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This place is a crowded greenhouse. This circle lacks a binding, and is made of spilled dirt.

This language is some kind of messed up dialect of English.

This summoner is very alarmed to see him! He bolts down a set of stairs.
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"Uh, hi?" calls Cam. "I'm not gonna hurt you."

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He stops running halfway down the stairs. "Why are you in my ship, then?"

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"You summoned me? I mean, it looks like you did it by accident, you should be more careful, but that's entirely on your end, dude."

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"I've only heard of summoning in stories and myths. But you look like something out of old religions, I guess that's appropriate." He resumes backing down the stairs.

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"I'm confused."
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"So am I."

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"Well, perhaps we can help each other. Where I am from summoning is common. Accidentally summoning a demon with no bindings on much less so but it would be really, really weird for somebody to appear a winged person and have no idea what was going on. Also, religions which ascribe significance to demons and angels are still extant, if less popular and increasingly schizophrenic about how the summonable versions interact with their theology. Now, where the heck am I, please?"

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"...You're on Cloudbank. It's a gas planet. People came here to mine, what was it, Helium three? Helium some number. And Hydrogen. But the stargate collapsed hundreds of years ago, and now all the religions are about lost technology. Are you from Earth?"

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"I am summoned to Earth more often than anywhere else, but I don't live there. What is a stargate?"

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"Lost technology. Point A to point B in an instant. I won't pretend to understand how, it's a small wonder Cloudbank at large still knows about the speed of light."

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"I begin to think this is the sort of place you will be very glad to have a summoned demon handy. Who put the stargate there, why haven't they shown up to see what happened to it, any clues?"

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"Mining companies? Original records from back then mostly don't exist anymore so don't take my word as absolute, but most of the myths say Earth wasn't terribly peaceful. Mind if we move this conversation to my control room? I've left it unattended a bit long."

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"Lead the way."

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He does. Through a tall room of... Gas bags? That smell faintly of sulfur. "Before I forget: This is an airship. No fire. And please don't throw anything overboard, it'd be damn hard to get it back."

Gas bags, hallway, stacks of food and other things in crates, hallway, control room completely devoid of electronics and mostly devoid of metal. Is that bone? Yes it is.

"What are the properties of summoned demons, anyway?"
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"Well, if I threw something overboard it wouldn't be very hard to get it back. And not just because I could fly after it and catch it. Is that made of bone?"

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"Yes. Cow's bone, to be specific. It's not like we have enough bronze and steel left to make every little thing out of it."

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"You are going to be so glad you accidentally summoned me," predicts Cam. "Demons: make stuff."

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"...From nothing?"
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"Yep!"

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"Your prediction is correct. Can I have a barometer? I found one on a monitoring station wreck half-embedded in an island near the storm belts once, but it broke a few months ago."

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"What kind d'you want?"

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"A durable one. Other than that I don't think it much matters."

Pause.

"Since I clearly can't pay you in food and paper like I usually pay people, what do you want?"
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"I don't. I live a life of perfect material luxury. Or to put it more exactly: I want something to do. Because where I'm from everyone lives a life of perfect material luxury and it means I'm a little low on fulfilling vocations."

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"Then we're both rather happy with this accident. Though I wonder why nobody's managed to summon demons before."

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"I do not know. Maybe I'm a fluke. We could check, but if I am a fluke it might be hard to get me back, or hard to put back another test summons. It sounds like you have about one really dedicated demon's worth of needs, so let's not mess with it yet."

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"If it's not broken, don't fix it. Right. Well my wishlist starts with proper instruments, barometer being the first one I thought of, telescope, electric things for light and pumps and radio, proper fuel-cell engines instead of steam burners... I should probably take you to a town. They'll need more things than I ever will."

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"I will be perfectly honest with you: all your technology looks to me like extremely ingenious stone-age crap. I can just fill out your wishlist and then move on to the town, but this seems a little like meeting a guy in a cave with a stone knife and getting him a new one instead of offering him a pair of decent shoes and the secrets of domesticating the tasty animals."

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"Yes, all our technology is stone-age crap. Please enlighten me to the wonders of lost technology."

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"I don't think it's the same tech tree. We don't have stargates, for instance. But, like," Cam makes his computer, "this is my computer, it stores and manipulates and presents data, it can hold a decent fraction of the sum total of media output from the last forever or connect to a somewhat larger device which could hold literally all of it, it can translate between any languages it 'knows' and connect to networks of similar devices, and only I can operate it because I have a gadget in my brain notifying it of my mental commands."

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"I've heard of computers, seen them in rusted out mining stations even, but never had a clear picture of what they're for. Am I correct that entertainment is just one of many uses?"

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"Yup. For example, if I'm doing any complicated engineering, I plan it out on the computer first because the computer is very good at math."

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"Delightful." He's been manipulating the stone-age crap controls during the conversation. The ship is now turning left and descending. "I'm quite unsure how to be efficient with your ability. If you made an unusually huge floatstone island and encouraged immigration it would centralize things, at least."

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"I might do that! Although an island which floats seems awkward in a number of ways. It's gas all the way through, nothing to anchor on?"

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"There's solid land down there somewhere. I was imagining your making things on insufficient scale, it seems. Though come to think of it, everything else would still be moving and eventually run into your tower-or-whatever, wouldn't it?"

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"Do they have ways to prevent that when everything involved is moving?"

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"Yes. Mostly. Usually. But the relative speeds would be higher since we mostly flow with the winds. We're probably currently moving at probably at least two hundred kilometers an hour compared to the surface."

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"Can they steer? I could make it with nice big holes in the structure."

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"That could work, as long as it's sufficiently obvious that they'll be needing to. The clouds can get dense sometimes. But uninhabited islands and ships that are tied down to something solid for the night won't be steering."

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"All right, maybe I won't anchor my island, but I'm going to make it stationary most of the time, anyway."

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"You could go for an altitude that has little traffic, which would reduce the problem. And nimble ships with harpoons and a watch system can help cover it too. I'm sure you'd find volunteers."

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"Harpoons? What am I harpooning?"

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"Dangerous wildlife and/or floating islands to pull them out of the way."

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"I can probably improve on harpoons, or at least manually operated harpoons. You can harpoon islands. What a planet."

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"Well technically you'd be harpooning the thick layer of plantlife every island either eventually accumulates or is, in fact, entirely composed of."

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"Even so. This will require serious design thought."

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"I'll just pilot us to somewhere potentially convenient for island-making then? You probably want to study some floatstone. You can probably do meat, could I have some fish? I've heard of fish but never actually had any. No open water."

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"I assume you don't care what kind of fish or know how you want it prepared."

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"I don't like fried things. Otherwise, you are again correct."

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Cam hands him a skewer of salmon chunks with lemon oil and butter and salt and pepper and roasted garlic.

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He tastes it, tentatively at first. "Oh, that's excellent. Thank you. What's the fruit in this called?"

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"...Lemon? Do you also not have lemons? My god, what do you eat?"

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"Onions, maize, grilled onions, cornbread, strawberries, fried onions, carrots and potatoes, garlic, mushrooms, occasional jellywing or chicken, pickled onions... For some reason onions grow really well here. We have pepper, too."

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"I will export food. I will export a lot of food."

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"I'm sure people will appreciate it. I'd say at least two thirds of us farm in one way or another. You saw my greenhouse."

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"What's a jellywing?"

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"...Big, roundish, bloated lighter-than-air critter. Completely harmless unless one dies and falls on you. They eat floatgrass, bladesquid hunt them. They make a great fuel source if you can kill one without popping its gas sac, but they're not terribly domesticatable."

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"I assume bladesquid are a bigger lighter-than-air critter which look like squid and have blades."

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"Yes. They mostly leave people alone. And everything native to here is immensely afraid of fire, if you ever have to fend critters off make heatless smoke and they'll bolt."

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"Good to know."

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He keeps eating the fish kebab and piloting the ship. It doesn't need much active effort, the sky's pretty open here, but maybe he finds it relaxing.

At one point he retrieves a book full of neatly written charts and a stick of charcoal from a cabinet.
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"What's the range of habitable altitudes?"

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"Approximately 100 kilometers to approximately 300 kilometers? There's some flex, but below 120 or above 250 begins to be uncomfortable. The atmosphere is mostly the same at every point between those altitudes despite not having an immediately apparent reason to work that way."

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"How peculiar. It doesn't thin noticeably as you ascend? Then how do you maintain a position within it?"

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"It does thin, just not as dramatically. I meant the temperature and relative composition of gases is consistent in that range."

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"Oh. I wonder why. I could probably figure out but I think it is less important than making sure everybody can have lemons."

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"Lemons are a critical life experience, are they now? By the way, you will probably object to many towns' governments. They vary widely in several respects. Effectiveness, morality, structure. That's why I fly between them."

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"Then I will just have to outcompete and/or harpoon them, won't I."

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"And it's pretty hard to outcompete making stuff from nothing."

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"I will exploit this unfair advantage."

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"Can you turn my library, such as it is, into something less combustible? Possibly attached to a compiter?"

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"Computers run on electricity. They're not, in advanced forms, particularly prone to catching fire, but you definitely should not open one up, get it wet, or subject it to mechanical stress. If that seems like an improvement, yes, I can render your library as a computer file with a computer to match."

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"Stone-age here, remember. The computer will be competing with paper that's been recycled dozens of times and ink that eventually devolves into unrecognizable smudges. Thank you."

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"They also need to be charged. I can make you a solar generator or a wind powered one?"

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"Let's say solar. Sun is easier to come by than a wind differential sometimes."

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"Sure. Where do you want that mounted?"

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"Top bow of the ship?"

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"Show me?"

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"Right this way." He clicks a bone-lever into place and a few other mechanisms snap to a halt. He goes back out to the hall, opens a wooden door to open air (the ship is moving downright sedately by modern standards, the wind can't be more than twenty miles an hour), ties a knot to his belt in a well-practiced motion, and starts climbing up ridges that form a ladder built into the (stone?) hull.

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Cam doesn't climb; he just leans out into the air and catches wind and flaps up.

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He looks a little jealously at the wings.

The ship is roughly pill-shaped. The greenhouse takes up much of the topside's space, but a large section of the front is free of glass, rope mountings, and the other miscellaneous adornments that dot the ship.

"I could drill a hole through the ship for wires. Electricity needs wires, I think. Hull of this ship is the same stuff the core of big islands are made of by the way. Floatstone. Mostly hydrogen, neutrally buoyant at 150 kilometers or so."
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"I can do wireless electricity. And you don't need to drill anything, I can stick it in a case that attaches like it grew there. Any requests before I make it?"

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"Not green. Too much green makes the ship look like a Jellywing and could attract squid."

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"Black all right?"

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"Yeah, black's fine."

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A nubbin appears on the described location.

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"I suppose black works better than leaves because it doesn't reflect green light? With lots of science for why it can do what plants can't."

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"So much science."

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"I'd like to learn it sooner or later. Textbooks don't even require you to waste time teaching me when you could build up steam toward improving everyone's lives instead."

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"Well, they're not written in a dialect you'll decipher easily or designed for your level of context, but you could get somewhere with them, I suppose."

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"I have spare time in my day-to-day and I suspect everyone will soon have more time. And I like to think I'm cleverer than average, though who knows if I'm right."

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"I might skip making a giant island and being a trading hub and just see about replacing the stargate."

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"Your trade hub would have trouble reaching very far. Navigation is tricky around here. Feel free to copy my books on it."

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"Maybe I'll just make a habitable layer down on the ground."

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"Would it continue to be habitable without your intervention?"

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"Probably? It depends on what's wrong with the ground and how seismically active it is."

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"The largest part of what's wrong with the ground is that it's significantly warmer and more sulfurous than up here. I have zero idea what seismic means."

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"Earthquakes, volcanoes, continental drift. I can maybe just confine all the sulfur in something; the heat it matters why it's hot. I assume no one will miss anything about the ground as-is?"

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"As far as I know, yes. I think we would have rumors at least if the original settlers found aliens."

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"So I'll go down and check that out and maybe just make a shell for the whole thing."

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"I won't pretend to know whether that'll work, but you seem fairly confident."

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"Well, I don't know either, if you have a ton of continent drift going on down there or some kind of weird pressure issue I might have to leave it alone, but I could make a whole new planet from scratch and don't see why I shouldn't at least consider patching this one."

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"I'm mostly just skeptical about anything involving the surface. Before you try that, would you mind making me some more things? Just in case you can't find me again."

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"I could also give you a tracking device. But I don't mind making you other things."

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"Tracking devices are a thing, because why not, lost technology. That'll work, sure. Before you fly off could I have the non-electricity-making part of the computer with some introductory science books, and a half ton or so of ductile steel and a forge or more likely whatever fantastic machines a technologically advanced society uses to make miscellaneous objects without direct demon intervention? Or is that not a thing, because you don't need it?"

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"Lemme curate you a quick list of books... I just make miscellaneous objects directly but not everyone's a demon. I could give you a 3D printer that would do steel and give you the raw for it but using them is not actually a skill I have."

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"I'd appreciate your, ah, printer." The word makes him think of printing presses. He doesn't ask how it works, it'd be such a waste of the nice demon's time.

"I could keep myself busy for weeks testing new tools. Bit of a tinkerer. I hope I'm being informative enough by the by, do let me know if I need to adjust my attitude."
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"I cannot teach you to make a 3D printer and the operating manual will not be designed for you. And the stuff you use to get steel objects out of it is not the same as ductile regular steel. You sure you want it?"

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"Yes. Let me dump some ballast at the same time you make the things - or refill my gas sacs, they're..." He checks a pocket notebook, "About 120 kilograms of hydrogen short of the safety pressure at this altitude."

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"Distributed how between them?"

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"Roughly evenly but a little more toward the bow. Ship's front-heavy now, to help descending."

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"Sure." Cam - gradually - adds the requested quantity of hydrogen to the sacs.

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The ship noticeably pitches upward. Nick notes the extra hydrogen in his notebook. "I should get back to the controls for now."


"...Have we actually introduced ourselves? I'm Nick."
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"Cam."

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"Nice to meet you, Cam. I suspect this day will be one of the most interesting of my life."

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"Likewise, in fact."

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He starts carefully descending the ladder. "Anything else you want to know before investigating the surface?"

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"What else can you tell me about the stargate, if I go that route?"

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"...It's in orbit somewhere, it's many times larger than this ship, it's said to have needed immense amounts of power to function. The mining company that built it might have been named 'Extrasolar Extraction'. That name was on the wrecked monitoring station I salvaged."

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Cam fiddles with his computer. "Why were there enough people and supplies on this planet when it broke to form a stable population?"

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"I'm not sure. There was a lot of mining, and tourism and research and farming in addition to the mining, I think. You can still find old ships and buildings in the parts of the world with more dangerous weather, it's just the equator band that's been picked clean."

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"In addition to a tracker I can leave you a phone and then I could ask you other questions as they occur to me."

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"A communication device, I assume. I make no promises to answer it at all hours, but I'll certainly take it. I imagine 'phones' for all is part of your desired end state for this planet so it won't be a single-purpose tool forever."

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"Yup!"

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"You are an excellent person and I will gladly answer your questions in order to help you be excellent more effectively. I do hope it's relatively simple to use, though."

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"Well, it is when there's only one person to call and I'm not loading it up with a lot of other features. If you want easy-to-use are you sure about the 3D printer?"

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"Easy-to-use for things there is high value in immediately knowing how to use. Not knowing how to use the printer won't hinder me or you the way not knowing how to use the phone would."

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"Okay."

So Cam makes various devices, and the solicited weight of raw steel print material, and the user manuals for things that he can't explain in a paragraph.

And then he jumps off the airship and glides to the surface of the planet.
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Clouds and islands (maybe a third of them showing signs of habitation or cultivation), miscellaneous wildlife native and earthly.

There are occasional clouds of floating seeds which if tested prove to be full of hydrogen. Palm-size critters with little balloons feed on these when they can catch one. Small birds snatch seeds out of the air, large birds of prey snatch the palm-size critters. That's probably a jellywing, it looks really... Bloated and green.
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All of this is very interesting! Cam takes photos.

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A different kind of palm-sized critters, these covered in spines in an almost pufferfishy way. A little village, probably too far away for anyone to notice his nonbird shape and coloring. More clouds of seeds. (Seriously, that stuff seems to be everywhere.) A very irregularly shaped island that seems to be just a tangle of plants. Perhaps it broke off from something larger. More jellywings... That's probably a bladesquid. It looks mean.

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It does look mean! Cam is not afraid of it, nor is he green. Candid shot of the bladesquid.

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The bladesquid seems to be stalking a herd of jellywings. It has a tough-looking shell covering most of the lower part of its main body, and easily two dozen tentacles. It does not choose this moment to strike, dramatic timing though this would be.

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Maybe he'll stalk it for a while. Surface of the planet isn't going anywhere.

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The bladesquid seems to notice him after a while. Something facelike is pointing at him, at least. It starts ascending, though it doesn't move to go direcly above him, just at a slightly higher altitude.

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Is it scared of him? That would be hilarious. He doesn't look scary.

He doesn't chase it further. Down he goes.
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The air's definitely getting thicker. Islands are more common and more commonly inhabited. It's also getting darker.

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Cam flies west as he continues to descend. Once he's on the ground he can light his way.

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The clouds are thick enough (and there's enough layers of them) that it takes a little looking to find a spot where their shadows will show the direction of the sun, but eventually he's flying west.

That appears to be a town! There are a lot of what are probably ships and not islands given the propellers and glass coming to and fro, at least.
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Hello town! Cam doesn't think towns will be any harder to find on his way up than down, so he ignores it for now. Down down down.

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The town passes by.

Islands and wildlife are less common, and the exact species have changed dramatically. Though those pesky clouds of seeds are still here, if not in such numbers or size.

The air is starting to get pretty unpleasant. It's thick and warm and seems to not have as much oxygen as it used to. An extremely thick layer of very dark, almost black clouds is visible below by now.
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Cam takes some air samples for doing chemistry to, but then sees no reason to tolerate the smell. He can make a little air, just around his face, as he flies.

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The dark, thick layer of clouds is trying to burn his skin with both temperature and chemistry. When he passes through, the air below would still be killing a human, just not quite as aggressively. The surface is visible in spots between more dark, thick clouds if he has a sufficiently powerful light source, now.

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Cam has a floodlight! And doesn't like burning, so air around all of him when he's in the clouds.

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And eventually he is standing on a barren rocky surface.

Gravity here is a little heavier than Earth, maybe 1.2 gees. He probably could have noticed this earlier but it's a fairly subtle difference.
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Well, he measures that, and samples the rock, and samples the air, and samples the clouds, and drinks some coffee, and energetically chemistries the heck out of everything!

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The clouds (and the air, but less so) have a highly unpleasant amount and combination of carbon, sulfur, and heavy metals.

The rock: Is rock. It has a thick layer of buildup that has the same composition as the black clouds, but beneath that it's fairly unremarkable basalt. Over there is some granite.

The fact that the only rocks he can find here are volcanic in nature might indicate that the planet is pretty seismically active, or might indicate that he picked a bad spot.
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Not super promising. He makes a little ship and flies to a bunch more locations on the planet, taking samples and confirming that it's all like so.

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He encounters more volcanic rock, and ash spouts, and more volcanic rock, and a magma flow, and a moderate earthquake.

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Yeah, he has no idea to make a shell over this that will behave itself. It's probably doable - some kind of shock-dampening semiliquid with bubbles to contain the nasty air and the clouds, tungsten below to manage the lava, something solid above to put agriculture on - but he doesn't want to guess and check on an inhabited planet.

He pulls his ship up above the cloud layer and looks for an inhabited island. On the way he calls Nick.
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The ship is much more noticable than a distant figure with wings! Some people notice it. Cam's moving too fast to see their reactions in much detail

It rings for a while. Once Nick does answer, ".......Is it on?"
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"The phone or the plan to put a shell around the planet?"

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"The phone, and the answer is now obvious."

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"Ah-huh. The plan is off, alas, there's a lot of magma and earthquakes that might wreck a shell and thereby let toxic air out, no fun at all."

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"I told you the surface was a probably no-go. Worth checking, but you checked and now we know. Are you going for the stargate now?"

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"I thought I might find a town and meet some more people but I might just go straight for the gate if I don't run across one soonish."

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"What's your altitude? Towns tend to congregate at one fifty to two hundred. They're heavy."

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"Approaching that. I may be too far away from the equator, I hopped around a lot to get a variety of samples." Cam turns.

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"Do you know your latitude?"

Yeah, the weather isn't very pleasant here. Instead of aesthetically pleasing gentle flowing arrangements of clouds it seems to be rather stormy. The occasional ship or hut-on-an-island is visible, but it's not densely populated.
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"Not precisely, my latitude figuring stuff isn't calibrated for the planet. I can find the equator again though."

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"You'll find towns soon enough. You were right about your books being tricky to understand, by the way. Who would have guessed that electricity and magnetism are the same thing?"

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"I can answer questions as long as you've got me on the phone."

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He has a list of questions. Some about the introductory texts, some about the 3D printer, some about the operation of the computer.

Before he's done answering them all, he notices that it indeed gets more crowded as he approaches the equator.

That probably qualifies as a town - a dozen or so islands tied together with thick webs of rope. Stacks of houses that almost look like apartments densely laid out on top the islands and built into their sides, with five ships anchored above the houses. Gardens are here and there, and two plumes of smoke emerge from a pair of chimneys.
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Anywhere he can land?

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Not really. There are towers for anchoring lighter-than-air ships and open space for gliders, but not something as large as his shuttle.

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And he doesn't super want to just drop the ship and let it subduct. Bad habit to get into, that.

He tells its autopilot to park it in orbit, and while it's doing that he hops out and glides to the town under his own power.
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The first one to notice him is a little boy. He waves. The boy's parents are more cautious, and haul him inside their house.

Other people notice him soon after, and not all of them hole themselves up. A teenager working in a garden shouts, "You an angel? I thought those're made up!"
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"I've never actually been called an angel before!" remarks Cam.

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"Person with wings is an angel! Did you get 'em just now or something?"

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"Nope, I've had them for a while, but where I'm from angel means feathers in particular."

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"That makes no sense. You from the other side of the storms or something? Looks like mayor's interested in you."

Important Looking Adults are starting to gather below.

"Sarah! Come down, please. We don't know what this is about."

"Tch." She leaps off the roof, grabbing a zipline on the way.
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Cam waits politely, tail swishing.

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After a while, the Important Adults select someone to come address him. "Hello, stranger. What brings you to our town?"
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"It's the first one I saw. I want to learn more about the place."

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"I'll gladly tell you about this place, but we're... Concerned about where you came from. Your wings should be impossible."

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"They aren't! I'd offer you a set but they're a little hard to get used to."

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"I probably wouldn't accept. Whatever lost technology you're using I'm too old for it." (He's barely middle age.) "What would you like to know about us?"

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"I'm curious about local culture and the stargate, and as long as I'm here I can," he makes the upper left quarter of a muffin and bites it, "I can distribute presents."

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He restrains the surprised look on his face at the sudden muffin piece. Mostly. "I, uh, don't think we're the most qualified place to tell you about the stargate. Most things about that time are rumor and hearsay now. If you find a larger town they may have a more substantial library. As to local culture, do you mean things like the floater festival?"

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"No. Well, maybe, but probably not, I mean things like how you call all winged people 'angels' and there is a mayor and stuff."

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"As far as I know 'angels' are part of an old religion where God lives high in the sky and sends winged people down when he needs something done on the surface. I'm the mayor of Oli, yes. We're small enough that a regular democratic election and town council still works reasonably well. There are plans to divide the place into three districts if the population crosses two thousand. We mostly work as a brewery town. Where are you from?"

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"Another world."

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That... Is not nearly as implausible as the mayor was expecting. "I see. Do you want to come into the great hall? It's probably more comfortable to talk there than standing here, if you want to learn all about us."

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"Sure, why not."

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So the mayor leads him through very beplanted wide streets lined with residences, over an elaborate and sturdy rope-and-wood bridge, to the central island that all the others are tied to. If he examines the points where the islands are tied together he'll see that there are thousands of ropes in total, but they seem to all converge on only a dozen or so mountings per island.

The great hall is pretty big, and seems to be made almost entirely of artful stained glass depicting the local critters, people building things, airships of the local design, and something that might be the stargate framed with black speckled with occasional silver dots. What's not glass is mostly shiny polished wood.

At one end is a slightly raised section. Perhaps a stage or something. The center of the hall is clear of furniture, for now at least.

"Allow me to formally introduce myself. I am mayor Harold Cavel of Oli. Would you like some beer?"
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"No thanks, I never developed a taste for it. Would you like an arbitrary conjured beverage of your choice?"

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He laughs for a bit. "I'm supposed to be feeding you. I'll just have to feed you information instead. I'll accept, how about some fruit juice?"

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Cam hands him a glass of orange juice.

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He starts drinking it. "Ah, this is a strong taste. What is it? And shall I fetch a couple of chairs?"

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"It is, creatively, called 'orange juice', and you can if you don't want a proliferation of extra chairs but I can just make those too."

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"Hm. Unless you make hundreds they won't be 'extra' chairs. You don't seem much bothered by making things. That's why you want information and not goods, I suppose."

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"I have no need for goods and plenty of need for information!" Cam makes a coupla chairs. They have metal bits, incidentally.

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Once he notices the metal he becomes intent and focused. "...Metal. At least two pounds of it. If you're not cheating for some reason, pulling these pre-assembled out of the nowhere, you're going to change all of Cloudbank. I've already said we don't know much about the stargate, shall I summarize what we do know about it? What else do you want to know?"

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"Well, I'm considering replacing it. Would that be welcome? Will I have some kind of war on my hands over it?"

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"Nobody can even get to it. You will definitely attract pirates, but there aren't any large standing armies here."

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"I can travel through space on my own, but if 'gating' is customary and no one has been by this planet since it broke, I assume that through conventional space you're very far away from all your neighbors."

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"That seems logical, but I wouldn't know. I'm not sure nobody's visited us since, though."

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"No? Who may or may not have visited?"

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"I just don't know how to make sure that nobody has visited. If such a thing happened it would be dismissed as baseless rumor."

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"Will I too be dismissed as baseless rumor?"

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"If we don't have obvious Lost Technology or piles of steel and silver to show off and give away, yes."

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Cam makes a little pile of steel ingots. "Souvenirs. Enjoy."

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"Thank you. We'll have trouble finding enough fuel to work all this metal in the forge, but it'll make excellent trade material. I'll have to issue a tax break, fair is fair. I don't suppose I could get more things before you go?"

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"Sure, whaddaya want?"

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Lots of stuff.

Telescopes, silver, meat, oranges, more steel, rope, lots of different kinds of seeds so they can see about getting some of them to grow here, tubs of rich soil and fertilizer for the gardens...
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The mayor runs out of things he wants for town property. Then he tries to collect and order requests for things so Cam isn't just listening to people shouting what they want. He's also balancing the town's weight budget, and eventually asks him to expand the islands' floatstone a few feet. He could be here a while if he doesn't decide to be done at some point.

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Cam stops at the point where he would have to literally grow the island bigger in order to make them any more things. "It's been fun," he says, "but I think it's about time I checked out the stargate."

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They all love him by now. The teenager he first talked to yells, "Good luck!" and watches him leave through her shiny new telescope.

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Cam flaps up to his spaceship. He starts looking for anything stargatey.

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It'll take a telescope, but there is a large man-made object in a fairly high orbit. It's essentially a giant ring, on scale with residential stations, but it's not spinning the way most stations do to fake gravity.

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Cam goes and checks it out. Can he go inside?

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On closer inspection, it is spinning, just very slowly. Not nearly enough or in the correct direction to make reasonable artificial gravity.

He can go in through the giant ragged hole in one of the bulges along the side, revealing cross sections of rooms and hallways and what might very well be the remains of a reactor of some kind.
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Cam departs his ship and hops in, making himself air. He inspects the station with fascination.

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He is currently in ALIGNMENT COIL 17. There are large machines along the wall closest to the inside of the gate. Across the hall is ROBOTICS REPAIR. Down the hall a ways is a POWER RELAY and a short distance in the other direction is a HEAT EXCHANGER.

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Can he conjure a station map?
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After a few guesses at names for the station, yes.

It's pretty much all various bits of engineering from airlocks to power relays to server rooms, reactors, and 'alignment coils'. There's elevators, a station train, a control center, housing and facilities for ten crew. The most largest individual rooms are labelled as the 'Primary Entanglement System' and 'Backup Entanglement System'.
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Cam goes and checks out the entanglement systems.

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The room is dark and cold and dusty like the rest of the station.

It's full of bulky, vaguely server-like boxes trailing wires in every direction. The centerpiece is a large sphere whose top layer is some sort of ceramic, with plenty of ports for wires going to the boxes. Some of the wires and boxes are missing or torn in a way that looks like a human did it (as opposed to sudden decompression).
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How odd. Does it have a user manual?

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No. Or at least not under the most obvious names for such a thing.

But if he continues on to the backup entanglement matrix, it contains a spacesuited corpse labelled 'Henrietta Sims' but no damaged and missing equipment.
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Cam produces the complete written works of Henrietta Sims.
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There's a lot to sift through, in a mix of slightly off his Earth's standard English and similarly off-standard German. Personal journals. Lots of correspondence and forum posting. Credited as partial author on eleven scientific papers about obscure particle physics and primary author of one. The piles of bureaucracy reveal what he's looking for: Daily reports on the status of the entanglement systems. Efficiency and calibration and diagnostic. Personal notes on the project. Presentations attempting to explain the engineering concepts to upper management. Blueprints.

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Lovely. What the fuck is an entanglement system.

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According to these documents this world's physics are not quite the same as the ones he's used to once you go below the atomic level. The math is complex, but the entanglement system uses this to convince one unit of space to be in two places at the same time. This allows faster than light communication and, with enough convoluted supporting systems, FTL travel.

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Okay. What's the backup looking like?

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Neither of the central spheres are visibly damaged. Their entanglements are probably still be intact unless their other ends were damaged somehow. He'll need to figure out how to power everything up again, here or in a new Gate structure, of course.

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Are there station logs he can get at which suggest anything about why there's a hole in the place and wrecked objects?

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Eight hours and a few minutes before the control system reported fatal power failure, the station was placed under lockdown due to a bomb threat.

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Well. Looks like it was legit.

Can he tell what Simms died of?
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She left a note and opened her helmet. Apparently there was no hope of rescue.

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Anybody else around?

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There's some blood near the shuttle bay. One spacesuit is still here: Pedro Sanchez. There's no sign of Pedro himself, though.

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How odd.

Searching searching...
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Nope, nothing here.

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Maybe everybody else got blown out into space?

Were there security cameras, can he get security footage?
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He can get security footage of some of the place. There are some blind spots and unmonitored halls and closets.

Six suited-up people left on the shuttle a few minutes after the bomb went off. Two were outside the station assigned to look for the bomb. Pedro was, indeed, blown out into space.
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Well, that explains that.

Cam is not sure if he can make entangled spaces.

So instead he patches the hole in the station, gently disconnects all of the everything from the entanglement sphere, clears the room of movable objects, and replaces everything that used to be there as of when it was last working, connected as it once was.
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Nothing visible happens. The place probably needs power.

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Yep. Does the generator have an operator's manual?

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It does, actually! The generator is a Sun Systems Halon IV Series 7 Flash Thermonuclear Reactor (with custom modifications for this particular customer).

It's a very long operator's manual interspersed with lots of warnings and references to jargon that varies from the engineering principles he knows, but it exists.
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Cam pokes his way through it. No point blowing up the whole station and having to gamble on being able to make entangled spaces after all. All he really needs to know is the features of its output, though; he can make his own generator when he knows how much juice goes where.

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That's fairly easy to find. The tolerances aren't even particularly strict- Most of the power relays' job is to catch and modulate the reactor's output.

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Cool. Cam makes a li'l thorium reactor and hooks it up.

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The main computer comes online and starts running diagnostics on itself.

The machines in the entanglement rooms now have power, and are also running self-diagnostics. They eventually report that both entanglements appear intact.
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Oh good!

Cam waits around to see if anyone will notice on the other end.
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No. Or not yet, at least.

One of the computers is labelled 'entanglement communications.' It's not showing any incoming messages, though.
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Can he outgo a message?

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Yep.

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Cool. I have repaired this end of the entanglement. Is anyone still there?

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This is an automated response. This entanglement is no longer actively monitored, but your incoming communication has been reported.

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Well, that seems reasonable.

Cam calls Nick.
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The portion of the planet where Nick was happens to be visible from here, but unless Cam's phone is powerful enough to reach from a high orbit all the way down to the planet below he'll probably have to install a satellite relay. Or figure out backward compatibility with the one that's already here.

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Cam's phone is fancy 2157 technology. It careth not for such distances.

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"Hello, Cam. I think I've figured out the printer. Printed and assembled a brand new screw wrench. How's your quest going?"

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"Well, I fixed the stargate, but nobody on the other end is checking their mail so I have a wait ahead."

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"Of course you did, I'm starting to think you can do anything. Lucky."

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"I can't do anything! I can't make anitmatter. Or dance."

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"What's antimatter?"

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"It's... the opposite of matter. If antimatter encounters matter they annihilate each other."

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"Sounds dangerous. I'm still curious but you're not a textbook, so. What was wrong with the stargate?"

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"Somebody bombed the facility. Some things were disconnected in what may have been a separate incident, but the bombing is why no one was around to fix it after."

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"Nasty. I hope someone answers, it'd be amazing to see Earth. D'you know how long it's been since the gate went down?"

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"I could dig up a date but I'd be surprised if you're still using this calendar -" Cam hunts for datelike things in the records he's been conjuring.

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The station used Grenwich Mean Time. The bombing occurred at 3:34 July 11, 2563 C.E.

If he hunts for the surveys of this planet, it has approximately 26 hour days and obits its sun once every 312 earth-days.
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"The bombing was in the year 2563, if that sounds about right to you, but your years and days are a different length on this planet."

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"No, it seems we don't use the same calendar. By our reckoning it's year 384."

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Does the station computer know what year it thinks it is now?

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It thinks it's 2894, 331 years later.

The automated response from the other side of the entanglement was also marked as 2894, but with a few seconds' difference. Whatever equivalent of atomic clocks they're using are not quite perfect, apparently.
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"Station computer thinks it's now 2984. Which is not that far off from a 384 year difference in local years."

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"I guess we were mostly right, then. Who would have thought."

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"Mostly right about?"

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"Time. I would have thought that Cloudbank is too decentralized to even be near correct when it comes to timekeeping."

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"Well, I don't know how religious you are about syncing with each other but if you all started at the same time that makes some sense."

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"I suppose if it's only been a few hundred years and not tens of thousands there's not that much time for little errors to add up."

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"Nor much opportunity for someone with ego management problems to invent a new calendar and impose it on a subset of the population."

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"Some towns have their own calendar but they never seem to catch on in the wider world. I guess there's both benefits and drawbacks to the isolation. No conquering hordes, just the occasional pirate band."

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"Hey, does everyone speak the same language more or less?"

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"There's lots of varying slang, and past the storm bands to the north and south have their own dialects but are mostly still intelligible. I think everyone here spoke the same language, more or less, when the gate blew up."

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"I wonder how much longer it would have taken it to dialectize past mutual intelligibility."

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"There's still occasional interaction. Most 'stormers hunt for lost technology and trade it in the calm band. I think that slowed it down."

The entanglement comms thing beeps. I am a non-sapient expert system. I use the term 'I' but I am not a person. The last communication from this entanglement indicated that its supporting systems were destroyed or inoperable. Predictions indicated a very small chance the damage would be repairable. Diagnostics indicate that the station still does not have active life support systems. I am confused. Please confirm that there is a human presence at the opposite node by answering the following question: How many more sides does a square have than a triangle?
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Cam writes One.

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A couple seconds' pause. Thank you. Due to the extended amount of time that has passed, this entanglement has been remanded to the custody of the United Systems from its original holder Extrasolar Excavation Incorporated. I am trying to alert an official representative to talk to you, but this unit is in remote storage with many other dead links, so it may be some time.

"In any case," Nick continues, "I've been thinking about how to get stuff to people as fast and efficiently as possible. If you send out a swarm of little bird-size ships with computers to explain things to everyone you can find, they can call you or me or someone with what they want and you can send another ship with the stuff."
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"Yeah, I'll probably do that once I'm talking to a person and not an automated system on the far end and I know what to have the computers say."

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"I don't suppose I can help some more?"

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"Not really, just thought I'd update you. I stopped at a town but they couldn't really add anything to what you knew, so you should feel well-informed, at least."

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"I'm so glad."

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"Apparently this connection's been dead so long that they don't have a way for it to reach a person anymore. I had to prove I was a person, so it could be forwarded up, by answering a question of a sort some machines have a hard time with."

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"Well it's not like they're going to keep the other stargate where it's getting in the way of things?"

He's a little uncertain, not being sure how orbits work.
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"I think they probably could have designed things better but didn't see a reason to bother."

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"No point feeding a dead chicken. Eh, the metaphor breaks. But if there's almost no chance the gate would be fixed and we're keeping it just in case why put much effort into it?"

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"They wouldn't have to, they'd just need some sensible push notification arrangement."

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"You'd know better than me."

The Expert System tells Cam, I can attempt to answer questions if you like. Please allow me to ask some as well. Who are you and what group or entity do you represent? What is the status of planet G-721 (informally known as Cloudbank)?
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My name is Cam and I'm acting alone but in loose consultation with a Cloudbank inhabitant. The planet has a healthy but low-tech population mostly clustered around the equator. Surface uninhabitable.

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The surface was already known to be uninhabitable. Currently the entanglement is capable of communication but not traversal. Do you expect to be able to repair the stargate entirely?

Nick: "Uh, I should get back to my chores. Goodbye."
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"Bye."

I might need some help with that. I've replaced what was missing but I don't actually know how it works. Can I send you pictures and get a consult on that?
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That is outside of my capabilities, but I'm sure a human will be able to assist you.

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Any idea when there will be a human on the line?

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Please be patient. Recovery of a dead link is not a common occurrence. The person designated to handle these events should be online within a few minutes.

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That's okay, I'm not in a particularly desperate hurry.

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Archived reports indicate a bomb threat shortly before the link went offline. Do you believe that the threat was legitimate and the cause of the disruption?

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That's what it looks like, yes.

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No response from the Expert System.


If Cam doesn't ask it anything, after three and a half minutes, Assistant Stargate Commissioner Lyl Jupiter is now online. Her messages will be subject to approximately two seconds of lightspeed delay.

In a different text color: Hello, Cam. Sounds like you're not in danger or needing anything immediately. Is that the case?
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Hi, Lyl. Yeah, I'm perfectly comfortable.

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Excellent! I think it's very surprising that you managed to repair a dead link, especially on a low-infrastructure world. The whole web had written G seven-two-one off as a dead end. Not nearly as habitable or resource-rich as it looked from a distance and probably everyone was going to die out, so no re-establishing mission was sent. The answering machine says you want plans and specs to repair the gate itself. Can I ask where you'll be getting the parts and material? Some of these things are very tricky to make.

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Would you believe me if I said I have magic powers?

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Not without a significant body of proof. Getting this far is a point in your favor on that count, though.

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Well, I have magic powers. I can make whatever you can specify for me.

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I'll proceed as if you're telling the truth until proven otherwise. I'm getting gate engineers on the line now. Do you know how to have the station computer send files through the link?

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Not as such. This isn't like the computers I'm accustomed to.

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Incoming: Step by step instructions on how to bring up a station map in an image editing tool, and stream the main display to the other side.

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Cam follows these instructions.

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Can you use the pointer to mark sections of the station that are damaged?

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Cam marks an outline of the hole blown in the side. These bits are just gone, he sends.

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Alright, we'll get blueprints for that. My engineer has arrived. He says the only important parts are that you have the equipment in the entanglement room set up right, which diagnostics say they are, that the station has as little angular momentum as possible, and all 30 alignment coils in pristine condition and zipped up, powered and cooled. The exact details of the engineering behind it don't matter. Is a part number and installation guide for the coils good enough?

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Yes, that should do the trick!

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I've been corrected: No angular momentum except around the center axis, like a wheel. It can be spinning for artificial gravity just fine. And then a part number and full text of the owner's manual equivalent come through.

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I'll go put these where they go! I'm not sure where the momentum is and my magical powers aren't super good at that but I'll figure something out if I have to.

Cam goes and puts them where they go.
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You can use the station's sensors to find its current momentum. Have another step-by-step guide. (These systems are surprisingly crude for being from the 26th century.)

He'll have to clear away miscellaneous debris and damaged parts and other things. And either bring the other three reactors online or replace them with more of his thorium plants. This thing consumes one heck of a lot of juice in full-on gate mode.
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Cam replaces the generators and clears the junk.

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He didn't fix the angular momentum yet but the station has reaction thrusters that will eventually do the job if he presses the correct button.

Once that's done, time to fire it up. He can only do this from the control room as a security feature, unless he completely rips out and redesigns the computer systems.
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He doesn't have a reason to do that. To the control room!

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The control room is halfway between a standard office and a starship's bridge from some kind of sci-fi show.

Lyl Jupiter clarifies that this is only to test whether he fixed it correctly. They'll be a couple of months building this gate's opposite number back in high earth orbit.
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"Months? Really?"

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"We can't just take one off the assembly line if we want it to be compatible with the dinosaur on your side."

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"So, the reason I didn't just make a replacement entire space station is because I didn't know if the entanglement had to be established in advance with physical colocation, but I can actually just do that, if these things are things you can assembly-line."
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A different voice takes over. "No, no, it does work that way it's just the- yes, it was ceramic spheres. Just the spheres that have to start colocated. They contain each end of the entanglement, and the rest of the station extends it into a sort of film. But this link is a three-centuries-old design and can't use modern gate systems seamlessly. New style entanglements are smaller and thus lighter and thus much much cheaper to send on fast interstellar trips."

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"I could dig out the spheres and make a new gate around them?"

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"...Probably. You'd want to be very very careful. Don't spin them, don't subject them to any sharp acceleration. But that wouldn't solve the problem. We don't have the right systems on our end."

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"Well, if it wouldn't solve the problem I won't bother."

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"Yeah you'll just have to be a little patient. Half the gates I help build won't be operable until after I'm dead, four months is nothing."

Lyl: "Not two?"

Engineer: "Not without a whole lot of overtime."

Lyl: "I see, four then."
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"Does overtime look more appealing if I offer to bribe you with my magic powers?"

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"Yes," Lyl says, "Proof, though. It seems like you can make things without knowing exactly what they are, correct?"

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"Yes. Would you like me to conjure up your birth certificate and tell you when you were born or something?"

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"If you can do that you've just opened quite a can of worms. I was thinking more along the lines of making something unobjectionable like an autodoc in view of one of the security cameras."

Quietly, she forwards the entire conversation thus far to the United Systems' Chancellor of Security.
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"Yes, yes, I'm an enormous security risk, tell me something I don't know. Give me a model number and I'll put an autodoc in front of a security camera."

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"Rolebi Medico type three autodoc, public service version."

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Cam makes one of those in view of a camera.

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"Right. I'm not the final decision maker here but if you agree to make some reasonable quantity of things especially in low infrastructure worlds - more along the lines of medicine and computers than weapons, of course - I think we'll be able to push a rush-through to reconnect this gate as quickly as possible."

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"I like everything about this plan!"

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"I'll give you an update some time tomorrow. Bye." She might be a bit testy, what with the fact that she's not going to get to go back to sleep. Security wants to have words.

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Cam hangs out in the station. He patches the hole until the place is airtight, in case someone wants to walk through once the gate's established and feels uncomfortable with the presence of a hole. He has dinner. He works on design for little drones to deliver the good news to the Cloudbank people.

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After a couple of hours Nick calls him, apparently having figured out the 'sending' part of a phone.

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"Hi! What's up?"

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"I was wondering if the printer will safely accept different materials, mostly. Also wondering if you got a real person on the stargate's phone."

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"I did get a real person! They have to do some engineering on their end for anything other than data to come through. Your printer can do other materials but not just anything you have lying around, the steel raw I gave you is not-quite-exactly-steel and it would similarly need not-quite-exactly whatever else."

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"So I shouldn't just give it wood or floatstone. Good to know before I got curious enough to try it. Might have set my ship on fire."

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"Nah, you'd just jam the printer, worst case."

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"Horray for safety standards. D'you think I could see outer space at some point?"

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"I don't see why not. Lemme see how far away you are right now..." Cam checks the location of the tracking device.

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"Doesn't need to be now anyway. Just at some point. Asking for my own spaceship right now would be... Hasty. I won't trust myself with a vessel I don't understand."

He's about seventy degrees away planetwise. The stargate's in a high orbit (geosynchronous), so it'd only take a little longer if he was actually on the other side given the time needed to descend.
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"Well, I'm not doing anything right now, it'd just be a couple hours to fetch you up and a couple more to put you back. Although your ship'd be unattended during."

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"May as well wait. I'm not in a good spot to tie down. Tomorrow I'll probably find a good town to dock at, it can happen then. Thanks, by the way."

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"You're welcome."

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Time passes. Lyl Jupiter sends a message that they got crash funding approved but her career is dead if he reneges on his offer of stuff so she'd appreciate him not doing that.

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"My offer's good, as long as the computers and medicine not weapons assurance was real."

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"Some people are gonna want weapons, but if they ask and you refuse all it'll do to the rest of the council is cost them political capital."

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"Then you needn't worry about your career on my account."

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"Shen's preliminary evaluation says fifty-six days. They did actually take a gate ring off the assembly line, they're just modifying it heavily."

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"Well, that's still a bit of a wait but I'll deal."

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"Gates take time. I'll keep you posted."

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"Thanks. I may be in and out of the station sometimes, not necessarily by the phone all hours."

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"Thanks for warning me. Bye for now, then."

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"Bye."

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This town is a lot larger. There are hundreds of islands tied together in a carefully laid out sort of inverse pyramid, with more hidden inside. The resulting shape is like a conical section of a sphere. Buildings are part of the islands themselves as opposed to mostly built on top of them like in the first town. It looks like there could be quite a maze of tunnels inside. Mirrors and skylights here and there seem designed to bring light into the structure. At the very top is a grandiose shiny glass tower surrounded by spear-armed and white-uniformed guards.

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Looks friendly.

Cam sends his ship up again and lands, not near the shiny glass tower.
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There's a nice open farm/park near the edges to land in. All the people in plain clothes working there back away from him.

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"Hi!"

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One person gets pushed forward as the group's spokeswoman "Er... Hello. Welcome to Helricston?"

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"Thanks! It looks very nice here."

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She smiles. "We try. I'm called Rata. Are you an... From beyond the storms?"

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"I'm not from this planet at all, I'm just visiting."

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She cringes and gulps. "Are you an angel? Most of us aren't sinners, I promise!"

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"I'm not an angel, and even if I were, I wouldn't be here to do you any harm or ask personal questions about your moral behavior."

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Blink. "Then why wings? No, no. Why are you here, then?"

A pair of guards shows up on the farmpark's edge, take one look at him, and run back the way they came. Not in a terrified kind of way, in an 'urgent message' kind of way.
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"Just having a look around. I would say I come bearing gifts but the gifts don't actually exist until I make them, and I don't know what you guys might want or your weight allowance."

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"Helric likes to keep the town high up so our weight limit is probably pretty big... We don't know what you have either. Lost technology?"

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"I can make anything." Cam makes an ice cream cone and licks it.

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This seems to shock her out of her fear. "Anything? That's absurd even by lost technology standards!"

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"I know, right?"

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Someone shouts, "Steel tools!" Rata looks like she's about to shush them, then hesitates, considering. "Anything includes rare metals. Lost technology has metal that is lighter and just as strong as steel, right?"

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"Sure does."

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"Well there's these hand tillers, and some shovels-" Someone interrupts, "Strong timbers for the new chicken coop!"

Shortly Cam has a crowd of people shouting things. Rata turns around and yells them into a line.

Most people want tools and raw materials of various sorts. One person asks for a replica of their wedding ring, which fell off years ago. Another one wants a mirror. They don't seem to get that Cam can do complex machines yet.
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Cam can do wedding rings and mirrors just fine.

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Some people leave and bring their friends and family.

After a few minutes, the guards come back with friends. The person they're escorting just ignores the line. Nobody calls him out on it.

"Kind stranger! Lord Helric would like to welcome you to his realm, humble thought it may be. Unfortunately he cannot come see you personally as his health is not what it once was. I am his representative."
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"Well, thank Lord Helric for his kind welcome," says Cam.

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"I will be sure to do so. Though your kindness is surely bringing joy to those who were lucky enough to be present when you arrived, I wonder if Helricston as a whole might benefit more if you were to... Create things... In a more centralized manner?"

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"That's entirely possible! This isn't very organized at all. What's your plan?"

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"I would have you discuss the broad strokes of whatever advanced technology you are capable of with the head librarian and the other ministers while our clerks tour the districts and assemble lists of personal desires, with relative priority marked. I would then speak to Lord Helric to hear his judgment on the balance of weight and altitude while you fill some of the lighter requests. We would want infrastructure conveniences filled first and personal ones second."

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"Sounds reasonable to me."

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"I shall escort you to the library presently, then. Citizens, please return to your homes! A clerk will come by to learn what you want by sunset!"

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"How tidy."

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"I assure you our clerks are very efficient. Or are you judging us like all the others, by the simple fact that we answer to a king?"

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"It's tidy that you can expect to go around and get a wishlist from everybody in town by sunset, I mean."

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"We have many clerks, and it is yet morning. It's optimistic but possible. And if the clerks arrive an hour or two after sunset the worst that happens is some impatience." He starts walking off into town. The guards disperse, except for the same two who first showed up there.

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Cam follows, tail swishing back and forth.

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This town, at least the parts he is led through, is prettier than the last. Shortly: Library.

The library manages to be quite stereotypically stuffy, with a classic old-book-smell mixed with more local flavors of paper, but there is enough clear space for a dozen people near the front. Helric's representative introduces him to the Guardsmaster, Weightminder, Chief Grower, Head of Construction, some less important ministers, and the Head Librarian herself. Most of these people are fairly elderly.
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Cam introduces himself as Cam and shakes hands or whatever.

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Helric's representative summarizes the kinds of things he's made so far then asks, "What kinds of things can you make that they did not think to ask for?"

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"Technology. It's not exactly lost technology - long story - but it's basically the same idea, and if you have a really specific idea of a lost technology you want I can replicate it. I can make helium, which doesn't catch fire and is almost as light as hydrogen. I can make food you don't have, and seeds for it. I can do medicine."

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The Weightminder asks, "Is helium more buoyant than floatstone? Properly protected floatstone is mostly not flammable already, and a gas would be difficult to work with."

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"I haven't compared the two directly. I could make floatstone if you prefer that."

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"It would be best to stay with what we know. I'll need to draw up a plan of where to add it, which may take some time."

The Head Grower then chimes up asking about the food, and Helric's Representative is very, very interested in medicine.
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Cam can list and provide samples of food. What medicine they need will wind up being more specific to what health problems they find trouble them.

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Diseases of various sorts. Vaccines in Cloudbank are crude at best, apparently. Accidental injuries are fairly common. There's probably some chemical exposure at work here, long term damage in everyone from the traces of less-than-ideal chemicals in the atmosphere. Occasional malnutrition - increased variety of food will hopefully solve that by itself.

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Cam will need to do some work to get vaccines for local diseases up and running, but he can skip a lot of steps if they'll give him space to put a lab and list the common names of diseases. For injuries here are various things that are useful to promote healing, prevent infection generically, pin bones together, etc., etc. If anyone has acute poisoning problems he can address that personally but it's a little harder to give them the stuff to do it on their own.

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Space for a lab can definitely be arranged. He can have a roof and extend its attached building, he can have room two floors down that is empty except for a water tank in the corner, that is a storehouse which can be filled or not to help keep the island balanced and is currently empty, he can have another open parkspace far from the city center. They can definitely list the local diseases.

The doctors... Are not up to Cam's standards, but they're not terrible at their jobs. The place also has more standard health woes, from eyesight problems (they have this covered mostly, they're good at glass), to cancer to heart/endocrine/mental health issues. But the diseases and injuries are definitely most urgent.



The Head of Construction wants electricity. For lights, elevators, power tools...
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Cam can do electricity while his experiments with various viruses and bacteria are running in the water tank room. (He is exquisitely careful about making sure all his viruses and bacteria are sealed up.)

Cam gives them what he's got on heart disease and cancer and psychiatric drugs.

Where would they like their generators? He recommends wind power, considering.
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When Cam is no longer in front of all the Important Ministers one of the doctors assigned to tell him about the place's health problems asks about contraception.

The Weightminder has finished his plans about where to add floatstone to the island.

The Head of Construction is going to need more information on the size, maintenance requirements, weight, etc, of the generators. "In all directions especially below the main city" is the general idea. There is a sort of rope scaffolding down there already, to catch accidental falls, that could be stiffened and hold generators.
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Cam can do contraception! Is anybody here competent to learn surgery or should he go with the pill version?

He was planning to attach the generators to the floatstone itself; do they need to be mobile for reasons?
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There's a surgeon and a surgeon-in-training who is apparently the first one's daughter. Whether Cam considers them sufficiently competent is probably a 'no' but they would clearly get a lot better with some modern sterilizers (as opposed to just soaking things in medical alcohol) and proper tools and textbooks.

The generators don't need to be mobile but most outside surface area of the floatstone is already occupied by windows, catwalks, etc.
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Sterilizers: provided. IUDs are simple and noninvasive and probably better than the pill option for women's needs, but he declines to explain how to perform testicular surgery under the circumstances. The islands just jostle a little too much. Pills for dudes.

If they have so much trouble with finding good spots for wind generators maybe they'd like a little reactor? Or hydrogen generator, since they have no shortage of that.
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There's a discussion of pros and cons, and eventually a decision that hydrogen generators are the better option.

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Great. Those can go anywhere! He puts them where directed.

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Most of them here, centralized for easy feeding and maintenance. And they get water out of it too, which is nice. The Head Librarian wants to know if she could have as many books as possible along with the new computers.

The lists of desired personal possessions are starting to come in, and clerks are boiling the lists down. The Weightminder has allotted 40 kilos per person, and changes this to 60 if Cam agrees to extend the place's floatstone.
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Cam points out that paper books are heavy and he has not run out of other heavy things to make, yet; would she perhaps like digital books?

He is of course happy to extend the floatstone.
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Yes, she meant digital books, she thought it was a given that she wanted computers for the library.

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Computers she may have! And books, although he redacts the collection to omit information about summoning for the time being.

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The librarian is not likely to notice this for a while, if ever.

The Head of Construction asks Cam, again, if he's quite sure he doesn't want anything in return.

Helric's Representative wonders if Cam would be willing to see if he can do anything for Helric's health. Which is heavily implied to be Not Good.
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Cam does not want anything in return! When you are Cam, you basically don't need things!

What is wrong with Helric, pray tell?
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Old age, more or less.

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Well, Cam might be able to spruce him up a bit but he's not qualified to perform a brain transplant and neither is any of these people so that's the best he can do.

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They'd like him to do that, at least, if he doesn't mind. Most of these people seem to genuinely like their King but there's a couple of disgruntled looks here and there.

(After the majority of useful stuff that uses electricity is installed, more than half of the lists of personal requests are done being collated and summarized.)
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Cam spruces up the king. The procedures are mildly uncomfortable but over with pretty quickly.

He makes personal citizen request objects.
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Eventually they're out of stuff for him to do.

Would he like to attend the feast and parade and holiday tomorrow that is being organized in his honor?
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...Cam is really curious how you do a parade on a town that is set up like this. So sure why not.

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The parade is tomorrow. They're not done organizing it.


The parade is airborne! Decorative floats literally float, the people participating weave around in wingsuits and gliders or use a sort of one-person balloon when they don't just ride the floats.

It makes a circuit around the top of the island and descends to do it again below, and even goes through a couple of the largest gaps into the interior and out the other side.
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What a lovely parade. Cam is delighted.

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And the party that follows after is pretty grand, too. City-wide. The feast is in the streets. People wander around with pots and platters of whatever they made as a sort of gigantic potluck, with everything the royal chefs could come up with after sixteen hours of access to a much wider variety of ingredients lined up under tents in the parks. The somewhat-more-healthy king even makes a big show of pardoning some minor criminals (with legitimate crimes) because it'd be a shame if they couldn't go to the party. Non-citizens from the visiting trade ships (Are there more ships than there were yesterday? A lot more?) are welcomed as well. There's sports and singing and drinking and people yammering about how great everything's going to be.

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Hooray!

Cam sticks around for much of the party, handles some last-minute requests, and then goes back up to the space station to see if he has any messages and set up a thing to let him do this without having to physically be there.
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He has a message from someone called Dr. Shen that says the first day of gate construction went well, and Lyl Jupiter sent over a heavily redacted list of descriptions-of-star-systems. From infrastructure level to political structure to economic information to language and ethnicity to coordinates. They were very liberal in redacting names.

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If any of it looks all that interesting Cam can just unredact the documents, but as a courtesy he doesn't do that before he starts reading them. He sends back a thank-you, sets up the relay so he can communicate with these people from planetside, and reads.

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The United Systems is managing things pretty well, from the point of view of these documents. There are some pointless political conflicts and unresolved development issues and the occasional terror attack. But there's no large scale war, mostly because gate endpoints tend to be hold a single political entity the defending party can just turn off the gate that's being attacked. There's a universal bill of human rights that is actually enforced, mostly. There are 3823 connected systems, 639 of which have more than 1 million inhabitants and 18 of which have more than 1 billion.

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Snazzy. Cam will not have to feel too sketchy about working for these guys.

Till they get the gate running, though, he's got a planet to outfit. Time to play Find A Town.
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This smallish 'town' is almost more like a whole lot of ships tied together, not a collection of islands. It's armed to the teeth with things like grenade slingshots and harpoon launchers.

Two armed-up ships are towing a dead jellywing toward the place.
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Hmm. Cam is not sure he's going to like this town.

Let's find out. Shoo, ship. He lands.
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He gets shot at on the way down.

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That's impolite.

He lands anyway.
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"Th'hell is it? Angel?"

"Get the Lost Weapon!"

"It's not fighting back, though."

Two ships cast off and leave as fast as they can.
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They may do that. "Lost Weapon?" wonders Cam idly, in case someone will answer him.

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"He's not an it. And he's not an angel! Look, he isn't smiting anything!"

"Yet."

"Why'd you shoot at him anyway, Gus? You're supposed to be the lookout not the shootout."

"I saw something scary pop straight through the fog. It's only natural to think of predators when someone acts like that!"

"Fire and thunder, you're- Hey, not-angel, are you hurt?"
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"I'm fine. My pants have seen better days."

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"Yeah, well, sorry but next time don't approach a hunting co-op from above?"

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"Is that what this is."

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"Yes. What, do we look like a farm?" The man speaking elbows Other Guy.

Other guy says, "Sorry I shot at you. Never seen anything like you. Wouldn't have shot at a ship." He tries to look contrite.
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"Well, I would have brought my ship but it's heavy and seems impolite to land it on people. But no harm done."

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"By the way, since you asked, the Lost Weapon is something we found in the storm belt. Very powerful - too powerful to use to hunt anything, but great for defense. It shoots some kind of blue fire. Blasted straight through a bladesquid, scary stuff."

More people are showing up. Some holding a variety of weapons (improvised and actual), some just looking curious and worried. This guy seems to be the leader since they calm down once they see him talking to Cam.
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"Huh. I wonder how long it'll last."

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"No idea. We've only fired it twelve times. Where'd you get wings? They look like a perfect strike."

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"A perfect what?"

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"A perfect strike. Guess it's slang now? Really good for what they're meant to do and good-looking to boot."

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"Thanks. I made them myself."

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"Neat. Lost tech? Can you do it again? I know a whole lot of people around here would be interested in buying a pair of wings. Hey, Kira, could you go get one of Jim's pants and a sewing kit? Only seems fair we fix his." Someone in the now-diminishing-again crows nods and walks off.

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"I don't need my pants fixed, I can just get new ones, thanks anyway. Anyway, I can make other people wings but I don't know if it's a good idea."

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Kira shrugs and says, "If you say so."

The leader replies, "Why not? Oh, m'name's Vaned by the way. Nice to meet you, sorry about the welcome party." The welcome party looks like he wants to hide in his shoes.
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"I'm Cam. If somebody acquired wings and didn't like them that would be really problematic, you see."

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"...Good point. Maybe only people who are really sure they like them and already use a glider and so on? Or maybe not at all, if it's such a potential disaster."

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"If anybody can convince me that they definitely ought to have wings, we can talk about that."

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"Somehow I don't think that's going to happen. Well, if you have coin and want meat we can make a deal. Otherwise I'm not sure why you're here."

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"I'm just wandering around, visiting various towns, distributing non-wing presents."

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"Well, 'presents' is music to my ears, but one wonders whether such generosity is for its own sake."

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"I can make whatever I want, what do you think I'd want from you?"

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"Amusement? To play a part in some ridiculous complicated plot? And you didn't mention anything until just now."

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"It's not literally anything. But it's definitely anything you have lying around and then some. I admit it does entertain me to give people things. If it didn't, I wouldn't do it."

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"Right, otherwise why would anyone do anything. Think we can get a bunch of lost technology? Electric lights, refrigerators, proper engines..."

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"I can do lights and fridges. I am not overwhelmingly experienced with engines that will play nicely with the kinds of ships you use, though."

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"Well, Captain Jorl's crew has a lady who calls herself Tesla. She learned all about lost technology, and Jorl's ship has an electric engine. Really cool stuff. Copies of that might work."

Someone in the crowd raises their hand. "Nope! Electricity will blow you up unless you know what you're doing!"

"You could teach us!"

"That'd take weeks!"
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"I don't distribute badly-contained electricity. If Tesla's engine is rumored to be dangerous that seems like something you might not want two of."

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'Tesla' pushes her way to the front. "I know how to work with it, they would be liable to blow themselves up, especially if they had to fix it. One transistor out of place and you've started a fire."

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"I'm honestly impressed you got that far with what you've had to work with. But my stuff doesn't work like that."

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"Oh, you tempter, now I have to learn about it. You can probably even do computers."

Vaned says, "Folks, we're drifting off altitude, and that jellywing's about to come in. Can I have each section leave two or three people to talk to Cam and everyone else get back to work? I promise we'll all share whatever he gives us. That's the whole point of the co-op." There is a variety of muttering, some resentful, but the crowd starts dispersing.
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"How pleasantly socialist."

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"Socialist? I don't know that word, but we get more done together. Some hunters, some scouts, some crafters, some butchers. If people started hoarding things others would get fed up and leave and the whole thing dries up. Only three of the original ships left, but I'm proud to say I've kept this little band together in one way or another for six years."

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"Not bad."

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"Thank you."

Tesla asks, "Computers? You can do them right? And real textbooks, not the random fragments you get left over from dead ships and houses."
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"I can do computers and some textbooks, yes."

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"Yes!"

"I think I have a pretty good idea of what people need," Vaned says to the remaining crowd, "But please speak up if I seem to be forgetting something. Cam, we're high on ballast right now, about, mm, forty tons of margin unless you want to start making whole new ships. We've got the hands for them at any rate."
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"I don't think I know you that well, and some of what I do know is that you shot at me. But I can do fridges and lights and a generator to power batteries for them, just tell me where you want everything."

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The guy who shot at Cam - a teenager really - is now the subject of a lot of glares.

Vaned limits his reaction to thinned lips and a "Certainly, right this way."

Tesla asks about textbooks again.
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"What do you want books on?"

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Electronics. Obviously. And other lost technology if there's anything that stands out. She doesn't care about history or culture or anything like that, though.

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Well, then she'll be happy with the same somewhat redacted library the other town got and a computer to put them on.

Cam makes a hydrogen generator and installs lights and fridges with batteries that can be swapped out at-generator as needed.
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Vaned opines that it's not quite fair if Tesla is the only one to get a computer. Could they possibly get one for everyone, or at least a dozen or so to share around?

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Sure, more computers.

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When they have their generator and fridges and lights and computers, both Vaned and the guy who shot at him apologize as sincerely as they can and wish Cam good fortune. Tesla isn't there, she's already reading through an engineering textbook.

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Hooray.

Cam goes and finds another town.
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It could take a little while, this is apparently an empty section of sky. There's a large island with two houses, but it's not really a town.

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Yeah, doesn't count. Cam wants a town. Heeeeeere, town town town.

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There's a town!


...Those appear to be slaves. Depressed-looking people in poor-quality clothing working on farms with carefully designed rope restraints, overseen by someone significantly better-dressed holding a sword.
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Oh dear. That's very unfortunate for the fellow with the sword, who is asleep now. Cam lands.

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Most of them shy away. One of the healthiest-looking ones hisses at him, "You did that?"

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"Yeah. Who else do I need to help out of here and what kind of resistance can I expect?"

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"Come on, I only had one month in the hole! You can't get em all and they'll blame us."

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"I can too get 'em all."

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"...If you say so, fine. Most of us are on the farms, but a few get assigned as personal servants or 'personal servants'. Those'd mostly be in the houses with lots of blue on the front, the governors. If you fail at this, I didn't help you."

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"Are all the slaves dressed more or less like you? How many of you are there ballpark?"

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"More or less dressed like us, yes. About a thousand two hundred total? That's a guess, though."

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"Okay. If I carry you all off and give you your own island and a nice store of food and so on will you have the collective skillset to do all right for yourselves?"

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"I think s-"

"I'm not leaving without my sister!"
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"Is she on this island cluster?"

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"Yeah. Different farm. I see her in front of me at the slop line."

Other people yell about their own family members, or sometimes just friends. Not all of the family members are also slaves. (They're getting pretty angry.)
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"Guys, I am going to empty this entire island cluster of slaves. I will put all of you somewhere else. If anyone wants to bring a non-slave, we can talk about that once all the slaves are safe."

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The first guy who talked to Cam explains that this is technically debt bondage, not slavery-for-life. Subtle difference but it might matter.

None of the ones with attachments here like the idea of leaving. It's a fact of life on Cloudbank that if they go to a different island it's extremely likely they'll never see anyone here again, or at least not for years and years.
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"Well, if you want to stay, you can stay, but if you want to leave, you can do that. I'm not here to kidnap anyone."

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Three major groups shake out: One is people with no attachments, they want to leave on their own island right now. The second is people who want to rescue other slaves or convince family members to come along and then leave. The third wants to knock the slavers off their pedestal and watch them burn.

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"This is not a revenge adventure. We can sort you all into groups after I've accounted for everybody. Anybody want to come along and be a second pair of eyes?"

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A tough-looking dark-skinned woman volunteers. She is pretty much the only one, and says it's because she's not afraid of what happens if Cam fails.

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Well, that's as good a reason as any. "Lead the way."

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Once Cam cuts off her restraints, she points at a certain bridge that leads to another farm area.

There are angry people with swords at the other side. They start cutting at the bridge.
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Now the angry people are asleep! Also, did they not notice Cam has wings, use your eyes. Cam patches the cut rope and across they go.

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Maybe they're panicking.

There are more slaves here, muttering in alternate fear and hope. "You cut 'em free and move everyone to one place? Gonna need a guard or something if so."
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"A guard to do what exactly? Are there a lot of routes to any given place?"

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"Yeah. Don't want 'em to find the first farm and start rounding folks back up."

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"All right, who wants to hold a tranquilizer gun and go stand near the freed slaves?"

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No volunteers except a middle-aged man. Tough Lady yells about standing up for yourselves for a few moments, then two more say they're willing.

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Cam gives them tranquilizer guns, says he'll do his best to be quick about his end of the job, and continues on.

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There are three more farms, then Tough Lady starts leading him into the central town. The houses containing slaves are readily identifiable by the fact that she bashes their doors in with a stick.

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Cam knocks people out as needed. If anyone brandishes a ranged weapon he'll wreck it.

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Plenty of ranged weapons are in evidence, until he wrecks them of course. Mostly slingshots. He doesn't always notice them quick enough - Tough Lady gets a nasty soon-to-be-bruise from a flung rock.

After a while she says that most of them are accounted for. The rest have probably been freed since she's last heard gossip or have been spirited away by the masters once they heard what was happening.
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And where would masters spirit slaves away to?

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Their ships, other houses, any number of little hidey-holes. She's not sure.

(No ships have left since Cam started this.)
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Well, Cam could besiege them but he's not keen. He puts on a pair of infrared goggles. Who is hiding?

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Things like walls would normally block these goggles, but 2173 tech is capable of ignoring this.

There are clusters of hidey-looking people here and there, and most of them prove to actually be various masters trying to hide with their captives.
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How inconvenient for those masters to emanate body heat.

And when they have been everywhere:

"That everybody?"
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As far as Tough Lady knows, yes.

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Anybody else want to report missing persons?

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A couple people say they knew people who might be taken soon when they got brought in.

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And can they help Cam find these people?

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Yep. They lead into the town and-

Oh look, an angry mob. They're not the masters, and it's not really clear what they're angry at. They are currently assaulting a bakery.
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They can go to sleep too. The bakery probably never did them any harm.

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None of the maybe-slaves have been enslaved. They all follow back to where everyone else is when told they can leave, though.

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All right, is that everybody? All aboard who's going aboard?

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Some of the freed slaves have retrieved family members in the meantime. This island is getting really crowded. but yeah, that's everyone.

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All right! Here is a nice big passenger atmospheric shuttle. Everybody on.

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Some of them are reluctant to go on the scary lost technology ship, but are eventually convinced.

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And Cam flies in the direction of away, finds a nice equatorial location, and makes them a nice big island cluster neatly webbed together with houses and storefronts and anything else they think to request and a pretty fountain on top and a generator and a computerful library and a stock of food and farms in progress and will that do?

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...Quite nicely, yes.

(A few small groups want ships, not to participate in this new town. Can they have them or will they have to build 'em?)
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Cam will distribute ships. It sort of breaks his heart to do the local kind and he snazzes them up some but this is what they know how to drive.

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Yay. The celebration is sort of subdued. A lot of these people are traumatized.

Some of them could use medical care, and none of them were doctors and only one was even a nurse.
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Cam provides immediate demonic medical care, gives them a stockpile of painkillers with dosage limits in large letters, adds the easiest-to-use standards of other things and puts instructions on those in large letters, and looks for someone who wants homework.

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The guy who was a nurse is happy to receive homework, and even happier to receive his new foot.

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Here, have lots of homework and a locked box with more complicated medical supplies!

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He promises to accept this responsibility with all the seriousness it deserves.

Thank you, Cam. Thank you so much.
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You are all so welcome!

Anything else?
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They can't agree on a weight limit yet. They're trying to hash out the new government, so it'll take a while if he waits for them to figure it out.

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Well, they're riding pretty high in the sky right now. He loads them up on tradeable assorted metal ingots so they can get ahold of anything else they need from passing ships and bids them goodbye.

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The next daily report on the new gate comes in. Things are proceeding slightly ahead of schedule.

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Hooray!

...Town?
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The next town is another monarchy. It's much less idyllic than the first one he found, but not outright terrible. More 'inefficient bureaucracy and high taxes' than 'slaves and frequent capital punishment'.

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Well, that's disappointing. Cam is not at all sure he wishes to incentivize this with presents; the weight limit issue means he can't just drop post-scarcity on them and make it all irrelevant.

He will go find another town.
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A glassworks town! It seems to run on a sort of guild system. Farmers' guild, toolmakers' guild, and so on. There's nothing obviously wrong with the place.

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Cool! Presents for all!

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The next town after that is a democracy. Then a sort of oligarchy composed of a dozen 'houses' with exactly zero non-houses members. Then an obviously-piratical group of pirates. Then a benign monarchy. Then another democracy, this one in the middle of elections.

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No presents for the pirates. Everyone else: presents! If a candidate in the democracy seems obviously better than their opponents Cam might drop an endorsement.

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One of them is pretty clearly better from Cam's perspective, but his views are not particularly popular. It's up in the air whether the endorsement will tip the balance.

He encounters one of the first towns he gave presents to. They've tripled in size as people decided to move in, and would certainly appreciate more stuff. And another slave-having town after that. And more and more towns, so many towns... Democracies seem most common followed by socialist governments of various sorts, then monarchies, and the rest are hard to categorize.
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Cam takes notes, because of course he takes notes, but mostly he just distributes presents, rescues people in need of rescuing, and hops around being "angelic".

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After a few days Nick calls and compliments him on his work. Apparently various artifacts are promulgating through trade quite well.



And Dr. Shen's team completes their end of the gate even faster than they expected to. Forty days flat. Is Cam ready to start the gate up?
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Sure, why not.

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Diagnostics look good... Power looks good... Cam doesn't actually have to press the button, the computer can do it, but it's rather traditional isn't it?

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Push!

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The whole station hums.




The starscape visible through the ring changes. Success.
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Awesome. Cam waits, wagging his tail.

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Lyl Jupiter says, "Sorry if it seems inhospitable but we don't exactly have a welcome parade planned. Getting the gate running was a big rush already. So are we supposed to come through to you, or you to us?"

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"I was expecting visitors. I'm the only person on this end who could possibly address anything that came up if something did."

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"Thought you were working with a Cloudbank native, but fair enough. Our side of the station isn't inhabited, it's all drones. A work shuttle with our contract party is headed your way now. I won't be on it, unfortunately."

One of the 'stars' starts getting bigger. Yep, it's a ship.
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"The native has many excellent traits but no magic powers or relevantly advanced technical expertise. And he's not here."

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The ship comes through the gate at a sensible pace. Near valuable structures is no place for high relative velocities.

The ship is a very stylish thing that manages to be both sleek and stately, a fair bit bigger than Cam's little shuttle. It efficiently maneuvers to the station's docking bay without any visible exhaust or engines. Even though Cam fixed the station's life support, the people who get off it are still wearing spacesuits. Remarkably compact spacesuits barely bulkier than a 21st century winter coat, but spacesuits none the less. One has green skin, and most of them have strange eye colors. They're also followed by a small swarm of drones whose purpose is not immediately clear.

The first figure to approach is a short tanned man who introduces himself as "Jones Newell, Registered Diplomat. Never thought I'd see the farside of a dead link. I look forward to working together, Cam."
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"Nice to meet you," says Cam. "I did repressurize the station for you, you know."

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"I see. I'm sorry if it seems rude, 'suits are the default choice for most people everywhere but class-1 planetary surfaces. Would you rather we change?"

On a second look, the suits do show evidence of fashion choices. In an understated, professional sort of way, these being diplomats.
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"Up to you. You'll look out of place if you go to Cloudbank like that, for sure."

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"At least for me, I'll just have to look out of place. I have read the atmospheric reports, or rather the ones we had for three hundred years ago."

A lady with bright gold irises has her suit peel itself off into a little bundle revealing a shorts-and-shirt combo, though. She makes a hand gesture and one of the bulkier drones picks it up. "I'm Vinga," she says, "No last name."

Introductions and polite handshakes all around. Then Jones asks, "How do you want to move forward?"
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"I've been spot-infrastructuring various Cloudbank towns for a while but it's hard to get any sort of comprehensive set of them. I've run into duplicates often enough that I think I may have gotten to more than half of the large settlements - it's not that densely populated. I don't know what your plan to reintegrate them with the wider galactic culture might be. Nor am I sure where or how you'd like to collect your bribery."

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"The general idea as far as government goes is to make sure the vast majority of the local population has access to information tech and hold a series of referendums to decide the structure of the local government. Democracy of some form is encouraged but not enforced. Until that's done, US police forces keep order, distribute aid materials which we were hoping you would provide, and try to coordinate local efforts whenever it seems called for. I suppose you could call it a temporary government, but ideally this period should last only a month or two. After that the local government is subject to United Systems oversight and laws just like any other planet."

"There's some economic rules on our end, most notably a lockout of any non-United Systems-affiliated corporations here until the local government is running, to prevent corruption. And thoroughly restricted immigration until the local government exists well enough to decide for itself. We have plans for the... Bribery... But I imagined you'd want to talk them over with someone who has full authority. I'm just a diplomat."
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"Are you planning to completely supplant the individual governments of the towns? They've got a bunch of different ones and many of them are quite functional. Or are you just spearheading an effort to sort of federate them?"

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"A federation is one of the common choices which will be described in the instructional materials. If Cloudbank's inhabitants decide on a federal structure with individual towns acting relatively freely, then they'll get a federation. I believe such a federation would be obliged to enforce United Systems law on the individual towns, however."

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"Can I get a summary of said law?"

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"Certainly." He pulls out a smartphone-ish thing and makes a hand gesture from it at Cam, and only then realizes that Cam doesn't have the same kind of device. "Uh, if you conjure up a blank version of this it'll hook into our local network automatically. Or I could verbally summarize for you."

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Cam makes a one of that.

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It has a loading screen. Then it has a very minimalist interface. Then, when the gesture is repeated, it has a text file summarizing United Systems law.

The United Systems is itself a federation, and the parts of the law it enforces upon members basically boil down to 'enforce the universal bill of human rights, pay your 3% taxes, plus economic regulations.'
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"Not too bad," nods Cam.

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"I'm glad to hear it. Frankly, it wouldn't work if you tried to use your leverage to get the laws to change."

Mr. Green Skin chuckles. "Yeah, the special interest laws exist for a good reason."
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Cam looks up 'special interest'.

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Basically, lobbying is heavily restricted, at least on the federation-wide level. It's ostensibly designed so no amount of money or violence can change the rules - only legitimate 70% majority vote. One representative per system minimum, but otherwise weighted by population.

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"Ah, so I'd have to run around lobbying populations," Cam concludes.

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"More or less, yes. Though some systems listen to their population more directly than others. I'm sending you the outline for the referendum process now."

His new device beeps. The process seems reasonable, though some parts of it are slightly sketchy, in a badly-organized sort of way more than an actively malicious way.
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Cam reads that, then idly investigates how likely he is to be elected representative of Cloudbank just for being so damn angelic or if there are other requirements.

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Too soon to tell. The local referendums will choose the requirements. He'll have some fairly significant responsibilities if he does get himself elected, though.

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Like what?

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The list is a bit long. The most time consuming would be that he's expected to be well-versed in United Systems law, current issues, etc, and actively contribute to the discussion thereof. There's no 'must make ten comments a day' rule but if he's particularly non-participatory he could be booted out completely. At least most congress seems to take place electronically, he'd only be required to be physically present in a specific place for twenty days out of a year.

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Something to consider.

"Anything else I should read up on or shall we proceed to the next order of business, whatever that is?"
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"I have a list of everything you'd need to... Make, to jump-start the referendum process here." Ping! New file. "Will you be keeping ownership of this gate or turning it over to the United Systems? The advantage of the latter would be that you aren't locked out of the referendum process. If you still control the gate you could conceivably threaten to close it if you don't like the results, so the law is set up to prevent that. Either way, we'd like to install a maintenance drone flock and a skeleton crew of three people. Just in case."

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"What's the law set up to prevent exactly - me closing the gate at all, or anyone responding to the threat?"

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"The second thing. If threatening to close it won't get you anything, you have less reason to threaten to close it."

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"Very tidy. I think I'll keep it anyway for now. It's not often I have an object I can't just replace."

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"Alright. And the drones and skeleton crew?"

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"That's fine."

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Vinga says, "We'll head over to the control room and start getting set up, then." Three people and about two thirds of the drones walk off.

Jones asks, "You see any problems in the comms distribution plan?" The distribution plan is basically 'Cam makes a large quantity of this and that model drone, as well as the space station that has server room and coordinating systems for them, and also a self-deploying satellite network.' It's very detailed and apparently almost completely automated once the dronephones exist.
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"Looks okay to me. I can't make an object already in motion, so if you need your station in a specific orbit that will require finagling."

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"Geosynchronous. We could probably tow it, but it might be better to fly to the right orbit after we give the orbital-clearing drones time to work."

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"I can do geosynchronous if you don't mind the exterior having a few thrusters on it, just need to know in advance."

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"Thrusters? Why not gravitics?"

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"I'm from an alternate universe in which it's only 2157 and don't know how to operate gravitics."

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"...I think we want to tow it manually. Thrusters cause-" he waves his hand vaguely "-fog. Even if most of the exhaust is going to clear the planet it's bad practice when we have a nice big gravity well to push against."

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"Sure, I can make it without and you can tow it however you like. Or I can make it with gravitics and you can operate them."

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"We'll just tow it, thanks. It'd be a bit of a production to modify the blueprints for strong integrated gravitics."

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"Sure."

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"After this system is set up for contact... If you have no objections to being used as disaster relief, you can help correct a famine in the Ixia system. A previously unknown insect with a multi-year lifecycle devastated crops there last season, and trade can't proceed as long as the gate is taken up with trains of famine relief carriers. We have a whole list of things that you would be handy for, and that's the first item."

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"I would be delighted to relieve a famine! I'm also useful for terraforming, but ideally on a more inert base than Cloudbank offers."

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"That's definitely on the list as well, but terraforming takes longer to plan out properly. Existing terraforming plans will be ready for you faster. Mars, Era, Venus, Kingston, New China, Sprezkal. Do you have any other questions or concerns before we fly clear of the station and get started?"

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"I've actually been contemplating terraforming Mars in particular for a really long time but presumably under different circumstances of preexisting colonization... Anyway, nah, I think I'm all set."

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"We're well on our way with Mars already. The process started in 2213, but the original plan still has more than 500 years on it and you'd speed things along for sure. Would you like to ride in our shuttle or use yours?"

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"Ride along is fine. I can go from atomsphereless rock to garden in a few weeks but it's harder to work when there's stuff in the way so I'd actually be slower on a project-in-progress."

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One of the functionaries speaks up, amused, "I'll have to redo my list of rocks, then."

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Cam smiles, and follows them to carry out necessary demoning for them.

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The shuttle's interior looks more like the lobby of a high-class hotel than a spacefaring vessel.

They take a short hop that feels like much less acceleration than it actually is, then they'd like that station, a hundred of this kind of drone for satellite infrastructure and cleaning orbital debris, two thousand large drones holding smaller drones holding tablet-things. If possible the servers in that station should start existing with such-and-such programs already installed.
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Cam can do that! Behold: things.

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Things indeed.



A team of drones takes it upon themselves to tow things into place. The Cloudbank internet is working in short order. With the effort of the computer scientist who came along it even finds most of the phones and computers that Cam has already distributed. (Some have been lost or broken.) Four people board the station and start working on setting up various websites, from social networks to wikis to video streaming and games to the election infrastructure, and spreading the good news and answering Cloudbankers' questions that the FAQ didn't cover, leaving only a few still with Cam.

"To Ixia?"
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"Sure!"

Cam composes a brief email to Nick about it but he has nothing else tying him here.
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Nick has encountered the newly constructed internet already. He jots off a quick reply saying the general reaction among people who have received things from Cam and/or heard of same happening is somewhere between 'the gate is real?!' and 'Cam must have fixed that too.'

He still wants a spaceship. And, is this email thing safe from spying?
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They may have all kinds of creepy spyware! Nick is encouraged to send private correspondence to Cam by titling it predictably, writing it longhand, and burning it.

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The shuttle goes through the gate and starts maneuvering through space high above a familiar blue marble. A few minutes later they go through another gate and emerge near a very impressive looking station that may have crossed the line into 'city' with no planets in sight.



New email: Nick has now written such a thing.

It says, Private message to Cam. I accidentally summoned you once. I'm not foolish enough to try to replicate the feat, but I still don't understand the mechanics of summoning and I worry that I may accidentally send you away, or run down a timer of some sort. Which would be a great tragedy for all involved. It may be a good idea to set a deadman switch or similar to distribute instructions on how to deliberately summon you to someone in the case that you are removed somehow.
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Cam emails: Your concern's legitimate but won't come up within your lifetime! I'm hoping to make more friends eventually and teach them a thing or two.

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Nick thanks him for clarifying. (Their internet is fast, even through several gates.)

The shuttle approaches a third gate. This one is very high traffic, with cargo-y looking ships passing through every thirty seconds at least. When they're through the pilot announces that they're on approach to Ixia.

If Cam has a remote view and extremely precise coordinates of some empty warehouses, can he create hundreds of thousands of tons of soy and grain from here, or do they need to land?
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It's easier in geosynchronous orbit. He hasn't practiced with orbit-to-planet very much. But if they do sync up coordinates will do - view won't even help unless he gets the first bit wrong.

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They'll go to geosynchronous orbit. Nobody wants massive quantities of food appearing on top of something important. And while they're getting there Jones explains that by the way 'grain and soy' was a sarcastic oversimplification, here is list of landmark foods about 30 items long including exact numbers of crates, here are the coordinates of the first massive warehouse, here is a diagram of the Standard Cargo Container which this and this and that should be appeared in for easier distribution, etc, etc.

They're in geosynchronous orbit soon enough. Unless Cam wants to land, for safety purposes. It would be no trouble and only about an hour's delay.
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"Oh, good, I'd feel really awkward about just dumping grain and soy on people, you gotta have your oats and lentils and whatnot." And then he makes the things.

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The things appear off by no more than two inches from where government people expected them.

The government of Ixia would like to give Cam a line of credit, which they are hoping he does not already have and could use to hire people or similar things, to make some more things for them. Jones, as the United Systems' representative, looks like he would have really liked to block that message but has been ordered not to.
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"Something wrong?" Cam asks Jones.

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"Ah, not really. Just worried you'll pick one system and leave the rest behind. Or, well, interested parties are also worried that a sharp spike in the supply of anything could have unpredictable effects on the galactic economy."

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"Well, that happens when you suddenly inflate the money supply, so I'll stay out of counterfeiting, but as far as I know suddenly discovering a natural resource does not have this property. Anyway, I feel no strong pull to settle down."

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Jones doesn't say that the rapidly increasing population of Ixia is a bit of a problem for his favored political party.

Instead he suggests either a visit to the planet Yod, which is a large planet with close-to-Earth gravity in the ideal solar zone around a remarkably stable star that unfortunately lacks any topsoil or atmosphere whatsoever and is home only to a few speculative mining firms and geologists and the like who can be evacuated and compensated in a jiffy, or to Mars to speed up terraforming for its approximately 2.3 billion citizens. The latter would be more immediately beneficial but the former would be quicker and easier to hear Cam tell it.
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Cam can do Yod in a few weeks on his own while somebody gets him suitable specs for thoroughly inhabited Mars. He doesn't want to fuck up the Martian whatever-passes-for-a-climate on bad info.

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Excellent.

On the way there, Jones asks about other things the United Systems might like. Patrol ships (armed only with towing equipment) according to these blueprints, large numbers of copies of prefab space station parts and non-terraformed-planet colony infrastructure, empty Gateships that can be loaded up with entanglements and sent on their way to increase the number of connected systems and the number of internal connections, lost historical treasures and artwork...
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Sounds right up Cam's alley, all of it!

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They express their appreciation with the combination of profuse thanks, reserved politeness, and slight smugness that only politicians seem to manage.

It's a long string of jumps to Yod, five in total. They stop along the way to add new living space and hydroponics to a space station.


Here is Yod! The mining companies have been bribed off the planet, as well as most of the geologists, but one stubbornly refuses to leave and the United Systems is not going to forcibly remove her.
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Cam can go land near her and warn her that things are about to get weird outside, then, but he's pretty sure as long as he knows where she is and she stays indoors she'll be okay.

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"Experimental terraforming methods will ruin irreplacable geologic history! Yod is tectonically unique, a rare chance to study early planet formation! At least give me a week to collect as many samples as I can!"

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"...If you would like another Yod, somewhere out of the way, I can do that too. Would you like a mini desktop Yod as a consolation prize in the meantime? Or just whatever samples you were going to fetch, conjured up?"

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"....Uh, what? You can't just-"

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"...Yeah I can. They sent me to terraform this entire planet by myself, I totally can."

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"If you can give me accurate core samples in a systematic grid over a few areas - depth too - with extra focus on one or two spots, I'll be gone in two hours. Map, where's my map..." The map is quickly mailed to Cam's copy of their tablet-things. "Rocky, er, the ship, has space for them, the university gave me a big old cruiser because it was available."

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"Sure, just show me where you want 'em," Cam says, looking over the map she sent. Wag wag.

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"Well, first a copy of this core sample right here. I already dug it up and I want to make sure it matches. I'll probably get skeptics saying they're invalid samples anyway, but that's academics for you."

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Cam dupes the sample.

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She pokes it with a thing and looks at the results. "Match. Ace! This way to the cargo bay." She grabs a sterile sample container for him to appear them in along the way.

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And in short order her cargo bay is full of sterile sample containers containing bits of Yod.

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She seems bit torn between having been saved a lot of work and lower academic prospects, but she thanks him and lifts off, leaving the planet a clean slate for terraforming.

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Lovely.

Cam gets aloft and starts filling the place with topsoil and water and plants and dumb plant-supporting bugs.
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He'll need to do the atmosphere first, actually. It's a bit difficult for plants to survive hard vacuum.

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Yes, yes, air too. Air as he goes. At least the place has the gravity to hold it.

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Yod: Is steadily terraformed.

Four days into this process he is informed that the first primaries of Cloudbank referenda are starting. He is not allowed to vote since he is technically owner of the Cloudbank side of that gate, but he is entirely welcome to view the results as they come in.
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Cool, he will peer at those occasionally while he paradisifies Yod.

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Nick occasionally sends Cam messages. They're about how Cloudbank is doing, asking for book recommendations, questions about terraforming and so on.

A few days later Cam gets a very thorough information packet on the Green Mars Project with commentary from experts on how suddenly creating large amounts of whatever would affect things. They wrote up a revised plan based on Cam existing and want a week's warning before he starts the atmosphere so they can shut down all nonessential activities and have emergency services on high alert.

And a few days after that Cloudbank-at-large has decided that their overall structure will be a loosely democratic federation with state boundaries decided by latitude and altitude. Each band will get a proportional-to-population set of representatives chosen by a 'single transferable vote' system. Each individual town/village/house-on-a-rock will be free to govern itself however it likes as long as it pays its taxes, allows people to vote fairly, follows the local band's laws, etc. There's still a whole lot left to figure out, but they have an artist's impression of a government now.
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Cam answers Nick's questions and recommends books. Cam will be more than a week working on Yod so if Mars would like to send someone to fetch him after that they'll have all the warning they like. And good for Cloudbank.

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Colonists/immigrants start showing up once the atmosphere is ready. They'd like various prefabricated colony modules, vehicles, and does Cam have any objection to them releasing wildlife? With plenty of consultation with ecologists and Cam's notes, of course.

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Cam is happy to have wildlife added, although they should warn him in case he needs to make more plants for them. He makes stuff for them.

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Some of the other stuff they would like: What looks like nothing more than a gigantic engine floating in space. Gravitics can eventually affect a planet's orbit and rotation, and this thing is planned to correct Yod's axial wobble over about three hundred years.

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Sounds like a plan! Here, have a thing.

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Presumably a well-trained fairy would be able to do this a bit more quickly. But they don't know about fairies, do they?

Beyond a few groups who were just looking for a place to do their own thing, religious cooperatives and the like, there's no sudden flood of mass immigration. People mostly don't like uprooting themselves from their routines. Economics wins out, though, and cheap land and clean water and breathable air are all very desirable commodities.

By the time Cam decides he's done with Yod and the government of Mars is here to pick him up, there's something like fifty thousand people on Yod. That number is expected to go up very fast, though, and Yod will go through the same process Cloudbank just did when it passes one million.
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Bye, Yod! Cam had lots of fun with you!

Hello Mars! Cam has been looking forward to this for ever.
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He won't be starting from zero. Mars is already covered in various lichens, algae, and bacteria designed to steadily churn out oxygen. Parts of the red planet look... Well, not green, but purpleish. Luckily, these are designed to die off in days when the conditions get closer to Earthalike. The exact instructions are in his information packet and the head of the terraforming project is on call and monitoring.

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Lovely! He'll just get started right now on the packeted instructions. How kind of them to provide such detail.

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They make live changes to the rest of the plan when things turn out not quite exactly according to predictions. Large amount of atmosphere, large amount of water, large amount of topsoil...

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Cam spends a lot of this project giggling.

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The engineering team guiding him along seem like they think they're too old to giggle, but want to. Sol's social media is definitely trending Cam, though.

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Well, isn't that charming.

Maaaaaaaars!
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There's lots of Mars, but they don't want things done to literally all of it. It will only take three and a half days if he declines to sleep or take breaks.
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Why would he sleep?

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Excellent!

Well, that's all for now, on Mars at least. They want to give it a month or two to let things settle and then maybe have him back again for touch-ups. Would he like an all-expenses-paid VIP tour of whatever Martian tourist attractions he wants?
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That sounds like fun! He lines up a few days' worth of attractions.

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Various museums, three notable ones being The Space Exploration Museum which is what it says on the tin, the Mars Museum of Science that covers all the fancy tech this society uses in a rather pop-sciencey way, and the Art of the Red Planet, an expansive art museum.

The galaxy's tallest rollercoaster, a nine-minute ride over 12 kilometers in height and 80 kilometers long, driven to thrilling speeds by gravitics. Olympus Mons ski trips are on hiatus due to the currently-in-flux climate, but the peak is expected to still get snow after terraforming.

The galaxy's third-largest hotel, with the fifth-largest indoor swimming pool attached. The Phobos Microgravity Playground, which despite its childish name is known for zero-gravity sports of all kinds. A place known simply as The Garden, a massive tiered arcology-like structure that is simultaneously park, arboretum, and farm.
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Cam definitely can't ski. Or play sports, even in zero gravity. He will attend all three of the best museums and try the roller coaster and wander through The Garden.

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The Space Exploration Museum has hundreds or perhaps thousands of original and replica historical spacecraft. This universe's space exploration diverges from what Cam remembers in 2007. Pop science is sprinkled here and there but history is the focus. The virtual reality simulations of notable events are free for Cam and include things like the Apollo and Soyuz missions, the Pathfinder landing, the first extrasolar colony, and so on.

The museum would like to know if they can have a few (dozen) replicas, please?
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Sure they can!

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The Mars Museum of Science and Art of the Red Planet are rather large, much like the Space Exploration Museum, and each of them could take up a whole day for someone who has to wait in lines for things. All except the art museum are open 24(+skiptime)/7. His guides will shuffle him to the most interesting spots very efficiently if he wants.

The rollercoaster is pretty great, and the rest of the theme park surrounding is very nice too.

The Garden is dozens of stories tall, lit by real incandescent light, fantastically varied, beautifully arranged, and attended to by an unobtrusive drone swarm. Cam is free to pick and eat anything in here straight off the bush/tree/ground if he likes. (The Gardeners would like some things for their gene bank, if he doesn't mind.)
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That's nice of his guides and Cam appreciates it. The gene bank can have whatever it likes as long as it doesn't like viruses.

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They assure him they have extremely stringent biosafety procedures. But they only ask for historical plague and pest samples twice. Mostly, though, they wanted things like live samples of various ancient grains, fruits, vegetables, animals, etc. Apparently bananas went extinct at some point.

That's that for his three days of Martian tourist attractions. Shall we move on to spawning hundreds of gates per system to create a deeply interconnected galactic transport network?
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That sounds like fun!

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And thus as much of Cam's time as he wants to devote to it is spent on being a very efficient fountain of fantastic material wealth.