards and in sufficiently robust materials, it should last for at least fifty years, which is enough time to get people who haven't even been born yet trained in how to patch the thing. If it breaks you'll need me, but that only becomes a serious problem if I make hundreds of similar installations and they're scattered on multiple continents."

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"That sounds like a plan to me. Time to make it more detailed?"

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"Sure. I hope there's a good place to dam it or this will have been a lot of wasted speculation and you'll have to make do with tidecatchers or windcatchers or solar panels."

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"We're nowhere near the ocean. Tidecatchers may be impractical, and also be in other cities' territory where they can do what they like to them. Is anything involved in the surveying other than flying over it and making maps, possibly with a telescope or other detecting things?"

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"I will have to estimate the capacity and speed of the river. Other than that, that's basically it."

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"I have speed and depth histories." They are in a box labelled RIVER DOCUMENTS. She gets them out and hands them over.

"I'd like to come along. Are you going to use a vehicle?"
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"Nah. I'd have to do something with it after."

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"Then I will fly with you and attempt to practice Italian, as long as you don't mind."

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"I don't mind," he replies magnanimously in Italian.

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Also in Italian, "I, uh, can have a computer? Read books, and not carry books."

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"Hmmmm," says Cam, "sure, let me just think." A few minutes later he makes a small black rectangle, which then lights up - "Put your thumb on it so it won't wake up if anyone else touches it, and then I think it should be straightforward from there - just poke whatever it looks like you want it to do or show you, and instead of turning pages you slide your finger from the bottom to the top of the screen and the text moves along with you."

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She tries it out. It's pretty intuitive, though all the labels are Italian. She opens a book-reading program, and then opens a book. "Thank you. Is it fine if I ask you 'what does this word mean' some?"

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"No problem."

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She puts the shiny new computer in a pocket, then knocks over a box with one of her wings while turning around. After hovering it back into place, she heads out the front door and flies. "This way to the river."

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Cam follows. He reads things on his computer once they're high up enough.

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Steel also reads things, once she gets the hang of flying and reading. She asks for the occasional translated word, but never needs the same word translated twice.

It takes about half an hour to reach the southernmost part of the river that is still in Opri's territory. Steel turns north after that.
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River. What an interesting river. Cam flies low enough to see if there's anything that shouldn't be underwater in the canyon.

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There's some grass, and shrubs, and trees, and small animals, and fish. A little ways up there is the overgrown ruins of what might have been a house once. Ten minutes after that there is a very grand-looking glass-and-steel suspension bridge connecting road-ends on either side of the canyon. There's some sort of track going up and down nearby, and a significantly less abandoned-looking building at the bottom.

"That's the old water station. They would literally fill huge tubs and levitate them from here to the city. I like my way much better."
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"They don't still use it?"

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"Someone might be squatting, but no, not this one. There's another station with real pumps at the top of the canyon a few more minutes up. That's where we get any river water we use these days."

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"Okay." Cam makes a note to chase out any squatters in the old water station. "Where's the source of this river?"

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"A series of springs forming tributaries in the highlands about two hundred mules north-east. Two cities draw from the springs, Lehr and Knip. Nobody else between Opri and the source draws from the river proper."

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"Okay. I'm gonna go up high and get a topology snapshot - don't follow me, I'll be making my own air when it gets thin but it's hard to do that for someone else without tripping them up - and run some programs, see where it'll naturally drain if the river rises and if I need to change that by dynamiting something, etcetera. Forty-five minutes tops."

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"I'll determine the presence or absence of our water station squatter, then fly circles around the bridge. See you in a bit."

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Cam goes up. He takes pictures and lets his computer assemble them into a topographical map and proposes to a different program that he could put a dam here or there or wherever and plugs in Steel's figures for the water volume. He finds where it's going to drain, overflies the area edge to edge to edge and finds nothing more than wildflowers, and then goes to catch up with Steel - for higher confidence in his software results he needs to know how much it rains around here and upstream, but he's almost ready.

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"There are no squatters in the old place. There were a few old files, but nothing important, I burned them. I'd say just let it flood. As to rainfall figures..." She digs through a notebook from her backpack. "Here we go. These are for the local area. Unfortunately I don't have any for prefecture 6, where the springs are."

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"Would you expect it to be more than..." He plugs in the figures and his computer spits out results. "...fifteen percent greater per year or thirty in any given month?"

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"Probably not... We both get the same weather patterns for the most part, there's no really major geography between here and there to change it up."

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"All right, so, probably safe, but we could check, how hard would it be to check?"

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"Fly there, bribe someone to show us the records? Or try to appear their records? You can appear things with the author, right?"

She starts naming people who might plausibly have written or compiled rainfall statistics.
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"Author and title - is there a standardized title system for rainfall records?"

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"In Opri, yes, but not between different cities. It's possible they're in your computer- I believe you appeared it with the entire Senatorial library, including the archives."

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"Oh, yeah, good point. Should be all done processing the character sets after it had overnight to do it..." He searches the library archive for the relevant rainfall stats.

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It's a bit of pain. The relevant information is in no less than nine different documents. But it turns out that the recorded rainfall in Lehr and Knip and surrounding areas is pretty much the same as in Opri.

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"Okay, cool, we're well within tolerances. We could notify Nel as a courtesy, or I could just sit nearby and add water past the dam while it's filling up the canyon so they don't experience any interruption in supply, what do you think?"

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"The latter. If you warn or apologize they will feel entitled to reparations and be annoying. If they never notice a problem at all they will not."

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"All right. Anything else to investigate before I get started?"

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"Yes. Where will you install the wire that goes between the dam and the city? What else is electricity good for than water pumping and heating? Will the things be dangerous by themselves? If tampered with? Whose property will it be?"

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"Electricity is good for light, and moving stuff like elevators and kitchen appliances, and once you've all got used to it being everywhere you can attach all kinds of stuff to it - the computers need electricity, they just have some of it stored. I'm gonna make a big insulated wire with a plug on the end in the city - and I'm gonna give it a remote receiver so I can fiddle with its output from miles away - but I'm not gonna turn the turbines on and make it actually start generating anything until I have something for it to power, so there won't be any current. Once there's current, if someone gets through the insulation that's dangerous, but I'll make it real thick and bury most of it in earth and grass so it's not an attractive nuisance. The dam and its output are mine leased at the most generous possible terms to the city of Opri, so I can pay off anyone who decides to be obnoxious without having to counterfeit too much or find specific material goods they individually want; and Opri can buy it off me if they like, and if they really piss me off my lease terms will get less generous."

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"Sounds good. You owning the thing will help reduce the amount of obnoxiousness you face, at least once you demonstrate its usefulness."

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"Nobody claims to own this canyon or that field over there or anything, right?"

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"If they do, they aren't using them for anything. Any complaints won't be very enforceable."

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"Cool."

And Cam lands where his computer suggested a dam could go, and then, starting under the river but quickly growing to the height of the canyon:

a dam appears, seamless with the stone.

(And water, downstream of the dam, at the flow rate he is currently depriving Nel of receiving in the ordinary manner.)
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"It's one thing to see a shirt or gadget appear from nothingness... You could build mountains. You could build moons. I'm starting to wish I was a demon instead of a shaper."

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"I could build stars!" says Cam cheerfully, stepping onto his new dam, wings spread and tail twitching for balance. "I haven't personally but it's been done. Shaping is great too, don't get me wrong, and I spent years on my engineering curriculum - and these software tools I used to help aren't parlor tricks either, just being a demon won't get you casual hydroelectric generators just like that. But yes demons are super."

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"Can you redo the pipes to the new water level and install electricity in our pumping plant a little ways upriver? Having something useful actively using the power will be more convincing. And it won't count as doing things to the city in Grind's head- This is the countryside, not the city."

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"Sure, I'll make a separate cable for it." He takes off; as he flies, a cable appears along the edge of the canyon, still filling up. When they arrive at the plant, he inspects what they've got and then says, "It'd be easier to torch the whole building and replace it."

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"Well, let me clear out the workers first. I'll tell a few of them to come back tomorrow morning ready for lessons on how to use another new set of equipment, and tell the rest they can have a day or two off."

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"Sure."

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So she goes and does that. Some people leave the building and fly to the road and then towards Opri.

Steel doesn't quite ask when she says, "I bet you can make better explosives than me."
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"I could, but I can also do this."

He puts a thick sphere of ice around the entire structure to keep it contained. It's clear enough for her to see the entire building disintegrate into roughly one-cubic-inch pieces and collapse in a heap thereof inside the ice. Then a ramp of more ice grows under the sphere and it rolls away from the canyon, pile of bits in it. The ice melts, apparently spontaneously, and then the pile of stuff catches fire.
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"Are you having fun toying with the laws of physics? And can you attempt to put rooms and corridors in roughly the same place they were before? We can reuse streambuilt paths to move around with, even if you're going to handle heat and light and pumping with electricity."

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"Would there be a floorplan you'd want me to follow?"

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"Nevermind on the paths thing, I'll defer to your floorplan. We can always redo them and you know more about how this stuff works than me. We'll want about a million gallons per day capacity, which we probably won't use all of, a few offices, and classrooms to give lessons about all this fancy new technology in, and the actual pumps and valves and pipe hookups."

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"I'm gonna give you twice that and just not turn on half of the intake for now in case, oh, being the first wired city anywhere causes you to suddenly double in size or something." He pulls out his computer and designs the place - it takes about twenty minutes - and then it comes into existence, hooked up to the same outflow as the original, already on. "This won't require as much staff as the original - uh, is that a problem, are they going to be unhappily unemployed?"

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"They're civil service workers. Most people choose to work in the civil service for a few years to pay their debt to the city's public services. The alternative to the civil service is a rather severe tax. I think I'll arrange for other sections to take them. In particular the roads-and-lifts division always wants more shapers."

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"Cool. So this... can basically run unmanned except when you want to step the intake up and down or if something breaks, which, like the dam, should take at least fifty years."

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"Can you identify some books aimed at electricity and engineering? I would like very much to understand exactly what these places are doing."

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"Um... Start with 'Engineering for Summoners', but ask me when you don't understand stuff."

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"I'll read that later, then. I'm thinking about how to control this place... We'll have to set up a signal tower or send runners so the city's tanks don't overfill if we turn it up too high. Or maybe just build spillways."

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"Oh, it can be controlled remotely, you just need a person doing it. And it's button pressing."

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"...How, exactly, is that done?"

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"On your phone poke the button that looks like a stylized house - box with a triangle on top - to get out of your library, then poke the water droplet."

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"No, I mean... This thing can communicate at a distance?"

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"Yes. That's actually the function it's named after, although after a while they did enough different things that plenty of people never use theirs to talk to other phones. Right now it can only talk to the water pump and the range isn't great, I'll need to put in some satellites to get good coverage, but from here to Opri it'll be fine all by itself as long as you aren't underground or behind a lead wall or something."

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"Communication is yet another thing you can do much more effectively than us. We are limited to physical mail, couriers, or for particularly important messages, coded sequences of light shined from one tower to the next and then the next until it reaches its destination and is decoded. Can you see yourself selling electric mail delivery?"

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"Sure, once the place is wired up and you can charge the things. Modern battery life is great but it won't last forever all by itself. Maybe you could get along with shared induction chargers in public places while the change rolls out to individual residences."

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"Conveniently enough for that idea, public places are where Grind and company have the most influence. Speaking of Grind, do you want to write up some summaries for her while I read Engineering for Summoners?"

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"You'd know better than I what'll go over well."

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"Don't lie or embellish about the new stuff's capabilities. She'll like concise descriptions of what the things you can make are, what they can do, any drawbacks or limitations they have stated up front, how they are not particularly dangerous unless mistreated. A description of how you can make things with whatever arbitrary limits you want to make up to discourage immediate attempted exploitation of you. Repetition of the very generous lease terms. Emphasize how great the city will be with all this new stuff, but don't go overboard with the rhetoric."

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"All right." Cam pulls out his computer and writes up dumbed-down technical specs for the dam and the water pump. They require no routine maintenance; absent deliberate sabotage, severe earthquake, or similar magnitude of destructive force, they won't even need non-routine maintenance for about fifty years. Anyone who is not really stupidly determined to tamper with the things will find them harmless. They will produce, at peak capacity, a (comprehensible) volume of water and an (incomprehensible) amount of electricity. The terms under which their use is offered to Opri boils down to "no upfront fee, water's free, electricity's very very cheap, modest installation charges for things that use the electricity and any of Cam's time spent on teaching other people about it, and all of these prices are subject to change at any time depending on what Cam's doing with his valuable time and how friendly he is feeling towards Opri's representatives that day".

He describes his ability to make things as a non-transferable form of magic. He lists the real limits that will make sense in context (things cannot appear in motion, he can't appear things he knows nothing about) and asserts that he can't make anything complicated without design input into it (that should stop them from trying to sneak anything past him he doesn't like).

He lists some things electricity can do. With appropriate infrastructure - unmanned, low- to zero-maintenance, nonexpert-controllable light, heat, transport, communication and computing technology, household appliances, industrial processing - he stops short of talking about electric string instruments. Just won't have the right impact without a demo.

He shows it to Steel in its draft form on his computer screen. "How's this look?"
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"Very impressive. If she believes you at all, which she almost certainly will after a tour of the new water plant, she'll be all over it. This will probably end up turning the civil service on its head, since electricity will take over something like half of what we do. But she's not the type to shy away from positive changes just because they're new and scary."

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"Well, that's good."

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"Shall we head back to town, then?"

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"Yep. I'll make the main cable from the dam as we go."

Up into the air he goes, and the cable, hidden by appropriately hidey layers of stuff and insulation, comes into existence below.
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Steel follows, a bit slowly. "I'm going to need a nice big lunch. Flying burns calories like nothing else. And hey, it's probably a good idea to stop the cable about half a mile of the city walls, at least for now. Kell would make a stink if you encroached on the defenses built into the stream without his permission."

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"All right. I can leave the rest of it coiled up or just leave the end unfinished or put some sort of cap on it, I guess."

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"Sorry I didn't warn you sooner." Fly, fly, back to reading her intro to engineering book. The relatively little math involved in this introductory book is not that tricky, especially since thermo-kinetics involves a lot of math already. Calculus is confusing, though.

And then they are at the city. "We can fly in without annoying anyone, this time, you're registered properly." She navigates to the civil services building.
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Steel goes in and knocks on Grind's office door.

Yelled from within, "What?"

"I've got that detailed plan you wanted."

"Okay, come in." Steel opens the door to reveal a much larger office with a wide glass window and a desk that almost looks grown from the wood floor. "Welcome back, Cam. Let's see the goods."
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Just for show, he makes the writing when his hand is already halfway to her.
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She glances sharply up at him when he does this and reads through the whole thing extremely quickly.

"I would have called it a pack of lies if you didn't do it right in front of me. That said, a tour is in order. I can cancel my meeting with Vine for this." With immense sarcasm, "O kind sir who will quickly become absurdly rich, do please show me the source of your electric power."
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"You want to see the dam? I can show you a diagram if you'd rather not go all the way there."

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"I was being sarcastic. This looks extremely good, but we have a saying 'The shortcut to the top of the mountain always conceals a trap' so I want to see the pumping station and the dam in action, in person."

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"If you like. Do you fly? Is there flying pattern laid out there, I wouldn't know?"

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Steel answers, "Yes she can fly, no the flightstream doesn't go all the way to the dam. There's a road that goes most of the way, but stops a mile or two short. It's a lot faster to show you the new pumping plant?"

"Pumping plant it is." Grind gets up and marches out of the office, barking at the secretary along the way, "Tell Vine something came up! Reschedule for tomorrow, and I don't care how upset about it he is."

Steel leads her out of the city on shaper-accessible paths, then down the mainway towards that bridge. "There it is."

Once inside, she asks Steel, "You understand what the hell all this stuff is doing, right?"

"It's using electricity to pump water. It's a hell of a lot cheaper at the rate he's willing to lease it to Opri than shapers manning pumpjacks. You gave me control over the water district, I will remind you. And I'm reading some books on how exactly it all works, he may be willing to give you copies as well."

"You're a sarcastic uppity valuable district manager, you are. Alright. How about one of those books?" This is directed at Cam.
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"The books are not in your language, and it would take a long time to teach enough of same to my computer that I could translate them. Steel's working in Italian, which she's started learning and taken to pretty well."

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"Will you say boo if she distributes translated versions of your books? Intellectual property law is a bitch."

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"I'll probably translate some sooner or later. First I want to get the city wired, then we can teach people about how it all works."

Grind asks, "I'm guessing you won't need the twenty guys you sent back early today?"

"Nope. And soon the entire water district will be pipe-maintenance only, Cam said he'd redo the aquifer pumps too. And then there's the light and elevators."

"We'll want training on all this new stuff sooner or later, Steel. Consider it part of your job."

Steel gives a polite little bow. Grind snorts. "Cam, to put the cable through the wall you'll need to deal with Kell. Brace yourself for scheming."
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"Scheming. Oh no. Is it the sort of scheming I can wave away with bribery and wit?"

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"Bribery is more likely to work than wit. Threats, perhaps, too. Managing the water is Steel's job, but when it comes time to do elevators or lights I'll want maps and layouts prepared. Steel, write up a summary of the elevators' and lights' abilities and limitations by end of day tomorrow so I can make plans. Cam, on behalf of the city of Opri I accept the lease conditions. I'll have you a down payment by sunset."

She walks out of the building and flies back towards Opri.

"I know where to find Kell," Steel mentions.
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"Should we go find him or wait for him to find us?" wonders Cam.

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"I strongly suspect he'll be waiting at the gate and attempt to fine you for claiming to have no magic."

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"Ha. All right. ...How illegal is counterfeiting around here, just out of curiosity?"

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"Money's value comes from the metal. If you have gold, it's as good as any other gold. The stamped coins are just for convenient standard measurements. If you tried to pass off gold-plated copper as pure gold that would get you in trouble, but our economy did not expect conjuring."

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"All right. I might have some fun with him, then, we'll see."

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"I suppose poking the cat is safe if you're a bear." She starts flying to the city.

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When they get to the city, someone Steel identifies as Kell is in fact waiting for them. With a small army of uniformed guards surrounding him.

As they approach, "Cam! I've heard lots of interesting rumors about you. Grind tells me you want to bring dangerous, untested machines into the city... But let's talk about that in a moment. It seems you filled out your visitor form incorrectly! You indicated that you had no magic. Now, granted, the form didn't have a field for whatever kind of magic you have. With that in mind, I'll waive most of the refiling fee, reducing it to three silver circles." (This is actually a fairly small amount, equivalent to a few days in a cheap hotel)
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"The form wanted to know if I was a shaper. I'm not. You need to redesign them if you want to catch people like me."

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"Unfortunately the reality here is that the form was still inaccurately filled out. Not having complete information about the people visiting our city poses a significant security risk. We don't register piano players, but you should have disclosed an unusual ability with such a large potential for disruption."

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"You also didn't ask if I know martial arts, brought weapons, know how to pick locks, carry infectious disease, sympathize with your political enemies, or descend from an ancestor who was cursed with generations of bad luck that brings earthquakes wherever I go. Those are all 'nos', by the way. There wasn't a space on the form for 'miscellaneous potential hazard'."

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"We'll be correcting that. But we still need to re-file your paperwork, send a courier with a correction and formal apology to the senate, and deal with low-level unrest caused by strange rumors. Your unusualness is a burden on Opri Security Group. There must be recompense. And I'm given to understand that a little silver is hardly outside of your ability."

The way he talks about it, you might almost think he wants a symbolic submission to his authority more than the actual money.
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"It's true. I could make a little silver. Or I could fly away and stop bothering you, since I'm such a disruption. I mean, this would have an opportunity cost of much more than three silver, but it sounds like I'm a headache to you personally, and I can't imagine why anyone would wish a headache on you."

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"Fine, forget the fine. I get it, you're a special snowflake with unheard-of powers. You're poking fun at me, at authority, because you don't like how things are run here. But the point is that you need to follow procedure. You need to cooperate not make unnecessary splashes or the Senate will come and step on us all."

"Even if you'll survive that, Opri and its citizens might not. It's a risk. If you're going to keep throwing new technology at Opri- Technology, I remind you, that nobody here but you and maybe Steel has any familiarity with. The Opri City Council had an emergency meeting this morning, and we want some conditions to ensure Opri's welfare even if you attract a reactionary army."
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"Do you have something in mind?"

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"A veto power, your sincere consideration of projects that the Opri City Council requests, guarantees that you will give the Senate samples of or information about anything you give Opri if they request it, proper documentation of all products and services, permission to dismantle or destroy the things you make with one week's notice if they interfere with city operations, thorough education on the technology, any of your industries or sales that occur in Opri space being subject to a 24% gross income tax, and a public statement that Opri is not responsible for any criminal or aggressive actions you take."

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"I can do some of that. I will sincerely consider suggested projects, I can print out design schematics for anything I make, if you want to wreck your infrastructure I'll probably stop making you new infrastructure but I won't make a huge fuss about it, there is a language and assumed technology barrier in all educational materials I could produce and my personal time is valuable but I'm not opposed to teaching you guys to maintain or manufacture the shiny toys, and I'll happily state that Opri is not making me do anything criminal or aggressive unless you in fact come up with some way to make me do things that are one of those, which is unlikely. Is that income tax standard?"

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"The removal clause is aimed at something like: If you decide to be amusing and made a gigantic sculpture in the middle of the street, we are not responsible for breaking it to get it out of the way. The usual industry and commercial income tax is 20%. You are classified as a high-risk industry, so the tax is higher."

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"High-risk? What kind of risk? To whom?"

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"High risk to Opri, because the Senate very much does not like new things and is likely to invade us unless you very kindly also gift them similar things to what you give us. If you are determined to go up against the Senate, you're going to have to do it someplace other than Opri."

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"I haven't met the Senate. Maybe they're very nice people and I want to give them stuff. The invading people for having received presents doesn't sound like it, of course. If you'd rather not take the risk I could just go make an island in whatever passes for international waters around here and colonize it and take immigrants, the idea has substantial appeal."

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"I'm starting to think that might be best," Steel says. "Telra is relatively stable because it resists change so stubbornly, but that very resistance to change has created deep issues over the last three centuries."

Kell adds, "You know what, she's right. New technology is like a firework: Best observed from a distance."
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"All right. I can disconnect the dam cable, then. You can keep the water station or I can put one like what you had before back, up to you."

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"That's up to Grind. I'll ask her lat..."

"Surprise!" Grind falls from the top of the wall and lands hard, right in front of Kell. "I knew you held a city council meeting without me again! You'll pay for that, you will. Cam, we'll keep the dam and water station if you don't mind, but we'll be giving it to the Senate if they ask for it. Acceptable?"
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"...Are you planning to pick them up and move them?"

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"I mean ceding territory to their control, territory that we only marginally have authority on anyway."

"You can't just decide that on your own-"

"Fair point, Kelly. Assemble the city council and we'll have a vote. Keep the shiny new thing that will cost almost nothing to run and get something like 40 gold back from the civil service budget, and have something to give to the Senate if they poke their noses around here looking for it? Or neither of those things."

"We'll still need to vote." Kell rubs his head. "I need some aspirin. Er, Cam? Would you mind coming back this evening?"
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"I don't have anywhere else to be. I mean, even if I go make an island it won't take that long unless all these various governments have the sea claimed for quite a long way past the coast."

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"Telra doesn't claim anywhere there aren't people," Steel clarifies. "It's a federation. They bring existing populations under their control to expand, they don't colonize by themselves."

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"Nothing in place to govern, say, fishing rights?"

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"Individual cities manage those within their individual territories. Which leads to ecological problems, as you were likely about to guess."

Kell and Grind have disappeared into the city, along with Kell's contingent of guards.
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"What I'm asking is how far past the coast do those rights extend. I don't want to park my island in somebody's salmon farm."

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"Thirty miles will be plenty of distance. Are you going to make an island or attempt to find one?"

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"If I find a really nice one it may tempt me, but I was thinking make. I can start it out with nifty subterranean tunnels and no verminous creatures and wiggly coastline for waterfront real estate."

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"I'm not sure waterfront real estate will be as attractive here as in your home. Nice inner city apartments near parks and good clinics and expensive shops are generally where tenant bidding wars happen."

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"Huh. Why don't people like the waterfront? I mean, proximity to stuff is also important, but stuff can get built anywhere."

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"I think maybe close proximity to stuff matters more here. You seem to have vehicles like that spaceship, I bet you have smaller ones for the ground too. We don't, except insofar as flying or levitated carriages that bus people between cities count."

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"Oh, yeah, there will totally be a subway. I will have the best subway on my island."

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"Good for you. I'm going to write up as much as I can about the dam in Tlane for Kell, in case they want to keep it. You can do whatever you like until this evening, I suppose?"

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"I don't think I will build an island today. I don't have a complete design yet. I will wander Opri and design an island."

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"I hope it will be a practical and well-thought-out island. By now your precedent practically demands it."

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"The most practical and well-thought-out. And made during lowest tide so the displaced water doesn't inconvenience anyone before it has time to spread out."

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"Right. You should swing by the civil service place again sometime after sunset. I bet they'll have decided by then."

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"Sure."

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The city continues to be beautiful.



Sunset comes and goes in due time.
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And Cam goes to the office.

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Kell and Grind are waiting out front, looking tired. Kell bites out, "We've decided we'd like to keep the dam, as long as you still don't mind."

Grind interjects, "Good luck, Cam. You've got attitude, so it'd be boring to see ya fail."
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"I made the dam for you guys to use," says Cam, tail swishing through the air. "I don't mind."

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They nod and shake hands, official business concluded.

Steel comes out of the office with a backpack. "I'd like to come with you and see your new island, and recruit immigrants after that. All my personal effects are right here."
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"Sure. The island won't be that interesting to look at to start with, though. I'd want to talk to people who wanted to live on it before I made anything on it besides a house for myself and basic infrastructure stuff.

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"You'll have more luck finding immigrants among non-shapers. They are underprivileged and will not lament the lack of established bluestream."

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"Well, nothing I make will require shaping to use, which I imagine would also help. I'd find this city kind of uninviting if I couldn't fly."

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"That's why there are elevators, you see."

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"I didn't say unusable, I said uninviting."

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Shrug. "Shall we fly to your hidden shuttle?"

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"Sounds like a plan."

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So they fly. It takes a few hours, and it drizzles along the way.

The shuttle is undisturbed. Steel asks, "Can I get a quick drying?"
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She is fluffed with hot dry air.

When the shuttle is unburied, Cam rinses it off, and then hops in.
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Steel follows. "I might want one of these. It would be awfully convenient in some ways, I think."

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"The shuttle? They're a little harder to pilot than I'm making it look, if you want to do anything more than point-to-point, but maybe that'd do it for you. I could make something less complicated that would handle that though."

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"Point to point would do it. For visiting cities and advertising your shiny new island. We might want regular trips to the various existing places and back, if we find any cooperative municipalities."

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"I was thinking bridge with an automatic train."

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"Bridges can be destroyed by someone sufficiently determined, and cannot reroute as easily. If you find a relatively unclaimed spot and claim the far side it might work, though."

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"What is the state of the bridge-destroying art?"

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"Pyre-fire burns hot enough to melt most metals. Sugar-oxygen bombs are unstable but powerful. You can make a nick and repeatedly freeze and melt water inside it to force something apart. If they were really determined they would start flinging boulders the size of buildings and slugs of metal the size of people at it."

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"Okay," shrugs Cam, "I'll get exotic with my bridge materials and be ready to make ferries if someone gets past them."

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"If you think that'll take care of it. Time to fly over the sea looking for convenient islands?"

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"After I designed one? It'd have to be a hell of a natural island to grab me."

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The sea is past several hundred miles of land.



There are no amazing, perfectly positioned natural islands.
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Well, now there is an amazing, perfectly positioned unnatural island.

Cam lands on it; the land meets the ship just as much as the ship meets the land.
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"The things you can do continue to be slightly unnerving. I'm tempted to never draw circles again, in case I get someone like Durant."

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"Durant?" Cam hops out of his ship.

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"He's the richest man in Opri, thanks to his buddy-buddy relationship with Kell, tax exemptions, protection rackets, and monopolies on certain services."

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"I mean, that would be an unfortunate daeva to summon, but the ones you'd really have to worry about would be more overtly destructive than - I mean, accumulating capital is not a thing in Hell or Heaven, it's probably a thing in Fairyland but then you'd just have a fairy participating in your economy, that's not such a disaster."

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"So the ones to avoid are less greedy authoritarian, more serial killer? Fair enough."

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"I mean, if you get a greedy demon, they don't even take summons. Why would they? They can make an enormous pile of gold and jewels and sleep on it like a dragon if they want without having to bother you. The time to worry is if they want to hurt people."

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"Do you already have the infrastructure of this place appeared? Water, electricity, sewage, the subway - underground trains, I assume?"

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"I have space for it. It won't all be hooked up until there's somewhere for it to go."

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"I get a residence, yes? I think I'd prefer to live at the top of a tall building. But leaving everything below me empty until you decide what should go there seems a bit odd."

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"I didn't realize you wanted to move in. I can put in an apartment building, sure. Any other preferences besides 'tall'?"

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"At least a bedroom, bathroom, kitchen, workshop, and two unused rooms. Open floor plan. Include all your technological conveniences even if I don't know how to use them yet."

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"Sure." Cam pulls out his computer and fiddles with floor plans. It's really quite unclear by looking how he does any of it; he doesn't seem to have to poke things like Steel has to poke her phone. And then, overlooking the water on the high end of the gently sloped island, is an enormous glassy apartment building with scallopped balconies on every floor, asymmetrical, plants all up and down the sloped side between the columns of windows. "Penthouse is yours. Your phone will open the door, proximity-like."

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"That is an impressive-looking building."

"...Say, how are you controlling your computer? Does it track your eyes, subtle finger gestures, is there something directly in your head?"
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"There is something directly in my head. It's a demon interface model, it's possible you would survive having one implanted and be able to use it afterwards but it'd be dangerous."

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"I'll pass, then." She starts flying towards the apartment building.

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"Do you want me to show you around or leave you to settle in?" he calls after her.

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"I'm sure I'll figure it out! I'll find you in an hour or so, we can talk about finding immigrants for you."

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"Sure."

Cam gives himself a freestanding house near the landing place for his shuttle. He goes into it and makes himself some food and some coffee and a change of clothes - including a shirt, since he expects to be in Opri in the future - and adds the apartment building to his computer's map of the island and does some notebooking.
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Steel is back in something like an hour and a half, in different clothes. "The electric stove was confusing, but luckily I realized what it was doing in time to avoid setting something on fire."
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"Welcome to my humble abode. Did everything else make sense or non-dangerously present its nonsense? I'll probably want to hire somebody to give new residents tours of their appliances."

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"Apart from the coldboxes, many of the other kitchen things are confusing. I just stopped touching them after the stove. I figured out the air conditioning and heating controls. The plumbing was familiar enough. I'm not sure where all the light-switches are yet."

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"Lightswitches are generally near doors or the lights that they control."

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"My point is, guided tours to show how to use the appliances, and perhaps written summaries, would be helpful."

She starts describing other things potential immigrants are likely to want. "Free stuff" is at the top of the list.
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"It's easier if they want free stuff I can make in large standardized batches than if they want it all custom. Although it's not much harder to make a heap of things in different colors so they can pick if they want blue or red or whatever."

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"Large batches of near-identical clothes and food and fancy gadgets will suffice to begin with, I think. People tend to make stuff when they live here. Though I more meant along the lines of 'no rent or taxes' than 'gifts for everyone'."

"I think we can just go around publicly yelling about free stuff in the less well-off parts of cities, and we'll get takers. We probably want to get a doctor in the first few batches of people. You said you have medical knowledge, and you can probably teach the doctor new things, but people are used to being magically healed of minor cuts and such."
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"I can magically heal cuts but I probably shouldn't be doing all the medicine for the entire island if there's more than a handful of people on it, yeah. I can outfit the doctor with cool medical gadgets and drugs."

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"Shall we head back to Opri or maybe Nel? People in Opri and surrounding areas will be less likely to think it's a hoax, since most of them will have heard of the dam."

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"Opri's fine." To the shuttle! He could hundreds of miles by wing, but why would he?

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Certainly not. Steel follows.

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And here is the mainland (Cam scopes out good bridge-end locations for a minute on the way) and then here is Opri.

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Steel suggests they land near the dam and fly the rest of the way.

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"How come?"

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"There aren't any good landing spots in Opri, and if it's a good distance away there's less chance someone will decide to mess with the shuttle."

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"Fair enough."

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Steel flies to Opri and says hi to the guards, who glance at Cam slightly nervously.

She goes to several former employees' homes, particularly the non-shapers. The first few people don't want to move, but then she finds a couple who worry about having two jobs and a preschooler and a baby. They want a demonstration of the free conjured food.
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Cam makes everybody including the preschooler ice cream.

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The preschooler squeals in delight! The parents are startled.

"So it's true... We appreciate your offer very much, but Mary needs to socialize with other children. I think we'll want to move to your island if you can find someone else with a child about her age, but not if it's completely empty apart from you and her."

"I'll make a list of people who want to move in only on certain conditions," Steel says, "We'll let you know if it fills up."

And they go back to canvassing previous employees. The next one who seems interested is homeless and jobless.
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Well, now they are not homeless anymore.

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Steel wonders, "Are we going to take him there right now, or keep asking around first?"

"I don't mind waiting 'till sunset or something if you make me a nice hot bowl of soup for the meanwhile," not-homeless guy reports.
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Here's a bowl of soup. The bowl is that bread stuff. The soup is potato chowder. "The shuttle isn't that big - I can make a bigger one, but I don't want to keep accumulating shuttles. You wanted something for point-to-point, right, Steel? You want it passenger-ferry-sized?"

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Steel digs out a spoon from her backpack and hands it to the guy.

"Small passenger ferry, if you don't mind. Maybe 40 or 60 people's worth. Removable or folding seats so it can transport things as well, if possible. Onboard kitchen?"
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"What do you need a kitchen for?"

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"If I'm going places with it and you're not there, you can't appear food for me."

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"Yeah, all right. I guess a mid model Earthbus would probably do if I swap out the seats and upgrade the autopilot so you don't plow into a mountain. All right, when we're out of the city I'll make you one of those."

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"Thank you in advance. I'll want to learn how to pilot it properly eventually, probably."

Back to asking people if they'd like free rent and food!



At the end of the day, there are eighteen people who want to move in, Five are homeless, three don't like having a criminal record in Opri, there are three families (including the first one) who would really like that free stuff, and one doctor who is very excited at the prospect of advanced medical knowledge.
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Cam gives the doctor an International Pictorial Physician's Assistant Guide, which should give her a loose idea of what state-of-the-art drugs, equipment, and delivery systems look like without requiring fluency in any languages she doesn't know. He distributes more soup and ice cream. And then everybody is led out of the city and Steel receives a snazzy silver Earthbus with modular seating, a kitchenette, and an autopilot which can do everything except choose her heading.

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One of the people who want to immigrate to Cam's as-yet-unnamed new city was in Opri's City Planning Committee. He has some ideas about architecture he would like to discuss with Cam.

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He has reports and sketches and binders full of notes on Opri's layout.

Mostly he wants to ensure that new buildings and parks and shopping districts and farms and workshop zones will be laid out in a sensible manner and not 'wherever Cam feels like it.'
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"...If you object to living in a place that is significantly governed by whim, maybe we should turn around and put you back. But I have no desire to put things in places that make them inconvenient or give them disagreeable neighbors."

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"I'm not going to demand the city be perfectly symmetrical or anything like that, I was mostly worried about peoples' location relative to important services. I assume I can leave if I find it not to my liking? If not, I'll stay here."

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"I'm not going to imprison you. There'll be a bridge, you can leave whenever you like."

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"Would you mind suggestions about the placement of various things?"

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"Only if they become annoying in frequency or content."

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"I'll try not to do that. Here's a map of Opri as of four months ago. This is a general suggestion of the kind of architecture and city layout people from central Telra expect from their cities. And thank you." He hands over the map and joins the group boarding the Earthbus.

Steel says, "You're probably going to go get your shuttle, so I'll just follow it in the Earthbus when it takes off."
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"Sounds like a plan."

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The bus lands and people file out.

Two families and ten individuals want apartments. One family and two people each want little beach-houses. The doctor wants a clinic built for him, and one of the families suggests they could run a 'shop' that collects requests for things and distributes the created things as required so Cam doesn't need to bother with the busywork.
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There is plenty of apartment in the apartment building Steel lives in to go around. Cam can do cute little beach houses, inspired by local architecture but with full complements of gadgetry (with signs) and in cheerful colors and summoning-age materials. The clinic takes some consultation of his notes to fully outfit; he puts it convenient to the apartment building. And he puts in the bridge, and puts the request-collection shop near the bridge, and tells this family he's willing to give them a try even though he doesn't know much about them personally, but if he doesn't like how they do their job he will go back to taking his own requests or try automating it somehow - customer service can be terrible but just because they are volunteers does not mean they can snap at people or anything.

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The family nods and agrees. "I think we'll deliver, at first. What would be a convenient way to contact you?"

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"Ideally you'd send me computer messages. I don't have anything set up to do voice recognition in this language and I won't for a while, but there's a way to write messages by pushing buttons with letters on them, and then I can show you how to send the complete message to me. If that's annoying I can handle the voice recognition part sooner rather than later and take un-textified voice recordings, though - typing's a useful skill but it takes a learning curve to be good at it."

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"I know Henta," the mother volunteers, "If you make it so I can press buttons with their alphabet on them, that will work."

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"I'm not really fluent in Henta. ...I could probably make character recognition work in a short while. If you write with a particular pen on a particular surface. Yeah, let's go with that." He fiddles with his computer for a moment, then snaps his fingers and there is a surface and a pen in the shop. "Write whatever you want to send to me on the blue area, it'll slide the characters up and out of your way as you run out of room, tap the green thing on the right to send. Sound easy enough?"

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She tries it out, writing the names of various objects on it. "This will work, thank you. But how can I erase a mistake?"

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"Poke the characters you want to erase with the other end of the pen."

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She does that to verify that it works.

"This is a very interesting... Thing. I'll try to collect nice big batches for you. I'll start with some things I expect people to want, since you're already here..." She names about two dozen items, including things such as '100 bars of soap' '40 sets of shaving razors' and 'a dozen 20 pound sacks of flour'.
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"Oh, about a third of the way up on the apartment building is a residential warehouse thing stocked with reasonable quantities of nonperishables. If you want to keep an eye on the supply in there that would be nice but I don't think anything will be gone yet."

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"You plan ahead. I'll keep inventory for you, sure. Have a nice day!"

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"Will do."

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The doctor solicits a phone capable of calling Cam, having heard of the things from Steel. "If there's anything I'm not totally sure how to treat, I'd rather talk to the source of my new medicine and knowledge."
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"Of course. Let me give you a tour of the place, there's only so much the pictorial guide can do." Cam shows the doctor all the stuff and quizzes him on diagnostics to make sure they aren't laboring under any desperate misapprehensions about anatomy, infection, etcetera.

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The doctor understands anatomy and the body's response to injuries very well. He knows about infections, and the distinction between bacteria and viruses, but his biochemistry is shaky and their antibiotics are not very effective. Usually, treatment for infectious diseases involve suppressing the symptoms and spraying disinfectant on everything rather than killing the microbes. This... Usually works.

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...Cam points out the antivirals and the antibiotics, reminds him of the importance of making sure he's using the right one of those, mentions that some of the antibiotics will also handle worms and protozoans and fungi but there are more specialized medicines that will do better, and shows him the snazzy diagnostic gadgets.

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The doctor takes lots of notes and reiterates that he's going to call Cam whenever something he's not absolutely positive on comes up.

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Okay, good. "As soon as my computer can translate things into local languages I will get you books," he adds.

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That seems to be it as far as pressing needs from his new citizens go. It's well past sunset by now.

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Cool. Cam spends the night slurping coffee, nudging his computer repeatedly on-course and pronouncing words for it while it works on the corpus of local texts it has, setting up the bridge and its train, and finalizing designs for a communication satellite to allow easy communication between his unnamed island and Opri. He should name his island. Hmmmmmm.

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The next morning, a message comes from the volunteer shopkeepers. It requests gardening supplies and seeds, a fishing pole and tackle, bolts of raw fabric, the construction of a park between the apartment building and the beach-houses, and a light-bulb that can be carried around.

At the end of the list is, Apologies if these requests seem greedy. Several people seem to desire setting up crafts of sorts- the fabric is for an aspiring tailor. I believe this should be encouraged. Will you be minting a currency unique to this island?
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Cam swoops out of his house, scopes out the park area, lands, and strolls through it, making park things as he goes. He sends a reply: Park in progress, other stuff will be added to the storage floor in the apartment building after I'm done parking. Undecided on currency but if I do it'll be fiat paper or electronic; coins are unwieldy.

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There's no response from the shopkeeper. Perhaps they're not entirely comfortable with their device.

Steel seems to have figured out texting in Italian on her phone, though. She asks Should I go look for more people in Opri?
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At your leisure. I don't have a specific growth trajectory in mind. If you do go I'd like to know when and whether they'd like the dam hooked up to anything other than the water pump.

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I'll visit Opri and Nel and a few other nearby cities. I don't think I'll get many takers, the rumors about you have only had two days to spread. I think I'll take out newspaper ads, I have enough silver and don't need it here. Preferences on what appears in them?

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I still can't think of a name for the island I like, unfortunately. You know the audience, just don't tell any horrible lies.

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A few minutes later the Earthbus takes off.


Around lunchtime, someone shows up on the train. After wandering around for a bit, he wants to move in. And that afternoon, Steel comes back with another dozen immigrants. One of them is a teacher. She wants a school to teach in. And Italian tutoring/textbooks.
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She can have books, although none of them make reference to local languages because Cam's poor little computer is not done yet. She can have a one-floor school building designed for more to be added on top as there are more students.

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Steel gives her some introductory lessons and cheat sheets. She sets up a single-class school session, with aim to split classes when more students show up.


Over the next two days, people continue to trickle in. A small fraction want beach-houses, but everyone else is content with an apartment in the tower. The doctor acquires an assistant. The tailor starts selling custom clothes out of his apartment. People start using the subway, once they realize it's there. Someone asks for a restaurant on the 10th floor of Cam's next tower. Someone else wants an elevated storefront for their miscellaneous decorative objects.
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Cam makes a "business tower" and bridges at several levels between it and the apartment tower, and restaurant person can have a restaurant on the tenth floor and the other person can have a storefront as high up as they like therein too. This is fun, it's like playing a well-designed version of Sim City with all the cheats on.

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Several people want the island hooked up to the postal system. Steel compromises by carrying mail to various places in the Earthbus. A few of the shaper population start building bluestream framework, levitation-stream in roads and stairwells mostly, on a volunteer basis.

Interest quickly picks up. After a week and a half, there are at least 300 people on the island. Another apartment tower is requested. A soccer field. A blank wall several stories tall to serve as public art space. A two-story farm to be expanded later. Some clever individual is an ecologist and presents him with guidelines for a coral reef that is likely to attract colorful fish.
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Cam can get on board with all these plans, although the farm will need shaper maintenance to be up to local standards, is that in place sufficiently?

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The requester is a shaper, and so are his five volunteers/employees. Speaking of which, a few people would like a stone circle behind the clinic, the sort of which people visit to try and become a shaper. They will handle the magic side of it, if Cam makes a specific sort of stone in a particular configuration. They swear up and down to abide by their long list of safety provisions with this enterprise.

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Cam makes the farm. He reviews the safety protocols; he makes the stone circle.

He contemplates the stone circle. But not right now, he thinks.
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The next day there is a very public shouting match between a couple in one of the apartment buildings. Eventually one woman is stabbed, the other drops her knife and flees towards the bridge. One of the shopkeepers who acquired a phone decides it counts as an emergency worth disturbing their benefactor. He calls Cam and reports the proceedings.

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Cam is on the scene presently, adds general anaesthesia to her system, replaces her missing blood on an ongoing basis, scans her, turns her over so the bleeding can lavage out any dirt that entered the wound, and then patches all the holes with thin but perfectly well-attached cross-sections of tissue. He brings her to the doctor, tells him she'll wake up in an hour and might be chilly - and then chases the stabber.

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The doctor was on his way up the elevator. He turns around immediately.

The stabber is on foot. She will not be hard to catch.
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Now her ankles are manacled together.

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She falls on her face. And starts crying. Between sobs she manages, "Go ahead and throw me in a dungeon. Or kill me. I deserve it."

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"Well, I don't have a dungeon, but I'd like to know what happened," he says, landing next to her.

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"We- thought we'd stop fighting if we came here. Since money is what we fought about most. But we didn't. And, and I just got so mad it wasn't working and- I stabbed her."

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"Well, she's going to be fine."

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"I'm glad she's okay. I need to leave, one way or another. So I don't do it again."

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"Sounds like it. Any ideas where you ought to go? I could make a prison island but it doesn't really appeal to me as an administrative project."

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"...Back to Opri, I guess. I could go all the way to the Stone Teeth, if that doesn't seem far enough."

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"What is Opri going to do with you and the having just stabbed someone thing?"

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"If they don't hear about it, nothing. If they do... She didn't die. She's not rich. Work camp, six months."

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"She's not rich?"
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"Yeah. So Kell won't care."

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Hoo boy.

"I don't want to administer a prison island, and the idea I am about to propose is experimental, and if you would rather go to an Opri work camp for six months I will let you. However, it occurs to me that I could make a little hormone level monitor implant and have it tranquilize you if you got too agitated - say, enough to stab someone - and, if your stabbing victim requests it I could throw in a face recognition system so this would also happen whenever you encountered her. You could not safely operate significant machinery, fly, or discuss politics while you had anything on the stove, but apart from things it would be disastrous to suddenly fall asleep while doing you could lead a normal life and not stab anyone even if you momentarily forgot yourself. How does that sound?"
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"...Can it come in levels? So 'calm and woozy' comes first and 'total unconsciousness' only if I get really really upset?"

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"Yes, but imprecisely; hormone balance doesn't correlate with emotional state perfectly and there would need to be a safety buffer. I'm only even suggesting this because the evidence does suggest it was a crime of passion."

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"You think it's safe... Yeah. I don't really want to wash dishes or something for six months."

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"I'm gonna test you for an allergy, let me know if it becomes harder to breathe."

Tranq to bloodstream, go.
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"I can breathe fine. Is there any chance I can get it removed eventually, if I play nice and don't ever get upset again?"
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"I'll be manually refilling the tranquilizer supply and I can stop doing that if you turn out not to fall over very frequently. If you want it outright removed that's a little delicate and I'd probably have to do it myself to be sure you didn't bleed out."

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"Thanks. I just- like the idea of falling over asleep sometimes when I'm seventy a lot less than I like the idea of six months in a work camp in Opri."

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"All right. I want to make it clear that this is a one-time deal. If you harm someone, especially if you manage to do it in cold blood - or for that matter if it turns out that people wind up taking advantage of the introduced vulnerability - I'm going to have to go with something else." He produces a key and unlocks her ankles. "I'm gonna numb the area before I add the implant, it'll sting for a second, should feel normal in a few hours." There is a stinging and then nothing whatsoever in her left thigh.

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She nods sadly and walks towards the beach.


Her (former, as she makes very loudly clear) girlfriend is in the clinic, apparently feeling fine.
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Cam goes in to make sure that she is indeed feeling fine, replaces her stabbed and bloody shirt, and informs her of the experimental measure and asks if she wants to add the face recognition thing.

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"Cities are crowded, you know, I'm not that mean. Can you make it only if the bitch actually tries to interact with me?"

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"Not with much precision. If it actually becomes a problem we can discuss giving you a remote control."

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"No for now, then. If she tries to talk to me, I'll tell her to shut up and leave me alone. If she keeps at it I'll want to install the face thing, or a remote control, whichever seems less disastrous."

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"Okay. I do apologize for the disruption, I will definitely be considering more prevention-oriented options for island order-keeping and would be particularly happy to receive any suggestions you may have.

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"You have hundreds of people from half a dozen different cities here. Most of us weren't in all that great a spot back 'home'. You need police."

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"That's probably part of a complete solution, yes."

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"You haven't actually published any laws, just said things. Just saying."

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"I do not think the problem here was that I have neglected to publish a 'do not stab' law or that such a thing would have helped, but it's probably about time I did."

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She shrugs. "I dunno, you're the scary magic bossman. Just keep her away from me and I'll be perfectly happy."

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"Let me know if there's a problem with her being around you. Do you need someone to help you separate living quarters or anything?"

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"I'll shove all her stuff out the door. I won't break it or anything. She can come get it whenever, or you can have someone ferry it, I don't care as long as she doesn't try to bother me."

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Cam texts one of the island residents who's volunteered to be on tap for miscellaneous tasks and tells them to come escort the stabbing victim home and haul the perpetrator's stuff to a different apartment on a different floor. He gives the stab-ee a lollipop. He leaves to fly around his island and contemplate policing and his available personnel.

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Steel has been mentioning that she's bored of being the shuttle service. Half a dozen people have volunteered to work thirty hours a week pretty much wherever in exchange for the free stuff. A fair number more said they would be willing to work for pay in the fiat currency he hasn't implemented yet. Only a few of them have talked to him enough to get a decent impression of their personality, and of those, a man named Yerin is by far the most diligent and fair-minded. He's in the 'will work if paid' category.

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Steel has magic, which is useful. He could put someone else on shuttle duty or just expand the train system inland...

Where is Steel, at the moment?
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Steel is in the Earthbus, heading back from a city called Morlsen.

(Yerin is also a shaper, though not graduated from a university like Steel)
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Cam sends her a note: Apparently you can't just put a bunch of people on an island and expect them to behave in a civilized manner just because their material needs are looked after for free, who knew? Contemplating policing options and smallish legal code (although it remains my opinion that almost no one avoids stabbing others solely because it is illegal to do so). Thoughts?

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At least a vague legal code is necessary so people can't reason themselves into doing unpleasant things. Attaching strong social stigma and material consequences to stabbing and other undesirable behavior should help. Most people here aren't properly used to technology so I have no idea how they'd react to technological sorts of monitoring and enforcement. Kell relies on shows of force, which I think just drives the unpleasantness into the shadows. How about a police phone that anyone can call and the police will come attend to their trouble? That wouldn't be too much different than actually not corrupt police patrols.

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Yeah, an emergency service line is solid. The island's small enough that response time should be good if I give the cops airbikes or wings.

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They should have override on doors. Which means they'll need to be very trustworthy, I think.

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Cops have to be trustworthy solely because people will listen to them and I may find myself obliged to arm them. Letting them into private homes is another matter. Maybe if and only if someone has called them or I hand down an express exception.

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I more meant so a hypothetical criminal cannot lock themselves behind a door for a week.

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If that happens I can let people in.

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Steel has no response, apparently.


She's back with mail and packages and twenty-two immigrants, two and a half hours later.
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Good for her.

"How do you feel about being on the police force and letting somebody else drive your bus?"
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"Hm. I could be part of the police force, but I don't really want to do it forever. I'd rather keep learning engineering in the long run. But until you find someone else, certainly."

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"Okay. I'll have equipment worked out and an emergency call system set up by the end of the day. You can use your discretion in picking other people to fill out the force; you people have to sleep so you'll probably need at least one more, more likely three or four. I'll send you a copy of my list of who wants to do things."

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"I'll take care of it. I've been a manager before."


By the end of the day, presumably having received equipment and the far end of an emergency line, Steel has the best four candidates from the list, including herself, arranged to be available for policing 24 hours a day. No patrols are taking place yet, but she plans to implement them as the population continues to increase.

Since the stabbing incident, one of the slang names for the island has risen to near-unanimity. "Entromei," a portmanteau of the Tlane words for "merciful" and "home".
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Entromei. Cam likes that enough to keep.

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The city- and it is a proper city after a couple of months, with thousands and thousands of residents- keeps growing quickly. There are a few social issues and a few things for the police to deal with, but all in all things are running smoothly.

One day a representative of the Telra Senate contacts him though Steel. He would like to talk to the ruler of Entromei about entering a trade partnership with the Republic of Telra.
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That's... well, hm. Cam doesn't need anything traded, but brushing them off might actually be a worse idea than having a meeting and trying to control his snark.

"Steel, you want to come along as my advisor and make sure I don't overmuch annoy anyone?"